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Posted: 13 years ago



PART 17B


AFTER READING THIS PLS DON'T THROW JOOTHIS AND CHAPPALS BUT U KNOW DAT JAB DO LOVERS KE BEECH MEIN EK KO DARD HUVA TOH PYAAR AUR BHI ZYAADA BHADTI HAI...SO DON'T GIVE GAALIS FOR DIS UPDATE😊


Maan was shocked dat Geet has been kidnapped by d smuggling gang who were smuggling d raw materials of d forests fm d Gir forests.D tribal chief stopped Maan when he decided to search dem as dey r very dangerous but to save his lady love MSK can go to any lengths.




Maan came to d place where dey were hiding and saw Geet was taking inside their premises caging her inside d cage.Maan followed dem silently trying to know d security and saw dat two men stood in d doorway above d gate holding a machine gun and watching in alert.





One of d men asked seeing d girl in d cage,"Yaar..yeh kaunsa par leke aaya hai...dikhne me toh bahut hi swaadisht lag rahi hai...!!!"(My apalogies guys dat am using d normal language for d thugs but i can't explain deir language as dey use d cruel language)




The man one who dragged d cage said smiling evilly,"Yeh bahut hi khoobsurat hai yaar agar maalik ko isse bhent kardoon toh woh humein noton se humaare jeb bhardega...yeh bhatak gayi thi shaayad apni aashiq ko dhoond rahi thi hogi...aur raasta bhatak gayi aur humaare shinkanj mein aagayi...!!!!"





Maan closed his eyes with guilt as she was captured when she was searching him.Maan couldn't tolerate hearing deir cheap language which was used to Geet and anger coursed in his veins but he have to stop himself as he may hurt himself or else there will be no option to save Geet.





When he saw Geet's eyes den it was fearless...she saw dem fearlessly and he was amazed to see her like dat.Geet knew dat Maan is gonna come to save her as unknown trust has come on him dat he'll save her at any cost.





Maan felt dat his courage become double seeing d fearless eyes of Geet.He slowly moved towards d gate as dey were laughing seeing Geet as her state will be pitiful after she meets their head.Maan slowly came behind d gate and glanced once again dat d guards r not seeing him and entered d gate without anyone knows abt him.







Geet didn't saw him but still she had d trust dat he won't leave here in dis mess forever.D cage was dragged inside d gate and d gate was closed.Maan walked behind d cage widout knowing anyone and saw dat she has been tied inside d hut and went to inform their boss abt her.







Maan saw on d way d numerous models of d bullet standing shining in d sun and he was amazed dat wat dey r gonna do with dem.But he noticed dat it has numerous number plates one by one dat he understood dat dey theft with dis bikes and was shocked d modern technology which was attached to it.








Maan slowly came to d hut where Geet was tied and was abt to go inside but d boss came with his assistant with excitement.He was luking just like d thugs feature with blood red eyes long nose which was punched in d tip and stubble with moustache.His teeth were not clean and he was d chain smoker of d cigarette.






He was burning one full cigarette for one minute.D boss was mesmerised Geet seeing her beauty and said smiling evilly,"Oye tu agar ek raat mere saath bitaayegi toh is duniya ke khazaana tumhaare kadamo tale hogi...kyun...!!!"And he was abt touch her chin but she dodged and said angrily,"Choona mat nahin to bahut pachtaavoge...aur waise bhi mein shaadi shoda aurat hoon...agar mujhe choovoge to mera pati tumhe nahin chodega...!!!"








The boss and his accomplice saw each other seriously and burst into laughter and boss said,"Tumhaara pati ko pata bhi nahin hai ki tum kahan hoon aur jab usse pata chalega tab tak tum meri ho chuki hogi...!!!!"And he came forwards to touch while anger coursed inside her veins and made a disgusting face and kicked him fm her leg strongly as her hands were tied upwards.D boss fell backwards as his accomplice saw her shockingly.Maan who saw d scene silently was also shocked with her anger ans smiled as she was in full on mode in her sherni avatar.






