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? You Are My Soul ?
Part I (OS)


Three guys seems very worried,having blood stains on their shirts, bring an accidental couple to a hospital both were unconcious nd bleed badly. Boy was in bridegroom outfit and girl in bridal wear. She also wear chura, maangtika with heavy golden and diamond jwellery. Three boys shout for doc's help urgently. One seniour doc came dere by chance.

1st boy: doc doc pls help us.

Doc: relax what happened? And who are they? (pointing on that injured couple)

2nd Boy: doc sahab hum collage students hai. Hum party se wapis aa rahe the to highway pe in dono is situation me pade dekha.

3rd Boy: pls doc attend them. They need medical attention right now.

Doc:ok relax i'll check.

Doc check both one by one. He called nurse and ward boys.

Doc:nurse ladke ko chot kam aayi hai so use doc mishra ke pass le jao or ladki ki surgery karni hogi right now as she had a serious medical injuries. Quick do it fast. Send her to OT. And you guys stay there i call police so we need yor help.

1st Boy:dont worry doc we coperate with police.

Doc: good. Waise ye dono kon hai kuchh pata chala aap logo ko?

3rd Boy: no sir inke pass se aisa kuchh nai mila jisse inke bare me kuchh pata chal pata.

Doc:ok. Well guys u have done very good job. Now i hav to leave.

Doc went to change as he has to operate right now on a girl. Dr Mishra handle the boy's injuries. But is in not in danger. He had injuries on his head and some visible injuries on his upper chest. Doc clesan his wounds first and bandaged on his wounds.

In OT Doc Kapoor start his treatment. She bleeds badly. Her left leg damaged badly and had many injuries on her body all over. Dr kapoor with his two juniors start operating on her. She cant even to take a breath properly. Doc put oxygen mask.

Meanwhile boy got his concious. He visualise some truck hit his car and he and new beautifull bride fallen from the car... as he regain his complete standibility he shouts in fear...

Maan: Geeettt...

Nurse call the dr. Mishra,inform him that his patient got his concious. Dr. Mishra rush to chek him. When he entered in his ward,boy wriggle and struggle with the machines attached to monitior his condition. Dr Mishra and nurse rush to stop him but he is totally out of control. dont want to listen to any one. He just want to see his wife. Doc call wardboys. With ward boys,those three boys also came inside and help Doc to control him. But he wants to go. With very hard struggle they all succseded to bring back him on his bed.as he is weak due to blood loss.

Maan:chod do mujhe meri wife k paas jana hai.mujhe meri Geet k pass jana hai. Leave me now.

Doc: relax mr relax, she is in OT. DR. Kapoor uski surgery kar rahe hai?

Listening to this he tenced more.

Maan:OT me? Kyu kya hua hai use.chhodo mujhe. I want to see her.

1st Boy: plss yaar shant ho jao,apki wife ka treatment chal raha hai. ( Maan stared him in amuzment) aap mujhe nahi jante. Mera naam prashant hai or ye haai mere do dost Sameer and Rahul. Hum teeno hi apko or apki wife ko yaha hospital laye hai. Aapko chot kam aayi thi lekin aapki wife ko kafi chote aayi thi islie unhe operate karna pada.

Doc:dont worry. Is hospital k bets surgen Mr. Kapoor unhe handle kar rahe hai. She will b alrite soon. By the way apka naam kuchh pata wagerah. Taki apki family ko inform kiya ja sake?

Maan: i m Maan. Maan Singh Khurana. And she is my wife Geet Singh Khurana.

All person in room shocke listining his name and identity.

Rahul:aap Msk hai the Famous business tycoon of Delhi? Lekin maine to sunaa tha aaj apki marriage hai.oh now we got it that y u both are in wedding dress. But sir ye kaise?

Meanwhile police too came to take his statement.

Insp: mr. Khurana aap? Ye accident kaise hua? Or wo teeno kaha hai jo apko yaha laaye hai?

