MAKE YOU MINE AT ANY COST ...last part ..pg 137 - Page 29

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: neethuMG

what..😲
omg maan teekh hogaya ..
pls updt soon...i cannot wait for long after this promo




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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow Maan is mentally ill, didn't see that coming.
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Posted: 13 years ago
update kab milega
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Posted: 13 years ago
oddum dear
bt do msk is love with her dear
i knew geet is there bt why her smile vsnizhed
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh the promo is awesome so when r v getting the update
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome promo
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow, awesome promo!!!!!

plz make it a long FF, like 11-12 parts, love ur ff

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ElizaKawa

Wow Maan is mentally ill, didn't see that coming.




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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abisamratgunjan

oddum dear
bt do msk is love with her dear
i knew geet is there bt why her smile vsnizhed


you willknow soon dear



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"I am coming with you maan …" she said surprised at the possessive note in his voice …. "its paining maan …." She said desperately as his hold started to hurt her and tears welled up in her eyes …. He left her hands but kept holding her waist tightly to him … her head automatically rested on his shoulders .. "you are not the sweet and loving maan I knew " she said slowly as she rubbed her wrists that by now had his finger marks .. while the only response she got was the tightening of his hold on her waist ….

She slowly closed her eyes and took deep breath… though his hold was protective but it was also tight and painful… she was feeling uneasy and also very … very … she couldn't name it … but it was a odd feelings … but the feeling of pain overtook all her feelings… and her heart … she knew it was the last time she would be this close to him…… she did knew why she was doing this .. she was desperately trying to savior his feeling … at least few of his memories that she could cherish …. As she hid her face in the crook of his neck .. she inhaled his scent … she closed her eyes to drown in his scent totally … and she didn't knew when she slept in his lap for she knew he wont let her get up from his lap …

It felt like she had slept for few seconds when she felt disoriented … she slowly opened her eyes and closed them suddenly as a ray hit her eyes …. And she moved her face to the shadow and inhaled a known scent … no doubt it was maan's ….. her eyes snapped open and she turned her face up and the first sight she saw was the deep and dark eyes … she felt like she could drown in them and then never want to come to the shore… a cold wind hit her and she looked away to see them standing in a deserted place …. Well HE was standing and she was in his arms !!!!

"maan .. where are we ???? " she asked as she involuntarily went closer to him feeling cold …

"my favorait place …. In manali …" he replied as she brought her closer to himself and held her more tightly …

"manali ??? but we were half way down to delhi weren't we ???" she literally shouted .. they had been already near to delhi and that was the reason she had said nothing to maan about where they were going …. But she did a mistake even if in the last moment …

"I am not going back to delhi…." He said as his hold on her tightened ….

She remained silent for some time… she knew him too well to force him to do any thing … he did what he wanted and never listened to any one then why did she think that she will listen to her ????? "put me down maan …" she said at last …

He left her legs and then turned her so that she was facing him … he looked into her eyes and captivated her in his gaze …. Holding her waist he let her fall down … as she desended down he made sure that her body touched every part of his in the process … he could very clearly see her gaze turning dark…

She was as much effected by him and was he ….

Soon geet was standing on his legs and her waist was held tightly by maan as they both were lost in their eyes …. It was as if the time had stopped for them … a slow wind blowed and a stand of her hairs came up to her face … maan hated it when any one obstructed his view from his hosanna …. Slowly he put that strand behind her ears …. His touch was heavenly and very much arousing …

She felt that … he knew it …. For just for her ….

Suddenly she turned around looking forward … as she tried to go forward , maan pulled her back holding her waist and she fell to him with a bang …. Maan held her tightly and said what he wanted to say …. "just stay here for some time .. " her movements stilled for some time but then she realized that it would be a mistake to stay there with him .. "please hosanna " he added when he felt her moving …. She stilled herself … how could she deny him anything ???? he felt her relax and so did his heart …

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The dinner was being set by the time geet came down… he had asked her out for a date and she couldn't deny it because he had given her no chance to deny the offer .. he had even given a black coloured saree .. just as she liked .. she couldn't understand what he wanted to do or what he was trying to prove … he had said that he was going to surprise her.. already she was surprised by his improvement .. she had gotten ready hours back but had been strictly instructed by maan not to come down before 7:45 … but she couldn't control the anxiety she felt as the seconds ticked by… although his improvement was lot but still he was ill ..

At last when it was not possible for her to control herself she desended down her room … they were staying in one of the cottages of the khurana's .. it was beautiful will be like cursing it … it was heavenly and a masculine sense to it … every part of the cottage was perfect just like its owner .. as she walked down the stairs and looked at every item in an attempt to print it on her mind forever .. for she would never be able to foget him …but the question remained the same ….

