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Maaneet4eve thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: backy


oh i don't like this SHARIF maan😆

i like my devil, and m waiting eagerly!!!

BUT BUT BUT that does not mean i didn't liked the update!!!

both parts were awesome!!!!

nicely done!!!

absolutely loved the twist!!!!

BUT where is my devil??????


i so wish it was MB FF😉 the story is so much Similer, did the writer of MB read ur FF or what😆


oh and i have this crazy sugestion , feel free to ignore 😆 how about RK(which will maan be playing) instead of MK in the movie and madhubala instead of madame (wich is geet goign to play) it will be really interesting. i know u want to write ur own story, but i think it will be really interesting. just a thought!!!!


thanks

esha


There is a special reason for this name... please stay tuned to know it!!!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: idunno

dont worry we will wait but next time u give us double update to compensate us for our waiting promise?

Pakka promise for that!!!
I am really sorry for not updating for so long... actually my school opened and I am damn busy right now... but will possibly update tomorrow... and Saturday or Sunday double updates... pakka!!!!
Sorry for making you all wait for so long!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
stilll waitinggg... for u too update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hiii I jus came across your FF and read all the 20 chapters in one go lool
You're an incredible writer I must say 😉
Hats off to you 👏
Pleaseee add me in your pm list - I really love your way of writing
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Shai..

Hiii I jus came across your FF and read all the 20 chapters in one go lool
You're an incredible writer I must say 😉
Hats off to you 👏
Pleaseee add me in your pm list - I really love your way of writing



same here
😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
I am updating in 5 minutes!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

(BANNER CREDIT GOES TO @geetsweet)



Hi Guys!!! I am back!!! I am very sorry for keeping you all waiting fro so long... believe me I never meant to do it but I really couldn't help it!!! Firstly the electricity went off the day I wanted to update and after that I did not get any time... I am very sorry... moreover there are tons of pms in my inbox which I am unable to read... but I would like to tell all the writers who read my FF that please continue sending me your work... i will definitely read them... but I need some time for that!!!
Finally back to the update I tried to make it as long as possible but if i failed please forgive me!!! I will try to update tomorrow as well!!!

P.S: I HAVE WRITTEN A MADHUBALA OS. IF YOU ARE INTERESTED PLEASE READ IT.