D boss came back and was abt to slap her but he was held strongly by someone and it was none other than MSK.Maan stood in front of her as d boss and d accomplices saw him with shock.Maan squeezed d boss's hand and said,"Geet ko chune ka haq to sirf mera hai inka pati MSK...!!!!"






He clentched his fist and punched his nose and fought with d accomplices.No one can't match d power of MSK while their boss took d gun and held it on Geet's head and said,"Oye..band karo nahin teri biwi ko mein udaadunga...!!!!"







Maan's temple twitched with fear as he saw d gun on her head but Geet said,"Nahin Maan..iski hone se to achcha hai ki mein aapki baahon mar jaavoon...aap mat rokiya..beat dem till d pulp but don't bend ur head in front of this thug...!!!"






D boss slapped her angrily and Maan came forward angrily and held his collar and beaten him but his accomplices held him strongly and beaten him so mu ch dat Geet screamed in pain.Maan saw d boss angrily when dey were beating him.D accomplices got tired but he Maan dint shouted for single beating also but Geet couldn't tolerate his beatings and tears poured down from her eyes.





Maan pretends to be unconscious and Geet saw him with fear.Fear engulfed inside her heart unknowingly seeing him unconscious dat d boss left him immediately tying Maaneet together in iron clamp and sat in his hut drinking d alcohol.




When d boss left dem den Maan got up immediately and made her free from d ropes.Geet's face has become pale while she touched his face and body slowly moving her soft fingers.Maan felt a current run down his spine feeling her soft fingers and he felt he's losing his tiredness becoz of her caressing his every muscle.



Geet said angrily,"Kya zaroorat thi un logon se maar khaane ki...!!!!!!"Maan said sweetly,"Toh phir mein unhe tumhe chone detha...????Geet tum sirf meri ho...aur tum bhi jaanti ho aur mein bhi jaanta hoon ki mein tumhe kissi anjaan aadmi se choona toh door ki baat hai tumhaare aas paas bhi bhatakne nahin doonga...!!!!"



Geet's eyes welled up and tears poured down from those almond eyes dat she hugged him tightly.Maan too reciprocated it and broke apart immediately when dey heard d sound of footsteps.Maaneet escaped d hut fm back door while a guard came and saw d room empty and dey ran to inform d boss.Maaneet came outside and saw dat dey r being chased d firing started for dem but dey dodged immediately and dey ran towards d bike stock.



Maan took d black & white bullet bike fm d stock of d smugglers and said,"Geet hum bike par chelenge...!!!!"Geet said,"Ok i'll ride it...sit back...!!!!"Maan said,"Nahin Geet mein chalaavoonga...!!!"Geet said,"Nahin mein...!!!!"Maan said angrily,"Nahin mein...!!!"






Before Geet would argue a bullet brushed Maan's ears in 0.1 cm and Maan bent to save himself fm d bullet.Geet said with panic,"Aap theek toh haina Maan???"Before Maan answer him another bullet crossed between Geet and Maan and hit to d tree.






Maan immediately pulled Geet to d bullet bike and started immediately.Maaneet were clamped their right & left hand by iron clamp.Maan's left hand was clamped to Geet's right hands and she was sitting behind him sideways..as he was controlling d gears in left handle of d bike.






Maan started and he moved on immediately and broke d gate and went outside but d smugglers chased dem and started firing d bullets to dem.Maaneet dodged d bullet immediately but one of d bullet broke his rear view mirror where Maan was seeing dem.






Maan couldn't see d mirror as Geet was slipping due to d iron clamps.Geet said cutely,"Maan mein phisal rahi hoon...!!!"Maan said,"Aise hi baitho jaan...hum niukal rahe hai...!!!"But on dat time d jeep followed dem and was firing d bullet.







Geet said,"Maan ek kaam karo tum right handle sambhaalo..mein gear sambhaalthi hoon...!!!"Maan was abt to argue but den he remembered dat she also know how to ride bullet as she had won d race fm him.






