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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
seems like maan was expecting to c some other reaction from dev...

or mayb this is what he wanted...but in a diff way...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
Love your updates!! Had a hectic week and so read the last updates at one go!!! your updates are the magic that take away the stress!!! waiting for more updates!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
"Sir…Ok just to satisfy myself can I get one small kiss please?"Wow.. I am totally amazed at the innocence and the confidence with which geet asked for a kiss.
She makes it pretty simple without the excess baggage of melodrama.
Love
Mayukha
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
Maaneet kiss and hugs bring smile to my face
even when I'm feelin so sick
Just a mere hug and a shoulder kiss from geet
and maan hugging her back so easy in their relation
ship even though they have not given any name to it.

As far dev is concerned don't knw whts goin on in his
mind ,he is engaged to that female so he better just stick
with her and leave maan s geet alone

Loved the update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
now all i want to say is am very very very happyyy😳😃...after reading the update...will come back with my gyan later😆
Edited by mollycoddle - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
I remember the song from pardes
kaisa ye nasha chane laga ?
dhire dhire pyar badhne laga...

same thing happening between Maan and Geet but still don't know what is going on in his mind?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
awesome update...geets to cute loved the update keep on writting
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
okk i was plain lazy in writing comments to day and was looking for namru and shikhu's comments so that i can badger tham, but my ill luck, she seem to be on hibernation...so have to start my bhashan 😭...all by myself...wanted to write very little ended up writing a whole ram kahani on the update...god save u guys

(lines in reddish or rather maroon (i am not sure what color it is...i guess i am going colorblind😆) are lifted from the update...
black is my bakwas😆


well dev guy seems to be smitten and is sporting this lovesick puppy look...or it that since she is not giving him any bhav...so he seems to be fascinated and wants her as a conquest...its always fun to chase something that is not in ur reach...if thats the case, the G is going to give him taichi lessons soon, starting with a kick on his ass...😆

i love GEetie more than this name dolphin...and am seriously missing geet ka diwana vicky...😳😳😆

G seems to be naturally drawing all the attention of the males around her, with her natural charm,innocence...vicky maan and dev...haii kitne diwane is ladki ke



Geet "May be I need to go change. Seeing me in this attire has loosened some of your screws."...this line cracked me up...😆

dev better see her as a bhaabhi or else i will throw all the screws in the drain...😡😆 and sent NT the bulldog behind him

dev being too inquisitive and trying to pri info from her, about her and Maan...gadha...apne aap ko bahut tez samajhta hai...where is this NT...we never have her when she is needed, she better keeps dev in her control, or else he will go sniffing around ...and better he keeps his paws off G, even if transforms into a saint...😡😆


Yash "Have you tried top aerial view?"..whats the meaning of this line...bloody pervert yash..😡i hope i have got the meaning right...or else i am making kachara of myself 😆


why is dev suddenly interested in the equation between G and M...is it plain inquisitiveness or he is into some matchmaking for himself...is namune ka main kya karoon😡😆
or rather iss namune ko kya naam doon..i know thats lame...but i am in a mood to make lame jokes today😆


Geet "Sir, he is a fast one. He said I was hot and irresistible."

Maan went quiet.

Maan "Geet, don't make it obvious. But drop something and check if he is in your cabin now?"

Geet dropped the paper weight on the desk and bent down to pick it up and checked. Dev was there! This early!!!!

Geet "Surprise of all surprises! He is in early today."

Maan was still silent.

Geet "Sir, is there a problem?"

Maan "Geet, why don't you go and do your work now? I am busy."

are we seeing any hint of insecurity, fear or rather a slight hint of jealousy...coz i am grinning...i am a sadist...and i like when the hero is tortured with jealousy..😆...if yes i am elated 😆

on serious note he might feel that dev is irresistibly charming ( but me and namru have our eyes on maan😳...shikhu has her eyes on chipmunks...so pointless talking about her🥱)

is G seriouslt dimmag se dheeli...cant she see that he is being plain unsettled with dev calling her hot and irresistible...and she is attributing his sudden silence to him not wanting dev to see them together...has she left her brains at home,,, or is it dev ke sangat ka asar...😆

dev is insisting geet on a family dinner...hope he doesnt make G as his GF this time...warna bahut jhoote khayega...😡

