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Posted: 12 years ago
😊 Finally I got some time today ... & read all the parts from 7-14. & now in sync with the recent parts... Quite a read it was... interesting characters & all the twists in here.
Loved loved Geet's frank diary to bits... gives a sneak peek to all the unconcious repressed thoughts of hers as well as some kind of an inside view to the darker shades of all the characters introduced here in a different tadka as such as people seen in the different scenes in the diary...😊
I know I haven't quite figured out every essence of each characterisation here but its keep me quite curious to go-figure-out - all that- is - here... 😆 If you really can.
Each character here is a puzzle of its own kind...😕 I have a feeling of being an agent or a detective here to solve the hidden agenda of the profoundly infamous or to say made famous mysterious five ---- 1. Maan (Maaneistein & as always a hard nut to crack) 2. Naintara ( the seductress with ozzing sophistication) 3. Dev (Draculla & psycho rolled into one) 4. Geet (a scientist in the making who landed up in finding thesis through daily household chores / future romantic & dark desires novel writer) 5. ASR ( The man who keeps appearing out of the blue in different context & confusing me to the core.)
Anyways I hope somewhere down the line of the coming updates I will be able to form my own thesis if not sane then somewhat insanely unlogical...😉😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

😊 Finally I got some time today ... & read all the parts from 7-14. & now in sync with the recent parts... Quite a read it was... interesting characters & all the twists in here.

Loved loved Geet's frank diary to bits... gives a sneak peek to all the unconcious repressed thoughts of hers as well as some kind of an inside view to the darker shades of all the characters introduced here in a different tadka as such as people seen in the different scenes in the diary...😊
I know I haven't quite figured out every essence of each characterisation here but its keep me quite curious to go-figure-out - all that- is - here... 😆 If you really can.
Each character here is a puzzle of its own kind...😕 I have a feeling of being an agent or a detective here to solve the hidden agenda of the profoundly infamous or to say made famous mysterious five ---- 1. Maan (Maaneistein & as always a hard nut to crack) 2. Naintara ( the seductress with ozzing sophistication) 3. Dev (Draculla & psycho rolled into one) 4. Geet (a scientist in the making who landed up in finding thesis through daily household chores / future romantic & dark desires novel writer) 5. ASR ( The man who keeps appearing out of the blue in different context & confusing me to the core.)
Anyways I hope somewhere down the line of the coming updates I will be able to form my own thesis if not sane then somewhat insanely unlogical...😉😆😆



Hi Onir !!
This one cracked me up. 😆
Have I ever told you? I love your comments.
Hehehe...
Yep I am a bit slow in getting to the point. 😃
I have my own way of telling the story.


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Posted: 12 years ago
Looks like our "Devendar chacha" not only barks at the puppy but also feeds it eh..good
Holy *&^*, the geet frank thing had my eyes going wide the first time I read this part. I almost imagined geet dreaming about maan in this entire sequence 😲
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Mayukha
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

😊 Finally I got some time today ... & read all the parts from 7-14. & now in sync with the recent parts... Quite a read it was... interesting characters & all the twists in here.

Loved loved Geet's frank diary to bits... gives a sneak peek to all the unconcious repressed thoughts of hers as well as some kind of an inside view to the darker shades of all the characters introduced here in a different tadka as such as people seen in the different scenes in the diary...😊
I know I haven't quite figured out every essence of each characterisation here but its keep me quite curious to go-figure-out - all that- is - here... 😆 If you really can.
Each character here is a puzzle of its own kind...😕 I have a feeling of being an agent or a detective here to solve the hidden agenda of the profoundly infamous or to say made famous mysterious five ---- 1. Maan (Maaneistein & as always a hard nut to crack) 2. Naintara ( the seductress with ozzing sophistication) 3. Dev (Draculla & psycho rolled into one) 4. Geet (a scientist in the making who landed up in finding thesis through daily household chores / future romantic & dark desires novel writer) 5. ASR ( The man who keeps appearing out of the blue in different context & confusing me to the core.)
Anyways I hope somewhere down the line of the coming updates I will be able to form my own thesis if not sane then somewhat insanely unlogical...😉😆😆

Wow, you just summerized all the characters very aptly. If ever asked I would have done a thesies of my own on each character and still ended up wondering where and why I started in the first place.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part2:
I love the way you showed history as well as the comparison of Maan n Dev(that's the second one I think) at that time..
When you described those creepy surrounding around Veer and the death of Maan...But as usual you wrote the unexpected...
"Charm is a product of the unexpected."--Jose Marti

I guess the girl in the suit was Geet...What do you mean by his idea of what swimming was changed from that moment? *scratching head😕


Edited by pearl_warrior - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 3
You keep sliding past into the story..Ok..That happens when you are building up the storyline..
Let me buy some popcorn..MSK n ASR..😎
A question just popped into my head...What is Maan's personality like? I got that ASR is an arrogant, rich, winner type-of person...Maan on the other hand is mysterious, different.
Hmph..:( You made Dev the CEO?😡And you made DEv drop-dead handsome?😡
Maneet have a good understanding..And Maan is quite aware of the woman before him..What about Geet? She is fun-loving and puzzling..And innocent for now..(I know she is not...)
Woww...The derivation of Acting in genes was absolutely hilarious...From where did she get such absurd ideas..(actually I must say from where did you get such ideas... After-all you are the genius behind her...).Linking nothing but, making something...
I don't think you got what I wrote..I, myself didn't get it..🤔
It was an entertaining part on the whole..
Edited by pearl_warrior - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 13
nice part...
poor Geet...
shes gonna go mad...
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 14
nice part...
Dev is such a slave driver...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 4:
I wonder why Geet got angry...As far as I read, Maan didn't say anything...Maybe someone told something to her or maybe she wants Maan to think of her...I would not have thought of the latter otherwise but, your character sketch makes me think...
I loved the part where Maan imagines him being a liar as the new thesis put together by Geet...😆
Sapna now obviously prefers Dev to Maan..
Maan is very good at making friends...Is Hima Geet's sis?Maan does have a way with children. Children are tough to handle..True...One should know how to deal with them..
A 2ooo dollar pen should be lucky..Poor Maan lost his favourite pen..ASR or Geet or is it really lost?😕

You know reading this FF I feel like a detective; when I read a plot, I would why this happened; is this the reason, that the reason...

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Posted: 12 years ago
sry for late...hell bsy...read last 4 parts together...in office...bcoz my boss is on leave today...haha...

ong i was just iagining maan dough th atta to make rotis in future to impress geet tht he alsw would make rottis...

y u told dev is impossibly handsome...only maan is...i was thn feeling so angry on u...bt whn i read the man of geets writing is maan...i was too happy...so unconsciously she is affected by maan...isnt it...she doesnt fear him...she nvr knocks his cabin...talks straightly wth hm...i think whole office know maans power...


does dev really work hard or its just eye wash...

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