Will he remember her after few weeks ?????

She didn't want to think about it now … she walked out and headed towards the garden … she was mesmerized by the setting … in the middle a table was set but two chairs were not there just one … dishes were kept .. but the candels were not yet lit … and maan was no wher to be seen … she waslked towards the table and picked up the dishes and started to do them in a right way … she was so engrossed in doing it that she failed to register the presence of anathor person .. but soon as if angry on her a wind gused towards her and with it brought the smell that she wouldn't be able to forget in her life time … her hands stilled for a moment and then again as she was starting to lit the candel she felt an unmistakable warmt in her back … and her hands begin to shake …

He was coming down to complete the left over work after he got freashen up when he felt that she was there already … he walked or literally ran towards the garden and sure there she was doing the rest of the arrangements …. First he was angry as to why she had come before time but then she turned towards him a little and her heavenly sight took away his anger …. He had planned a romantic dinner and then thought to confess … it had took hell a lot of strength on his part to prepare himself … so he had asked for a date and then did the preparation as the way she loved … he started to walk towards her when a traitor gush of wind passed him and went to her and he did see the reaction that made him happy… he was very near to her and he felt the warmth of her back that made his heart warm … and then he saw her hands shaking …..

He held her hand and helped her in putting the roses in the vase …. "you shouldn't have come here .. when I had thought to surprise you …" he said as he held her hand and lit the match stick and put fire in the candel … it was like they were doing together …

"sometimes I feel happy to be a part of the work that is done for me …" geet said as she smiled …. They again lit another candel together … she had thought like litting a diya together and smiled ….

"you are looking beaituful … " he said as again both of them again put the tissue in the perfect place ….

"how do you know … you haven't yet seen me …" she said as she smiled a little … but her smile disappeared as she felt maan 's head resting on her shoulder … his breaths fanned her ear and goose bumps formed on her arms …. "to know how beautiful you look … I don't need to see you … hosanna …" he said as he let his fingures slid along her arms …

She took a deep breath and tried to control herself … she slowly freed herself from him and walked forward saying " are you trying to flirt with me maan ????" she said as she suddenly turned to him and smiled a cute one … "I don't need to .. you are already head over heals in love with me …" he said and her smile vanished …..

"what????" she asked stunned… she had not yet accepted it .. then how did he know ??? nad just then he laughed … he laughed loud and clear …. "its worth watching your face hosanna … " he said

"you were making fun ??? you were JOKING ??? DO YOU EVEN KNOW WHAT I …." She shouted suddenly … but then she turned back and tried to control her rising bile … and then she smiled a sad one .. of course he would laugh and joke … how would he know the pain when you will have to live with the pain of loosing the one you love every time you are with him …. How would he know the pain of loving the person who is very close to you but not been able to tell him …

She started to walk inside when she felt a tug on her hand … "I am sorry … I didn't mean it …" maan said … but when she didn't show any reaction he walked towards her and stood in front of her .. she had her eyes closed and her face was down .. he could very well see a thin line of tear in her lashes… without thiking he kissed the tears away from her eyes …."I don't like to see you crying … not for me at least .." he said as he held her and looked in to her eyes .. there was deep pain in her eyes … he didn't like that …

"I ruined your plans.. didn't I ???" geet asked suddenly .. as she laughed a little … as she turned her back to him and wiped away her tears and then turned to him with a smile and asked crossing her hands …. "well some one had said me that he had a surprise for me .. so is it still available or out of stock ???"

Maan was left wondering what kind of girl was she … he had just pinched her most sensitive part and here she was smiling .. how easily she had gathered herself again .. he really did feel sorry .. and thought to make it up for her …. But he was brought out of his thiking when he felt some one poking his cheast …. "hello sir …. Any one home ????"

"of course .. of course " he went and held out his hand and geet put her hand and then they walked to the table …. He sat in the chair and she was left standing and looked at him with narrow eyes … "what happened ???" he asked truly afraid by her anger mode …

"now mr.khurana will you enlighten me that where am I going to sit now ????" she asked pointing at the one chair that was occupied by maan .. he smiled a crooked one and before she could take a guess of what was going on his mind he held her waist and pulled her to his lap …. "this is the chair I had thought for you … I had asked few hours .." he reminded her as she started to argue something …..

So at last she sat on his lap and they sat eating and talking and laughing and enjoying …..

"waise I didn't get it why did we had our dinner first and then dance ???" geet asked maan as he held her hand and took her for a dance ……

"so that you get energy for what I am going to do next …." He said with a crooked smile and looking in to her eyes … she had a confused expression and asked "matlab????" and then when maan licked her lips in a single stroke and resumed his place realization dawned upon her what he ment and a dark red climbed on her cheeks ….

