Maneet SS- Kaafilaa. PART 10/ Pg 88/ JUN 13 PM L8R - Page 44

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PART- 10

To say Geet was horrified would be an understatement. Her own FATHER was doing this to her? Its true that she was not his own blood but still people even get attatched to animals at their home, here she was a walking-talking human being who had spent more than 20 years of her life with him under the same roof!!. Did he despise her so much? She had respected him and followed all his orders throughout her life, except one… For that was this her punishment? But the biggest question above all these things that was now roaming in her mind was, that had Maan really did all that her or was this all a sheer misunderstanding created deliberately???

With all these thoughts in her mind, she felt herself giving away to the darkness that consumed her… Lest did she know that the lie that was told to Maan had indeed come true though partially!!!

PRESENT

A small droplet finally managed to escape from the closed hazels as those memories had left a deep scar on Geet's fragile mind. Yes, she appeared to be strong for the ouside world but she had the heart of a baby.

While massaging Geet's hair, Maan felt something strange; he immediately got up and was shocked to see the tears now flowing freely from his Jaan's eyes!!!

"Geet??? Kya hua??? Did I hurt you??? Did the oil go in your eyes???" Maan asked getting extremely worried while at the same time checking her face for any signs of distress… He sounded so agitated that it made Geet open her eyes at once…

"Nahi nahi Maan… Main bilkul theek hu… In fact mujhe bahut bachchha lag raha hai…" Geet assured him while keeping her hand on his cheek leaning a soapy mark on it!!

"Phir why are you wasting my precious pearls??? Hmmm???" Maan asked while softly wiping out all the traces of tears from her pretty face…

"Uhh… Wo to bas aise hi…" Geet didn't give any proper reply and even Maan didn't question her further as he somewhere had an idea that she was reminiscing the happenings of the past few days, and from what he had learnt, it was not at all good!!!

"Okay!! Chalo you can have a wash and then come out, I am waiting for you outside… I have left the bathrobe on the stack." Maan announced and left her to let her have a bath after dropping a kiss on her cheek, as he realized that she wanted a little time for composing herself…

Geet appreciated his act and silently thanked Babaji for giving her a life partner who understood all her said and unsaid words…

MAANEET's BEDROOM

Maan was a little worried, as Geet seemed very disturbed about all the happenings. Though he knew that it was quite natural for anyone to get stressed if so much happened with them, but still he felt that he was missing some part of this puzzle… This whole conspiracy set against them had a much deeper link… But he couldn't ponder on his thoughts more as he heard the bathroom door click open. He turned around to witness his enchanting maiden appear in her true glory.

"Kehtey hain Maa ban ne ka nikhaar alag hi hota hai… Aaj Geet ko dekh kar vishwaas ho gaya…." Maan thought to himself, getting lost in the divine beauty in front of him.

Though Geet was very pale but still there was a certain glow on her face and the wet hair just added to her sensuous look, making Maan shamelessly drool over his own wife!!! Geet felt a strong gaze literally boring holes into her, and once she saw those culprit eyes, her pale look transformed into dark pink!!!

"Haaye!! How much I love that blush!!" Maan thought grinning to himself while averting his eyes reluctantly giving Geet the much-required respite!!!

He saw Geet searching for something in the wardrobe while making cute faces and finally closing the wardrobe with a sigh!!

"Kya hua??" Maan asked her sweetly while going and standing in front of her…

"Umm wo main… kapde???" Geet slowly questioned him while giving a confused look!!

Maan immediately looked down guiltily while cursing himself. How could he forget something so important? In a fit of anger, he had got all Geet's belongings removed from his room, and they were packed off in a storeroom in outhouse. Though he wanted to throw them away but his heart never agreed! But now, what would he tell her? He was thinking of formulating an answer when Geet understood his unsaid words…

"Rehney dijiye… Main abhi ke liye aapka Kurta pehen leti hoon…" Geet said sweetly and picked up his White kurta lying on top of the stack of ironed clothes…

Maan still looked down guiltily…

"Umm waise bhi abb kuchh din baad toh main unn kapdon mein fit bhi nahi hoti…" Geet said while her lower lip tucked out in a sad manner making Maan chuckle. He hugged her and kissed on her hair parting. He knew she was saying all this only to make him feel better.

"Ohh Jaan… I missed you so much…" Maan confessed.

Geet just tightened the hug as her answer. Maan slowly left her and took her in front of the mirror making her sit on the stool.

"Maan yeh aap kya…" Geet questioned but was silenced by his finger on her lips.

Maan took the sindoor dibiya in his left hand and took a pinch from it filling Geet's parting. A little fell on her nose too while Geet just looked at him from the mirror, her eyes reflecting pure unadulterated love for him.

