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ok dear...take ur time...we are waiting for ur update on thursday...
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Guys a very big thank u for all who supported me a lot by pressing the like button , who gave beautiful comments...keep encouraging me like this throughout the journey of Khatta Meeta Pyar!!!!!

Part 9 :

It was nearly 10 days in Lonavla...the ad film shooting is almost over..with little Neha becoming a ladli of everyone almost...especially her bonding with her new mother Geet is something impeccable...

Maan on the other hands never leaves a chance to irritate his boss, yet...he is not knowing that he is irresistibly falling for her sweet nature hidden inside her hitler attitude...but yet..he will not show out...never-ever...

Geet found it really surprising to herself...but she felt Maan's company nice...and she definitely felt a kind of comfort with him...but yet...she loves to give him unexpected nose cuts, now teaming with Neha..her little world

The small angel indeed brought a new phase in Geet's life...she didnt touch her cursed diary to fuel her revenge...nor she didnt think of her cursed past...all she completely forgot during these 10 days...with Maan and Neha nearby her...

It was the last day of shoot, and it seemed like a funeral...nobody was happy with Neha going away from them..the little life has breathed happiness into the whole unit...they all gave their gifts and blessed her...but the more affected was Geet...she didnt think of this departure before showering her love on Neha..now she herself is not knowing how to react...Maan sensed her mood and decided not to irritate her further...the three boarded the flight, with Neha sleeping on Geet... this Time..Maan switched his Seat belt without any further intimation... Geet smiled slightly...remembering his antics happend last week...at Lonavla...

FLASHBACK..

It was one such day, when Geet , Came from her shower, to find no Neha near the crib...fear shook her a minute, but she knows...she will be here somewhere, as all the crew members are so fond of her...she immediately changed and went for searching her...

She searched the whole cottage, but Neha was no where...she felt tears clogging her eyes...she was about to knock Maan's door for help, when she heard a funny voice...

She slowly opened the door of his room...thankfully it was not locked...she was curious to find what is happening...she moved into find the voice was none other than Maan's and its coming from the bathroom...

She knows peeping into someone's bathroom is not at all a good habit...but she could hear Neha's giggling...she slowly opened the already half closed door to see the shock of her life...

Maan : Tip...Tip...barsa Pani... Maan was wearing only a short, with no vest...carrying Neha in his hands...his upper body fully exposed,and wet cos of standing under the hot shower... Geet gulped hard looking at his physique...her face involuntarily turned crimson red getting embarrassed, but her thoughts were stopped by the funny voice
again...

Maan cooed Neha who giggled under the warm shower : Tip...tip..barsa pani...Pani mein Heater lagayi... he did funny steps making Neha laugh her heart out...

Geet controlled her laughter, eager to see what he is upto...

Maan: Heater..nahi laga hai toh...Baby ko bukhar aajayegi... he sang in the same music and made the Baby sit in the bath tub...he took the foam from it and made a white moustache on his face and a spike...making himself looking damn funny...

Geet clutched her stomach to control her laughter... OMG...he is crazy... she held the door tightly...to steady herself...

Maan: Tujhe sardi lag gayi toh... he stretched his tune according to the original song... wo chudail mujhe zinda nahi chodegi... he splashed water on Neha, who splashed it to on his return...

Maan: Agar tu bhi batao baby...Mein kya karooo... he swirled Neha around and danced inside the tub...with Neha on his chest...tickling her...

Geet almost stopped...she couldn't control anymore...she laughed loudly,,,distracting his song composition moment with Neha... Maan's eyes opened wide and he immediately looked up to see Geet clutching her stomach and laughing like a mad... he fumed in embarrassment and suddenly found cold...thats when he realised he is just standing in his shorts alone...he shrieked...

Maan: Maaammm !!!! u gate crashed my bathroom... he held his hands over his chest protectively making a baby face at Geet...

Geet suddenly stopped laughing and looked at him seriously : Pardon..

Maan: Pardon..nahi...how can u just come inside the bathroom of an young man...??? what will happen to my dignity...??? if people see it??? He asked very seriously...making Geet faint in his words...

She blocked her laughter at his statement...and gave him a stern look...

Geet: Mr.Khurana...if u have forgotten let me tell u...i am the girl here...not u... she gave a pathetic look to him from top to bottom with a small smirk and bend down to take Neha...who was fully drenched in foam...

Geet: Baby...come to me...she stretched her hands towards Neha...if u be with this over reacting material u will get his trait.. she smugged her laughter and was about to carry Neha, when Maan stomped his legs fuming in anger...

