~FLAVOUR OF LOVE~ MG FF IMP NOTE ON PG-153 - Page 22

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Posted: 13 years ago

~FLAVOUR OF LOVE~

PART-2

Then cursing herself to have wrote that diary some time back in the flow of her dreadful emotions...she didn't knew how will she face ridtzy questions now...then thinking..."kya jarurat thi iss diary ko saath le jane ki...ab dekho kya ho gaya...har baar ridtzy se chupaya hai tune iss diary ko...creating suspicion in her mind...now how will you face her"

her trance was broken when ridzy stopped the car right in infront of entrance with a sudden jerk...with which both geet and ridzy fell slightly in the front...ridzy came out...dragging geet with her...entering the main hall...she lead geet upstairs to her room...

entering her bedroom...ridzy pushed geet in...closing the door behind...geet gulped her saliva...fearing the outcome of all this...she was dumbfonded as she felt the diary thrown her way...she picked it up quietly...looking down...ridzy stood their folding her hands, waiting for an explanation...geet kept fidgeting with her dupatta...thinking what to say now...

ridzy got annoyed and irritated with her silence...she moved towards her angrily...in response geet hugged that diary close to her heart...moving back...ridzy grabbed her by shoulders and jerked her...
"wats wrong with you wont u tel me anything"....she screamed...
"kaun tha woh geet...why are you so much in pain"
"aisa bhi kya hai geet, jo tumne mujhase sab kuch chupaya"
she said it feeling choked...then left her and turned facing her back towards her...
"or may be i am not that trust worthy enough"
"hai na geet...issiliye tumne mujhase chupaya na"
"u dont trust me thats the thing"...ridzy choked with tears...letting it to sway away...
geet broke down into tears...she ran towards ridzy...letting the diary fall on the floor...she hugged her tight from back...sobbing...
"aisa nahi hai...please i am sorry ridzy"...she said in her hiccups
"i am sorry...i loved him alot...mai kaise batati...when i dont even know if he loves me or not..."
ridzy turned abruptly...shocked with the revealation...she cupped her face in her palms...wiping her tears away...
"i realised my love for him...when he was gone"
she could not utter next few words, as the lump formed in her throat choked her...and she started coughing...
ridzy panicked and ran towards the bed side table to get some water for geet to drink...
"shooo geet...bas ho gaya...you sit here...have this water"
she made her have water...but still her tears where not subsiding...ridzy hugged her...close to her heart...rubbing her back...soothing her pain...
"bas bacha ab bas ho gaya...ab rona ban kar"...she felt guilty for giving her pain...
"i dont even know where he is now...but still cant stop myself from loving him"
"i am sorry bacha...meri wajah se you had to go through all this all over again...i am really sorry"...she said wiping her tears...
"woh mera pehala aur aakhiri pyar hai ridzy...why cant i forget him and move on...please tel me na....she jerked ridzy to answer her...each time his final good bye haunts me...his pained face haunts me...mai kya karu..."
ridzy felt helpless with her questions...she looked down with tears brimming from her eyes continously...
"why i feel so choked when i think of him...what is this feeling, this pain which i feel"...ridzy looked at her helplessly...
geet got up abruptly...she picked up that diary...going through its pages hurriedly...she spoke...

Jism paak aankhon mein bhar lu,
saans saans mein shamil kar lu,
is duniya mein jaan gawa,
tujhe us duniya mein hasil kar lu...

she smiled painfully...meaning every word of it...looked determinantly at her friend...he is right here...then pointing at her heart...residing in my soul...
Zindagi gawa kar bhi Jo zindagi mile
har khushi gawa kar bhi Jo ek khushi mile
wo maang lu tere liye...
my every wish and happiness belongs to him...my life belongs to him...
Rooh se rooh ke darmiyaan,
ishq ke hain hazaaron jahan
ya khuda ya khuda mujhko dede agar ek jahan
to maang lu tere liye
log kehte hai bhagwan ne hume maut ke baad 7 zindagiya di hai...lekin meri toh har zindagi unhi ke hi naam hai...she smiled...
So sitam utha kar bhi Jo ek khushi mile
so jannate gawa kar bhi Jo ek jameen mile
wo maang lu tere liye...
unke liye duniya ki har khushi mai haste haste luta dungi...chahe fir woh jannat hi kyu na ho...
Tere sajde mein sir hai jhuka,
tu ibaadat hai tu hi duaa
maut ke baad bhi Jo mile bandagi ka sila,
wo maang lu tere liye
unka har lafz mere liye haath ki lakeer hoga...mere hisse ki har khushi sirf unhi ke liye hogi...

