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Posted: 12 years ago
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sorry for keeping u waiting so long...so here is the update...i am again sorry to keep u wait...
BELATED HAPPY FRIENDSHIP DAY TO ALL..
part 14:
Maan sat outside geet's ward waiting for hr to gain consciousness..it was 6 hours and the doctor said that if geet didn't gain consciousness in 2 more hours then it would be dangerous for her...
When maan heard i from his eyes tars started to flow he wanted someone to share his greif...the first thought that came to his mind was Rishi...without wasting time he called him...
R:hey buddy kya chal raha hai...lagtha hai aapni geet ke sang bohut busy ho...(what's going on...look's like u r very busy with ur geet..)
M:hi rishi...(sadly...)
R:hey maan kya hua...why r u so down???(what happened??)
M:rishi...g..e..e..t...(crying)
R:kya hua maan...kya hua geet ko??(what happened to geet..)
M:woh...woh geet ka accident...
R:kya hua maan...first cool down...geet ka accident???kab kaise???(what happened???geet's accident???when...how??)
M:woh sab meri wajah se...na mein geet ko call kartha na uska accident hota...(it was all because of me...had i not called her then this all would hav not happened..)
R:maan first cool down...and say me from starting what happened...she was working in ur company na...then how did this accident happened...u only gave her job in ur company so that she can be with u...then she also succeded in her first project...then how did this accident happened???
M:woh rishi she was going to cafe for giving treat to her friends...i wanted to hear her voice so i called her for some reason...then only that accident happened...it was all because of me...
R:how is she now??
M:she is in danger now...the doc said that if she didn't gain conscious in 2 hours then her life will be in danger...now i am sitting nxt to her bur outside the ward...
R:don't worry maan...she will be alright...i will pray for her...god cant be this ungreatful...
M:rishi i am scared...
R:don't worry...she will be alright...did u inform mohinder jiju???
M:no...i was thinking that only...should i inform or not...
R:good u didn't inform him...dont inform him for sometime...after knowing her condition we will inform them...
M:ok...
Suddenly there was a hussle bussle in the ward...
M:rishi i will call u later...
R:ok take care of u and geet...
Saying so he cut the call and peeped inside the ward to see geet's condition worsening...
The doctors rushed to her and started checking her...after sometime they came out and maan rushed to them...
M:what happened...is she ok???
D:mr.khurana there is a gud news...she is out of danger...this was only because her mind was thinking of the accident that happened with her...so only she became hyper...but don't worry this is a good sigh that there is no internal injury in her head and she could remember everything that happened...
After hearing this maan signed a breath of relif...the doctor said that they would keep under observation for some more time till she gains full consciousness...saying so the doc left to attend other patients...leaving maan in his happy state...maan immediately called rishi to inform...but his next set of words shocked him...
M:hi rishi...
R:maan bahut badi gadbad ho gayi...(maan there is a big trouble..)
M:what happened...
R:wo...woh...
M:rishi...say soon u r panicking me...
R:woh mohinder jiju had a small heart stroke...
M:WHAT????[shocked]
R:yes...just now i got the news...actually didi was trying geet's call but it was switched off...u were also not picking up the call...so didi called me to tell to inform u...
M:but how did this happen???
R:don't know...but i suggest u to call didi and talk to her...but no need to say about the accident of geet...
M:ok maa... i will call her asap...
Saying so maan cut the call and immediately called rano...rano in seeing the caller smiled a little from her teary face...
M:nameste auntyji...
R:nameste maan bte...kaise hai aap..(how r u??)
M:mein aacha hun...aap kaisi hain...uncle aabhi kaise hai...(i am well...how r u...how is uncle now..)
R:woh aabhi khatre se bahar hai par aabhi bohut kamzoor hai...doc ne tension lene ko mana kiya hai..(now he is out of danger...but is weak now...doc told not to take tension...)
M:sahi kaha doc ne...uncle ko kis baat ki tension hai???(doc told correct...what tension is uncle having???)
R:bas woh hi...tumhe tho pata hai na...geet ki future ko lekar tesio...(the same one which u know...tension of geet's future)
M:par...(but..)
R:pata hai bte aap hai geet ka khayal rahkhe ke liye...par inhe chain kahan...(i know that u r there to take care of here...but he is very restless)
