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friends she got new datacard so she will update tonight or tom





Love u dear...thanks for posting my messages here!!!!!!!!!! Thankooo :))))
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GUYSSS...AG HERE... JUST TODAY I GOT MY NEW DATA CARD...SO WILL UPDATE TODAY MIDNIGHT OR TOMORROW MORNING FOR SURE...THANK U FOR ALL THE COMMENTS AND LIKES... LOVE U ALL FOR WAITING 😊
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Dear Plysh Try To Update It Today
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Thank u soo much Di...feeling really glad u likeddd ittt...Thank uuu :))))


Ofcourse it was awesome... and i completely loved it...

u r writing more in FB is it??? if so, do let me know... so that i can read them over there
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Ofcourse it was awesome... and i completely loved it...

u r writing more in FB is it??? if so, do let me know... so that i can read them over there


Yup Di...i Have another FF called Kismat Connection running over there...Its Almost 60 parts...I have a blog too...Will give the links of it with the update of KMP :)))
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waiting eagerly!!!! 😍
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waiting for the next part!!!!!!
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Part 11:

Geet pushed the Shock stricken Maan into the bed room and closed the Door in Thud, bolting the it...

She heaved a big sigh and turned to see, poor Maan Singh Khurana still standing perplexed and Petrified at the same spot , fluttering his eye lashes like the heroine's of 80's movies, when they will be kissed suddenly by the heroes...

Geet chuckled looking at his face and bit her lip...

Geet(ST): OMG...what did I just do??? She rolled her eyes and clutched her head...but why the heck did i say his name??? She questioned herself and looked at Maan, whose face looked so confused...he was just staring as if he has seen an alien , with a little frightened expression in his eyes...

For an instance, Geet really felt bad for him, nothing was intended, but her mind drifted to her Mom, her tears...the yearning in her eyes to look her daughter happy and Married...the contentment she saw in her mother's face after she blabbered about Maan's and her relationship...the enthusiasm in her paralysed form, the smile on her face, after her Father's death...made Geet think rationally...But yes...she never intended to , put now she has to act selfish...selfish to retain the smile on her mother's face...Selfish to Give her a bit of happiness, eventhough she knows its fake... and so she made a strong heart...she knows what she is doing to Maan is not justice , but now she has to somehow make him understand her situation, as she is not at all ready to loose her Mom, who is the last hope in this earth for her to live!!!!

She took a mental resolution and went near a table, pouring a glass of water , she slowly neared Maan who was intently looking at Geet only... She gulped her saliva and put up her Cruel face and extended the water casually...

Geet: Water... she brought the glass near his face and waited for a while to react... She cursed him inside her mind...sometimes this man is a way too unpredictable, she couldn't even rehearse her anticipatory dialogues for the next move!!!

Maan turned his head in a jiffy towards her with a fierceful face, making
Geet get scared a moment...Geet pulled and plastered a forcefull smile on her face and said : Water???

Maan: I AM NOT UR BOYFRIEND!!!!! He spat with a huge voice, to which Geet instinctively pressed her hand on this mouth and pushed him way from the door , blocking his voice going out of the room...

Geet: Dont shout u stupid, they might hear u!!! She retorted , still keeping her hands on his mouth, who was literally getting chocked ... she sighed a relief after checking a moment nobody heard and told: Now...continue ur Mahabharath... Im listening... she looked at him annoyingly...

Maan fumed and struggled: hhmmm...hmmm...he shook his head frantically ...

Geet got irritated:Now y are u dancing??? She glared at him , while he bit her hands tat was covering his mouth , the next moment she flinched and took out her hands, realising she was actually covering his mouth, but still retorted...

Geet: Idiot..u think Im a Non-Vegetarian Dish??? She frowned and looked at her red palms, with his bite mark...

Maan shrugged it off and replied: Sorry...I Dont Eat Pork.

Geet's eyes widened: You...You...she was about to strangle him , when

Maan stomped his foot and shouted: Am not ur boyfriend... he made a funny angry face, making Geet, perplexed whether, to react to his statement or laugh at his expressions... she keenly watched his face, when he continued his cribbing...