The intensity of his kick , made the water splash on Geet's face , she immediately jolted straight giving him a deathly glare...she is three fourth drenched...

Maan's teeth typed reverently...looking at her glare...

Maan(ST): hailaa...bewaja meine soti hui monster ko jaga diya...ab kya karoo??? He looked here and there..to find a solution, to escape from her wrath..but nothing seemed to work out now...

Geet's look pierced him and she moved towards him dangerously... his legs, involuntarily stepped out of the bath tub and moved towards the corner...

He could feel smoke coming out of Geet's ears...he gulped hard...

Maan(ST): Maan..beta...tu toh gaya...aaj kam se kam..ek thappad confirmed... he closed his eyes getting scared ...Geet smirked at his poor face and the next minute...he found like ice rolling on his body...

He opened his eyes in horror, to find the cold shower, which was splashing on his from five corners of the room...he shivered not able to realise what happened..when he heard a voice...

Geet: Enjoy the cold shower Mr.Khurana... she laughed and ran taking Neha...making Maan take a cold shower in freezing climate of Lonavla...

Maan searched the switch of the shower...: Witch..kahin ki... Aaahhh!!!! His body jittered in cold and the rest of the day...he could be seen in a double sweater and a monkey cap...with gloves in his hands, with stuttering voice and jittering teeth...making the Geet laugh non stop at him...

END OF FLASHBACK...

The announcement of the landing of the flight, made Geet come out of Lonavla...she saw Neha sleeping still and Maan was also sleeping like a child...dangling his head to the other side...

She smiled lightly and poked his shoulder : Mr.Khurana...
He shrugged her fingers and slept even more happily...

Geet rolled her eyes...she pulled his ears and shouted into his ears : Mr.Khuranaaa !!!

Maan jolted terrified and looked here and there...not able to contemplate what happened and turned to look at Geet's smirking face...

He gave a puppy face expression and rubbed his eyes..muttering profanities to her... hearing the second announcement...they reached the exit and found a car waiting for them...They got into the car and directly went to the HAC to finish some important work there...

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They reached the office at 10am and finished the details regarding the shoot and the payment for the unit...Maan offered to take Neha back home by himself...but Geet stopped...

Geet: Mr.Khurana..i would like to come and drop Neha personally...

Maan sighed : Par mam..its ok...

Geet fumed : let me remind I am the boss here...she spoke with attitude...if u are coming with me or not..i know to find the way...she took Neha and dashed out of the room...when Maan followed her helplessly...

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It was a Saturday...Annie was hearing music in her mobile on the terrace of their house, while Payal was putting clothes to dry...little Anjai was helping her mother...while Rahul was playing with his Aeroplane doll..a typical evening in Khurana house hold...

Suddenly a white Merci passed their house, gaining Annie's attention...

Annie: Bhabhi..dekhiye...humari colony mein..itna mehenga car...kon ho saktha hain... she along with Payal looked down..where the car stopped near Hetal aunty's residence...

Payal: pata nahi...Hetal chachi ke ghar ke saamne khadi hain... they both looked down interestingly...as it is a very rare occasion too see such a big car, coming into their colony...which is filled with only middle class people...

Anjali peeped in with her mother, while Rahul shrieked seeing the big car...he was about to run down to the car, when Annie clutched his hand..with her eyes wide looking at the person getting out of it...

Anjali: Maa...Thathu hain... she smiled with her fallen teeths , when Annie and Payal couldn't believe what they are seeing...

Annie: Par..bhai ne ek phone bhi nahi kiya..that he is coming back from Lonavla...

Payal nodded her head, when Anjali exclaimed making a baby face...: maa...mujhe thathu ke paas jaana hain...

Annie chided: Sssh!!! Chup kar..chachu ke chamchi...chup chap yahi khadi raho...

Anjali made a puppy face, while Rahul giggled at her...

Maan stood outside the car, nervously looking here and there... he actually forgot to tell about his arrival to the family..he clasped his hands together...and went aside opening the other side door...

He took smiling Neha from Geet and Geet darted her legs out of the car to get down...

Payal: Annie...dekho...he has come to drop Neha... she affirmed, when Annie shook her head disbelievingly...

Annie: Nahi..bhabhi...sirf Neha Nahi...

Payal turned to see a gal getting down the car with a high heel...her back was only visible to them, she was wearing a white T-shirt fitted to her figure correctly with a denim blue jean...her hair was tied into a pony and her skin was glistening in the evening sunlight...