LOVE OR LUST???
CHAPTER 21


Later when Maan woke up in the morning, he saw that Geet was missing from his side. Slowly all the events of last night came flashing into his minds like the reel of a slowl motion movie. He woek up with a jolt after realising what had happened between him and Geet last night.
" Oh shit!!! No!!!," he cried out in dismay.
He got up from the bed and wore his jeans back on and looked at the bed that was an absolute mess- morer proof of what had happened between him and Geet.
But what caught his attention the most were the stains of blood on the bed.
He closed his eyes in guilt. Geet had been telling him the truth. She was a virgin!!! The last time she had told hin so, he had not really believed her or taken her seriously enough. After all in the kind of lifestyle and culture he had grown up in beautiful women like Geet were hardly even a virgin.
But he could see the proof of her innocence right infront of his eyes!!! The innocence he had snatched away so brutally last night when he lost his control!!! He had prided himself for his self control... but where had that self control gone when he had needed it the most???
Maybe it was not his fault... geet had initiated the move from her side but that did not stop the guilt from consuming him inside-out!!! After all it was only Geet who was not in her senses but he was!!! He should have known that what she did not have any difficulty in doing while she was senseless, the same thing would bring shame to her dignity when she woke up. But it seemed that all his senses deserted him when the time came to deal woth Geet!!! With Geet, it seemed that all his masculine instincts have taken over his senses and he was working only on the basis of his instinct!!!
Geet!!! Whare was Geet??? She was not in the bedroom and most definitely not in the bathroom!!! So where was she???
He searched for geet all throughout his house but she was never to be seen anywhre inside the mansion.
Running back to his bedroom, he wore his shirt back on in a hurry and franctically went down to his garage. Taking his car, he almost drove like a maniac towards her house.
But as luck would have it, he was struck in peak hour Mumbai traffic. No amount of his honking the horn could make these snail-paced cars move forward faster.
Finally after much hassel, he finally reached her place. He knocked on the door but did not get any answers. He rang the door-bell franctically but to no avail!!!
Finally he had to resort to pushing the door with all his might to open it. To his surpirse, it opened quite easily- it was already unlocked.
He searched each and every room throughly and franctically for her but did not find her anywhere.
Lastly only her bedroom was left. The sight that met his eyes turned his blood to ice. Things were strewn everywhere!!! But ther was still no sign of Geet!!!
All sorts of unwanted thoughts came into his mind but he fought hard to push them all away lest he broke down and started crying.
He looked all around the place in horror. The sound of running water could be heard from the connecting bathroom. He, without even bothering to knock dashed into the bathroom.
Geet was standing under the running shower with her clothes on. Her eyes were reda nd swollen and it was obvious that she had been crying her eyes out.
She turned to face him like a zombie- her eyes expressionless.
" Geet," Maan calld out urgently. " Geet, I am sorry. I did not know that the drink was spiked. I swear I-"
But he did not get any chance to complete his words. Geet fell down lifeless on the floor.
" Geet," Maan called out franctically, picking her up in his arms and closing off the top of the shower.
He was shivering from the cold, her face cold and lifeless and her lips were quivering.
Maan could almost cry out at the helplessness he felt in the situation.
He quickly called up a lady doctor. " Dr. Mehta, please come on this address. It is urgent." He rattled off the address and told the doctor what had happened, excluding the reason for it happening.
The doctor said clamly while hurrying to reach the place Maan dictated," Mr. Khurana, at this moment she really needs to be out of the shivering fit and the best way to do that is to give her the heat of a human body but before that you need to get her out of her wet clothes."
" But Doctor, how can I do that?? And I cannot be physical with her."
" Mr. Khurana, at this moment it is necessary for her to ge warm and this is the only way to do it... Make her wear something that is warm and you just need to give her the heat of your body... for that you need not be physical with her. Just keep her close to your body. She will definitely respond to it. Otherwise it is possible that she may slip into coma."
" No. No that cannot happen. Doctor I will do everything in my power but you need to reach the house as soon as possible."
" Relax Mr. Khurana, I am on my way."
As soon as Maan kept the phone, he looked at Geet. She was still shivering from the cold and her lips were turning blue. Seeing her, made him realise anew that he was the one who was responsible for her pathetic condition, thereby making himself feel more guilty.
He walked up to her closet and took out a proper dress for her. Picking her up into his arms without disturbing her, he made her wear the clothes. he did not even dare look like below her face in his shame!!!
After dressing her up properly, he shrugged off his shirt and moved beside her to lie to the bed, pulling the spread on top of them and talking her into his protective embrace. He felt so ashamed of himself. he had never meant to take advantage of her. He was really trying to change but it seemed that fate had some really cruel game planned for him.
The doctor came upstairs on her own since the front door was already unlocked. She walked insie the room and said," Mr. Khurana you can get up now."