Maan: See...this is ridiculous, this is Female dominancy, Female Chauvinism, Male perturbation and Male harassment... he blurted out all the words in utter bewilderment of having heard, he is none other than her bechara boyfriend, for whom he prayed even before knowing...

Geet took a deep breath and looked at him irritatingly: Any words left in the Dictionary???

Maan fumed and gritted his teeth, Geet could see smoke coming out of his ears and she chuckled at bit...

Maan: Do I look like a joker to u??? This time Maan was literally serious, when Geet looked up... I said am not ur boyfriend and u cant force me...he declared...

Geet though was startled, bucked up and replied: Hmm...just few hours, before in the Car, u were giving me lectures of Humanity, Emotions, the Virtues of a Mother...U even asked me Am I Indian By Heart...Btw where is ur Humanity, when I am asking U to Fake As My Boyfriend for the Same Mother of Mine??? She burst out looking at his face , when Maan stood Perplexed...

He thought for a moment and calmly answered: I would have helped u if U are doing this for her Good, but U R Cheating Ur Mother!!! He spat back, when Geet looked at him Shocked...U are Coercing me to help u for Cheating the Person who gave life to U, Just because U think she is bugging ur head for a Marriage??? He made a disgusting face at her...U are Faking a relationship infront of her, that which every mother's dream about their Daughter's future, Mam I never thought U will stoop so Selfish... he sniffed bitterly, when Geet stood dumbstruck at his words, she was facing his back clutching the Table nearby... Jo bhi ho Mam, I know the next weapon of urs against me would be threatening for the Job, I dont care about it...U Can remove me from the Job too and prove ur self as the Queen of selfishness... And...he was about to continue, when he heard her rugged muffled voice...

Geet: ENOUGH...MR.KHURANA...She shrilled in agony, when Tears made down her eyes...but she didnt show to him...she stood still facing the wall...I-Am-Not-Cheating My Mother!!! She spat with rage, I Am Faking things to her, Cos... her voice mellowed, hicupps formed, due to submerging her tears...she roughly rubbed her cheeks and turned to him, with a red angry face and bit out ...I am faking things to her Because..I 'Dont-Want 'To 'Lose 'Her too... She cried, this time she couldn't stop her own tears,,, the hazel brown eyes, looked like a pool, with water overflowing... but still Maan could see the Pain behind her translucent tears, he stood still, he didnt expect her to explain her motive, he Rather expected her to Rate him or Threaten him about his Job...but her words has different meaning... when she continued, with her huge muffles... I Dont want to Lose My Only Living Parent...I Dont want My Mother to Die Cos Of Me, Just Like My Father Did...I-Dont-Want-To Fail the Reason Of My Living...she clutched her heart with excruciating pain reflecting in her eyes, voice and more in her words... Maan never understood her words, they seemed to tell more, but it didn't feign him...Her Father Died Because Of Her??? Her mother is her reason for Living??? He failed to understand in his happy-go-lucky brain tat , The Words Which looked like Puzzles, are going to be the Sword, that is going to pierce his heart later in his whole life...He stood Still, when She became more aggressive and Held his collar questioning him...

Geet: Tell Me Mr.Khurana...Is it wrong to Make ur mother smile, after Months she has been doomed within herself after the demise of my Father??? Is it a Crime to make her enjoy atleast a Moment of Happiness , eventhough it is Fake??? Is it Illicit for me to act before her, Just because I dont want to Loose another Person In my Life, whom I Love??? Now Tell me Mr.Khurana...Tell me...Am I Selfish To think about my Mother's Temporary Happiness, than My Own Future If I Want to??? If I would want to be selfish, I would have not cared, when she was Crying before me for Months...and was spoiling her health day by day, thinking about My future... She backed off from him and rubbed her tears, which didnt seem to stop... Maan Stood Statue hearing her meaningful words, this time...he more than better understood her pouring out..when he heard her Low Agonised Voice... I Am Not So Much Stone Hearted Mr.Khurana, to Let My Mother Cry Day and Night Before My Eyes... Maan looked at her worriedly...Ya, she is never stone hearted... he repented his words... She turned towards him again and looked into his eyes... I Know, I did wrong By Coercing U to accept My condition... I Would have Got a Hundred Men To act as My Fake Boyfriend just by throwing Piles of Money at their faces...but I Chose U...because... Her words Stopped... Maan looked at her eyes intently, searching for her answers... when Geeet looked here and there...not able to bear the intensity of his eyes, she turned making her back to face him and Whispered...BECAUSE...I TRUSTED U...she confessed , the long lost words, that she had in her mind about him, the Words seemed so alien to her just few months before, when her own Trust was butchered ruthlessly and her Feminity was put at stake...