Payal: Arrey...yeh ladki kon hain...Devar ji ke saath...
Rahul : Maa...chachu ki Girl friend hogi...he said very carefully looking at Geet dreamily...making Payal and Annie get shocked in his comment...
Annie giggled: bhabhi...aapki beta...bahot tez hain...

Payal rolled her eyes and they turned their attention to Maaneet again...
The colony street was rugged..it was one of the old tenement of that area...due to heavy rain...the grounds were so slippery... Geet got out the car, the next minute, she almost slipped cos of her tip heel...when Maan held her waist at the perfect time preventing her from fall...
Payal and Annie gasped looking at them...

Annie: hayee...live love story... she said with a big eyes, when Payal nodded in affirment...

Maan's hand was still in her hips clutching it hardly...Geet invariably kept her hands on his shoulder to straighten herself...they both stood there a minute, with his hands still intact with her waist...Geet breathed little hard and mumbled a thank u hesitantly, making Maan withdraw his hand and she took Neha in her arms...still her back was facing to the spectators of the Khurana family...

Anjali lost her patience: Maa...Mujhe thathi ko dekhni hain...

Annie: Chachi??? She asked skecptically...

Anjali: Haan..bua...wo thathu ko Lovel (lover) hain toh...meli Thathi (Chachi) hain na... she said a little blushing at the word Lover...

Payal closed her mouth looking at her very smart children...

Annie: wah...Anji...very nice improvement... she smirked at the shocked Payal, bringing her back to reality...

Payal: yaar...meri jitani dikthi kaise hain... this Maan is blocking her... she said getting irritated with Maan...who was clearly blocking Geet, with his torso...

Annie nodded getting impatient, when Rahul reacted...

Rahul: oye...chachu...hato...humein..chachi ko...he was about to shout more getting pissed off, when Annie closed his mouth ...

Annie: oye..chup kar..bhai se marvayogi hain kya??? She chided him...

Maan stopped for a moment and looked here and there...he felt like he heard some noise...he peeped at his own house getting suspicious, when
Annie and Payal ducked their heads, along with Anji and
Rahul...thankfully escaping getting caught...

Annie sighed: bach gayi...Rahul ka bacha..dobara muh khol..mein tumhe... she made an angry face, while Rahul nodded his head getting scared...

The four again peeped out just their eyes caught the most beautiful sight...

Geet was tickling Neha and making her laugh...her hair was flowing gently in the wind..and it strocked Maan's face gently,making him get lost in her fragrance for a second...he smiled at both...who were giggling and playing...Neha kissed Geet's face umpteenth number of times and
Geet hugged her tightly making a very cute face...making Annie,Payal, Anji and Rahul amaze at her beauty...

Annie: Bhabhi...Maan bhai wali bhabhi..toh bahot cute nikli...she said smiling...

Rahul: Aur hot bhi... he said dreamily with a big eyes...making Payal slip her balance a minute...

Annie turned Rahul's ears...Aaahhh...he made a puppy face , when Anji giggled...

Maan slowly traced his fingers on his face, reaching her hair spread across his face and removed it, brushing it on his face...inhaling her exotic scent...

Geet turned to dazed Maan: shall we go?

Maan nodded his head and guided her to Hetal aunty's house...

Anji: lo..thathi..andal chaligayi... :( she made a sad face...while Payal exclaimed...

Payal: Annie...mujhe lagta hain...picture abhi bhi bakki hain...

The four waited again on the terrace, to catch the glimpse of the live love
story again...

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They rang the door bell and a lady in late 60's opened the door...

Neha smiled at her Nani and jumped from Geet's hand to her, when the old lady welcome them and asked them to have a seat...

Hetal aunty looked at Geet sceptically and at Maan...she gave a knowing smile and asked Maan...

Hetal: beta...yeh kon hain??? She smiled at Geet...who blinked not understanding what the lady is talking...

Maan somewhat understood her look and said : Chachi..yeh meri bo....he was about to say, when the old lady cut him off...

Hetal: haan...haan...pata hain...yeh teri wo haina... samaj gayi...she blushed a moment and winked at him...

Geet nuded Maan: what is she saying???

Maan glared at her and turned to Hetal: nahi..nahi..wo...

Hetal: koi baat nahi...sharmao mat...

Geet again pinched Maan: what is she saying???
Maan again shrugged it off...

Maan: Chachi..aap jo soch rahi hain..waise nahi...

