MG-SS (LOST RELATIONS)pt 12 pg 136 nov 3 - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
omg sholli 4 late cmmnts..😳😳😳

awsmmm updt uff i lv my maan nd bubbly geet
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lvd it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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you have gotta continue this after peeking our interest in it you have to please
so they have been dreaming of their past lives right this should be good
hope they are meeting soon
see you soon i hope

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Posted: 13 years ago
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very interesting SS...

I came back from vacations and read this SS updates...

congrats for starting new SS...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran



very interesting SS...

I came back from vacations and read this SS updates...

congrats for starting new SS...

thank u glad that u like it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: chavvi16

<font color="#9933FF">you have gotta continue this after peeking our interest in it you have to please
so they have been dreaming of their past lives right this should be good
hope they are meeting soon
see you soon i hope
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i m glad that u like it i m definitely gonna cont this
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: tiakashyap

omg sholli 4 late cmmnts..😳😳😳

awsmmm updt uff i lv my maan nd bubbly geet
suprbb
lvd it..

thank u:-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hiii...guys
thanx all for commenting ...and liking
here is part 3

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PART 3


While maan was seeing the details of the land their details and the owners to whom the property belongs''

He has seen the finalized the three land for the construction purpose and then caleed aditya to his cabin''.

Aditya: may I come in sir'.

Maan:hmm..come in adi

Maan: adi I have finalized these three properties and I want you to collect the complete information about the place '.. facilities available'security related information of the place as the place should be suitable for institution''and moreover do fix my meeting with the government official who is assisting us in the project'..

Adiya: yes sir I will fix the meeting right now'..

With that aditya left the cabin to accomplish the given task that is given to him''

While adi was busy in collecting the details of the finalized lands on the other side''

In Rajasthan'.

Geet after making sure that the breakfast is ready she went to call her daadu who was talking to some of the ministers regarding the further progress in the udaipur's development''.

In the mean time geet joined her grand father and gave him a naughty deadly look which clearly shows her state of mind and on seeing the medicines untouched the naughty glare changed into an angry look seeing the carelessness of her daadu''

When maharaj turned towards his darling granddaughter he instantly knew that today he is going to get the big lecture on his health and noone can spare him today as his grandson is also out of town due to some work'.and now rajkumari will surely not leave him''but sometimes he also like this '.his dearest granddaughter caring so much for him'..that he sometimes thinks that why has lord given her that punishment which is sometimes unbearable for his little daughter''.and moreover he fails consoling her taking her out the pain of those miserable whimperings that sometimes take her to another world'..where she just forgets herself and when she gains her conscious from those hallucinations the colour of her face'even paler and worn out '.her terrified eyes'..those unanswered questions that always remains in her eyes''but he is proud of his brave and courageous geet that she is living her life with her cheerful attitude'.she had not let her dreams conquer her most of the life'.mainly thoughts''..

Her sparking nature is her one most appealing quality that truly makes her the princess of Udaipur in everysense''.she is completed as the most beautiful with simple and sober attitude'..the hidden quality to run a kingdom if given an opportunity''.to understand each and every problem and work out accordingly that he had noticed once three years back when rajkumari sorted out the problem of the farmers of the nearby villages regarding the irrigation and she also kept in mind to help the villages with all that commodities available for their survival at that time due to drought that year which had ruined the crops and herself had made efforts regarding the matter''

That was the time when he realized that he is really gifted by a gem by the almighty but he has always one complaint against god that why it was only his granddaughter to given such horrible nights when she totally deserved every happiness of her life''also at that time the dreams were less comparing to now'.as once he had faced that situation with his naked eyes'his sweet pothi was crying mumbling something it was such loud whimpers that it took more than one hour to calm her and her wordings were clearly indicating that something is terrible was going on in her dream'..which is making her restless again and again ''it was like she was mourning on someone's death''that night maharaj and geet's brother were with her whole night''..

However is is belived that our dreams are the insight of our future life that our sixth sense clearly sees and that is what we experience in our dreams''.but it is also somehow believed that our past life is also related to our present like Shree Krishna said in geeta updesh that we are intended to get all the sweet or the bitter fruits of our deeds in this life or maybe our deeds can affect our next birth'.this is only happening to geet''.

Maharaj randhir has accepted the truth that his granddaughter is futured with this kind of life by the lord and he just wished that these unknown suffering will come to an end one day''..

On the other end in delhi''.

Savitri devi was in the temple praying for her grandsons '..she has only them her family and life is only comprised of them''and she is more concerned about maan '.she knows about maan his endless dreams but is unable to console him '..to say that som everything will be fine soon''. But is unable it was the once she has seen her daughter in law maan's crying silently in her room and cursing god about her son's condition'.it was then she came to know about her dearest grandson pain''.

FLASHBACK

It was the sometime fourteen years ago ''nisha was patting and consoling her ten year son in his sleep he was sweating very badly mumbling something it was then nisha finally wake up her son'..

Nisha: maan wake up'..make son wake up'..seeing her son's condition tears were flowing from nisha's cheeks'..

Nisha: make wake up son'.please maan utto'..finally she was able to wake up maan and seeing his mom maan hugged her tightly he was sweating very badly she wiped his sweat 'she noticed that her little baby was trembing under her embrace''..

They remained like this for sometime until maan calmed down''it was the first time maan had woken up '.after some time he came out of her embrace and noticed his noticed her tear stained face'.he quickly wiped up his mothers tears and asked'

Maan: mom why are you crying'..look I am fine'..

Nisha: again hugged him tears again made there way from her eyes'''maan again wiping her tears consoled his mom that he is alright and nisha smiled at her brave kid maan never showed his feelings to anyone he always remained to stand up and face everything in his life without any complaints''.thats what amazes nisha sometimes but mother's heart cries seeing her own part like this'''

Nisha: maan you are fine na son''.i know your dreams makes your nights haunted'..maan you can tell me anything everything son'..you know your mom is always by your side '..

Maan: mom I am fine its just blurred images that came regularly but sometimes they scare me mom'..sometimes there is bloodshed all over'.sometimes I see a girl plucking flowers'..and a battle '.a girl crying'..

Mom its all very horrible I cant understand anything I just scare me with that maan hide himself in his mothers embrace protecting himself from all the worries from all the bad nightmares'.somewhere he believes tat no dream can haunt him when his mother is by his side''

Nisha's heart cried seeing her baby's pain it was the first time he has said anything to her she just want to keep him safe from these endless miseries''.

From that day nisha was the one who at night consoles maan ''.it was somewhere maan's insecurities that prohibited nisha to share about him to anyone 'this was the truth that was known only to nisha and now savitridevi when she once saw her daughter in law crying and cursing god''.

It was only after a month of maan's confrontation when maan's daadima went to meet nisha to discuss about some upcoming festival and what she saw there made her worried'.

She went to her room nisha was siting on the bed crying she immediately asked nisha what had happened to which nisha hugged her cried a loud '..

Savitri devi: nisha what happened beta 'why are you crying beta'..

Nisha: maa'maan'.wo maan'

Savitri devi: maan'.is maan alright kya hua hai maan ko''

It was then nisha told her everything to her mother in law including maan's attitude''.and savitri devi was the one who always consoled nisha'make her understand''

BACK TO PRESENT

Maan doesnot know that his daadima knows about his dreams and his attitude doesnot let her to talk to him about him'.

She is waiting for the day when maan would come to her 'her every day is just she is praying for his happy life and free from any burdens''

But she is not awre that destiny has now planned to end there life suffering'''

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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank you😊
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