Maan had not yet realised that the doctor had already arrived but her workd broke his trance and he got up at once.
The doctor looked at him. But for the first time Maan felt uncomfortable moving shirtless infront of a woman. He quickly donned on his shirt while the doctor checked Geet.
" Mr. Khurana, you can relax now. She is fine. She hada had a massive shock due to soem reasons and has a slight temperature but otherwise she is quite alight. I understand that she will regain conciousness soon. I have given her the medicines and she ought to open her eyes soon."
" Thank you doctor," Maan said and shook her hand before escorting her otu of the house and locking the door.
Then he went upstairs to her room quickly. geet was still unconcious. He quckly wnet inside the bathroom to get soem cold water and a piece of cloth.
Slowly he tried to reduce the temperature by wetting the cloth and putting it on her forehead.
After sometime geet gained conciousness. As soon as she opened her eyes and saw Maan she pushed him away and got up only to fall back onto the bed due to her weakness.
" Careful," Maan warned, trying to steady her.
Geet swatted his hand away and said angrily yet reeling from weakness," Don't you dare!!! Don't you dare touch me, Mr. Maan Singh Khurana!!! You are the reason for all the mess in my life!!! I have been such a fool!!! I thought that you had changed. I thought that you consider me to be your friend, but I was so wrong. I should have realised that people like you never change, so we should never hope for the impossible. I was just a sexual plaything to you and the movie offer was just a bribe for me to get what you really wanted and desired. But now you have got what you had wanted and the blindfold which you had so effectivelt placed around my eyes has now lifted so I don't see any reason to do any movie with you. Infact after what you have done to me last night, I would die but I would never do any movie with you!!! I never want to see your face again in my entire life!!! Just get out of my house and my life as well!!!"
As soon as he heard about Geet not wanting to do te film with hima dn going away from his life, he was absolutely enraged. How can she even think that he will let her go??? And what did she say??? A sexual plaything for him, was she???Well, if she thought of him like that then so be it!!! He was not going to change himself for any girl!!! Not even Geet whom he had found to be very innocent!!!
So inspite of telling himself to be calm all this while, he burst out," Since you already thgink so lowly of me, let me inform you that i have already made arrangements for you to stay near me for atleast two to three years!!! You ahve signed a contract that clearly stated that even if you are doing movies with any other producers you will have to do three movies with us. And I have already paid you your advance so it is absolutely futile for you to shout you lungs out and say that you do not want to do any movies with me for you will have to work with me. I had wanted to do onlty one film with you and let you do the other two with other actors but since you have already stated that you do not want to have to do anything with me I will show you that everything in this industry goes according to my choices. And therefore ll the three movies that you will be doing with my production house will be with me. Lets see how far you can escape and for how long..."
" And since you have already stated that I thought of you as my sexual plaything, I thought that you need to know that I really enjoyed the last night and would love to have another explosive night with you. But this tiem it won't be me who will be desperate to have sex but you... Remember that!!!"
Saying this he, stormed out of the house leaving behind a very angry, humiliated an tearful Geet.
After he left Geet thought back into the one month in which maan had entered her life and turned it totally upside down!!!
He had said that he was given her only a month to decide whether she wants to sleep with him on her own or if he had to force her to do it and he did just the same!!! People said exactly the correct thing about him. What he said he will do it no matter how morally wrong it actually is!!!
She cried thinking of the fact that she had lost the only thing that was precious to her- her virginity- to a man who will never value her worth. She will always reamin one of the many girls with whom he had been intimate with!!!
Crying and weak with fatigue, Geet forced herself to go top the front door and lock it before coming back and lying on the bed, wanting the day to pass quickly so that she can get far far away from this horrible nightmare that her life had become!!!



Guys this is it!!!! Todays update is here and To all the people who were giving me gaalis for not updating I hope you like it!!!😆
I have brought back the Devil Maan whom you all like or perhaps love... Let's see what he does in the future!!!


LOVE SULOGNA😊
Edited by Maaneet4eve - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
maan should have tried explaining to geet instead of shouting
she has lost her most precious possession to someone whom she had just started respecting
this time it is maans fault
whatever it be he knew taht geet was not in her senses and should have controlled himself from giving into the temptations
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks a lot for the update...

I loved it... MSK does feel bad for losing his self control... and truly cares for her...

But yet again everything goes wrong... Ab he is back in his arrogant and devilish form...

Cant wait for the next... after so long you gave us a short update 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh no,I feel so bad for Geet,poor thingand Maan also ended up saying all sorts of things in his anger.It was a very well written update.Looking forward to the next chp😊

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