MG-SS (LOST RELATIONS)pt 12 pg 136 nov 3 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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AWESOME SUHANA .TEASER IS JUST FAB .WAITNG FOR THE CHARACTER SKETCH AND PRT 1
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hiii...guys
thanx all for commenting ...and liking
here is part 1


PART 1



It was an usual day like always for maan'.maan singh khurana'..,''a 24 year old business personality who had taken over his family business at the young age of eighteen due to sudden demise of his parents and his siblings his elder brother kunal and younger sister shreya ''shreya khurana she was only fourteen and kunal twenty '..it was an unexpected plane crash '.yes unexpected planned by his business rivals ''.

That day he lost his most precious belonging that he treasured all his life '.., his mom nisha khurana she was the only one who was aware of his dreams ', is blurry visions'she was the one who consoled him when he at a time wake up from the his dream and get scared but all the things got changed'''.he lost his only pillar with whom he was going through through his tough phase his strength his mother left him'''

Well some losses make us different changes us'it changes our perspective of living '..thinking'.. '.thats what exactly maan had faced in his life'''after his mother's derparture to heavenly abode maan has locked himself '..confined his feelings and emotions within him''.the sweet and a little hot tempered maan had been transformed into a man with tough and arrogant attitude '..however he is having a charming personality that can make any girl drop down on her knees for him but he '..he never even pays any attention to anyone if its not related to his work''

That 's how how had find an alternative to keep himself away from those dreams .but .in this process'.he has somewhere lost the maan that he used to be''..

The thing that often annoys him is the ringing of those words in his ears ''..it is not only that he saw the same thing again and again but there are some broken incidents'incomplete pictures that often make him annoyed and sometimes it gives him headache'''..





After doing tai chi getting himself exhausted maan tried to get some sleep it was three in the morning and somehow after a while he drifted into sleep '..not peaceful r contented but a wanting sleep 'a sleep that he needs to get himself fresh however he also knows that in this lifetime that time will never ever come when he'll be able to drift into a blissful slumber'''''.

On the other hand a girl waked up screaming''..

""Mat jaiye hame chod ke''.ruk jaiye mat jaiye hame chod kar''.hum vinti karte hai aapse mat jaiye ''''.

Ruk jaiye''..""

This was the fourth time in this week that she had been woken up from her sleep'..she quickly get the lights on and looked at herself in the mirror'..

Her face covered with sweat ''her eyes had turned red from crying'''


Her face was red''.it was not new for new she now often cries ''sobs very loudly that even her brother and grandfather once got started hearing her whimpering in the deep sleep''..

Her nightmares are the worst part of her life 'it was almost regularly she had to experience that part of her life which she even doesn't know had existed even'.but these had became a part of her life like fish who cannot imagine its life without water '' which if is wants can't get rid of it'''.

it was then geet wake up''.

Geet singhania'.a girl with immense beauty '..her personality her gorgeous eyes which can capture anyone's heart by her innocence and bubbly nature but not many knows her '..people doesnot know the real geet who is lost somewhere ''somewhere in her own dreams '''

Geet: I always wanted to get into a new day by seeing the shining sun rays making my sleep disturb but see how cruel my fate is instead of seeing bright morning I am lost in the dark '..the dark and deep nightmares '.. coming out of her thoughts geet went to freshen up ''since a new day awaits for her she has only one hope that one day her babaji will get her a new vision which will be free from these dreams''

These hallucinations ''had made a great impact on her life this has really made geet short tempered ''she gets angry on every little thing which is not according to her''..it actually happens when you are controlled by some one'.and she's been

In the unwanted circle of these dreams that had made her vunerable that she even finds it difficult sometime to set her mind to correct place''..

Geet is the daughter of late vanraj singhania who was maharaj of Udaipur who along with his wife nitya singhania left the world leaving there two precious hearts behind geet and uday ''.

Well now a days this kingdom and all doesn't matter it is just a ritual so geet is technically rajkumari geetanshi singhania '..a beautiful twenty one year princess who doesn't like if anyone addresses her as princess'' She is the apple of her family which now only consisted of her grandfather maharaj randhir singhania and her brother uday '''

a little rude with her behaviour but knows how to behave and deal with the situations''

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Posted: 13 years ago
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painful nightmares
awesome update
thanks a lot for pm
cont. soon
cant wait to read more
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good start...
B/c of these dreams both r leading a tough life...
Geet s a princess..!!!
Then hw will she meet maan?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank you ...
glad that u like it...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

Good start...
B/c of these dreams both r leading a tough life...
Geet s a princess..!!!
Then hw will she meet maan?



thank you...
ya she's a princess but not like that...its only a title remaining
well u can say its her forefathers that were and nw its only remaining a title
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Angel13

painful nightmares

awesome update
thanks a lot for pm
cont. soon
cant wait to read more



thank you for liking
will update next friday
having 2 more exams..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it dear...awesome update do cont soon dear...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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perfact 1st part...

will b waiting 4 da next update..

nd tnq sooo much 4 da pm 😃

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nice concept... waiting to read more
thanks for the PM

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