Doc showed them to insp.

Maan:Insp. Actually hum dono ape farmhouse ja rahe the raste me ek truch zig zag driving kar raha tha or usni ne meri car ko hit kiya? Ye teeno by chance waha se guzar rahe the. Ye hi hume yaha lay hai...

Insp:well done boys.aap logo ne achha kaam kiya. Waise apne kisi ko dekha waha? I mean any truck or something?

Sameer:no sir jab tak hum waha pahunche truck wala bhag chuka tha.

Maan:insp i want him. Usne meri Geet ko chot pahunchai hai. He will pay for that?

Insp:dont worry sir bhag karjayega kaha. Aap rest kijiye main chalta hu. Boys come with me aap logo ka kuchh formalities complete karne k liye polise station chala hai.

Insp. and boys wnt from there. Doc gave him injection to make him sleep...as he getting very impatient to see his love Geet...

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guys my first os on if...hope u all like it...plzzz do comment n inspire me by ur valuable likes n comments...lv u all...hp u all like it...
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Richu buddy req bej yaar mujhe
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awesome update
maan is fine but geet not
hope geet to soon recover it
do continue soon
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Thank you guys you like it :)
love reading your comments:)
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guys giving d nxt part pf my os but getting very less likes n comments...plzzz encourage me by liking my os so dat can gv u more interesting os or ff😊
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? YOU ARE MY SOUL ?
PART - II (OS)

Dadima(Savitari devi) came to hospital wid Adi. Insp. informd hr abot dere acci. She is so worried fr hr chidrn. She straight went to Maan's ward. Maan too got hs concious back. Dadima rush to hm and hugged hr only grandson. Hr eyes trnd wet seeing hm like dat. She caressed hs cheek annd kissed on hs frhead.

Dadima:Maan beta shukar hai aap thek hai,bt where is Geet beta?

Maan wiped hr tears:dadima Geet ko bahut chot aai hai wo OT mme hai or ye log mujhe uske pas jane b nai de rahe hai.

Adi:dont worry sir,i'll check whats going on.

Adi went to meet hs doc and discuss abot hs dischrge. Doc came and check him again. He allowed him to move frm hs room,but warm hm dont stressed hmself. Maan and dadi gettng vry impatient to c Geet. Aftr d wait of long 12 hours Dr. Kapoor shifts hr to I.C.U. Maan,dadi and Adi went to doc's cabin.

Maan:doc howz my Geet now? I wanna c hr pls.

Dadi:pls doc say smthng howz she now?

Doc:mr. Khurana calm down first. Kyunki ab jo main aap logo se kehne ja raha hu,use jhelene k liye apko himmat ki zarurat padegi.

All scared more.

Maan:pls doc make it clearly.why u talk like dis. What happend to my Geet?

Doc looks vry serious:look,we saved hr life but...
He feels hesitation to tell dem the bad news about hr,as dey all look him with great hope.

Maan(worridly):but kya doc?

Doc:Mr. Khurana is acci me truck apki wife k left leg k upar se nikla,due to whch all bones of her leg damaged badly. She lost her left leg below knee forever.

All stunned listin to dis heartbreaking news. Maan feel somone pierced a sharp arrow to hm. Dadima strt sobbing. Maan's soul shudders badly. Tear drop rolled on his cheeks.

Dadima:pls doc dont said like dis. She is only 23,see nthng in life. Pls do smthinh no cares how much spend but cure her at any cost. Whatever u required fr hr treatment tell us we brought to u but pls cure hr.

Doc:pls aap los shant ho jaiye. Hm Geet ko artificial limb lagaenge. Aftr dat she can able to walk like b4 without anyone's help.

Dadima:artificial limb k alwa or koi rasta nai hai?

Doc:i m sorry.

Maan:can i meet her?

Doc nodded yes. Maan went to her. Geet is laying on a bed. She is crying. Maan sit near her. Geet turned her face to other side.

