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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
Loved ur ff ! Fab concept :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
nice update
i think maahi will go to meet maan...
update next part soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
will you kill Sameera or I just do it!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
poor geet..
she badly needs a support...
even maahi s facing pblms... its very hard to control the pain in our heart b/c of other's words..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
Again heart touching... Awesome story
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely update dear showing te emotion of a girl baby wen her parents divorce...my maaneet pls sit and talk and clear all ur doubts atleast for maahi...waiting for te past
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 7
poor Geet...
why is the idiot not accepting?
and Sameera grrr...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
interesting story...pls do pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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here s nxt part.. hope u njoy it

CHAPTER 8

As expected.. it did get worse.. sameera n I had a big argument.. she was so mad at me for missing her dinner party, blaming me for her missing out on a big entry into movies.. bt frankly I wondered if she evr stood a chance.. she startd off as a small time model.. n sm hw I doubt I cud hv made a difference to her behavior!! Bt sameera was a drama queen, n though I put wid most of her whims n fancies bt ryt nw I was in no mood 2 relent or listen 2 her comments.. I tried tellin her wht had happened bt she was no wer close 2 stoppin n I lost it when she started callin maahi names.. I just cudnt tk it nymore.. I switched off my cell n went 2 bed..

I had a restless nyt.. sleep evaded me til late n when I finally maahi s words tormented me..

Geet too had a restless nyt too.. she cudnt decide wht 2 do.. der were sm many thngs on her mind.. bauji s health, d finances, maahi s emotional state, d divorce.. she just dint know wht 2 handle n hw.. evry thng seemed out of ctrl.. she so desperately wanted a shoulder 2 lean on n cry her heart out bt der was no one..

She woke up maahi, n got her ready for school coz stayin at home wud remind her of ystrdy bt for d first tym she was also apprehensive abt wht dey talk abt at school.. abt maan..

As she fed her breakfast n seeing maahi unusually quite, geet bent down 2 maahi s level.. giving her a quick kiss

"maahi.. beta I just wanna say whtever happened ystrdy.. just remember maa n dada love u a lot!!"

"no maa. Dada doesn't love me.. infact he s angry wid me n he doesn't even accept me as his.."

Geet dint let her complete.. "he s just angry honey.."

"bcoz of me?"

"no dear.. its just tht he s angry at me for smthng tht happened b4 u wer born.. it was only my mistake.. u r no way at fault n I m really sorry abt tht"

Sayin dis she hurried off.. nt sure tht she d b able 2 contain her emotns..

N praying 2 babaji tht thngs shudnt get ny worse..

Bt seems tht her prayers went unanswered..

Maahi was just entering d school gate wen a few senior gals came over..

"u know its parents day.. tomoro.."

Suddenly maahi was reminded of ystrdy.. n she shivered

"hw cm ur dad nvr cms.. only ur mom..?"

"oh her dad has no tym 4 her.. dint u c his pic wid dt model?"

Maahi was almost gonna burst into tears

bt den remembered geet s words.. n wanted 2 scream out

"no u r wrong.. dada loves me a lot.. !!" bt no words left her

d bell rang 4 d school 2 begin..

evry1 dispersed..

Maahi quietly left from der.. nt wanting 2 face ny1 or nythng..

Her lil mind was stressed out.. n she dint understand wht exactly was wrong.. except tht she wanted a family like evry1 else..

She removed d piece of paper from her bag in which she had scribbled a no n address she had noted from d directory.. she had 2 set thngs ryt..

CHAPTER 9

Standing in front of d imposing architectural marvel.. maahi wondered.. if she shud go in or not..

After al she had nt informed geet n nt gone 2 school.. n if maa found out, she wud b angry like hell.. bt d words of dose senior gals.. echoed in her mind.. she wanted 2 set thngs ryt.. she wanted a family.. n tht cant b wrong.. hai na babaji!!

Maan

Aftr d restless nyt.. I was bk 2 work.. n though I was exhausted.. I needed a distarctn.. sameera had called up in d mrng 2 apologise.. if u can cal it one.. sounded more like complaining.. she said she wanted 2 mk it upto me 2nyt.. bt smhw I was just nt interested!!

I decided I need a break n so asked my secretary pinky 2 set an appointment for an outdoor trip..

As I was finishing my last min work before leaving.. pinky knocked n came in..

She looked shocked 2 say d least..

pinky was a good secretary.. keepin herself restricted 2 her work.. n thts y she d managed 2 keep her job for so long.. we shared a frndly cordial relatn.. plus my second in command adi liked her!!

"ummm.. mk.."

"yes pinky.." I was still engrossed in my file

"um..'

"wht?"

"ders a cute lil girl at d door.. who says she s ur daughter..!! "

"what!!"

"u kept her well hidden frm us?"

"pinky!!"

"shud I call her in"

I just nodded in response.. wht d hell is happening? I saw maahi enter my cabin.. lukin arnd wid excitement in her eyes

"umm.. hi.." she seemed hesitant 2 call me dad aftr ystrdy.. tht was gud ryt?

I just nodded.. wondering if dis was another of geet s attempt after ystrdy 2 put us 2gthr n mk us get along

"I hope u don't mind me comin here"

I had no idea wht so evr 2 answer bk..

"does geet know u r here?"

"ummm' no.. "

"hmm. So why r u here?"

"wo.." she shot a quick prayer..babaji plz help me. " I m sorry 4 ystrdy.. nd nw i know why u don't live wid us"

I stared at her..

"maa told me she did smthng wrong b4 I was born which angered u.. bt she is really sorry.. plz forgive her n lets live 2gthr like family.."

"is tht y u r here?"

"um. Yes"

I dint know to laugh or shout at her innocence.. she was just like my geet used 2 b.. bt nt nymore

"hw did u find my address?"

"I looked up for u in d directory ystrdy.."

" n hw did u cm here.. dint u hv school?"

I saw her give an involuntary shudder

"did ny1 at school say nythng?" I remembered her words

"um.. wo.." her eyes filled up n hated tht.. so immediately changed d topic

"hw did u cm here..?"

"I took d bus.."

"wht r u mad.. tht s nt safe for a ten yr old?.. wht if.. wht if u were.. I mean.." I fumbled

But she read me wee.. "if I was kidnapped? Coz m ur daughter?"

Well she had read my mind bt I wasn't gonna give it 2 her..

I rang up pinky n asked her 2 get sm juice n cookies.. n cancel my trip too.. dint luk like I cud run away fm all dis..

"wont geet worry abt u?"

"no I ll b bk home b4 mom's bk.."

"n wen is tht..?"

" arnd 6"

" so u stay alone for so long after school.."

I felt anger rise in again.. bt dis tym on geet.. hw cud she leave a kid alone at home.. y nt hire a baby sitter or keep her wid sm neighbor!!

Damn dis lil gal invoked such a sense of protectiveness in me.. I waited for her to get done wid eating n lukin arnd my cabin.. n den went 2 drop her bk home safely!! I cudnt even imagine her travelling alone in d bus again..

Edited by nats0101 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
i really fel pity for mahi,.,,.
she is just so sweet yaar..
phir bhi she came to meet maan

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