**FLAMES OF DESIRE** MG FF #3 IMP NOTE pg 144 - Page 73

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bas ho gaya...me just waiting for few mins...taki woh spamming ka msg na aaye
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uff waiting for the update varshu🤗
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a big thank u for all of u...for loving this ff so much...

love u lots
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FLAMES OF DESIRE

PART-20
As their lips pull apart, a gentle breeze flutters over the flame extinguishinging the desperate heat...their breathing comes out in short, desperate gasps...the intensity has washed away...and the rest of the world is slowly coming back into focus...
he leaned his forehead on hers...holding her closer...balancing her weight...he looked at her close eyes...those blushing red cheeks...she looked beautiful, serene...her face was glowing with the shade of his love...jaise uske rang mai rang gayi ho...
he smiled reached for her hand brushing the strand of hair off her cheek as it slides ever so lightly past her ear...his thumb rubbing softly caressing her earlobe...she opened her drowsy eyes looking at his desiring ones...feeling captivated in ecstasy...he stared deeper into her eyes...caressing her soft cheeks...wisphering...
"I LOVE YOU"
His whisper, that words, sounded simply magical to her ears...like pulling her deeper and deeper in their passion...geet was in complete ecstacy...feeling drugged with this new found sensation...
As maan caressed her supple cheeks, lifting her chin, their noses almost touching...she could feel the warmth of his breath brushing the top of her lip...she stared back into his alluring hardened eyes...moving closer in her trance...she brushed her now plum lips on his rough ones...like demanding for another scorching one...maan smiled with his parted lips seeing this cute angel seducing him...
there lips touched this time more sensously...rubbing over eachother...slowly and passionately...relishing every ounce of this erotic feel...both where completely aroused...craving for eachother...but this time maan wanted it her way...so he gave in for her every move...she sensously licked his lips...hugging him close...clutching his shirt tightly, fearing to loose her balance...then kept givng small pecks on his lips...like didnt know what to do next...her innocent naive moves where driving him more crazy...making him fall of her all over again...
she kept kissing him with whatever moves she saw in films...but then pouted on his lips...thinking..."films mai toh ladke kiss karte hai na ladki ko...aur yaha dekho"...giving up she opened her eyes and looked at him...he was smiling...looking at her teasingly...she pouted, biting her lips...cutely...moving away from him...then tilted her face to the right, cribbing to her babaji...maan smiled and crabbed her face in his palms making her look at him...then took her cribbing lips in his for a devastating kiss...he smooched her like never before...it was a mushy liplock...driving them both insane...her knees went numb, melting away...he found her sliping down...with his instinct he hauled her to his body...hugging her waist more intimately this time...their rubbing bodies created havoc in their minds...making them shiver, tremble...but still holding on, quenching their thirst...
he kissed her carnally as she clutched his hair pulling him close...biting, nibling, sucking...ravishing her soft velvetty petals...uff her lips felt buttery in his mouth...like tempting him to assault it more carnally...he lost his senses...and kept sucking on her lips till they lost their breath...finally she collapsed in his arms, making him come out of his passion...
he looked at her weak structure hanging in his arms...pulled her up...levelling him...scared he patted her cheeks...
"geet...geet please utho..."
he kept shaking her to gain her senses...fearing for anything worse...he trembled holding her close...looking at her pale face...finally she opened her drowsy eyes meeting his...she blushed making her flushed cheeks go deep red...he looked at her face...her cheeks forming the shade for their love...smiled geniunely pulling her in his arms...hugging her close...happy to have her completely for him...
It was a while from then...but still they where sharing cute cozy hug...with maan closing his eyes...feeling his love close to him like never before...ohh he dreamed of this moment so many times...and it felt heaven for him finally reliving it with his jaan...while geet just hugged him blushing, shying...didnt know what to do else...their kiss, that moment was playing in her mind...this feelings where something new...and feeling it with maan was making it more magical...she badly shivered as their intimate moments flashed infront of her eyes...making maan concern...he pulled out of the hug...looking at her face, but still holding her in his arms...
"kya hua jaan"
geet was numb with shyness...didnt know how to tell him, what she is feeling for him...she looked down, biting her brused lips...
"ahhhaaa" she screamed...as the blood oozzed out of her plum brused lips...maan got concern looking at the blood...leaned in, and licked it smoothly...not to hurt her...feeling sorry for biting those petals...hurting them...
geet was in her trance again feeling those magical sensation running down her body...she closed her eyes, as pleasure took over her senses subsiding the pain she felt before...maan kept sucking on her lips slowly, licking the blood away...then moved a litle away, looking at her...finding the blood has stopped...
"is it paining now" he asked pulling her out of her wild thoughts...
"ummm" she said not finding words...
"i am sorry jaan...next time i wont bite you"
"whyyy" she shouted spontaneously...then blushed at her own desires...
maan looked away...blushing...thinking...
"this cute seductress is all ready to check my patience...bach ke reh maan teri izzat khatare mai hai"
she looked at him still blushing crazily...all filmy types...
then finding him looking away smiling...she too smiled cutely hugging him again...maan hugged her back...so much satisfied with his life with her around...
"mujhe bhook lagi hai"
she said looking at him pulling away a litle...then patting her tummy...making a puppy face...
