MG FF - LOVE AND HATE - THREAD 3 - Page 49

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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update...lvd it alot...wonder wt maan will do to dev...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome... Superb Update!!
Loved it...
Geet makeing Maan 'J' 😆happy that her plan s success
poor dev n vicky...both r so scared of MSK
loved maaneet passinote Dance..
Geet cursed Maan so much...and he was smiling🤣
Loved 'J' Maan
hyeee Awesome Precap😳...geet ke babaji dev ko bachana😆
eagerly waiting for next
continue soon
Thankx for pm




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Posted: 13 years ago
👏 heyyy Shoba. U write very well. The story is ur imagination, creation write it accordingly. Ur story we are the readers and are reading, whatever u write is wat happens next in the story, just make it interesting and Hott, steamy 😉😆😳 as far ideas we all can provide dat is if u have shortage (which i dont think 😊 would happen) but otherwise I personally love reading ur creation...
Waiting for the next update. make it soon!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice one waiting for ur update
pls update sooon
waiting
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Posted: 13 years ago

TEASER 1

Maan was smiling to himself remembering the close dance and moments with Geet.It brought a peace to his heart. He reached his room, took the towel, and went inside the washroom that Geet was using. She had forgotten to lock the door in a hurry. As soon as Maan entered the washroom he was stunned with the view of Geet fully drenched nude body. He froze seeing her while Geet to stood rooted to her spot seeing her husband staring at her nude body. She did not know wat was happening all of sudden, as she had not even planned it. Maan in a trance moved closer to Geet making himself wet. Geet could see the lustful desire and passion in his eyes that burned her all wet form. Maan holds Geet by her bare waist and smacked his rough hungry lips on her soft petals making her to flinch in pain and pleasure while the water poured on the two love birds.

TEASER 2

Maan was filled with anger, anguish and hatred for himself. He did not know why and how does he loose his all control near her. How could he forget the sins he did. How could he forget tat he had tortured his angel to death where she had lost everything in her life. He was ready to suffer but he could not understand why still she affects him when he had closed his heart with his guilt and sins. He wanted to destroy himself to such an extent tat no one could save him. He did not deserve her and her love. A monster like him did not deserve a pure angel like her. He broke the mirror in his room with his bare hand making the glass pieces to pierce his skin making it to bleed heavily. Geet came running out of the washroom fully dressed only to see her Maan bleeding. It pricked her heart and she ran to him holding his hand. As soon as Maan feels her hand on his he pushed her roughly making her to fall on the floor.

Maan: this is wat you wanted na Geet. Are you happy now.

TEASER 3

Maan had a meeting at one of the five star hotels with his clients. It was one of an over seas project and the clients wanted it to be signed urgently as they would be leaving early next morning. So Maan asked to them to meet him at the xyz hotel. Fortunately or unfortunately, Dev and Naintara were in the same hotel for a dinner unknown to the fact tat Maan was also present. They were so busy in their world tat they did not see him seating next to their table along with his clients while Maan to was engrossed in his meeting. But soon Maan's attention went to the announcement made by the manager of the hotel.

Manager: Attention everyone. Its my pleasure to announce you tat today's dinner is sponsored by Mr and Mrs Dev Khanna who are celebrating their proposal anniversary. I on the behalf of my staff and management would like to wish them for the same and to have a lovely life ahead. A big cheers to the couple Dev and Nainatara Khanna.

Maan was shocked to hear it and soon his gaze fell on Dev and his so-called wife hugging each other. He was filled with anger and wat not. He got up to kill Dev on the spot but soon sat back thinking about his clients.

So here is the teasers for my next update. Hope tat you will all like it. Chalo, now lets see wat Maan does to Dev.

So now your turn for likes and comments?

Edited by sdlife19 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful teasers ...waiting for the update
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Posted: 13 years ago
wen will u update?? cant wait 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful teaset
Waiting for update
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Posted: 13 years ago
maan is so annoying how can geet fall in love with him in his so called guilt he again pushed her and made her fall bravo seriously how can she love that monster I really hate this Maan he is so annoying beyond limits there is nothing right about him if he is so guilty he should do everything to make geet happy but no it's always about Mr. selcentered Idiot
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Posted: 13 years ago
3 teasers r awesome
poor dev,wt maan is going 2 do wid him
eagerly waiting 4 d next update
update soon

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