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Posted: 13 years ago
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She silently went to the kitchen and made some pasta for him. She even had her food giving him silent treatment! He knew pacifying her won't be easy but he was getting late. He took his lappy and files and walked out placing a kiss on her cheeks. He had got 1000s of calls by now.


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She looked at the watch. 11 at night and he was still not back. She was dozing off on the couch, waiting for him. He had called up to inform that he'd be having his dinner with his clients after the meeting. She half-hartedly had her food and sat in the hall….waiting for him. She was bored of watching tv, talking to jess, listening to her fav songs, reading and re-reading his mails etc etc. her exams had just got over a few hours back and she got the biggest happiness as him being with her and she was not even enjoying it! She sat cuddled up, feeling tired and sleepy.


He came back around 00:30 and found her sleeping on the couch. She looked uncomfortable. She looked uncomfortable. He checked the time and sighed, feeling guilty. He kept away the files and lifted her up and gently lowered her on the bed.

"sorry…" he whispered in her ears. She stretched herself and slept off again. He changed and slipped beside her and dozed off instantly giving into the tiredness. The next morning, she found herself on the bed and the best part…she was in his arms…cuddled up to him. He was sleeping peacefully. His shallow and warm breath fell on her lips making them gp dry. She smiled realizing he must have carried her to the bed. She kissed his nose softly trying not to disturb him. She felt so contended and happy.


But her happiness was short lived . in the next one hour she found herself alone in the house, keeping his things properly. She sighed sadly. He has become a workaholic.


Dan was feeling so restless. He sat in his room, frustrated and angry. Damn…why was it happening with him? He knew this was not right…but then his mind didn't stop going back to her again and again!


It was around 5 in the evening and he was still not back. Geet sat watching tv…her only source of entertainment as of now.

Geet (st): chal geet puttar…with him…without him..everything is the same! You have to live through this!

She heard the doorbell ring. She excitedly ran to the door, thinking it was Maan! But then he never knocks or rings the doorbell… he just gets in! her heart sunk seeing a courier boy. He handed her a packet and walked off.

She went in and opened it and a note fell dow.

"be ready by 7

I'll pick you up…

-Maan"


She smiled….but then why couldn't he come now? She found a beautiful evening gown for her!!!



ahh this is the 2nd time he is had sent her a beautiful dress…she was blown away by its beauty. She had no idea what Maan had planned but she couldn't stop smiling…falling for him all over again! Nevertheless she'd be getting to know about his plan sooner or later. she had a wide grin on her face…..so he was keeping his words!


He came around 7 and looked for her. She came out of the room, all set to leave! He stood rooted there…seeing her…awed by the serene beauty that stood in front of him. The gown fit her perfectly…as he had imagined…sitting beautifully over every curve and turn of her body…. His mouth went dry seeing that ravishing beauty.


Her hair was tied beautifully in a bun with small star shaped gem clips studded in her hair. She wore a thin silver pendant around her neck and a pair of small earrings. Everything about her was so simple yet so gorgeous. He suddenly felt his entire body go stiff…a very prime feeling took over his senses…he stood there gaping at her from top to bottom…he had lost his words! She shied away getting conscious of his gaze. He gulped hard trying to hold himself back from doing anything to her right now! He took a deep breath in and promptly walked towards her and extended his hand.

"shall we go?"

She nodded, smiling, putting her hand in his. She noticed he was looking very tired. She wanted him to take rest…but he had already led her to the car.

They drove to their destination and the chauffer took the keys from him and he led her to the hall of the grand hotel they were in. she was expecting a dinner date…OMG their 1st date….in real real sense! She'd swoon in anticipation. She was brought back to reality when he asked her to open the door of the hall. She looked here and there…strange! There were no people around. She looked him confused. He gestured her to go ahead. She took a deep breath in and pushed open the door and there she saw people standing by the door….shouting HAPPY BIRTHDAY GEET…


All her friends were there..even preeto, raj, Nini and her friends in the caf….too all welcoming her with gifts and wishes! She slowly went inside and looked at all of them…super duper confused! Maan hugged her from the back and whispered in her ears, "sorry…and happy birthday sweetheart"

She turned to look at him with a big question mark on her face!