Maan had nothing to say... he blinked his eyes not able to gather himself to hear her words of Trusting him... He never thought she would trust him soo much ever... he felt ashamed to have thought bad about her... he slowly moved her back and kept his hands on her shoulder...

Maan: Wo...Mam...Im..I will Act as... he was about to complete his sentence for repentence, when Geet pushed his hands away and turned towards his face sternly...

Geet: Its Ok...Mr.Khurana...all that is done is done... I will go and reveal the truth to My Mother... U can go Office and I assure U that, U will not be out of Ur job, Unless and Until U deserve to be fired because of ur own negligence and not for any personal Reasons , This is Geet Handa's Promise... she Moved Near the Door and Opened it indicating with her hands, for him to go out!!!

Maan rubbed his temple: (ST) Yaar..Yeh Ladki toh kabhii North Pole mein hain, Kabhi South Pole... Mana ki maine Galat kaha uske baare mein...Mujhe kya pata, mein toh dargaya tha... he scratched his head and scolded himself... Stupid Idiot, kya zaroorath hain tumhe usse Selfish aur Cheater kehne ka..., when u Very well know she is not so... How can u forget what she is to Neha??? Maan yaar, tera dimaag kyun Kharab CD ki tarah atak jaatha hain kabhi kabhi , Kuch toh Rewind karna seekhlo... he knocked his head and looked at her pale, yet red eyed face... She is Too Hurt and Tat is because Of U... His inner voice accused him, to which he made a baby face... Kuch toh kar, he told himself and spoke...

Maan: Wo , Mam...wo...he was again about to continue, when Geet turned towards him straightly and showed her hands towards the door... : Door is this way...Now Outtt!!! She gritted her teeth and was about to go out, controlling her temper, when Maan pulled her hands harshly... She got startled at a moment and banged herself onto his taut chest , her face into the crook of his neck, her tears touched and burned his bare skin in the V-opening of his shirt...

Maan: I Said Im ready to Act as ur Boyfriend... he declared, hovering her onto his torso and pressing more of her to him, so that she wont escape...Geet fiddled in his embrace and punched his chest, with her feeble fists... she felt shivers down her spine, with his pressing her more to himself in the act and shouted : Leave Me, Mr.Khurana...I dont Want Ur Sympathy... She endlessly, tried to push him off, when Maan got pissed off with her attitude... :Just listen to me..he pleaded her , while controlling her rapid moments with his hands..No...she said and pushed him off with a greater force...Maan lost his balance and was about to fall on bed, but didnt miss a chance...he clutched her shoulders too and they fell Thud on the bed, with her on the top of him...

Her small petite figure crushed into his Muscular torso, with her softness squeezing into his hard chest...she let out a loud gasp, when Maan felt a different emotion yet again with her nearby... his hands immediately clutched her waist and her face banged into his , their chin rubbing against each other... Maan Shivered with her soft skin agaist his rough stubbled cheeks...while she immediately popped her head up and looked into his eyes deeply...

