romancing..my wife!! completed! - Page 49

Originally posted by: -Manashi-

I have been reading this story from the first update, but I am not very proud to say that this is the first time I am commenting.

Anyways, better late than never.

There have been many questions raised by my lovely friends here, like why can't he go for a DNA test, why did he not trust her etc. etc.

But if there were no deviations like this, there won't be a story.

My point is entirely different.

What happens after the truth is out?

It is more than obvious, Geet has been framed. She was drunk and the next she finds is she is in bed with Dev. So, even she considers that she might have done a mistake and slept with Dev when she was not in her senses. And since that day she has been paying the price of her so called mistake.

She is living a life of poverty, raising a child on her own, looking after an ailing father etc.

And what has our "hero" done?

Slept with numerous women to "get over" the sorrow.

So, what now after the truth is revealed?

I am the biggest MG fan and crave for happily ever afters and cajole, beg and even threaten my lovely friends who write MG ffs to never separate them.

But I as a reader, as a woman, do not want Geet to go back to Maan ever. She might forgive him, but the only redemption he should have for not trusting Geet, accepting his daughter and sleeping around to ease his pain is that he stays alone, without Geet and his child.

P.S. : Maan seems to be an intelligent man. So let me add one query from my side. Had Geet cheated him with Dev, wouldn't she go stay with Dev, enjoy his wealth, after Maan left her to suffer? Why would she stay alone with a child and work so hard to make two ends meet?

Ring a bell Mr. I-am-so-smart Khurana?

Very nicely written story, and thank you for the pms you send me every time.

One suggestion: Please write full words inside the updates, the short forms used kind of disrupts the flow of the story.

Keep up the good work dear :)

Originally posted by: nats0101

thnx a ton..

makes me feel grt tht ur first comment has cm for my ff!!

i agree wid ur pov..

n in real life, i'd agree tht nthng is more imp dan trust, probably even more than love

i written a few future more updts n guess dey do cover most of d aspects!!

i cannot take a stand on maan.. i neither defend him nor blame him.. just consider him human..

remaining.. al i can say is wait n watch!!

ps:wil try n avoid short forms

i did realise it bt guess was just lazy!!

i dont know if i m goin ovrboard wid flurry of updts.. bt i need to end dis ff max by nxt wk.. or i myt nt b able to complete it.. so gt one more updt ready! ny1 der?????????

Originally posted by: nats0101

NOTE

i dont know if i m goin ovrboard wid flurry of updts.. bt i need to end dis ff max by nxt wk.. or i myt nt b able to complete it.. so gt one more updt ready! ny1 der?????????

Yes am ready...😃

your not going overboard update

Originally posted by: nats0101

NOTE

i dont know if i m goin ovrboard wid flurry of updts.. bt i need to end dis ff max by nxt wk.. or i myt nt b able to complete it.. so gt one more updt ready! ny1 der?????????

U are doing your best i dont want you not complete this one 😭

hey dis ff is max arnd 35 parts.. so u can expect d remaining updts faster thn expected..

read as per ur convenience.. njoy till i trouble u wid d nxt updt.. which will b soon!!

CHAPTER 27

18+

Maan

Whtever we had spoken was in d flow of d moment.. bt her answer left me shocked.. I had expected her to deny she had ny feelings for me, deny tht she was affected by me, deny tht she felt jealous.. bt here, she had left me speechless n astounded n wanting.. for her!!

"you've lost it!!"

"u'd probably know better!" she said n tried to walk away..! but I wudnt let her, not nw after all tht she had spoken leaving me high n dry!! I pulled her by d wrist turning her arnd so tht she was trapped btwn d wall n me. Thr was no way she was going to walk out on me..

Bt anger wasn't d only feeling in my head as I looked at her. Her closeness n her scent combined wid her words had added a sexual tension to the moment which was inescapable! I cleanched my fists in an effort to avoid doin smthng.. loosing ctrl was d easiest thng ryt nw.. she was trying 2 get otta my hold but her resistance only made me want her more!!

"leave me.."

"wht if I don't?!"

"I had only come to return d money.."

"just forget abt d money!!"

My senses had deserted me n I dint know wen my hands encircled her waist, pulling her closer!! I dint know wht n wer we were heading for.. except tht it seemed d best thng to do..!!

To add to it.. she wasn't tht unaffected either!! Her heaving chest, tht blush on her face n her lost gaze betrayed her words.. I knew she was as lost in me n I in her!! Tht was d magic of "us"..

My mind tried to fight bt my heart gave it no chance!! My hands strtd moving on her, exploring her n I felt her arms move arnd my neck .. I traced my lips on her beautiful face leaving no part untouched as she closed her eyes!! She moaned out my name aloud as I moved down to d hollow of her neck, kissing, bitting n licking her!! I tried to b slow bt felt an urgency like never before!! I felt blood rush to my groin.. I tried telling myself tht 'twas only a physical thng bt my heart mocked.. I hadn't felt so in ages!! N only she cud hv dis effect on me!!

My fingers toyed wid her dori, njoying d fel of her silky skin, b4 pulling it open.. her reaction 2 my touch, d way her moulded herself into me, her moans all aroused me further!! Unzipping her kurti, I felt d perfect curve of her spine n felt her shiver wid anticipation..! slipping her kurti down, kissing every bit of skin available to me, I buried my head in her neck, my tongue n teeth tasting her!! She held my hair tightly as I kissed her lips.. we kissed widout ny inhibitions.. 'twas like old tyms.. I got my mishty back!! Unhooking her bra made her soft mounts meet my bare chest n I heard her gasp!! I cudnt tk it ny more.. knowing I wont b able to control ny longer, I lifted her in my arms tking her 2 bed!! Her mounts had been teasing me for long.. I cudnt resist it n took one in my mouth while kneading d odr.. n den reversed d treatment for odr nt wanting to do it ny injustice.. I marked her evrywhr I cud.. she was mine!!

She was continuosly moaning my name.. she was d death of me.!! I wanted her, no needed her.. I removed d remaining barriers off her moving apart for a sec to rid myself of dem too.. bt she instantly opened her eyes as if complaining.. I got bk 2 her asap.. d feel dat she wants me was bringing me to d edge.. ! I looked into her eyes one last wanting her permission to go ahead.. her hazels displayed only love for me.. I knew I cudnt ctrl myself nymore as I thrust myself into her feminine core!!

Oh god!! She was so tight.. 'twas almost like making love to a virgin!! I was scared I'd hurt her.. I tried moving away bt her grip on me tightened..

"plz don't leave me maan!!"

Even though I was lost in d throes of passion, d implication of her words was not lost on me!!

Once I realized she was fyn.. I strtd thrusting faster getting into d perfect rhythm.. she bit my shoulder while her fingers scratched my back..

I wanted it to last bt d pleasure was too short lived. I realized I shud withdraw bt dis was my heaven.. n whtever be d consequences, I d face it!! Just as I felt my climax, I felt her muscles tighten arnd me.. n her moans.. I knew she was wid me all d way!!

hope he believs her soon😊 reveal the truths soon😊

Great part both ended up with love making this may be make him realize she is his only...dont know what will happen after when they come to their seances awesome dear