New York Times Part 31 Updated in Thread 2 - Page 91

Vry gud update
bt the story is at a little bit slow pace..
i dnt knw if its me nly who feels ths way...bt i feel so...i dnt knw abt the earlier version as m new to ths...

Originally posted by: had2bu

@onir: love the way you are able to analyse and put in words what I am feeling. Wish I could be so good at it.

I loved this update. There are so many subtle things here that impacted me.

The sort of shirtless part as if opening himself up in a way. This update he put himself out there for her.

The game which we use to play with kids to make them smile; that just touched me a lot. Every worry of hers is now his to heal.

His being her moon... haiii.. This is the most romantic part.

The friend colleague discussion and her still being miffed and her self thought about how she gets convinced by him.

I could absolutely visualize them on the swing with the kid.

Her in her sari and the perusal that he gives her. Your descriptions were awesome.

I loved this esp considering that you gave us the precap of whats next.

I am going to read this again again.

Originally posted by: 6th.Element

I will see you all over the weekend. Feeling a bit under the weather and so I'm unable to respond back to your comments. But honestly, I have to read through them again, because it doesn't do justice to your time if I don't give my time of the day...and when I have a clearer head.

I will be going through the 25 chapters and editing them over the weekend. Will let you know if many changes come up.

TC and keep the thread alive until then...

-H

Originally posted by: walkintomylifex

Get better soon H :)

& Onir, like Avi said, I just wanted to praise you on your description of the chapter, your comments are as beautiful as the chapter itself!

Originally posted by: Onir

Thanks, (can I know what should I call you by... as I feel its not right to addrees you as had2bu... ) but seriously its H's writing that causes all these analysis... & it just forces one to feel what she percieves. She puts in quite a lot of effort as its not easy to put words to your imagination & still turn out to be such beautiful & heart-touching...

For me too this part wil be quite memorable... priceless...

Me too can't get enough of it even after reading it so many times... each time brings in a new perception to it ...

I'm Ashavi, don't like to be called Ash so please call me Avi. Hasini and I go back a year as I was part of NYT threads the first time also (at that time my id was ucompleteme; weird names right?) and I am a diehard fan of her work. Do you remember the precap she gave, I feel that will be in the next part as it was part of the KC night. I am so looking forward to more. Hoping she gets well soon. Nice to find someone who is expressive like you are; somehow you bring out what we are thinking. 😊

I just can't help myself... H pardon me I keep coming up with something or the other each time I read part 25... Waning full moon...

Originally posted by: had2bu

I'm Ashavi, don't like to be called Ash so please call me Avi. Hasini and I go back a year as I was part of NYT threads the first time also (at that time my id was ucompleteme; weird names right?) and I am a diehard fan of her work. Do you remember the precap she gave, I feel that will be in the next part as it was part of the KC night. I am so looking forward to more. Hoping she gets well soon. Nice to find someone who is expressive like you are; somehow you bring out what we are thinking. 😊

Originally posted by: 6th.Element

I have not heard one word about Maan in this version.

Well, we had a few passionate haters of NYT Maan in the older threads...

Any takers for that?

Look what the cat dragged in...

Originally posted by: Onir

His description of the most important aspects of her life being in her reach, the finger-palm analogue, so cryptic' Meera being the index finger, as she's the one Geet banks upon a lot, her childhood friend,as she shares with her everything, Yash being the next, I think just because he & Meera go hand in hand & they're the immediate support system of hers in NY. Ring finger being the job as in thats what brought her to him & cause of which she got connected to him (Ring finger as its where you wear the marriage ring as it's said that it's connected to heart). Little finger being NY that keeps pulling the two of them nearer, but it also has its own bad, as it can also push them into loneliness & guilt when not in each others comforting & soothing presence. Palm being the whole world she can have if she wants to, if she has all the above mentioned aspects'. This will ultimately lead to her smile'.. & then her full moon will come insight ' This is just my perception of it, quite possible that it's not so. But I think I keep finding meaning in everything that's there.

Loved the last line '. The giant that he was locked up in his own tower' just implying that it's just not she who always needs him to wade through life's complex situations but that he too needs her in his life to overcome years of loneliness & pain, as he's just opened up for her but the rest of the world is still there'

I just can't help myself... H pardon me I keep coming up with something or trhe other each time time I read part 25... Waning full moon...