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Deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

part 1
nice start...
OMG such cruel people...
cont soon dear...

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mousre

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

excellent kuch log paiso keliye kitna bhi neeche gir sakte hai par jo naseeb me likha hua hai use taal nahin sakte agar bure din dekhe to achhe din bhi aayenge😊

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tia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

SUPRB
FRST PART IS AMAZNGGG
WTNGG 4 MAANEETS' MEETNG..
CONT SOONN

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dolly10

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Edited by dolly10 - 13 years ago

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gurti30

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

really nice and different concept

please continue soon

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

brother killed brother for property...

Rano gave birth to baby girl...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...

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ambeern

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

wow awesome concept loved first part ...

plz add me in ur buddy list

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afsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Nice strt

Can u plz add me to ur pm list

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Beena_g

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Awesome update..prologue is too interesting..Thanks for PM..pls continue soon

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maaneet0887

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

PART 2

After 18 yrs -------->Delhi at 12pm

People were shouting MK...MK...MK...

A man sat on the black & white color bullet had wore the denim blue jeans with black color silky overcoat.He has chocolate brown eyes,long white nose,exact M-shaped pink lips & stubble.He was the 21yrs aged man.His name was Maan Singh Khurana.He was concentrating on the instructor who was announcing the race.People had come there to see the bike race of Maan & Rahul who has challenged each other.

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Beside Maan stood Rahul with the red color bullet.Rahul's friends who were supporting Rahul said to Maan,"Abhi bhi waqt hai Maan...peeche hat ja yeh tere bas ki baat nahin aur eent,cement aur paint ka stock kitna hai sirf usse dekhne laayak hai...!"Maan said with attitude,"Maan Singh Khurana ne kabhi haarna nahin seekha hai...!"

The instructor blew the whistle & lowered the green flag then Maan moved immediately like storm that Rahul didn't watch him for a second.In a few seconds he had second lap which Rahul was abt to start.Maan went forward knocking the other participants showing his black color fog which was coming from his bullet.

After the race Maan was the winner while Rahul went form there with disappointment.While Maan did an announcement,"Guys one who defeat me in this race will be awarded one lakh rupees & my friendship forever.On that time someone walked towards the place wearing black color pant & black color silky shining jeans.That person wore a helmet.

Maan said smiling when everyone retreated back with fear,"So no one is there to face me...!!!"On that time someone said,"Itna hava mein mat ud...nahin toh bahut pachtaavoge...!!!"Everyone saw towards the sound there stood romeo.

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Romeo came forward with attitude wearing sun glasses & said taking a paper from his pocket,"Ahem...ahem...Mr.Maan Singh Khurana meine suna hai ki aap bahut bade businessman ke bete hain lekin us reputation ka aap aise dhajiya uda rahe hai ki saara Delhi aapke pitah par has rahi hai...!Pehle apne baare mein sochiye phir is race ke baare mein sochiyega...aap sirf yeh karne ke liye laayak hai...!"And he gave the broomstick to Maan whose eyes were red with anger.

When Romeo saw his blood red eyes then he stuttered,"Ye mere lines nahin hai...ye mere boss ke lines hai...unhone bhejs hai...!Wahan dekhiye...!"And a person came towards Maan wearing the helmet & opened the glass which the eyes came to visible.Those eyes were honey brown hazel eyes which he saw intently.Maan thought of drowning himself in those honey brown eyes which has the volumes of emotions.

That person said stretching the black gloved hand to Maan,"Mr.Khurana...mera naam hai...baabu...!"Maan thought,"Baabu...lekin dikhne mein toh ladki lag rahi hai aur apne naam ko baabu bata rahi hai...!"Maan was abt to give but the person took off the gloves from his hand & shaked Maan.Maan felt immediately feeling the softness of the skin that she's a girl but why she's hiding herself behind the helmet.

Maan was abt to take off the helmet but she said going behind,"Toh shuru kare...???"After few seconds both were on their respective bullets & gave the accelerator.The instructor blew the whistle & both moved in their bullets like a storm.Any thing happens he wanted to win but something was stopping him.

They completed the race but at the end The girl was winner.Maan was impressed & said,"As promised...one lakh rupees & my friendship forever.That girl opened the glass of the helmet exposing her hazel brown eyes & said,"Mr.Khurana...mein race jeeta kisi aur ke wajaise...naaki aapko impress karne ke liye nahin...agar aap woh paisa dede toh mein yahan se chala jaounga...!Aur aapki dosti ki koi zaroorat nahin hai mujhe...!"

That girl's words hit Maan's ego...first time someone is refusing Maan Khurana's friendship.The manager took that person's signature which manager said after that person went from there,"Aap theek keh rahe hai Mr.Khurana ye ek ladki hai...!!!"And he showed the signature which said the name Geet Kaur.Maan read the name,"Geet...!"He felt happy hearing her name on his lips.

Here Geet who was the one who won the race came to the Savithri Devi hospital where a pale woman came forward to meet Geet.Geet gave the cheque in the hospital office to the nurse.The nurse said her to wait outside as someone's operation is going on.Geet sat beside the pale woman who hugged her crying.After sometime the OT's light was green & doctor came & said the patient is out of danger.

The woman & Geet went from there towards the ward where the patient was shifted.The patient was a boy who was in danger becoz of the accident which was done by Maan's friends.The boy opened its eyes & saw his Geet didi there.The boy said,"Geet didi...aap un logon ko sazaa dilaayenge na jo log meri yeh haalat ki hai...!!!"

Geet assured the boy & the boy's mother said crying,"Aapne bacha liye beta mere bete ko...mujhe maaloom hai ki aap mere malkin ke beti hot huye bhi aap mein koi ghamand nahin...!"Get said wiping her eyes & said,"Arre aap kyun ro rahi hai rona hai toh unhe jo log aapke bete ka aisi haalat bana diya...!"

On that time the news was going on in TV which said,"Yeh Mr.Rahul hai jinhone ek maasoom bachchi ko accident karne ki jurm mein Kaur industries ki malkin Rano Kaur ne arrest karvaaya hai...yeh Rahul Malhotra industries ki eklouta waaris hai jo aisi harkathe ki hai...!Lekin Mrs Rano Kaur ne in par accident aur hit & run case ka charges lagaaya hai...!Mrs.Rano Kaur ek NGO ka head hi nahin balki Kaur industries ke malkin...!"

The TV showed the Rahul was taking by police & the boy's mother smiled seeing the man.Geet who saw the news sighed immpressively while she got a phone.Geet took the phone & had the blasting from bebe,"Kahan hai tu aur ye kya mein dekh rahi hoon aap dono theek haina...???"Geet said,"Hum theek hai bebe...tu chinta mat kar...aur haan maasa ko kaho woh humaare baare mein chinta na kare...hum theek hai...!"

Precap-Maaneet's second meeting in KC's office.

Previous Part 01-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2960394/karz-updated-pt-18-pg-76?pn=5

Next Part 03-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2960394/karz-updated-pt-18-pg-76?pn=13

Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago

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