"Maan…par mera birthday to agle week hai na…phir ye sab…"

He laughed, "jaanta hoon…but next week you'll be in India baby…with your family! Phir tum apne friends ke saath enjoy kaise karti?"

She was so so so touched by his gestures…a tear almost tricled down her eyes. She tiptoed and kissed his cheek…and there was a loud clapping and hooting at their little romance. She looked down blushing crimson.


Just then jess patted her shoulder, "lets get going birthday girl…your cake is waiting!"

She led geet to the centre of the hall where her huge chocolate cake was waiting.

He stood there watching her…happy at seeing her happiness. And that smile on her lips…ahhh he was totally blown away! Preeto tapped his shoulder.

"you are not going to join her?" she winked. He smiled and walked to her. she was loaded with gifts. Raj and Nini ran to her hugging her tight…gifting her flowers and cards. She couldn't be happier!


She cut the cake while Maan opened the champagne bottle, shaking it hard. She fed him a bit and he shoved an entire piece into her mouth. She fed everyone there. The lights dimmed and she heard a music. She turned to see her friends running to the dance floor. Rahul led jess while raj and Nini followed, jumping around.

hear the song peeps..SRK and Kareena as Maaneet😉

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VIV3nS7KRok[/YOUTUBE]

O o ..
Look out, look out the siren's blaring
She drop it down I can't stop staring
O o ..


She laughed seeing Rahul singing it for jess. He was looking so funny. She looked around for Maan. He wasn't there. She walked towards the dancefloor when she felt a tug on her hand. She turned to see Maan holding her hand, smiling naughtily.


Teri nazar toh hai farebi
Tera hua jaan-e-qaidi

He twirled her around and joined dan on the floor.

She is burning like a fever
And I'm a believer
Nasha hai nazakate
Inn aankhon ke chodo
Adaa mein karodo
Chhupi hai sharaaratein
Its criminal baby booty going pop pop pop
Its criminal baby party won't stop stop stop


Rahul joined Maan and Dan hiting those words at jess. Everyone screamed, trying to pull geet to the floor. She just refused politely to everyone…she just wanted to enjoy them. Maan pulled a girl seeing geet refuse and started dancing with her.

Its criminal that shorty driving me crazy
Sexy like the girl should be
Spending all my money on her

Oh ishq asar kare dinna dinna

Dil ka hashar kare dinna dinna
Ek nazar kare dinna dinna
Lakh dakaatiyaan
Ho ishq asar kare dinna dinna
Dil ka hashar kare dinna dinna
Ek nazar kare dinna dinna
Lakh dakaatiyaan
Its criminal baby booty going pop pop pop


his moves were so sleek but geet madam was not liking it. Maan smirked at her reaction. That girl…grrr she was trying to get close to her Maan….arrghh she hated it…actually she hated any girl goingnear Maan. Preeto was watching all the fun. She just came around and pushed geet towards Maan.


Nigaahein aate jaate, nazaare mere dekhe tham ke ho tham ke
Ujaale phaile mere adaayein sheeshe jaise cham ke ho cham ke


She moved her hands up in the air giving stern looks to Maan. Everyone had surrounded her. Dan and Rahul came beside her and twirled her around holding her hands.


O aadhi se zyada neendhein nakhre churaaye
Baaki bachi jo teri zulfein udaaye
Tu hi bata de kaise khud ko bachaaye
Yeh aankhein teri kare choriyaan

Its criminal baby booty going pop pop pop

Its criminal baby party won't stop stop stop

Oh ishq asar kare dinna dinna

Dil ka hashar kare dinna dinna
Ek nazar kare dinna dinna
Lakh dakaatiyaan
Ho ishq asar kare dinna dinna
Dil ka hashar kare dinna dinna
Ek nazar kare dinna dinna
Lakh dakaatiyaan

Maan pulled her to himself and lifted her up in the air and swirled her around. She spread out her arms enjoying the dance in his embrace.