"Chalo abb next surprise…" Maan spoke while Geet looked at him confused.

But then he took out something from his pocket that made Geet gasp in shock!!

"Maaan.. Yeh.. yeh… yeh aapke paas… yeh to…" She couldn't even speak as she was too overwhelmed and her throat was choked with tears…

"Haan Jaan… Uss din gusse mein maine yeh… yeh MANGALSUTRA tumse chheen toh liya thha par na jaane kyun phir maine issey apney paas hi rakh liya… Uss din se aaj tak yeh mere saath hi hai… Shayad issi mein main tumhare ehsaas ko kahi dundh leta tha…" Maan spoke, his own voice getting a little heavy…

They still remembered that fateful day…

PAST

"Nikal jaao tum aaj abhi issi waqt MERE ghar MERI zindagi sey… Main sapney mein bhi nahi soch sakta tha ki TUM, tum aisa kar sakti ho…Nafrat hai mujhey tumhaare saaye se bhi…" Maan shouted on Geet while dragging her out of the main gate…

"Itna sab hone ke baad bhi aapki itni himmat hai ki aap mere saath aise pesh aa rahey hai??? Aap kya mujhe iss ghar sey nikaalenge? Main khud yeh ghar chhod kar jaa rahi hu… Nahi rakhna mukhe aap jaise insaan ke saath koi bhi rishtaa…" Geet shouted back with equal vigour, her head held high!

"That's great. Par uss se pehley meri ek cheez tumhare paas hai…" Maan shot back and before Geet could even react, he snatched the Mangalsutra off her neck making the chain break… Small black bead scattered around the driveway, as the Mangalsuta broke apart, just like their relationship!

PRESENT

That day both of them didn't realize in the fit of anger, that they were both putting baseless allegations on each other but today they could not help but thank Babaji that their relationship survived the test of destiny finally!

"Par yeh toh toot gaya than na???" Geet questioned…

"Haan Jaan par jaise hamara rishta ko koi nahi tod sakta waise yeh kaise tuta reh sakta tha???" Maan spoke with a smile while tying it around her neck securely making Geet close her eyes and live this moment!

Suddenly realizing something Geet opened her eyes…

"Aapne kaha ki yeh aapkey paas uss din sey hai…toh aapney issey theek kaise karwaaya???" Geet asked getting confused while Maan just gave a lopsided smile making Geet's eyes widen in shock!

"Aapne issey khhud theek kiya…" Geet stated rather than questioning him…

She just fell in love all over once again for this man in front of her, how could she even believe all that crap against him? She just leapt in his awaiting arms and placed her lips on his… Thanking him for everything!

A knock on the door brought them out from their lala land, Geet immediately looked down her cheeks flaming… while Maan just smirked and went to check on the door…

"Maan bete, wo dinner ready hai jaisa appney kaha tha, main yahi kamre mein bhijwaa doon?" Kaka asked him to which Maan positively nodded, keeping in mind Geet's not so presentable attire…

A few minutes later both the lovebirds ate a lovely scrumptious dinner, consisting of all Geet's favourites, in each other's company. After giving Geet her medicine, Maan lied down on the bed encaging Geet in his arms. He gently caressed her hair.

"Mera sabse bada surprise toh tumhare liye yehi hoga jab main hamare gunehdaaron ko tumhare saamne la ka khada kar doon… Aur unn sabhi ko zindagi ke har pal-pal ke liye tumhaara mauhtaaj bana doon…" Maan thought to himself.

Finally they both finally slipped into a peaceful slumber, listening to the lullaby of each other's heartbeat.

NEXT DAY

Maan yawned stretching his hands, only to find a heavy weight resting on his body partially. He kept looking at the beauty in his arms, with the cute adorable pout, messy hair and his own kurta… He felt that it was all his dream and would soon vanish if he even blinked his eyes. His eyes fell on the wall clock and he unwantedly slipped out from the bed adjusting a pillow in his place. Geet mumbled incoherently as she felt the loss of warmth, she turned her face away and slept once again.

Maan chucked at her antics and was slowly tiptoeing out of the room when he spotted the clothes Geet was wearing, on the night he found her in dargah, in the laundry basket. He took them out and observed it closely.

"Yeh to waise suits hain jaise Geet shaadi se pehle pehnaa karti thhi... Aur wo toh uss din ke baad kabhi apney uss ghar mein lauti hi nahi toh phir yeh Geet ke paas aaye kaise???" Maan thought while inspecting the clothes once again.

PRECAP

Maan knowing Geet's side of the story…

and Maan becoming mad in anger but why???😡

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