An Unknown Relation-MG SS - Page 8

Created

Last reply

Replies

126

Views

18k

Users

58

Likes

456

Frequent Posters

neha5058 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Congrats for the new SS

Interesting concept
Geet as tomboy
Update soon
Thnx for pm



thanks a lot dear...
neha5058 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Gcs-girl

Congrast on new ss

Awesome concept

loved it

waiting for update

continue soon

thankx for pm


😊




thanks a lot dear...
neha5058 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: crazydream

Nice prologue


Waiting for part 1
Continue soon.



thanks a lot dear...
neha5058 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#74




part-1



5th April , 2008

A girl is screaming loudly BACHAO BACHAO…!! While trying to save her life from the water because she doesn't know swimming… she is perfect in everything but she doesn't know how to swim… she again screamed very loudly BACHAO BACHAO…!! , again trying to swim but doesn't know the abcd of basics of swimming… then a man jumped in water without thinking about his life and swim in her direction from where the voice is coming… sometimes the voice came very loudly and sometimes it became very low that he couldn't be able to hear that… the man was came there for see the land which he is going to buy it for his next project… the land is outside the delhi where the little jungle is held in U.P. he was just visiting the land when he heard a girl's voice BACHAO BACHAO…!! He followed the voice and reached near the river… he immediately loosened his tie and removed his waist coat and jumped in the river without thinking himself just jumped in for saving her life… he is swimming and about to reach near the girl but she is no where to be seen.. may be she drown in the river but the a meek voice fell in his ear again and he took a deep breath & he went inside the water in the search of the girl… finally he found her but she is in half faint state… she is breathing heavily, panting… not able to catch the breath.. he scooped her in his arms and swim and reached at the bank of the river.. though the river is not that deep but when a person doesn't know how to swim , that person can drown in the swimming pool too and here she is drowning in the river…

He lay her down on the land and patted her cheeks but she is not responding… he pressed her stomach a little so that the water went inside her body will came out and it works a little but still she is not able to catch the breath… he doesn't know what to do… there is no other option left for him…. He thought for a moment then he took a deep breath and hold her face & opened her lips a little and captured her petal like lips in his rough lips.. he is giving his breath in her mouth so that she will be able to breath… he doesn't know what he is doing is right or wrong? He knows only that the girl is needed air and he is giving it only nothing much more… only he is helping her.. he doesn't know when she regained her consciousness what she will think about him .. without thinking himself he helped her.. he is kissing her and giving his breath in her mouth… her lungs started working and a slight moment in her fingers….

Finally she got the air and started breathing… she coughed when his lips on hers.. he immediately backed off and patted her cheeks… she blinked her eyes couple of times trying to figure out who is near her? She coughed more and dazedly opened her eyes and saw a man who has a concern in his eyes for her… he is worried for her…he again patted her cheeks couple of times and asked to her are you ok? She nodded in yes..!! he backed off and stood on his feet… while she sat there & breathing heavily… after some minutes she became normal and stood… he gave his hand to her but she refused and stood by herself.. he doesn't mind at all.. after all he is totally a stranger for her but her life is saved by a stranger… he again asked are you ok now? She didn't uttered any word and nodded then she meekly said THANKS..!! to him… he said it's okay.. and passed a smile to her which doesn't matter for her…

Actually she is a stone hearted girl.. who has feelings for her parents only who gave her a new life.. there is no space in her life for any other person… her parents are her world… her day starts with her parents and ended with them… he felt what type a girl she is…? She said only thanks… not even a smile… at-least she can say thanks with a smile and girls are dying for his smile… and he smiled at her but here she is not looking at him…. He checked her top to bottom… a very slim short girl just reaching to his shoulders… very fair just like a milk, her age is around 17-18 he thought in his mind… wearing loose pants with loose shirt…with a tie and a coat over the uniform… boys types shoes in her feet… hairs are tied in plats…looks like she was coming from the school… her whole body drenched in water.. she is in all wet form… looking very young age like she is in schools… no jewelry, no make up.. nothing… so simple , so nave in looks but what he saw in her eyes.. she is blank… not even a fear in her eyes… she was screaming like bachao bachao that time but now she is like nothing happened with her… agar koi aur ladki hoti to pata nahi karti…. Aur yeh… he shook his head…

Actually he hate those girls, those persons who doesn't know how to help theirself… jo apni help nahi kar sakte wo dusro ki help kya karenge… and here this girl is one from them.. he hated this… he told her that itni badi ho gayi ho aur tumhe swimming bhi nahi aati….? He asked to her.. she looked at him who the hell he is for asking to her she knows swimming or not? She irritated from those peoples who asked questions from her… aap kaun hote hai yeh puchhne wale ki mujhe swimming aati hai ya nahi….? He looked at her in amusement… ek to jaan bachao aur upar se taane suno…!! He thought in his mind…. Agar mai swimming karke tumhe nahi bachata to tum yaha zinda nahi khari hoti…. She looked at him in disbelief…. Ajeeb zabardasti hai… jaan bachayi theek hai par aise ehsaan kyo jata rahe hai… she twisted her nose in anger and replied him…. Swimming seekhne se koi MAAN SINGH KHURANA nahi ban jata… samjhe..!! oops his eyes went bigger in shock…(I wonder ye bich me maan singh khurana kaha se aa gaya… me scratching my head ..)

Kya? Kya kaha isne..swimming seekhne se koi MAAN SINGH KHURANA nahi ban jata..!! he couldn't believe what she said to him…ye ladki samjhti kya hai apne aapko… baat to aise kar rahi hai jaise MAAN SINGH KHURANA ke sath rehti ho…. she doesn't know with whom she is talking… ? she is not interested in looking at him at all.. only she saw his face.. she is not those types of girls who checked man from top to bottom and here this girl she doesn't saw fully her life savior… who save her life… actually she heard only about MAAN SINGH KHURANA… she didn't saw his face.. how he looks? How he talks? She heard about him in school form the teachers like he built his company in a very young age…he has a software company… teachers gave his examples to the students… no student knew how he looks? Actually she was in PCM stream and an additional subject she has too and that is computers… she is great in her studies… topped every year and this was her last year in school.. today was her last exam of boards…

she is in 12th now and now has to wait for the result of board exams… she is great in all the languages which are used in computers and in making software… she wants to be like MAAN SINGH KHURANA… so that she is doing very hard work and wants to earn lots of money for her parents… she has not any urge to meet MAAN SINGH KHURANA..she doesn't want to talk to him… she doesn't has any interest in him.. she likes about him only his hard work he did and earned lots of money because she came to know by teachers that he was not so much rich but because of his hard work he built his own company and now his company is one of the top companies in the software world….


precap

don't know...


tell me hows the start?

did you like it or not?

waiting for your response

love neha




Remya_Pillai thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
#75
wow!gud one...
Loved the new face of geet...
She admires maan only b/c of his hardwork...
This s going to b interesting..
neha5058 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

wow!gud one...
Loved the new face of geet...
She admires maan only b/c of his hardwork...
This s going to b interesting..



thanks a lot dear...
really glad that u like this geet...
Tia-AFreeBird thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#77
WW SPRB START
ND LVD HER DIALG Swimming seekhne se koi MAAN SINGH KHURANA nahi ban jata… samjhe..!!😆😆😆
SUPRBBB
CONT SOONN

nahtani88 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#78
Lovely
Continue Soon
Thanks For The PM
singh24 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#79
WOW!!! very interesting part dear...
Love it...
Kya Meeting hei...
kamiya thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#80
update

loved geet's character here


thnx for the pm dear

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".