romancing..my wife!! completed! - Page 70

Created

Last reply

Replies

841

Views

296.7k

Users

147

Likes

6.9k

Frequent Posters

Desigirls12 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago


wow lovely update dear. my maaneet joined wow im dancing...love u nats love u love u...i love my maaneet...waiting for geet to confession him...
abhayprsingh thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
any chance for update nw??
spvd thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
part 33
awesome...
this shows how much Geet is sensible and big hearted...
spvd thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
part 34
lovely...
but one slap banta hai yaar...
10 years is a long time and the idiot didnt trust her nor did he try to find the truth...
just one slap and i will be happy...
and waise did he get intimate with that Sameera?
if yes then one more slap would suffice...
so 2 slaps, hard ones...
cont soon dear...
AayaTohModiJi thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
awesome parts
loved them
finally geet came back
and maan confessed
continue soon
SecretSapphire thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
Me feeling bad that its going to b end
Will miss it
Very Gud story and concept
nats0101 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago

EPILOGUE

4 months later..

Geet

I felt so much at peace here.. this was wer it al started..!! the first feeling of togetherness n den d confession!! I'd been here at break of dawn wid d sunrise n even on a beautifully lit full moon nyt!! Bt dis was d first tym I was njoying d beauty of dis place in broad day light.. the water sparkled reflecting d sunlight.. the slight cloud cover n d breeze adding 2 its beauty!! A rainbow had just started appearing.. just like d way my life had become.. nd I had no regrets abt my decision!!

Suddenly I felt a two familiar arms engulfing me.. 'twas a touch i cud nvr 4gt!! A smile automatically lit my face.. as maan softly caressed my 5 month old baby bump!!

Maan

I feel so blessed 2de.. finally I have attained all my dreams.. I m still married 2 my mishty.. despite all tht had happened.. it was a part of d past.. n we hv moved on!! Our darling daughter maahi who is just like her mother n I adored her.. n lastly KC had just started its most ambitious project on which geet n me were working 2gthr!! To add more to our joy..we were soon to b blessed wid another baby..!! n geet n I mutually hv agreed 'twas our love at d hotel tht mrng tht led to dis!!

I still shuddered at d thot of hw close I hd cm 2 loosing her!! Bt fate had got us 2gthr in d weirdest of ways!! Who'd evr think tht aftr 10yrs of separation it wud b a divorce tht got us 2gthr!!

I had pleaded guilty for all my actions whn she got bk!! I dint know hw I'd convince her tht I was genuinely remorseful n wud do nythng 2 win her trust n get her n maahi bk in my life!!

Bt dis is my mishty.. I still remember wht she said..

"maan.. dis is no business deal whr I need 2 settle score wid u. u hurt me wen u dint trust me bt I guess at tht tym d circumstances dint give u a chance to think rationally! N luk wht happened.. 10 yrs of separation n pain for us.. n maahi!! Today if I don't trust u.. I ll b repeating d same mistake.. it'll settle scores.. bt der isn't ny competition in love.. its all abt moving 2gthr, trusting each othr..! I don't hv ny more strength 2 face dat situation again!! I want 2 start afresh.. n build a relatn so strong tht nthng can cm between us!! I nvr doubted ur love.. n 2gthr I know we'll nvr let our trust waver!!"

Not knowing wht I had done 2 deserve her, n nt sure I ll manage to say a single word, I had kissed her into oblivion promising myself to gain her trust again.. n dis tym 4evr!!

Maahi was so happy seeing us 2gthr.. finally hving a family in d true sense!! Bauji too was recovering since she was bk.. I knew she cudnt forgive him soon bt dis was my mishty who'd put duty b4 evrythng else.. n nw thngs were so much better between dem!!

A few wks after she was bk, we came 2 know geet was pregnant!! N I dint know hw 2 handle so much happiness.. touchwood!!

I m so lucky to hv my mishty bk in my life.. thank you geet's babaji.. I'd nvr let her go.. nvr ever!

"ouch" geet screamed out of d blue n I was bk 2 reality..

I was worried

"mishty.. r u ok? Do u wanna go c a doctor?"

"maan.. relax..!!"

She took my hand n placed it on her belly

'the baby kicked for d first tym!!"

I was on top of d world wen I felt it.. I had missed evrythng at maahi's time bt nw wanted it all.. I hardly left her alone not even for a moment!!

I had tears in my eyes..

"maan.."

"shh. Mishty.. I cant even describe wht I m feeling ryt nw.. n all my happiness is bcoz of u!! I ll never let u down.. n I hope I ll be a good father dis tym round!!"

"maan.. relax.. u r n wil b d best father for our children.. n trust me he'll love u'"

The moment was so emotional..

Bt considering geet's pregnancy mood swings I dint want her to start crying!!

"by d way mishty.. its not him.."

"sorry.."

"u said he'll love me.. nt him.. it ll b another princess like u..!!"

"no maan.. dis tym round it ll b a prince charming just like u.."

"no mishty.. it ll be a girl.."

"no maan.. a boy.."

"girl"

"boy"

"girl"

"boy"

Well d argument was nvr ending.. till her delivery!! I kissed her nt being able to ctrl myself.. n her response was as passionate as ever!! As long as I had my family wid me.. all hail n hearty, nothng matters!! So till den d argument can go on while I njoy romancing.. my wife!!

PS

Phew done

Hope I ve done justice to ur expectations

I'd just like 2 clarify tht like I mentioned in d first post.. dis story is not my creation.. its fm a mills n boons novel, "sinful truths"

so all credit to d author..

d narration n maneet flavor is all mine!!

Hope u njoyd reading it..

N a big thanx to all u read, liked n commented on dis ff..

Thnx a ton!!

Adieu.. Tk care..



my othr ffs

DIL, DOSTI.. HUM!!

the INEVITABLE!!


Edited by nats0101 - 12 years ago
LILY111144 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago

wow me first👏...i lov ur work.,great naration hats of 2 u.i read some M ND B books but not this story thnx 2 u 2 bring such a beautiful story 2 us.god bless u nd keep it up...

Edited by LILY111144 - 13 years ago
sdlife19 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update..
at last both are together
vaninair95 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
u wer tooo goood all around...in updating regularly as wellas making us njoy the tour of romance

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Pixiepixel11

2 months ago

MG-The Matchmaker’s Mistake-Ch-1-14-(Completed)-23.5.25

The Matchmaker’s Mistake Chapter 1: The Algorithm of Error The scent of cardamom chai, the soft rustle of silk sarees, and the furious...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

3 years ago

MG#4 khudrat ka khel- completed/note- pg 36- 14 july25

Concept this is story of simple girl, she want to became a teacher, but her darji beeji fix her marriage in between of studies... . . Destiny...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Pixiepixel11

5 months ago

MG-Bhorer Alo-A Love That Stood the Test of Time-Completed-26.2.25. MG-Bhorer Alo-A Love That Stood the Test of Time-Completed-26.2.25.

Maan Geet: Bhorer Alo – A Love That Stood the Test of Time Prologue Murshidabad, Bengal – 1904 The first time Maan Singh Chaudhury saw her, the...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: Queen0fDarkness

6 months ago

SS||Without You||Epilogue page 7 [09/02] Completed SS||Without You||Epilogue page 7 [09/02] Completed

Chapter 1: The book that started it all Maan leaned forward in his seat as the driver slowed down in front of his home. His heart swelled with...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: nushhkiee

6 months ago

Short Story ~ Objection, Your Honor! It’s Love ~ Completed

Had this scene flash in my mind a couple of days ago, and I just couldn’t shake it off… It’s nothing big, just a random moment of inspiration...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".