The moment stopped there...everything stopped there...her teary eyes ogled onto his only to find Genuiness in his eyes... Worry for her not sympathy... she made a baby face with still hiccupping due to the remains of her cry...while the Language that his eyes spoke, formed a fresh big tear in her doe shaped eyes... he looked at her glassy tears, rolling down her milky white skin, the tears flew beside her cute red nose and stopped near her quivering lips... Maan gulped hard, his eyes fixed on the drop travelling down her face ...the vibration of her puckering lips made the Tears kiss her lips and it directly landed on Maan's M-Shaped ones... Geet fluttered her eye lashes and looked down at his to locate her tears has safely landed on his lips , Maan smiled a little looking at her puppy face... he probed his tongue out and seductively sucked his lips, drinking her Tear pearls, making her gasp and redden side by side.. He chuckled at her cherry red face, when she turned away, still laying on him... the moment was not awkward, but of shyness... but Maan is Maan...he tried to clear out the embarrassment and spoke up...

Maan: Its..its not Sympathy... Geet again turned to him with a serious face... Its not sympathy, But am doing this For ... he looked at her eyes and stopped for a moment... the next word seemed so difficult for him to tell, as he was fighting within himself... His heart shouted at him to say the truth ..that He is doing it For HER!!! But his mind stopped his getting scared of her reaction and his own change of emotions... Geet looked at his lips in utmost anticipation of him saying the word "U" ...she dont know, y...but she wanted him to say , that he is doing it for HER.. her heart was pounding faster each and every minute , some where inside her praying desperately to god, to hear the word "U" from his mouth... Maan could feel the fluttering of her heart, so was his... He shook his head for a moment...What am I thinking...??? he chided himself and looked at her anticipatory face...Though he didnt want to disappoint her...he didnt want to seed a false hope in her mind..and he is not the person to play with other's feelings...espcially Geet, as he Genuinely liked her...

Maan: Am doing this For UuuR Mother!!! He declared, after much coaxing his heart, when Geet's face immediately fell... Though she was happy he agreed to her plan, she felt disappointed for something.. she got irritated and scorched her nose at him and pushed him sideways and got up sitting on the bed...

Maan made a puppy face...:(ST): Now Y is she making a big face?? Chaddo...yeh aur iski mood swings... Bhagwan jaane, what if she really gets pregnant...God save her future Husband...( Maan babu again letting his prayers not knowing that is himself!!! Lolzzz)

Both were sitting facing each other's back, when Maan broke the silence: Buttt...I Have Conditions... he spoke up suddenly...

Geet turned with an annoyed face like now-what...she sighed and asked: U want me to Transfer HAC to ur name, for the Great help U are going to do to me??? She asked sarcastically, when Maan shrugged it off..

Maan: Oh...tats not needed.. he said casually...

Geet: Then what Mr.Mahraj wants exactly for the big Service he is gonna do???

Maan: Well...I have many conditions... Hmm the First is...Stop calling Me..Mr.Khurana he looked into her face and said authoritatively...

Geet chuckled a bit..(ST): this is his so called Condition.. she looked at him disbelievingly...and said: Then What should I call u??? Door Darshan...??? she muffled her laughter and looked at his funny angry face...

Maan: My Second Condition...Dont Call me Door Darshan... he declared, when she nodded her innocently and said: So..Mr.X wat is ur next condition???

Maan: Mr.X??? he looked at her confusingly...

Geet:Then Wat...U dont want me to call u Mr.Khurana, Or with the beautiful name Door Darshan... So only,,,i will call u Mr.X... she replied making a naive face, making him fume..

Maan: Dekhiye...My name is Maan... he retorted and said My next condition is Dont Give me Unexpected Nose Cuts like tis ... he pouted his face cutely..when Geet murmered :Sorry cant help... U r too cutely stupid at times.. she giggled inwardly and nodded her head yet again...

Maan: Next Condition is... He tapped his fingers on his chin, thinking ...
Geet(ST): He is thinking as if he is going to frame conditions for Negotiation deals between countries...ufff...
Maan: Haan...I will Use the Office Lift and U are not going to stop me...

Geet glared at him: Mr.Khurr...she was about to continue, when Maan glared at her back... she smiled weakly and said I mean..Mmaan...this is personal deal, not a professional one..it has nothing to do with office...