Den Geet sat two sided and held d gear in left hand as her right hand was tied to Maan's left hand.Maan diddn't know how many r there as their rear view mirror was broken den said to Geet,"Geet..tum aage aavo aur kaho ki kitne log hai...as our mirror has broken...!!!"





Geet left d left handle of d bike and came forward and sat and saw her behind and said to Maan but Maan was in trance as her thighs were rubbing his manhood.Maan groaned stifling his sensation and listened to wat Geet say.Geet said,"Maan..ek jeep hai usme 15 log hai...aur 4 log baahar khade hai...jeep par aur humein fire kar rahe hai...!!!"Maan said with enormous difficulty,"Theek hai...ab tum peeche baitho...!!!"Geet nodded & she sat back and handled d left handle of d bike.







When riding Maaneet came to a deep ditch where no one can cross it & was abt to ride back but dey saw dat d jeep following dem and dey made deir mind up and stood in front of d ditch giving accelerator.Maan said,"Geet..isme gear 4 par lagaado...!!!"But Geet said,"Nahin Maan gear ko 2 mein hi rehne do...nahin toh hum bike se gir jaayenge jab hum us taraf pahunchenge jab gear 5 mein hogi...accelerator dedo Maan...it will work in accelerator...!!!!"







Maan nodded and gave d accelerator and when d jeep followed den he moved d bike while Geet was handling d left handle.Maan flied in d air where d jeep men saw d bike with astonishment and it crossed d deep ditch and stopped halfway and saw dem smirking.But d boss saw dem going away angrily while Geet's eyes popped up and she started sweating but she held her sweating and dey rode immediately to d safest place.On dat time rangers came and captured d thugs and Maaneet were safe on d hands of rangers but Geet came forward and before she hugs Meera..she fell on d floor but she was caught by Maan who saw her worriedly.








Maan asked worriedly,"Jaan..kya huva...!!!!"Geet saw d blurred vision of Maan and she fainted immediately.Maan's hands got something wet in her back and he saw his right hand which was smeared in blood dat she had fainted.D smugglers boss had hit s last bullet which had hit Geet as she had sat behind Maan saving him fm d bullet.Maan screamed with panic,"Geet...!!!!"







Precap-Geet is hospitalised...


NOTE-Actually guys i wanted to give u d action scene of d james bond movie TOMORROW NEVER DIES where Pierce Brosnan and d chinese actress ride d bike like dis only...and don't know how i hv explained u guys...so pls give me long comments guys...how do u felt dis part..and did i hd to elaborated d scene or not...i don't know but pls tel me dat r u satisfied with my today's writing



Previous Part 17A-C ABOVE


Next Part 18-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2960394/karz-updated-pt-18-pg-76




Edited by geetsrir.maan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
maneet same bed geet angry maan hurt geet in trying to find him lost



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Posted: 13 years ago
my above comment was for the 16th part ,i came ol just in the evening .
lovely & cute maaneet moments ☺️
will be waitng for the 2nd part .
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 17 A
nice...
oh ho now where is she?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...😊
Hayee it was so romantic...me blushing...😳
Hate dose stupid creatures...Rahul😡
M feeling like to bash dat women who giggled seeing our maaneet's romance...😡 because of her our maaneet's momen got broken...😭
I was such an amazing update...😊
Plzz coninue soon...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago



wow lovely action update...te way my maan saved hsi geet was superb lovely...geet and maan in action...i want that 2nd redwala bike, for my maan...why geet should get scared of that morons, wen her savior behind her always...i love te update so much...now my geet got bullet oh no...precap, geet in hospital...im waiting dear...
Edited by Desigirls12 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update.
hope geet will be fine soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome update...

loved it...

wow...maan sahi mein james bond hai...

thank u very much fr such lovely update...


continue nxt prt soon plz...


eagerly waiting...

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Posted: 13 years ago
update full of action geet hurt waiting for next



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Posted: 13 years ago
mind blowing update
waiting for next part

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