Chori chori seenay se saansein
Chori chori le gayi chura ke
Chori chori khwaabon me aake
She got me loosin my mind

Maan slid his fingers over her bare arms sending a shiver down her spine and then pulling her back to his embace.

Chori chori aankhon me aake
Chori chori khwaabon me jaake
Chori chori neendhe chura ke
She got me loosin my mind


Geet moved a few steps back when all the boys surrounded her. she moved her hips sexily, winking at Maan…ohh boy…he was totally floored. He fell backwards holding his heart while Dan and Rahul supported him. He laughed at his own steps.


Look out, look out the siren's blaring
She drop it down I can't stop staring
O o ..

Teri nazar toh hai farebi

Tera hua jaan-e-qaidi
O o ..

Just might be a criminal


Geet danced with Rahul, changing partners with the rhythm. Everyone wanted to dance with the birthday girl it seems. She turned around and get to Dan.

Just might be a criminal
She is burning like a fever
And I'm a believer
Nasha hai nazakate
Inn aankhon ke chodo
Adaa mein karodo
Chhupi hai sharaaratein
Its criminal baby booty going pop pop pop
Its criminal baby party won't stop stop stop


She was never this happy…wow till last year she was alone in all her birthdays but Maan…he just filled her life with so much color, vibrancy and life….she dare not think a life without him.

Dan held her hand and twirled her again moving with the music. She looked divine. With a change in music, Maan simply slipped his fingers into hers and pulled her to him. Dan stood there…suddenly feeling that unknown pain brewing up inside.


Its criminal that shorty driving me crazy
Sexy like the girl should be
Spending all my money on her

Oh ishq asar kare dinna dinna

Dil ka hashar kare dinna dinna
Ek nazar kare dinna dinna
Lakh dakaatiyaan
Oh ishq asar kare dinna dinna
Dil ka hashar kare dinna dinna
Ek nazar kare dinna dinna
Lakh dakaatiyaan

Its criminal….

Preeto joined then and rest all had super fun. Dan slowly moved back…away from people. His eyes fell on geet. She was so happy in Maan's arms. He knew what he was feeling was not right…but he couldn't even deny the pain he felt. Maan trailed a line of kissed along her neck….she giggled feeling ticklish.

He drew back…not able to take that sight….stood at a corner, trying to fight with his own self.

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Edited by kawaii_geet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
loved the update...
hayye maan ka surprise toh is superb...
dan feeling jealous...
hmmm awesome work...
Edited by rupzloveu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
update dan falling more for geet maan come to geet and teasing her geet angry birthday celebration dan feeling pain to see geet with maan



Edited by tamanna1391 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Congo for the new thread...now give us a bumper update😳😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
waiting Ashy...
--Edit--
Congratulations Ashy for the thread first...
This is the first tym I am commenting and to be frank, FT is very popular in our class and mostly everyone reads it!!😳
Superb update!i cudn't ignore the pain wat I felt for Dan..I hope he gets a girl very soon..
Love you Dan😳muah^^^
Love,
Sally⭐️
Edited by SallyAmanda - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats on the new thread...

dan is in love with her...n now it seems he has understood it...

but she is happy with her maan...what will happen when she will discover MK...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
Gosh i am Getting afraid of dan
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
awesome update..
loved it...
aww maan is so caring...
loved his surprise..
ha yaar sweetu's b'day is there...
continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
Im ready to adopt 90 degree
Mail kardena pic hahahahaha
Dan ke liye find a gal soon
I dnt want kawaab me haadi plzzz
Loved Maan's surprise
Haaye n their moments were fab

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