Tujhe Milke Laga Hai
Yeh Tujhe Dhundh Raha Tha Main

Suddenly he started singing and kept a hand on geet's waist and pulled her close … and she cae perfectly to him as if she was ment to be there …. He looked at her and started to dance on the rythems of her love …..

Tujhe Milke Laga Hai
Yeh Tujhe Dhundh Raha Tha Main

Tujh Mein Hai Kuch Aise Subah Sa
Jiski Khaatir Main Tha Jaga Sa
Aa Tu Mere Khwab Sajaa Ja Re

Geet closed her eyes and rested her head on his shoulder … and let herself drown in him …

Maahi Aaja Re Maahi Aaja Re

Tujh Mein Hai Kuch Aisi Subah Sa
Jiski Khaatir Main Tha Jaga Sa
Aa Tu Mere Khwab Sajaa Ja Re


Dil Roye Ya Ilahi Tu Aaja Mere Maahi
Dil Roye Ya Ilahi Tu Aaja Mere Maahi
Dil Roye Ya Ilahi Tu Aaja Mere Maahi
LyricsMasti.Com
Mere Maahi Mere Maahi
Tu Aaja Mere Maahi

Tujhe Milke Laga Hai
Yeh Tujhe Dhundh Raha Tha Main

Tujhe Milke Laga Hai
Yeh Tujhe Dhundh Raha Tha Main

Tujh Mein Hai Kuch Aise Subah Sa
Jisko Khaatir Main Tha Jaga Sa
Aa Tu Mere Khwab Sajaa Ja Re

Dil Roye Ya Ilahi,Tu Aaja Mere Maahi
Dil Roye Ya Ilahi,Tu Aaja Mere Maahi
Mere Maahi Mere Maahi Tu Aaja Mere Maahi
Dil Roye Ya Ilahi Tu Aja Mere Maahi

Suddenly out of no where it began to rain … geet let a laugh as she ran aay from his arms and began to dance , twirl , and jump in the rain …. As she laughed and jump so did his heart ….


Maahi Maahi Maahi
Maahi Maahi Maahi

Dhadkano Mein Maahi Saaanson Mein Hai Maahi

Tu Hi Hai Mere Dil Ki Tamanna
Teri Hi Yaadein Har Lamha
De Mujhe De Apna Aanchal
Dhoop Mein Jalta Main Harpal
LyricsMasti.Com
Tujh Mein Hai Kuch Aisi Ghata Sa
Jiske Liye Hoon Mein Pyaasa Sa
Aa Tu Meri Pyaar Bujha Ja Re

Dil Roye Ya Ilahi Tu Aaja Mere Maahi
Dil ROya Ya Ilahi Tu Aaja Mere Maahi

Mere Maahi Mere Maahi
Ho Aaja Mere Maahi Dil Roye Ya Ilahi
Tu Aaja Mere Maahi Dil Roye Ya Ilahi

Maahi Maahi Maahi Maahi Maahi Maahi

Bas Mera Tu Maahi Saaanso Mein Hai Maahi
Hain Mujhe Hai Tera Armaan Hai Tuhe Hai Mera Banna
Har Ghadi Teri Dil Mein Aahat Ttu Mile Mil Jaaye Raahat

Jud Ke Bhi Tu Mujhse Juda Sa
Mulke Bhi Tu Kya Hai Khafaa Sa
Aaaja Meri Baahon Mein Saja Re

Jud Ke Bhi Tu Mujhse Juda Sa
Milke Bhi Tu Kya Hai Khafaa Sa
Aaaja Meri Baaho Mein Saja Re

Unkown to himself he walked to her and was standing very close to her when she turned around suddenly and collided with him and was about to fall when maan held her tightly …..

Dil Roye Ya Ilahi,Tu Aaja Mere Maahi
Dil Roye Ya Ilahi,Tu Aaja Mere Maahi
Dil Roye Ya Ilahi,Tu Aaja Mere Maahi
Dil Roye Ya Ilahi,Tu Aaja Mere Maahi

It was the rain or the dance or anything but it had made the situation more romantic .. slowly and slowly he steadied her … and then she couldn't understand if it was her feelings for him , or the coldness or her unrestricted passion that lead to the kiss .. her first kiss …..

It was then as if on her own her hands went around his neck and his hold tightened on her waist … and then it was difficult to know who started it first or rather who was on whom….

Her soft lips were dominated by his harsh ones .. but they were unbelievably slow and erotic … his hands were roaming around her back and he pulled her even close to him drowning in her rose scent …..

Just then a thunder rolled and she was brought to senses … when she opened her eyes she saw maan kissing her … but then she pushed him and then covered her mouth with her palms and looked at him with horror filled eyes …. Before he could say something she ran away from there … frusturatedly he ran a hand on his hairs …..