Maan:Geet naraz ho mujhse?

Geet:Maan pls leave me alone.

Maan:Maan apni misti ko chhodk kaha ja skta hai.ha Geet?

Geet:Maan bhul jaiye ki apne kabi kisi Geet ko chaha tha.

Maan:dil se uski dhadkan ko bhulane k liye keh rai ho.

Geet(sobbing):Maan apne jis Geet ko chaha tha wo koi or thi aaj apke samne jo Geet hai wo ab apke layak nahi hai. I dont deserve u..

Maan placed a palm on hr face and trned hr to him. He pulled hr up and cupped her face. He wiped her tears with his thumb.

Maan:Geet ye hum dono ki zindagi hai tumne akele kaise decide kar liya ki meri Mishti mere layak hai ya nahi. Geet to Maan ki rooh hai,jiske bina wo sirf ek bejan shareer hai.

Geet:kya fayda aisi roo ka jo apke sath chal b nai skti. Ek bhoj ko kab tak dhote rahoge.

Maan:ye to or b achha hai. Now i can hold u in my arms forever.

Geet:lekin Maan...

B4 she completes Maan slammed his lips on hers and intrupts her sentence. She feels his intence and Unconditional love for her. He softly kissed on her lips. She stop crying. Maan broke the lip lock and embrassed her in hs arms. In cage of hs arms she feels very good and safe. Maan trying to lightened hr mood nd dwraw hr attention to other side. He start teasing her.

Maan:geet waise ek baat hai.ab jb main dusri ladkio k sath flert karunga to tum typical wifes ki tarah belan leke mere pichhe nahi bhaogi. Sare mard jalenge mujhse kahenge dekho kitna lucky hai jo use Geet jaisi biwi mili hai.

Geet got angry and slapped on hs chest.

Geet:Mr. MSK aisa sochna b mat or i'll kill u.

Maan:are baap re meri Mishti to badi khatrnak hai.(both smiled) geet meri doc se baat ho gai hai. They will placed an artificial limb by operation.and aftr dat u can walk like before. Trust me jaan sab theek ho jayega.

Geet huggd hm tightly.

Geet:Maan aap pe to mujhe mere rabb se b zada bharosa hai.aap k hote hue mujhe kisi baat ki fikar nai hai.

Maan kissed on hr forhead. Meanwhile Dadi, Adi and doc came there.. Maan loosen the hug. Dadi sit near her and hugged her,as she needs love and affection.

Dadi:meri bachhi theek hai na?

Geet nodded yes and Dadima kissed her and caressed her.

Maan:doc aap Geet ki surgery kb tak kar sakte hai?

Doc:right now she is very weak due to this accident. We have to wait till she recovers.

Dadi:dont worry beta aap bilkul theek ho jayengi.

Geet's wounds star recovering. 15 days passed. Maan cares for her alot, treat her like a baby. She recvering quickly. Today is the day of her surgery. Geet hold his hand b4 going to OT.

Geet: Maan..

Maan kissed her: daro mat Geet main hu na tumhare paas. Sab theek ho jayega. U will b fine very soon...

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lovely...i like it alot...


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? YOU ARE MY SOUL ?
PART - 3 (OS)
last part...

Doc take Geet for surgery. Maan and Dadi waiting for her outside d OT. Dadima praying for her. After 4ew hours,doc ca:e out and shifted her to a normal ward.

Maan(curiously):how is she doc?

Doc:dont worry Mr. Khurana,she is alrite.operation kamyab raha.

Maan(a smile of hope came on his face):u mean?

Doc:yes now she can walk lyk before.but it take some time.so b careful with her. She need some time to adjust with her artificial limb.

Maan:dont worry doc. I'll care of her all needs. Can i meet her?

Doc:ya sure.

He ran to her.

Dadi:thank u so much doc.

Doc:no need to say thanx mrs. Khurana. Its our duty.

Maan enetrs in her ward and sit besides her. Geet hold his hand. Maan bend on her and kissed her.

