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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

@piya-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#681

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OMG Di what an update I had goosebumps while reading this part aur upar se aapne mera fav song use kiya "tere mast mast do nain" it was like a cherry on top of the cake

So finally Maan realized that he loves Geet and is ready to let his heart out in front of his angel

It would be intersting to see the way Maan does this I am sure Maan ek jhatke mein toh ye baat nahi kahega he will show his true feelings with the help of small steps that would be engraved on Geet's heart with golden leters

The best part was that he freed Poonam and openly confessed that Geet was his heartbeat and his Humsafar

Waiting to see loads of Maaneet moments in the future:)

love-Piya

Edited by piya- - 13 years ago

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tamannA

@tamanna1391

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Posted: 13 years ago

#682

finally maan totaly realise he love geet and poonam is not made for him and freed her and accept his love waiting for his confession to geet

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jasraj123

@jasraj123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#683

awesome update

love the way u wrote what maan thinks about geet and how he feels about her

then his talk to poonam and making her free

reality check😕😕😕

now have to wait for this😆😆

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music

@music_girl

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+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#684

wow

he did have some hopes atleast *i mean me* 😆

awesome update

he did realize that he loves geet

cont soon

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#685

Omg!that was so touching...
especially his words to poonam..
"Aaj tak kismet ko kosta tha ki usne tumhein mujhse cheen liya. Lekin aaj usi kismet ko thanks kehta hoon ki usne mujhe Geet jaisa humsafar diya. "Humsafar". Haan Poonam, aaj samajh mein aaya hai ki shatyad humari kismet mein milna likha hi nahi tha. Shayad tum mere liye bani hi nahi thi.
Tumhaare jaane ke baad bhi maine tumhein aazad nahi kiya. Lekin, today I free you Poonam and I truly hope that you meet your destiny. You meet the one who is made for you truly. Who is your true partner and will be there with you in every life.
I know what a beautiful person you are. I know that today you will be happy for me but I do hope you are happy for yourself too."

I was rereading dese words.. so Beautiful..so touching...

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pixelflower620

@pixelflower620

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Posted: 13 years ago

#686

u hv written a really beautiful ff
i just hv started reading ur ff frm d start its just mesmerizing nd heart warming truly a beautiful piece of work :)
esp maaneet character u hv drawn out so beautifully none being wrong in thr position
m sorry to write but i read some ff in which i was really sad reading either one of maaneets character destroyed but only a few i hv read good to like urself a real decent nd amazing piece of work
reality check waiting fr ur next update :)
hope reality check is a good one 😭

Edited by pixelflower620 - 13 years ago

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sdlife19

@sdlife19

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Posted: 13 years ago

#687

tat was a fab update

his feeling were well described ..

and finally he realised tat she is the one meant for him

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

@piya-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#688

edited my comment page 137

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Jaggy

@--Fairy--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#689

OMG loved the maan realisation for his love to geet and he freed poonam from his bond and called Geet as humsafar is amazing ...loved the update ...waiting for next update