Maan shrugged of his shoulder : Mujhe nahi pata...Then am not agreeing to ur Deal.. he made a face...
Geet felt like strangling him for his stupid condition, when he continued..: Hm...Next is...

Geet muttered:Dont squeeze ur pea sized brain too much...anyways u are going to ask , add Pickle to the Canteen cooking list...I need a cushioned seat to sit in the Office...blah..blah... Wat can I even expected from this Specimen...arghhh...she sighed and said: Maan I am Waiting!!!
Maan scratched his head and finally spoke: Hmm..My last condition is... he trailed his words, when Geet sighed...

Geet(ST): ATlast...his LAST had come...
Maan: As for now am not able to think anything interestingly like my other three conditions, so whenever I get one, I will add to the list... and this is my Las condition... he declared raising his collar, as if he has done a big achievement , when Geet looked at him hopelessly...

Geet(ST): This man is never gonna change...God help me to tolerate this Weird case... she prayed silently and said: Wah Maan...Ur Condtions are really unique...and if U are over with it..Can me move out...My mother must be waiting!!!
Maan nodded enthusiastically and followed Geet, out to her Mother's bed room!!!

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The moment they entered the room, all got startled with Maan's sudden voice...

Maan: Mummmyyy ji... he extended his arms towards Rano and hugged her tightly...making Rano get shocked literally ...Rano+Sharda (ST): Mummy ji??? They blinked getting confused..

Geet hit her head (ST): Oh..Fish..!! how did I Forget about his Over acting...Gosh...Please dont make him screw up!!! She prayed literally...

Maan to Rano: Kyun apne aapko kyal nahi rakthe aap... ??? he asked dramatically with a worried face...Rano chuckled...Geet didnt understand his words and spoke: Honey Speak In English, ur cutie pie wont understand otherwise... she forced a Smile and sat near him Gripping his shoulders, almost piercing her nails...

Maan smiled weakly: Chudali kahin ki...lagta hain Zindagi baar keliye, mujhe iski Dictionary banker rahna padege...uff...

Maan: Woo..Gggeee... he slurred his words, getting scared to call her name... when Geet purred into his years..

Geet: When did u start getting problem in speaking...Its Geet...call me by name... she whispered, when Maan sighed in relief..
Maan: Geet...I was saying Mummy ji to take care of her health... he smiled bitterly and turned to Rano...making a very serious face...

Rano and Sharda smiled at their antics, clearly understanding the Situation...

Rano: Beta...now U and Geet both are there to take care of me na,,,so I will be perfectly alright...dont worry... she smiled sweetly adding salt to the fresh wounds, when Maaneet smiled helplessly...

Maan was about to sharpen his acting skills, when Geet ogled into his ears..: Now enough...U have acted more than wat i asked for , Now shut up and Get lost!!! She purred into his ears dangerously , when Maan made a puppy face...

Maan: Mummy ji...I have an important work at office..Mein chaltha hoon...he tried to get up...

Rano: arrey Atleast have Lunch and Go beta... she offered...
Maan smiled, enthusiastically, when Geet interrupted..

Geet: No Mom..he has an important work at office, Maan..come to My Room...i will give u the files... she literally rolled her eyes threatening him, he gulped his saliva and followed her like a puppy...

They reached the corridor, when Geet spat: What is the use of Over reacting that much...!! ..thank god, they didnt find out...ufff... she held her forehead, when he made a crying face...and Wat did u call??? Mummy ji...U Idiot, she is MY Mother... she said possessively, when Maan's eyes widened seeing her behind her...

Maan: Ssshh...Shsshh... he tried to signal him, when she got conscious...

Geet: What??? She whispered looking at his bewildered face..

Maan: ur Mom n Aunt are coming towards us...

Geet thought for a moment and pushed him close to her and whispered : Hold me...and say some sweet lines...

Maan: huh?? He looked at her confusingly...
Geet: duffo were are BF-GF so, hold me nearby and say some sweet and romantic lines...

Maan immediately nodded and held her by her shoulders in one hand and the other hand on her waist...

Geet: hmm...now say some Sweet lines...fast... she urged him

Maan blinked for a moment: But I..I Dont know any of such...