Jism ja luta kar bhi Jo ek haasi mile
dil agar jala kar bhi Jo roshni mile
wo maang lu tere liye

Zamane ki har jannat sirf unke liye...yeh asmaan yeh zamin sirf unke liye...
"aur tumhare liye"...ridzy asked her
"i lost him and that was end of it...i lost everything"...geet sat down holding that diary close to her heart...ridzy got scared seeing her friend like this...she never imagined her freind her lil sis could be so much in love...she went towards geet and sat down close to her...geet looked at her...
"tum mujhase naraz mat hona..." ridzy wiped new sets of tears which were brimming from her eyes...nodding her head in no...
"kabhi nahi"...she smiled with teary eyes...
"i was scared to tell you...pata nahi tum kya sochati mere baare mai...you would have thought i am mad to love someone with out any commitment or relation..."
ridzy smiled at her and hugged her dearly...
"geet shall we find him" ridzy asked making an exciting face...
"kisse" ...she asked getting confused...
"usse hi jisse tu itna pyar karti hai" ...she said teasingly...trying to change her mood...
"its impossible now...mujhe kuch nahi pata unke baare mai" ...she sighed looking down...making a disappointed face...
"oye kudiye chal cheer up...koi nahi...hum usse dhoond lenge...lekin uske pehale you have to tel me your eternal love story" and she winked at her...
"ridzy tu na nahi sudharegi" geet said hiding her geniune smile...
"koi shak" and she winked again...then getting up...she pulled geet along with her...
"ab chal jaldi bata...me so excited to hear it..."
"lekin lekin lekin ek warning hai...i dont want tears...yara its a love story...thodi koi daily soap hai jisme rone ke alwa kuch na ho...tu na isse sadgi se suna jaise ki tu hai..."
geet playfully smacked her back...to which ridzy kissed her cheek...wiping the traces of tears...and both of them started laughing...
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precap:- their eternal love story😃😃😃😃
hello guys...so me here wid another part of my most cherished story...pls pls respond to this...
since it is a different story...and at first it will be according to geet's point of view...so u will have to wait for maan to enter in it...please bear wid me for this...
please the LIKE button and COMMENT...
and those who want pm...then add me😊
LOVE YA
VARSHA😳
Edited by mahimaneet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

WHOOP WHOOP!! 🥳

Me first. Going to read it now.
😊
Edited by Mino_M - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mino_M

WHOOP WHOOP!! 🥳

Me first. Going to read it now.
😊

u r still awake...ya ya go ahead...i have edited its font...just refresh the page😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mahimaneet

u r still awake...ya ya go ahead...i have edited its font...just refresh the page😊

Its really not that late where i live. The time here atm is 10:41 PM. I am a really late sleeper so its really to early for me. What time is it where you live??
Edited by Mino_M - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice story.
keep it up
😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mino_M

Its really not that late where i live. The time here atm is 10:41 PM. I am a really late sleeper so its really to early for me. What time is it where you live??

ME FROM MUMBAI, INDIA...n its 3.30am in morning...n me still here as tommo is sunday😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: angeesh

nice story.

keep it up
😆

thanks dear😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mahimaneet

ME FROM MUMBAI, INDIA...n its 3.30am in morning...n me still here as tommo is sunday😃

You are up late. 😛 I live in the UK. Yes SUNDAY = LAZY DAY.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mino_M

You are up late. 😛 I live in the UK. Yes SUNDAY = LAZY DAY.

ya just thought to update today itself...as then will concentrate on flames of desire...wil have a lazy sunday tommo...n nice too meet u dear😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mahimaneet

ya just thought to update today itself...as then will concentrate on flames of desire...wil have a lazy sunday tommo...n nice too meet u dear😃

Nice to meet you 2. TBH i have been having so many lazy days as i just sit and watch the IPL. 😆 So what do you do are you are student or do you work??

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