Maan and Geet FF- Mann se Zude Risthey

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Prologue:

Every one around her loved her so much; she was so innocent with beauty. Her life is her father and her best friend cum sister Meera. Its none other then our lovely Geet. She got engaged to Rahul Malothra. But destiny played in her life and in one night she lost everything,

"Help help my heart is ripped is there
a doctor out there that can fix it.
My heart has been ripped, stab, and broken in half.
Please doctor fix my heart make it solid as gold.
I dont want to feel this pain anymore."

How Geet will survive in the society?

Will Geet father understand Geet's condition and supports her?

Did she get married to Rahul?

Kya Geet us insaan se mil payegee Jo usse sab kuch cheena hai?

Kya wo dono kabi ek ho payengee?

Kya Meera ko usse sabse acha dost kabi mil payegee

Agar Geet Meera se mili kya Geet Meera ko sab kuch batha payegee

Kya koi farista ayega Geet ki zindagi main?

Characteristic Below:

Index

Thread 1

Imp Note-Page2

Part 2- page6

Part-3-page-8

Part 4-page-10

Part 5-page-12

Part-6-page-15

Part-7-page-19

Part 8 -Page-22


Thread -2

Link for next thread @ page 46



Thread -3

Thread 4

Part 35-page-4
Part 36 page 12

Part 37 page 18
Note-page 24
Part 38 page26
part 39 page 34
part 40 page 42
part41 page50
Part 42 page 60
Part 43 page 69
note-page 75
Part 44 page 76
Note-84
Part 45 page 86
Part 46 page 95
Note
Note-:(
part 47-page 113
PART 48-PAGE 124

thread 5

Part-49-page 9
teaser
Part 50-page-28
Part 51-Page-29

Note: 39
PART 52-PG 47
Part 53 Pg 61

Note:

This is my first FF and especially for Tanu who pressurize me to write an FF. Thanks a lot for Tanu for beautiful Banner and Title

There will be some mistakes please ignore it and also I will try to write more in hindi

Pls let me know whether you are interested in this FF so that I can continue''waiting for your response




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-Mounika- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congratz on ur new ff dear..
Hmm concept was interestng..so geet's engagement wil be broken..kahi maan responsible toh nahi?
Nahi!rahul aur geet ki shaadi nahi ho sakti tabhi toh maaneet ek ho payenge na..he he
cnt soon dear
love
mona
Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago
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Interesting prologue 👏
Continue soon...
And plz add me in 😃
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Characteristics

Geet Handa

20 years old innocent girl was oblivious to all worries in the world'Her life was confined only to her family and friend. Her mother died when she was small. She is currently living with her father Mohinder. Her only life is her father and best friend cum sister Meera

Mohinder Handa: Geet Father

45 years, work as Accountant in Pvt firm. After is wife Rano death look after Geet as Mother and father. Loves Geet most and care of Meera

Maan Khurana

27 years old business tycoon 'He is MD of Khurana constructions..

He is full of attitude.,dominance.,Egotism.. Arrogance...

He wants what ever he desires'quiet flirty'

loves cousin sister Meera most and can do anything for her

Savithri Devi Khurana: Maan Dadi

65years, loves Maan very much and very well aware of Maan's flirty nature. Do not like Nita. But stop involving in Maan's matter because of some incidents

Niharika Khurana: Maan Mother

Selfish, Greedy, can spend lakhs and lakhs for her jewelry and make up, but do not give single pie to anyone, wants Nita to marry Maan so that she can get lots of money and property which is in her name and aware of Nita's illness

Meera Khurana

20years, bubbly , very talkative. Geet is more than a sister to her, like to do anything for her happiness. She is positive and full of life and dearest to Maan

Mrs. Anvesha Rathod (Annie)

25years, elder sister on Meera and married to Arjun Rathod. Friend of Nita Oberoi. Annie knows that Nita loves Maan and introduce Nita to Maan's Mother Niharika Khurana

Arjun Rathod

27years, Best friend of Maan. But hates his flirty nature. Arjun alerts Maan to no to go around girls but Maan does not care to Arjun.

Dev Singhania

27years, Doctor, orphan, very good at heart. Used to stay in relatives house. Every week he will shift from one relative place to other relative place. Respects everyone.Loves Meera very much. Not rich so afraid to tell Meera about his love

Beeji

Loves Geet very much, she looks after Geet like her own daughter

Lucky Singh:

Geet cousin brother,Lucky a very bubbly, cute and positive character.

Nita Oberoi

25 years,very rich, only daughter and most pampered by mother and father. Friend of Maan cousin sister Anvesha Khurana. Loves Maan very much, going to engaged to Maan, hides about her health condition with Maan

Seema Oberoi and Pratap Oberoi

Nita's Mother and father , can go to any extent to make Nita happy.

