Maneet SS- Kaafilaa. PART 10/ Pg 88/ JUN 13 PM L8R - Page 18

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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update..
the past was hilarious.. while the present painful...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Shweet part
Vampire n Independence day hahahahahah
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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome update dear👏

Loved it so much👏

Continue soon dear😊

Waiting⭐️

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update..
hmm past was funny..
OMG savitri behind all this...
plzz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mel420

trying not to puke on my laptop here I am

first of all love your banner you made
Jail day

"Maan' aapko inn topi waale uncle mein kya achchha lag raha hai???" Hawww maan likes topi waale uncles bechari geet ka ab kya hoga

wah ruchi you really payed attention in your history classvampire good one Geetdadi how could make dadi bad No ruchi you can' t do that poor maan itna darr geet se that he decided to stay theirsochna padega


Haaye me loving the minnie mouse, Donald and Daisy!!!

Hope you are better now sweets!!

Me really happy you liked it!!

Yup yup, Savitri Devi is the mama villain in this one, thoda different to hon a chaiyeh na!! He he!!

Love you sweets!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb..
netaji as vampire and savitri devi as villain..
as unexpected as it gets!!
loved it
continue soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi

Ruchs, hell ya. Me want another 10-15 parts. Aise kaise khatam hone du. You are just like ANSHRA, turning to be a excellent writer. Every word, title, dialogue, EVERYTHING is turning amazing. That was indeed a long and twisty update. And you know, how much i LOVE it.

Dadima?? This thing is not getting out of my head. Geet had suffered THAT much and he wasn't aware. Ab toh past ke baare mey aur exicted hu. I knew from starting, mera Maan can never be a cheap guy. He is sometimes angry, stubborn, arrogant or short tempered but never a coward or looser, to behave cheap. Glad, the family is back. But boy, car driving and independance day scene was damn funny. He know very well, how to handle her. Overall, superb. Waiting for precap part. Like rohan too. Geet ne yeh baat chupayi kyu? And did she know the real culprit?

Do cont soon and do PM me.


Haaye me was missing your lovely comment so much Sara!!!😳

Awww now that's a huge compliment for me if you really think me is somewhere even near Anshra Di!!😲

One of the best compliments till date!!! Thank you so much sweety!! Me flying in air!!!😳

Done!!! 10-15 parts!! Pakka!!1😃

Yup yup Savitri Devi is super evil in this one!!!😉

Yay!!! You looked it??? Sachchi!! me very very happy!!!😃

Will continue soon pakka sweets!! Love you!!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

awsome update
so savetri devi is behind all dese. is she his dadi or some othr relative?


An excellent question sweets!!!! Love you for it!!!!😉 Seriously me was wondering why no one was asking me this!!! Will answer in the next update dear!!!😳
Edited by ruchs - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

loved the update dear...it was just awesome

Sos omeone tried to separate one soul...how can they
I am so happy the way Maan is taking care of Geet. I hope he manages to keep her safe.
Thie past and present, both moments are really cute...
As to your question, please don't wrap up this SS yet. I really love it and will like to read more details and cute and caring moments


Aww thank you so much Di!!!

Me really happy you liking it!!!

Necer expected everyone is liking it so much!! Will pakka continue Di!!!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Loved the part.. So savitri was behind this...

Why you made her villain...
And one more thing...ahy rohan and not adi
Adi would suit better as his best friend and trusted empoyee...missing him
Ok...its your choice
I want 10-15 parts more and more maaneet moments
T4pm


Thank you sweets!!!

Well Rohan is an important part here and Adi is there too just that his role is a li'l different!!!

Me will continue it for sure!!!😳

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