Geet sighed: ufff...god...whom did u make me stuck with??? Ok... call me something like Honey, Sugar bunch, pie..like tat ... she tried to make out , when Maan nodded...he thought for a moment deeply and it dawned him...Rano and Sharda were standing behind a wall and seeing the both intently...

Maan smiled energetically and held on to her and said : Geet...U are My Honey Bunch..

Geet was awed by his confidence and said: Yes..Go on...I m listening..she said loudly ...

Maan: U are MY honey buch, Sugar plum...
Pumpy-umpy-umpkin...U are My sweetie pie...

Geet eyes widened in shock, for having heard this lyrics some where...while Maan continued with a proud smile on his face...

Maan: You are My Cuppy cake , Gum drops..smoogums..bhoogums
You are the apple of my eye!!! He smiled cutely , while she nodded
her head in negative...

Geet: Maan stop it!!! She pleaded silently ,when he frowned...

Maan: ssshh!!! Lagta hain, they are so impressed with me...they are smiling hearing my lines...dont disturb my acting let me continue...

Maan: And I Love U so..I want U know...
That I'll always be right here ..And I... he was about to continue,when Geet pulled him into a tight hug and shouted : Ohhh...honey, howww Sweet offf u!!! She shouted enough for Rano and Sharda to hear and punched Maan's back gritting her teeth...

Maan : ouch...Maan flinched ...

Geet: Idiot, Come out right now...I want to kill u..with that she broke the hug, walked off followed by Maan making a puppy face...
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The moment they went out, Rano held her stomach and laughed her hearts out...

Sharda: Rano..tu has kyun rahe ho??? How sweetly he called her with those names... Sharda smiled dreamily...

Rano: Di...he was saying a Nursery rhyme..not his own words to her...hahahahaha...How cute of him... she laughed again,when Sharda smiled: Yeh ladka bhi na...He is too innocent!!! They went in to get their next plan ready...

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Maan was sitting with his head looking down on a Park Bench, near Geet's house, when she was roaming restlessly...

Geet: I Cant Believe, U said a Nursery Rhyme to Impress Ur Girlfriend... Ridiculous...She shouted frustratingly, when Maan frowned...

Maan: Correction Fake Girlfriend...he retorted..

Geet chuckled: Yes...Fake Girlfriend...I pity ur real one!!! Arghhh... Gosh...Seriously...U dont know any such words , like how boys call their girlfriends??? She asked him doubtingly, when Maan pursed his lips and nodded in negative...

Geet thumped on the bench near him and slammed her heads: God...Y me??? She looked at the sky and make an irritating face at him, when he pouted, getting little insulted...

Maan: Look..I can try another something good if u want... Im Not so hopeless...

Geet sighed : Something good??? What was that??? She said deciding to give him one more chance...

Maan smiled enthusiastically...and said: Kiss Me!!!!...

Geet's eyes widened in Shock: Pardon??? She was about to pounce on him, when he nodded his head continuously...

Maan: Hey...wait...listen to the full content... he pleaded...

Geet rolled her eyes and looked at him...

Maan: Kiss Me... Close Ur Eyes...
Miss Me...Close ur eyes... he said with a notorious smile on his eyes...

Geet: I Can Wet Ur Lips and Ur Finger tips...
Happiness In Ur Eyes...

She continued the lyrics sarcastically giving a killer look to him... he chuckled making a baby face...

Geet stood up frustratingly making a crying face : This is it...Nothing is going to happen with U Mr...Arghhh...this is the heights...I cant believe U are now singing the lyrics of the Diary Milk Ad... she hit her own head in helplessness...

Geet: god...I got his name, to say infront of My mother...?? she turned to Maan, who was looking at her face worriedly...

Geet: I could have rather called a Kinder garten Stundent...than U...!!!

Maan shrugged his shoulders pursing his lips tight...

Geet turned in a jiffy...: Now..Listen Mr.Maan Singh Khurana... U Beg, Borrow ,Steal some romantic lines...otherwise am going to eat ur head off..She declared...and started to walk away...

