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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW
SWEETU UPDT
LV MAANEETS SCENE
ACTUALLY THEIR ROMANCE😆😆😆



ND TEASER
😲😲😲

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow lovely teaser..im waiting to se my action hero maan.
Edited by Desigirls12 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awersome update
Loved it

Loved the teaser
waiting for next
continue soon
thankx for pm


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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it...

wow...sahi mein made fr each other...goom ho gaye tabhi bhi romance karna nehi chhodte...gr8...

thank u very much fr such lovely update n also fr d pm...


continue nxt prt soon plz...


eagerly waiting...

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Posted: 13 years ago
part 16
awesome...
that Sonali and Rahul ke band bajani hai...
poor Maan has to control his emotions...
and Geet is tantalizing him...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
teaser
ab yeh koun log hai in dono ke jaan ke peeche?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
one request dear, can u add the title of the FF in the pm like u used to?
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Posted: 13 years ago




PART 17A

Sorry guys yeh thodi long ud hai toh isiliye meine isse do parts me divide kiya hai so one who wants to read d 2nd parts have to wait for sometime.


Maan came forward having d apple and gave a deep sigh seeing downwards as Geet lingered in his thots.Maan thot,"Babaji..meri aisi pariksha mat lelo...am not gonna control myself infront of her and i'll end up love making her...pls give me d strength to control myself...!!!"





Maan was freezing due to d cold and he sat in front of d fire and took some heat but rain started and he have to go inside d hut where Geet was there.When Maan entered then his m shaped lips curved into wide smile seeing d scene.Geet was asleep leaning to d foot of d bed and was frowning due to d wrong posture.





Maan thot,"Yeh aise kyun so rahi hai...bed thi aur kambal bhi...phir bhi...!!!"Maan said shaking her,"Geet...!!!"Geet woke up with d jerk and came forward but in dat time her lips brushed his lips and a current run down d spine inside their body.Geet blushed furiously and hid it immediately fm Maan.Maan was embarassed and he turned dat side immediately standing.





Silence crept in d room for a second and Maan spoke,"Geet..tum bed pe kyun soyi nahin ho???"Geet said cutely,"Kyunki aap bed pe so jaayiye...mein yahi theek hoon...!!!"Maan tried to argue,"Nahin Geet mujhe camping ki practise hai mein zameen par so jaavoonga...lekin tumhe zameen sakth lagegi..tum bed pe so jao...!!!!"






Geet argued once again,"Maan aapki tabiyat theek nahin hai aur aap uss sher se ladkar bhi aaye hai...aur is thand pe aap zameen par soyenge toh thand lag jaayegi...aap zameen par nahin bed pe so jaayiye mein zameen par so javoongi...!!!"Maan argued,"Geet tum bahut soft ho tumhe yeh zameen suit nahin karti tum bed pe so jao..mein zameen pe so jaavoonga...!!!"





He sat on d floor but Geet came to her sherni avatar and said angrily,"Aap meri baat sunenge ya nahin...jaayiye jaakar bed pe so jaayiye...mein yahan so jaavoongi...!!!Jaayiye..nahin toh aapko uthaakar bed pe sulaadoongi...!!!"Maan glared at her and said angrily,"MSK ko dhamki..chalo uthaavo mujhe...!!!!"




Geet said angrily,"Dekhiye mujhse challenge mat keejiye..nahin toh baad pe pachtaayenge...!!!!"Maan turned his face with attitude still sitting on d floor then Geet came and tickled him immediately near his waist dat he got up immediately laughing so much and Geet pushed him on d bed but Maan pulled her and she fell on his half exposed chiseled chest in which her supple lips brushed.






Maan's skin burned into desires but he controlled immediately and whispered in her ear huskily,"Ek shart par mein yahan bed pe sovoonga...!!!!Geet showed her questioning almond eyes to Maan.






Maan continued,"Tumhe yahan bed pe sona hoga agar mujhe yahan soni hai toh...!!!!"Geet's eyes popped up and stammered,"Mujhe yahan aapke saath ek hi bed pe...!!!!"Then she murmured to d babaji,"Hayee..kitna besharam hai ye babaji ...mein inke saath ek hi bed pe...yeh sunne me toh badi ajeeb lagti hai...!!!!"






Maan showed his fake anger,"Theek hai tumhaari marzi..yeh akela banda ek sher se ladkar aaya hai...aur neeche zameen par issi thand mein soyega to kya haal hoga..aur ye haal tumhaare wajaise hoga...ab mujhe samajh me aagaya tum mujhse pyaar nahin karti...woh confession sirf ek dhong thi...!!!!"







