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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
read the last 4 parts in one go. loving the story but would like to know what went wrong and it has taken 10 years how could they stay separately. would really like what happened and why Maan is not trusting Geet. update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72


wow te track is very intresting...then wat happened...waiting for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
awesum updates..

just wanna know wht really went wrong...

i dont want him having any physical relation with any one other than geet not even this sam
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
I think dev did something haan it must be dev
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
awsome ff
loved it
thanx for the pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
till part 6
nice story dear...
sent the buddy invite and plz pm me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
after such a long time i found smthing so interseting :) add me to d pm list!!! I WUD luv to follow tis ff!! its a nice story line
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78

thnx 4 al d likes n comments.. its very encouraging!!

i ll try n updt as much as possible asap.. just keep d faith

here s nxt part.. hope u njoy it..


CHAPTER 8

As expected.. it did get worse.. sameera n I had a big argument.. she was so mad at me for missing her dinner party, blaming me for her missing out on a big entry into movies.. bt frankly I wondered if she evr stood a chance.. she startd off as a small time model.. n sm hw I doubt I cud hv made a difference to her behavior!! Bt sameera was a drama queen, n though I put wid most of her whims n fancies bt ryt nw I was in no mood 2 relent or listen 2 her comments.. I tried tellin her wht had happened bt she was no wer close 2 stoppin n I lost it when she started callin maahi names.. I just cudnt tk it nymore.. I switched off my cell n went 2 bed..

I had a restless nyt.. sleep evaded me til late n when I finally i did, maahi s words tormented me..

Geet too had a restless nyt too.. she cudnt decide wht 2 do.. der were sm many thngs on her mind.. bauji s health, d finances, maahi s emotional state, d divorce.. she just dint know wht 2 handle n hw.. evry thng seemed out of ctrl.. she so desperately wanted a shoulder 2 lean on n cry her heart out bt der was no one..

She woke up maahi, n got her ready for school coz stayin at home wud remind her of ystrdy bt for d first tym she was also apprehensive abt wht dey talk abt at school.. abt maan..

As she fed her breakfast n seeing maahi unusually quite, geet bent down 2 maahi s level.. giving her a quick kiss

"maahi.. beta I just wanna say whtever happened ystrdy.. just remember maa n dada love u a lot!!"

"no maa. Dada doesn't love me.. infact he s angry wid me n he doesn't even accept me as his.."

Geet dint let her complete.. "he s just angry honey.."

"bcoz of me?"

"no dear.. its just tht he s angry at me for smthng tht happened b4 u wer born.. it was only my mistake.. u r no way at fault n I m really sorry abt tht"

Sayin dis she hurried off.. nt sure tht she d b able 2 contain her emotns..

N praying 2 babaji tht thngs shudnt get ny worse..

Bt seems tht her prayers went unanswered..

Maahi was just entering d school gate wen a few senior gals came over..

"u know its parents day.. tomoro.."

Suddenly maahi was reminded of ystrdy.. n she shivered

"hw cm ur dad nvr cms.. only ur mom..?"

"oh her dad has no tym 4 her.. dint u c his pic wid dt model?"

Maahi was almost gonna burst into tears

bt den remembered geet s words.. n wanted 2 scream out

"no u r wrong.. dada loves me a lot.. !!" bt no words left her

d bell rang 4 d school 2 begin..

evry1 dispersed..

Maahi quietly left from der.. nt wanting 2 face ny1 or nythng..

Her lil mind was stressed out.. n she dint understand wht exactly was wrong.. except tht she wanted a family like evry1 else..

She removed d piece of paper from her bag in which she had scribbled a no n address she had noted from d directory.. she had 2 set thngs ryt..


sorry 4 short updt

but dint wanna mix it up.. nxt updt at nyt..

chapter 9

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3016105/romancing-my-wife-completed?pn=17

Edited by nats0101 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
what is maahi going to do now??? is she going to maan's place??
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
fab update yaar..
poor mahi.. why is she suffering for this...

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