Geet just nodded. When a person like Dev was there at home, how could Sir smile?...😆sahi kaha...😆i must say ur dialogues makes me have this permanent goofy grin on my face...sahi pehchana apne devar ko GEEt ne😆..(i am a bit in a filmy mood...so thats the reason being my stupid comments...i think its time to say yeh ladki mujhe pagal kar degi😆


Dev was satisfied with this answer. There seemed to be nothing between Bro and Geet. Just work. But he still had nagging doubts. He always had these kind of doubts when a girl was not really attracted to him.


dev tum toh gadhe ke gadhe hi rahoge...dont make conclusions so fast,,, coz u r soon going to see all of them turning wronf...keep ur doubts nagging u😆


Geet "Sir, he was trying to invite me to your home for dinner today. He insisted many times. I refused Sir. I did not feel it was appropriate. Hope you don't mind Sir."

He was silent. It was actually quite late and she had missed him all these days. She felt desperate for his touch and wanted some solace. There was too much emotional turmoil and she needed him to make her feel better. But she did not want to try something foolish. (maan seems to be recollecting Nt fiasco...hope he jumps on the bored before his brother sweeps her away...aisa ho toh nahi sakta...but then it will be fun to watch M taking some initiative to woo G...gosh i getting dreamy😍


Maan "Well I have made things easier for you. See!"

Suddenly the room turned opaque! He had blinds installed for all windows.

Geet "Sir! Vow so cool. Now you can have some privacy. Hai na Sir? So nice."

Maan "So where were we? Ah about your plan?"

Geet "Sir'Ok just to satisfy myself can I get one small kiss please?"

Maan smiled, "Ok fine. Since you said please."


someone is doing all the panning to get cozy with G...and G is asking him a kiss as if she is asking her dad a candy...the analogy is bad..i know...but thats what my brain cud churn out in the early morning😆...ohh maan is being meherbaan only coz she told him plzzz...jhoota kahin ka...man mein ladoo phoot rahe the and was waiting for the invitation😆

Geet "Sir you used to watch the show Bodywatch where beautiful people with even more beautiful skin even if they stayed in the sun the whole day just keep running here and there in bright swim outfits?"

Maan "Why that is the name of your channel now?" (maan givin her ideas😆

Geet "I was only asking because Maan Singh Khurana watching Bodywatch, hard to imagine Sir."

Maan "Then what do you imagine?"

Geet "Sir, since you know swimming and all, you can be on Bodywatch! That will be so cool hai na Sir?" (G is getting vivid in her imagination with each passing day..madam ko maan ko bodywatch mein dekhna hai...naughty gal...yeh innocent se hamari tarah pervert ban gayi🤣)

Maan smiled, "Geet you and your lame ideas. So if your small kiss is finished, will you go home now? It is getting late."


was baywatch changed to bodywatch🤣...i fell off my chair laughing like a lunatic...pehle KJO ko Jko bana diya...now baywatch ko bodywatch bana diya...


sheesh tumhare charan kahan hai...main poojna chahti hoon😆

waiting for the other devils to comment and me will come back again with my expert analysis, ripping their comments part by part😆..

so beware🤣...i am in a very crazy mood, so my comments will sound crazier than me...hope ppl survive reading my ramblings...😆.


Edited by mollycoddle - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
Was Maan bit jealous of Geet...& Dev should not harbour some romantic feelings towards Geet, he should think of her as bhabi only...& Geet is a delightfully unique piece
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
Like it.. Love it. Can't get enough...

I lonely on checking many times since morning to see if you had updated... Now my day doesn't seem to be complete unless I read a new part from you...


Maan is a person who has very deep insight about everything... He knows just what dev is trying to do... Geet is totally unaware of her own charm and the kind of effect she is having on Maan... Not sure if Maan knows what Geet has become for him... What I can see is that we have many more parts to go before this story will reach its culmination... But I sincerely hope that you intend to get Maan and Geet together...

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