Maan blinked helplessly and asked : Wo...CAN I GOOGLE IT??? He asked making an innocent face, when Geet looked at him as if he is an alien...

She cursed herself for her fate and looked at him pathetically and nodded her head walking off...Leaving Maan to once again claim Profanities on her!!!

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Days went by with the BoyFriend-Girl Friend play infront of Rano and Sharda, but Maan never came home after that, rather Geet didnt let him inside the house, feigning he would screw up everything...

Geet acted like speaking romantically with him, through the phone, when Rano and Sharda will see her ..While most of the times, Maan will be sleeping on the other side hearing her Fakish sentence... for him, She is
Real Geet, when she scolds him, when she gets frustrated with him and when she would fight with him... he would never speak back, he would just yawn and listen to her bickering...

Rano and Sharda were keenly listening to them... there is not even a percent increase in Maaneet's relationship as they wanted to be... after thinking of so many times, they drafted a plan..This time..these two cannot escape from their Plan...

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It was A Sunday... Khurana house had all the members present as in usual weekends...

Maan was slowly and steadily peeping into a room...
He smiled wickedly looking at the small figure, emerging out of the bathroom, with just a towel wrapped around...looking so fresh!!!

Maan's eyes had a naughty glint in his eyes and he pounced at the figure!!!!
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Ting Tong...

The bell rang twice, when Dadima who was sitting in the Living room opened the hall...

When Two ladies,entered..with one Lady in a wheel chair...
Dadima Smiled at Sharda and welcomed her whole heartedly...giving her a small hug...

Dadi: kitne din hogayi Sharda..ab aaj achanak se...I am very happy to see u!!!

Sharda smiled at the old lady and introduced Rano to her... Dadiji..yeh Meri Choti behen hain...London se ayi hain...Dadima greeted her lovingly when Sharda continued without delaying...hmm wo Dadiji...kuch khas visit hain ...hum aapke Maan keliye Rishta lekar aayi hain..humari Geet ke saath... she took out Geet's photo and gave it to puzzled Dadima... wo dono ek doosre se pyar karthe hain Dadiji..

Dadi: kya????? Dadima's eyes widened in shock at the sudden revelation , wen Payal, and Annie, stood rooted at the door step, with Anjali blinking at the guests...

Without wasting time , Annie took the photo from Sharda and peeped into it... She looked at Payal with her big smile, showing her 32 teeths... when Payal shouted enthusiastically...

Payal: Dadima...Humein pata hain Maan Ke Love story ke baare mein... pehle se... Annie and Payal jumped intot their conversation , when Anjali plucked one of the photos shouting Thathi...!!!!

Maan's room:
Maan ran to his room , after pulling the towel off the small figure and climbed on to his bed...

Maan: Rahul badnaam hua...Darling Mereliye... he danced on the bed, with a towel in his hand...smiling wickedly at Rahul..

Rahul: Chachu...mera Towel dedo...he was liteally begging Maan, as Maan stole his towel,making him stand just in his boxers...

Maan: nahi..bacha...this is the punishment for u...tune mera saara mobile balance ko khatam kardiya...Girlfriends sey baat kar rahe the na...wait..I will tell to Bhabhi... he was about to shout Bhabhi...when Anjali came running..

Anjali: Thathu...dekho..Thathi ki photo... aapka Shaadi haina...she smiled blushingly and gave Maan the photo, when too peeped in confusingly...

Maan's and Rahul's eyes widened in shock and both shouted at the same time: Naheee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Maan looked at Rahul's face sceptically..but this is not the time to action, but reaction...they both ran to the Living room to see Dadima , Payal,
Annie talking happily with Rano and Sharda..

Maan stood at the spot gulping hard, when Rano saw him...
Rano: aao Maan beta...tum Ghar par ho??? She smiled sweetly , muffling her smile...

Maan smiled weakly : Mumm'nahi..Auntyji..aap yahan...he asked making a baby face...