Geet:Maan hum ghar kab jayenge?

Maan:bas kuchh dinn fir hum apne ghar jayenge.

Both smiled. Aftr 1 week Geet get discharged frm hospital. Maan take her home. He scooped her in his arms. Dadi welcomed with all rituals of grehparvesh. Maan take her to dere rum and made hr laid on a bed comfortably.

Maan:jaan kal se hum tumhe chalne ki practise karwaunga.

She nodded yes. Maan embrassed her lovengly. From next day as he said he daily help her in walking with an artifical limb. Its very painful for her. But she never give up as Maan bcom her strenght and boost her all the time. His Love care and affection and morovr his faith strenghtend her. Slowly 2 she bcom use to it. Now she can able to walk comfortably without any one's help. 6 month passed in all dis... Today she is waiting for him,as he is coming frm Business tour aftr 25 days. His flights lands at 11pm. He ie vry eager to see her as he too missed his love alot. Since d dy of their marriage they only faced sepration and problems. But today is d day of their love. Now no prob apart dem. When Maan enters in his room Geet standing near window in his wait. Dim lite of moon increase d glow of hr angelic face and wind play with her hairs. Maan went closer to her. He snaked his arm around hr waist nd pulled hr to hm. Hr back tagged to hm.sensation ran through her spine. He bend on hr neck.

Maan:i miss u jaan soo much.

He made a trail of wet kisses on her neckline. Geet closed hr eyes and turned to him.

Geet:i miss u too Maan.

Maan:Geet i wanna feel u.

Geet kissed on hs chect exposing frm hs shrt: me too.

Maan's hand snaked under her top. She feels goosebumps with his touch. Her skin was on fire beneth his cold fingers. He kissed on her face evrywhere,on her forhead,on hr cheeks,hr eyes. She too kissed him. Geet gasped wen his hand under her top unhooked her corset. He bend on her lips and start sucking it passionately. She too moved him closer to her. Geet start unbuttoning his shirt. Maan scooped her nd maid her laid on bed. He removed her top and Geet dai the same wid hs shirt. First Geet came over Maan. She kissed on his chest and face. Geet bite d sensetive flesh of hs earlobes and whispered,"i love u maan". That was enough for maan to charge. He rolled her down but vry carefully,tring not to hurt hr in nyway.Maan made Geet free of her all clothes.she blused. Maan kissed hr all over. He didnt let go any part untouched. He get rid off his all clothes too and start playing wid hr sensitive parts. She cant handle his sweet torture."maan pls i want u rite now",she pleaded. Geet screamed in pain as well as in pleasure,moaning his name,as Maan entered in her. She digged her nails in Maan's flesh on his back as he made hs way. Geeet had tears in her eyes,tears of happiness.finally dey took their relationship to a new level. Geeet felt complete today.maan kissed her to soath hr pain.he locked her hands with hm.. Maan bend over hr and lick on her lower lip and suck both one by one. Geet to respond wid d same hunger matched him. She stroked his hairs and pulled him to deepen d smooch. He filled her with his love again and agian. But now he knew dat she is tired,so he removed frm her. He loosen hs grip over her,and laid straight beside her. Both panting. Maan coverd both under soft duvet. He pulled her in his arms and rubbed hr arm softly to made her relax. She hugged him.

Geet:i love u maan.
Maan:i love u too jaan.

He kisssed on hr frhead.she slept in hs arms.he too felt sleepy.both slept in each others arms calmly...
Today they found their new world of love. And bound of their love grew stronger as time passes...

Their world of love felt wid extreame happiness wen after tow years Geet gave birth to a sweet angel named PALAK.

Maan took his little angel in his arms and kissed both his daughter and his love Geet:thank u soo much love for giving me such a precious gift.

Geet hugeed Maan.

Maaneet(to each other):i love u...

Both kissed thier cute angel...

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Amazing OS dear loved it

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