Geet glared at him and said angrily,"Mein jhoot bol rahi hoon..mein dhong kar rahi hoon..mujhe nahin pata tha ki aapka pyaar itni kamzor hai jo meri pyaar ko kabhi samajh hi nahin saki...aise insan se pyaar karne se achcha hai ki mein apne dil ko hi maardoon...!!!!"







Maan couldn't tolerate her words and said with shock,"Geet..am sorry..mein sirf mazaak kar raha tha...yeh sab tumhaare wajaise hai..kyunki tumhaari yeh hesitation mujhe doubt dilaa rhai hai ki tum mujhpe vishwaas hi nahin karti...isiliye meine aisa kaha...am sorry..agar meri baatein tumhe hurt kiya hai toh...!!!!!"




Geet said cutely but firmly,"Maan...yeh jaan aur pyaar toh sirf aapka ho chuka jis waqt aap meri jaan bachaane ke liye us sher se lad rahe the...Maan mujhe aap par poora vishwas hai apne upar se bhi zyaada...!!!!"






Maan was happy hearing her confession dat he hugged her tightly and felt peace becoz of hurting her he was bothered so much dat he felt peace hugging her tightly.Maaneet broke apart when dey heard d thundering and dey avoided each other's gaze.Maan said slowly,"Geet..tum bed pe so jaavo..mein zameen pe so jaavoonga...!!!"







Geet said cutely,"Zid mat keejiye aap bed pe so jaayiye mein zameen pe so jaavoongi...!!!"Maan said,"Par...!!!"But he was muted by Geet's soft palm dat he saw her hazel almond eyes which showed multiple emotions.Geet slept on d floor on d carpet with soft pillow and a blanket while Maan slept on d bed turning dat side.







After sometime Maan turned Geet's side and saw dat she's feeling uncomfortable sleeping on d floor dat he got up and came near her slowly.Then he lifted her slowly on his strong arms den she smiled in her sleep inhaling his scent.







Maan admired her cute smile in her sleep and he placed her on d bed gently so dat she won't wake and was going but Geet held his hand tightly and kept it under her face and slept peacefully.Maan felt uncomfortable but he slowly slipped inside d blanket and slept on d bed keeping her far away but she cutely came inside his embrace and slept on his chest hugging his waist tightly.Maan felt uncomfortable but his eyes became blurred due to sleep and he also dozed off keeping his hand on her waist holding it possessively.




Sun dawned and Geet opened her almond eyes and saw d first scene was d sleeping MSK.



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Geet smiled at him and saw around her and saw dat she was sleeping on d bed but...den her eyes popped open and saw immediately towards Maan.Maan was keeping his hands possessively and she was sleeping on his chest and tried to get up feeling embarassed but couldn't as Maan has held her waist possessively.




Geet waited till he was awake and he opened his chocolate brown eyes after sometime slowly and saw Geet seeing him anxiously.Maan yawned softly and stretched hie arms and legs and saw towards Geet as she was now glaring at him and asked,"Geet kya huva????"






Geet didn't answer and still glared at him den he saw around him and said immediately popping his eyes,"Geet..tum galath samajh rahi ho..tum wahan zameen pe comfortable nahin thi..isliye mein yaha tumhe laaya..aur tum neend mein meri haath pakda aur mujhe chudaane nahin diya..toh mujhe majbooran tumhaare saath sona pada..aur kuch nahin...!!!!"Geet started hitting his rock chest angrily and shouted,"Meine aapse kaha tha na ki aisa mat karna...lekin aap meri kyun sunte ho...!!!"







Maan held her wrist and turned and made her sleep under him and closed her plump lips and gave a piercing gaze and spoke which was painful,"Tumhe mujhpar abhi bhi vishwaas nahin haina...!!!!!"Geet saw those chocolate brown eyes which had pain and she showed her innocent eyes and he had d urge to eat her alive now only but he resisted it and got up immediately.Geet said slowly,"Maan meri baat to suniye...!!!"But he went outside in top speed angrily.







Geet wacked herself,"Jhalli..tumhe toh pata haina ki woh aise nahin hai phir bhi tumne un par shak kardiya...!!!!"Geet went calling Maan but he was no where and she ran searching of him but she lost her road.Here Maan was searching for Geet as he had went inside d hut to talk to her when his anger went down and searched for her but she didn't found.







Then he searched d whole tribal village and informed d chief dat she's missing.All d tribal people started searching her den one of d tribal men came back running with fear dat d smuggling gang kidnapped Geet and he told to his chief everything.





Precap-same


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Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago
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wow lovely update dear...te way my maan is controlling hsi desires, wow only my maan can do tis...my maaneet started to argue for te bed oh god...and maan carried geet to bed and they slept...wow lovely scene...now geet is aqusting my maan...oh no...geet went to search maan...why geet u went...my maan is going behind her...now wat will happen...
Edited by Desigirls12 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update.
Loved maaneets moments a lot 😉

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