M:mein samajtha hun auntyji...par mein kosish kar raha hun...(i understand aunty but i am really trying..)
R:mujhe pata hai bata..(i know son..)
M:aapko yeh bhi pata hai ki mein yeh kyun kar raha hunn..(u also know that y i am doing this...)mein nahi chatha hun ki geet ko mein kabhi is muskil mein daaku ki usse aapne mann ki karne mein koi takleef ho...(i don't want geet to keep her desires in herself..)
R:i know beta...aacha mein aabhi rakthi hun...baad mein geet se baat karlungi...(now i will end the call...will talk to geet later..)
M:aacha aunty...
Saying so both end the cal and at the same time doc came and said that there was improvement in geet's condition...and if the condition keeps on improving like his then she would recover soon...
After hearing this maan became very happy and thanked GOD nth times...after sometime they shifted geet to the room where maan could meet her...on seeing her maan wanted to hug her tight...the fear of losing her in the past few hours had taken a troll on him and he wanted to confirm that HIS GEET is fine...but he controlled himself as the doctor said that she needs total rest...
After some hours geet gained total conscious ness and she was shifted to the room where maan met her...seeing him in front of her she became totally shocked and started her rapid fire..
G:sir how am i here???what r u doing here???how did u know about my accident???
M:shut up geet...[waiting for her to stop...]
G:sorry sir...but...
M:enough geet...now u take rest...will talk later...
Saying so maan went out and she slept due to the sedatives...
The whole week passed with a lot of improvement in geet due to maan's care...one side geet was shocked seeing this caring side of maan and the other side the same maan would be rude many times...in this whole week she saw some glimpse of the adorable maan she knew before 3 years...
After 1 week geet was discharged...she was so happy to be discharged as she got a chance to come out of the white background after 1 week...ahhh...now much she hated to stay there...if she would had not come out then she would have surely got another disease..and being with maan she knew one thing that if 2 or three days he would be near herthan she would become the fattest person...but poor girl...her happiness was short lived
M:geet how will u be alone...
G:[dreading the worst..]no problem sir...i can live alone...
M:no geet u are not going to be alone..
G:but sir i am living alone from 4 months...
M:that is different...now u are week...
G:[st:week???rom where am i weak??fed me the food for 1 year then how can i be weak...]
Par sir..
M:no arguments...said is said...
G:ok sir but where will i be??according to ur so called not alone..
M:u are coming with me to my mansion...
G:what???
M:hello let me complete...dont assume thing...
G:hmmm..(still in shock...first this much concern and then this???)
M:in my mansion my DADI will be there to take care of u...u will surely like her..
G:but sir...U???
M:oh...me u no need to worry...as i don't stay in the mansion...i saty in the outhouse..
G:but sir will mam wont say anything??
M:no need to worry...i had already said her...she might be making the room ready and she might hav surely decorated the whole mansion...(mumbled the last line...)
END OF PART 14...
PRECAP:geet's welcome..
next...
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LOADS OF LOVE AG❤️
Edited by kingofme - 12 years ago
Donnaa thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it
maan ne geet ko ek hi hafte me mota bana dia😆
awesome

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part..
geet is better
now will be in mansion
more of maneet
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update dear
loved Maan very much
and Geet is as usual adorable
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dona86

loved it

maan ne geet ko ek hi hafte me mota bana dia😆
awesome

thanks for liking..
hehe...geet became moti...
thanks for commenting...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: valli22

nice part..
geet is better
now will be in mansion
more of maneet

thanks for liking..
u r sure to get...
thanks for commenting...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: misty_drastifan

awesome update dear
loved Maan very much
and Geet is as usual adorable

thanks for liking..
thanks for commenting...
kingofme thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks for liking and commenting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update
except for geet everyone knows maan loves her
waiting for geet to move into mansion
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved to see maan taking care of geet, hope to see soon geet also falling in love with maan.

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