~FLAVOUR OF LOVE~MG FF#2 NOTE on Pg-153 - Page 56

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Posted: 13 years ago
BOTH HAVE ACCEPTED THAT THEY LOVE EACH OTHER AND MISSED EACH OTHER SO MUCH
NOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww...such a cute update...Maan Geet are adorable...
it was like refreshing...
loved the way maan asked her and loved the way she answered...

and am so happy that she refused the marriage proposal... and maan he is soo cuteee...

thanks for wonderful update dear...waiting for more and more...FOL...😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updates dear. u are an awesome writer. waiting for the next part.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful part...
waiting to know the next...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi thanks 4 da pm n fabulous emotional update! Beautifully written! the restlessness, love n contentment well portrayed! Maan n Geet talk! Poor Geet! Her dad in hospital! Geet n her dad argued abt her marriage! Geet n Maan need to tell their parents! Dadi interrupts n Geet tells Maan to go! Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 13 was awesome update. so both know that they love each other
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 13
nice...
so Maan is gonna meet sasurji...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
~TEASER~

...Last night I fell in love with you...

...All over again...

...With more happiness...

...Than ever before...

...You have brought back to me smiles and laughter...

...Through your loving eyes...

geet kept looking at herself in the mirror...blushing at her thoughts...blushing for the moments they shared last night...blushing for his silent confession...blushing for her dreams, that would soon turn into reality...

...Last night I fell in love with you...

...All over again...

...With more love...

...Than ever before...

...For the first time in a long time...

...I have really felt love...

her loose curly strand kept teasing her red cheek...as she kept pushing them behind her ear...niharofying herself in the mirror...checking if she was looking nice...her duppatta kept falling her torso, irritating her...she pouted keeping it around her neck...but the silky cloth kept teasing her sliding off her smooth velvetty skin...
"babaji aaj yeh kya ho raha hai...my hair looks messed up...and this duppatta, uff yeh ek jagah pe kyu nahi rehta..." then she looked closely at her self..." my lips are looking too glossy...woh dekhenge toh kya sochenge...ki maine unke liye yeh sab make up kiya hai..."

she hurriedly wiped off her extra gloss...maintaning the natural colour of her lips..."umm ab thik hai" she smiled...

After satisfying herself with her look, she sat on her bed, anticipating him to come any moment...she was nervous yet excited...last night what they shared was there emotional out burst...but today they will be in there right senses...the mere thought of this, sent shivers down her spine...she got up abruptly from her seat, and started pacing back and forth, fidgeting with her duppatta...suddenly she heard her doorbell ringing...making her tremble with anxiety...she some how managed to compose herself, and went down to open the door...she bit her lower lips, subsiding the urge to moan in nervousness...her heart was frantically beating...as she stood infront of the close door, with her trembling sweaty hands daring to open it...
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ufff...finally have updated teaser...just becoz of this two devils...SANA MAANEET n TANVI NANGIA...kal raat se mujhe pagal kar diya dono ne for FOL update...mera fb ka wall pura FOL wall bana diya...
ab yeh teaser lo...aur fir mujhe complain mat karo ki mai tease karti hu😉...
love u sweeties...enjoy this one, till i caome back with an update😊...

Edited by mahimaneet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
teaser nahi we want update😡😡😡😡😡
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Vinsh23

teaser nahi we want update😡😡😡😡😡

i know dear yeh maine jaldi jaldi mai update kiya hai for my cute desparate frnds...

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