I need to do something soon …..

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Thw whole night she was sitting on the window pane and was going through all the incidents that have happened with her since two months…. And then she got up and dialed a number

"hello .. dr .david "

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When maan came down to the hall.. he saw geet standing near the window with bags near the entrance …

"hosanna what is all these ???" he asked …he was afraid … did she choose to leave him ???? forever ???

Before she could answer his driver came inside and she said .." keep my bags in the car …"

Maan felt as if some one had ripped his heart apart … when he heard what she said ….

"are you angry on me hosanna ??? for wha ever had happened yesterday I am sorry hosanna … please don't leave me and go …" he pleaded holding her face in his palm ….

"I am not going maan .. we are going to delhi…." She said holding his hands … "you wanted me here … I am .. now I want you to come to delhi ..wont you do that for me ???"

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He shouldn't have listened to her … he decided it was better because if he wouldn't have listened to her he wouldn't have been now sitting with his damn family in a Thursday bugging his head while his hosanna was somewhere he didn't knew …

Leaving him in this zoo she had gone somewhere without informing him …. As his family was bugging him about something he just gave them an uninstred lok and got up and walked to his room .. as soon as he entered his room he could still feel his fragnance lingering ….

"maan these are your medicines .. I have given the details to aman as I don't believ your family .. he will give them to you in time … these medicines take them once in 15 days …" she said as she showed him a strip..

"bu there are only 4 .." he said

"these are the last set of medicines .. take them and get well soon …" she said ..
as she started to go he held her hand and pulled her to him …. She collided with his cheat in a violent way … he held her waist tightly …

"you are leaving me ???" he asked gritting his teeths …. And holding her waist even tightly ….

"I have to go now maan …" she said .. though the hold was painful but she was used to it by now …. She held his face and looked in to his eyes …. "I have not seen my family since ages .. I need to go to them …. And anyways we will meet after 3 months …"

"where????" he asked desperation completely visible in his voice.. but also he had control over his anger …. "will you come anytime I will ask you ????"

"when you will come for your final cheakup … " she said as a pain gripped her heart for she knew what wil be the reason and the result ….. "yes I will come to you anytime you ask .. but after 3 months …"

Slowly she entangeled herself from him slowly … and then held his hands .. this time she couldn't stop the tears that fell from her eyes …. "promise me one thing …. Never get angry on any one … or do anything in anger … promise me maan ….." she said slowly ….it was killing him with thousands arrows when he saw her tears … and how could he deny naything to her ???? "I promise …" he said ..

She smiled a little and walked out of his room .. but just as she was near the door she couldn't control her urge to see him just one and turned back and when she turned back she couldn't command her legs not to run to him and hug tim tightly because she did just that … she came running back and hugged him tightly as if she willleave him for a second she would die ….

He streached his hand trying to catch her but then realized it was his imagination of the past ….. He inhaled her trying to get close to her .. when there was a knock in hs room and aman entered ….

Aman was hi s best friend and his company's CEO … he came up to him and gave him a medicine to take …. Suddenly maan felt the need of a human and just then he felt aman's hand on his shoulders and he hugged him tight …. "you should get her back …" that was all aman said before he winked at him and walked out of his room …

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It was after 3 months that aman dragged maan to sanjeevani hospital for the cheakup .. as they along with his dadi and father were going with body guards following them suddenly he collided with a girl who was coming towards them looking down … she was about to fall down but then she regained her balance but her file fell down … murmuring a sorry she bend to take it up when again her head collided with something hard ….

"ouch !!!" she exclaimed and looked up to see maan looking at her … for a second their eyes met .. he averted his eyes and said … "look where you are going girl !!!!"

She just looked at him trying to fanthom what he had said .. but then she walked out saying a sorry never turning back ….

As they entered the cabon of dr.sasank … he accompanied them to the examination room and called for the doctor who was trating him since long ….

"mr.khurana meet dr.handa .. who was your doctor …" he said as he introduced maan with geet .. he was surprised to see the same girl with whom he had collided few minutes back as his doctor ….

She just smiled a little at him and then started to talk with shasank ,.. as they entered the room she did the tests in a complete proffezional way … and after few minutes she was ready with the reports ….

"congrats mr.khurana .. here are your reports .. every thing is normal … you don't need to continue with your medicines … and if you feel any kind of uneasiness you can contact with dr.shasank …"

That was all geet said before she turned back and walked away from them without turning back or waiting for them to say anything … she walked into her cabin and then the tears that had been caged flowed again ….. she walked to th window and saw them going .. for a second aman looked up to see her standing near the window and waved at her to which she responded with a smile and as they drove away she thought sadly ….

Indeed you have forgotten me maan….


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