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Mishti

@mishtimohabbat

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Posted: 13 years ago

#471

Loving the updates.. and thank u for such frequent ones.. 👏..
But aaahh can't believe u left us on such a close breath! Ufff they mere inches apart with their pain raw and opened for each other to see!! I know Geet will take him back because she never went away..it was Maan who made the distance between them but I dunno how Maan will forgive himself for 10yrs of wronged blame which he placed on Geet! I hope u make Geet hard to get once Maan knows of the truth..
Really enjoy ur simplicity im writing and putting their thoughts out so clearly to us..feel like I know Maan and Geet more than themselves..
Thank you 😳

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Rachana

@Rang_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#472

maan have to find the truth😭

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InkedImagination

@Queen0fDarkness

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Posted: 13 years ago

#473

Hey dear... just caught up with your ff..sorry wasn't able to read before as i was busy... love the concept of the story...

Maan is hurting geet... feel sorry for her, he's so damn arrogant thinking geet wants money only...hope he understands before its too late...

I'm thinkin maahi is maaneet's daughter nt dev and geets...

thnks for the pm dear, do continue soon, i'm lovin the story...x

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lily

@LILY111144

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Posted: 13 years ago

#474

abeautiful stry ,regular updates ,hats of 2 u 👏daily u give 2 updats but we r greedy DIL MANGE MORE...😆hey dear hw many prts left?

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Renu

@abhiya_kapi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#475

OMG I don't believe Maan is spoiling everything with his manly ego. I just hope he realize his mistake soon and apologize to Geet and accept both of them. 😭 Really feeling bad for Geet. She loves him truly, Maan should understand this. 😭

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nats0101

@nats0101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#476

Originally posted by: LILY111144
abeautiful stry ,regular updates ,hats of 2 u 👏daily u give 2 updats but we r greedy DIL MANGE MORE...😆hey dear hw many prts left?

shud get done soon

max 35 parts

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nats0101

@nats0101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#477

Originally posted by: pingu-tingu
ahhh y this MAAN is empty headed person ? cant he recognize his own blood ...aww poor mahi is suffering in all this ! n where the hell that bas*** dev has gone ? :/

dont worry dev wil get his due!!

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nats0101

@nats0101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#478

Originally posted by: mishtimohabbat
Loving the updates.. and thank u for such frequent ones.. 👏..
But aaahh can't believe u left us on such a close breath! Ufff they mere inches apart with their pain raw and opened for each other to see!! I know Geet will take him back because she never went away..it was Maan who made the distance between them but I dunno how Maan will forgive himself for 10yrs of wronged blame which he placed on Geet! I hope u make Geet hard to get once Maan knows of the truth..
Really enjoy ur simplicity im writing and putting their thoughts out so clearly to us..feel like I know Maan and Geet more than themselves..
Thank you 😳

thnx.. glad u r njoyin it

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-Elfin-

@-Elfin-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#479

I have been reading this story from the first update, but I am not very proud to say that this is the first time I am commenting.

Anyways, better late than never.

There have been many questions raised by my lovely friends here, like why can't he go for a DNA test, why did he not trust her etc. etc.

But if there were no deviations like this, there won't be a story.

My point is entirely different.

What happens after the truth is out?

It is more than obvious, Geet has been framed. She was drunk and the next she finds is she is in bed with Dev. So, even she considers that she might have done a mistake and slept with Dev when she was not in her senses. And since that day she has been paying the price of her so called mistake.

She is living a life of poverty, raising a child on her own, looking after an ailing father etc.

And what has our "hero" done?

Slept with numerous women to "get over" the sorrow.

So, what now after the truth is revealed?

I am the biggest MG fan and crave for happily ever afters and cajole, beg and even threaten my lovely friends who write MG ffs to never separate them.

But I as a reader, as a woman, do not want Geet to go back to Maan ever. She might forgive him, but the only redemption he should have for not trusting Geet, accepting his daughter and sleeping around to ease his pain is that he stays alone, without Geet and his child.

P.S. : Maan seems to be an intelligent man. So let me add one query from my side. Had Geet cheated him with Dev, wouldn't she go stay with Dev, enjoy his wealth, after Maan left her to suffer? Why would she stay alone with a child and work so hard to make two ends meet?

Ring a bell Mr. I-am-so-smart Khurana?

Very nicely written story, and thank you for the pms you send me every time.

One suggestion: Please write full words inside the updates, the short forms used kind of disrupts the flow of the story.

Keep up the good work dear :)