Vikram Ahuja

He is a suave. He works his charm around everyone, and impresses Geet. MD of Ahuja institution

Role:Adi
Works with Maan at his office

Pinky
Geet's colleague and Adi's wife

Sameer Chopra

Married, Works in Pvt Company and neighbor to Geet

Role: Naintara
Married to Dev

Rahul Malothra

Mohan Khurana and Kumud Khuran

Father and Mother of Meera and Anwesha

Edited by misty_drastifan - 13 years ago
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congratulation for new ff
awesome and interesting start
nice character sketches
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Brilliant concept dear and the character sketch also sounds really cool
and yes the banner and the title both r fab
would be waiting for the first part

love-Piya
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats for the new ff..
concept sounds good.. do continue soon
thx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Imp Note:

Thank you very much for supporting me. I never thought of writing FF. When Tanu suggested me this I just thought of writing and not in my dreams i guesses that you guys will like this FF

My special thanks to
Muskan, Piya, Shobha, Jyothikrish, ana, Annie, Bindu, Dia, aakritisri, Valli, Varsha,Zoha, varsha Sharma,Sweety,Anhel Misty, Soumya, Nandy Bru, PrithviSanyo1, Anupam,Fairy,drrose31,crazydevil87,fairyland_1234,
kawaii_geet, lovelygeet24x7,Mariam94, ,Mdworld, mahimaneet maneetlover1,Mrs ZSK,Maaneet4eve,Ritzy09...
etc for my inspiration


I know i left some more names sorry guys as of now i remember only these names who made me crazy while reading their FF, SS, OS and see at the end of the day even I started writing without even know how to write FF

Please forgive me for any mistakes in the updates


Luv
Saritha

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Part 1

Girls and Boys came out from College Campus after finishing their exams. They felt relief after doing exams very well. Geet and Meera remembered their first day of college, how fearful they were when entering to the premises. But today they are missing everything. Earlier they thought when will be the college life going to end, because they were fed off of ragging, flirting. Now they are missing each and every incident taken place in their college life. All saw the college building once more before coming out from the college Campus. Everyone had tears, to lighten the moment

Meera: Hey Geet, aaj sham ka programme ke bare mein tume pata hai naa. Abb sirf uncle ko bata ke, humare ghar chalte hai

Geet simply smiled and nodded her head. Both left to home. When Geet and Meera entering Geet's house compound they met Mohinder (Geet Father)


Mohinder: (Smiled at them and told) Abb aap logo ka ka exams katam hui hai naa jake aaram karo tum duno

Meera: Aap log humko kaha aaram karne keliye chodenge uncle. Aap log hamara shadi jaldi se karwa dengey, phir kaha enjoyment. Abhi tho aap log ladka dunda shuru karchuke honge, Aap phele haame iss Shadi ke Bhandan me dale hum log hamara zindagi jee lenge

She saw time at watch and informed Geet

Meera: Geet zaldi se tayar hoja, hum late hue tho film start hogi, abhi time nahi hai hamara pass aur hamara ghar bhi jana hai

Mohinder: Kya hai baccha log abhi abhi puri rath zakey aap log exams diye hai.Hey film dekhne ka palgalpan chodkey aaram kyun nahi karthe'.Scolded Geet and Meera lovingly

Meera: Uncle please aaj hame math rokiye. Abhi tak hum sub log sath the aur patha nahi hum doston se kab aise mil payenge, pata nahikab hum log ek dusre se sur jayenge


Mohinder:(smilingly) aap log jahiye Meera, aab aap log itna kush hai apne doston se milne keliye , mein kyun aapko rukungi.

Geet gave tea to Dad and Meera and then they both headed towards Meera's house. Geet saw 2 - 3 cars in front of Meera's house from far and guesses some relatives have some to Meera's house


Geet: Meera lagta hai tumara relatives haye hai...aab kyun hum film dekna programme cancel kare

Meera: Nahi Geet we cant cancel our programme in last minute, I think Niharika Aunty and her family might has come, Koi bhi ho buss 5 mins mein ready ho ke, Maa kho bhatakar nikalna hoga, or else we will be late. Lata, Kusum, Gayathri, Naina and remaining other friends will be waiting for us at theater...said Meera entering her house

Meera and Geet met Maan near the doorstep

Maan: Meera tum nahi thi naa idar mujhe bahut bore hora tha said Maan before noticing Geet beside Meera

Meera and Geet entered the house, Meera said to Maan. While Maan was gaping at Geet

Meera: Bhai mujhe bahut late ho raha hai'abhi film dekhne ke liye jana hai. Tumare pass baitkar bhate karne keliye mujhe purusot nahi hai.

Maan: WHAT THE...his voice dropped dead seeing her'their eyes locked instantly'he couldn't see anything but those eyes.He looked at her eyes, slowly his eyes scanned her fully. Her lips, her dress, her gestures, her smile'her smile,she was looking stunning, damn gorgeous .her curves seemed more sexier than he had ever seen. He didn't know how should he be complementing her as he was gaping at her breath taking beauty like a moron. His eyes was deep may be more passionate now. His eyes glanced at her like he was drinking her raw beauty with his bear eyes. He stood like statue their while Meera and Geet entered house

Meera made Geet to sit in her room and hurriedly went inside bath room. Geet took the magazine beside the table and looked around. Geet could easily make out that there were so many guests were inside house by the sound coming from hall.

Within 10 mins Meera got ready. At the same time Maan came to Meera's room and gave beautiful smile to Geet and said

Maan: Aap hee batahiye mujhe''Itni dur se mera sister ko dekhne keliye haya hoon mein par uske pass mujhse bhath karne keliye patience nahi hai aur tho aur uska friend ko mujhe introduce bhi nahi karwaya said Maan while pulling Meera's hair.

Meera: Bhai please mera bhal chodiye'dhekiye abhi kafi late hagaye hum aur jab tak hum theatre pounche film bhi start hogayee hogi''..aur wisey bhai hey hai Geet mera best friend and Geet this is my brother Maan Singh Khurana

Maan said "hi" to Geet to which Geet responded "Hello". Meanwhile Maan left Meera's hair

Precap:

Geet meeting Nita

Maan admiring Geet beauty

Maan, Nita, Meera and Geet @ Theatre


Edited by misty_drastifan - 13 years ago

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