he smiled...picked her up in his arms...carried her to the chairs he placed near the campfire...he made her seat their...kissing her cute nose he moved towards the tent...came back with two plates of pasta...keeping it on the table...he arranged some candles...lighting it...creating a whole feel of candle lite romantic dinner date...
geet smiled wholeheartedly...feeling so special...and with maan doing it for her...she felt like a princess...looking at him making cute smiling face...all excited...while he deliberately ignored her...smiling arranging everything he planned...
he sat next to her, gesturing her to start eating...while he just sipped some juice looking at her lovingly...she eyed him back, asking him to make her eat...giving a stern cute look...he smiled and pulled her in his lap...she made her self comfortable...hugging his neck...he took the plate and started feeding her with the spoon...
after few bites...geet asked him...
"aap bhi khao na"
maan looked at her lips...which had some crumbles of pasta on it...maan leaned in passionately...licked it away...biting her lips...then smiled looking at her blushing cheeks...
"aap mujhe kyu kha rahe ho" she said meekly looking down...complaining...
maan laughed thinking his life will never be boring with her around...
rather it will be adventrous...mentally and much more physically...
"aap has kyu rahe ho" she looked at him keeping her hands on her waist...pouting with confused look on her face...
he kept the plate aside hugging her close...
"you are more yummy then this pasta...so i feel better eating you then this" and he again bit her lips intimately...making her yearn for more...
"ummm" she moaned...hugging him...hiding her desirous face in his chest...
finally he made her eat...stealing some cute delicious bites of her lips...while whole the time she kept blushing all filmy types...after finishing their meal...she moved and walked towards the sea shore, all excitedly...while maan kept following her...looking at her chirpy self...she removed her sandals...and walked closer to the water...
"geet sambhalke...aage mat jana"
he tried matching her steps...
she shivered with the cold water touching her naked feet...still moving on, playing with it...thumping her foot...making the water to spill over her...making her cloths go all wet...
"geet tum bheeg jaoge...please come out" he said in urgency...
with this she splashed some water on maan who was right behind her at a distance...all laughing wholeheartedly...her musical laughter was some thing he always felt magical...enchanting, entrapping his senses...
the night was perfect...with moonlight shone down and reflected in the slow peaceful water on the sea...the stars shone and twinkled gently in the midnight sky...nothing was stirring and the wind blowed with cool breez...the only thing he could hear was sound of his mishty's laughter...the waves lapped the seashore gently as geet moved back...all excited like a baby who found his toys...her excitement knew no bounds as she again moved in the water playing, splashing, enjoying to the core...this was so much satisfying for maan looking at her so happy...
maan inhaled deeply capturing every moment...he walked steadily along the shore listening to the gentle song of the waves and her laughter, from a distance...this memory he would cherish forever...he was in his thoughts when he heard her scream...
panicking he looked her way...completely astonished...she was seating in the water...struggling to get up...all wet...
his mouth fell open looking at her wet form...her cloths clinging to her sexy body...giving him a perfect idea of her sexy voluptuous curves...her hair all messed up...and those cribbing plum lips...his eyes grew bigger...as she stood up and removed her duppatta...bending...squeezing it to remove the water...her cleavage was showing with water droplets on it...
uff maan was aroused looking at her seductive form...abruptly he looked away...as the sight of her cleavage looked more tempting...he hit his head...making a hiss sound...
geet looked at him looking other side...she pouted angrily...cribbing to her babaji...
"dekha aapne babaji...mai yaha gir gayi aur yeh hai ki help bhi nahi kar rahe...dushta danav"
still finding him not looking at her, she screamed...
"maannn" anger was evident on her face...as maan looked at her innocently...
"kya hua mishty" he asked still looking here and there...
"aapko dikhata nahi kya...mai gir gayi thi pani mai...aur aap ho ki madat bhi nahi kar rahe"
he bit his tounge...smacked himself mentally...
"maan control your wild thoughts" he ordered himself and moved towards her...picked her up in his arms...then moved towards their tent, looking at her passionately...
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Precap:- guess guess guess😳😳😳😉😉😉
here i complete this part...tel me how you find it...give me lots of comments and likes...
and a big thank u guys😃...for giving me wat i desired...finally we cross with 200 likes🥳...and now reached to 224 likes for my last update...thank u thank u thank u thank u thank u so much...a big hug for all of u🤗...now lets keep this steady...we will gradually increase and raise its bar...
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Edited by mahimaneet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...👏
just loved it...⭐️
Maaneet romance is so 😳😉
precap seems interesting waiting for ahem ahem moments...😳


Edited by Kriti_rox - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWesomeee...
Just loved it
Romantic update haaa :D
Waiting for next update heheheheheh... 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was an awesome update yaar...

loved maaneet moments... and you stopped at the wrong timing... 😉

thanks for the update... continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesm!!
loved it
geet s naiveness adds 2 d charm n magic of maneet romance!!
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Originally posted by: Aamera

AWesomeee...
Just loved it
Romantic update haaa :D
Waiting for next update heheheheheh... 😳

thanks dear😊
glad u liked it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mindblowing update vasha.
Maan is too naughty n geet too innocent...

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