Rano: Tum Mujhe pehle hi tarah Mummy ji bula sakthe ho??? Aapke parivar ko sab kuch pata hain.. she smiled genuinely making Maan's eyes widen in shock...

He bit his lips, to get a glare from Dadima, while Payal and Annie looked at him teasingly...

Maan(ST): yeh sab wo chudail ke vaja se hain... he made a crying face... he pressed Geet's numbers in his mobile, while it was ringing continuously...

Maan(ST): Witch...Mere ghar mein toofan bejdiya...aur wo khud ghar pe sorahi hain... he flared his eyes and fumed...kya karoo... he scratched his head and thought...
Idea...he smiled Wickedly... He went a little apart and Recorded the speech of Rano and Sharda sitting with his family and talking about their marriage and saved it...

He clicked the forward button for MMS...
Maan(ST): ab dekho chudail...Teri Ragini MMS... he gritted his teeth and forwarded the message to Geet...
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Geet came out of the shower, wiping her head,when she saw nobody in the house... she rolled her eyes and saw her mobile blinking continuously...

She hit her head having put it in a silent mode and opened the MMS sent by Maan...

Her eyes widened in shock...she hit her head: OH Fish!!! now what will I do...

She was fiddling when she received a text following...
MY LIFE IN DANGER !!! START IMMEDIATELY...

Disclaimer: I AM NOT INTERESTED TO MARRY A LADY HITLER!!!

And this was the final blow...Geet gritted her teeth shouted Maaan!!!!!!!!!!!
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Precap:

It was after Lunch, When Maan declared to go to Office, as it was a Special Lunch invitation from Rano to Maan ...

Maan had a hearty lunch, when Geet was confused with the thoughts...her mom seemed to react as if she is so unsure about their Drama... no..she wont let them doubt know...

Maan: Ab mein Chalta hoon... he stood up and walked towards the door, when Geet, pulled him aside...

Geet: Maan..Do as i say... she said sensing Rano and Sharda looking at them ...peeping from the door...

Maan: Tell me something new...Am only doing Wat u are saying from the day, I fell into ur clutches...he replied irritatingly...

Geet: before I kill u...listen to me carefully...she spat... he nodded his head helplessly... now...go out...open the door...and then peep inside the door again... I will be standing infront of u...Just..Cup my face in ur hands and...and.. she hesitated... and bring ur face closer to mine...Like...K..Kissing..ok??? she said reluctantly, when Maan blushed...Kissing??? he asked lowering his head...

Geet hit her head: Idiot..i said like Kissing..not real Kiss...Now hear me properly..I will Kill u if u do Tat..we are just going to fake a kiss..
Maan frowned and nodded his head...and went out... he kept his legs outside the door and peeped in, balancing his hands on the wooden frame of the door... he looked at the door confusingly...

Maan(ST): yeh door itni chipk chipk kyun hain??? He shrugged off without knowing the servant has put the Oil polish on the door for making it shine and lowered his head to Geet, and cupped her face with one hands...moving his head towards her lips, gulping hard...

The Next moment, his hands slipped of the door and his lips smacked hers tighly and both rolled on the floor, their lips glued together...!!!
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Edited by alwayzzgurti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
me first yipppeee..awsome update wht hsppenedin the pqst which results in geet father dath...unfold dis part sooon...nd geet getting emo as she ws hurted by maan words...tooo goood...nd mummyji part ws lyk hahahahaha lolzzz laughng lyk hel wht a part..nd geet mom nd aunt knows everything ..nd maan romantic lines...hahahaha nursery rhymes lolzzzxzzz...nd geet family come to maan houseasking o deir rishta nd rahul nanga punga nd both deir reaction nahioii nd maaneet kushadi or hj rahegi ab toh gye maaneet nd maan nr mms bana kar geet kjsend kr diya nd pecap hahahahaha lolzzz
Edited by uteem - 13 years ago
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Lovely update..
First her sudden outburst to maan was so emotional..
i think she dont want maan to think wrong abt her..
Maan actually sang nursery song..!!that was hilarious..
So rano s all set to make them marry...
Precap s just wow!!
Superb dear..

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