Geet lost her patience...she pulled his collar, which didnt go unnoticed by Hetal's eyes...

Geet: i asked u what is she saying..she whipered...

Maan gritted his teeth: chup hoja chudail...he spat in a low tone, making Geet more confuse at what he is saying... but she kept quiet seeing Hetal...

Maan: Chachi...mere baat suniye...

Hetal: arrey chodo...ab yeh batao...Neha ne bahot sataya, aap dono ko?? She diverted the topic thinking tat Maan is getting shied... she cuddled Neha into her lap lovingly and asked...

Maan: nahi..nahi...Chachi...humare Neha toh..bahot pyaari hain...he ruffled the baby's hair, while Geet smiled understanding something...

Maan turned to Geet: Mam..u wanted to tell them something...??? Maan asked to Geet who was busily looking at Neha with a forlorn look...

She turned her head and looked at Maan with a different emotional face...Maan was taken back a minute...

Geet: Will...u...please...translate her, what am i saying??? Se asked with her eyes stinging with tears...

Maan nodded in affirmation, looking at her serious face...

Geet held Hetal's hand : Maa... her voice trailed...Please consider me...as ur daughter...like Neha's mom... Maan looked at her amazed...he never thought she could speak like this... i know i cant replace Neha's mother's role in her life...but still i would want to do tat...if i would have got a chance...i would have adopted her as my daughter...but here...the Indian law doesn't permits it... she shook her head, and looked at Hetal helplessly...Maan was left dumbfounded ... but i would like to take part in this angel's every small happiness in her life...please give me that opportunity...i would like to be her guardian and take care of her needs throughout her life...Maa...will u please give me that chance... Tears rolled out of Geet's eyes... she wiped it with a smiling face and looked at Hetal hopingly...

Maan didnt know how to react...he was yet again flattened by this woman...who is a complete enigma to him...his body shivered looking at her greatness... Geet turned towards him, like indicating him to translate...she took Neha in her lap and strocked her hairs, kissing her lovingly...

Maan felt his voice clogged..he explained whatever Geet said with a heavy heart to Hetal...he couldn't control,but his own eyes were getting moistened...

The old lady looked at Geet with gratitude... she got up from her place and hugged Geet tightly with tears... and kept her hands on Geet's head...

Hetal: humesha kush raho bte...bhagwan tum dono ko kabhi alag mat kare... she caressed Maan's face too , while Maan blinked at her words..not knowing how to react...

Geet hugged her smilingly and asked Maan...: Wat is she saying??
Maan looked at her and shook his head in denial (st) : Maan..bete...dont tell her the truth...phir jwalamukhi phat jayegi...

He smiled weakly : she...jussst...blessed u... she stammered...

Geet didnt care of it...she called her driver and he brought all the play things to Neha that Geet has bought...they stayed there for sometime and

Geet expressed Hetal she is getting late...
Maan: Chachi..humein abhi chalna chaiye...

Geet bent down and took her blessing and gave her a cheque : This is for My Neha...its for her hardwork and for cooperating with us in the shooting... she kissed Neha and gave it to Hetal...

Maan explained it and they both took a leave... Geet stopped for a moment and kissed Neha umpteenth number of times and ran out of the house controlling her tears...

Rahul, who was desperately waiting for Geet almost shouted...

Rahul: Maa...bua...Chachi..aagayi...
The foursome again peeked the terrace wall to see what it is happening...

Geet closed her face and turned away wiping her tears...while Maan came from back...he hesitantly kept his hands on her shoulders, which were shivering now...

Maan: Mam..its alright...she is fine..dont worry..i will take care of her... he tried to put some soothing words to her...
Geet nodded understanding and turned to Maan with a tear trailed face...
Geet: Will u promise me to do a favour??? She asked with a hopeful face...
Maan nodded confusingly...

Geet: Will u bring me to Neha...whenever i wanted to see her??? She asked controlling her tears...

Maan was yet again amazed...: he smiled lightly and clutched her hands tightly sealing his promise to bring make a now turned mother..to reach her newly found daughter...

Geet smiled with tears and gave his a quick bear hug...encircling her arms around his neck...

Maan gasped at the sudden hug...his body became electrocuted for a second...this is something a new found feeling...he has never had any gal hugging him...he actually stunned and blushed for a second...

Haaa...!!!! this was all the reaction of the Four khuranas who were watching them stealthily...

Annie shied: Bhabhi...yeh dono...humare ghar ke izzat colony mein uda rahe hain... arrey dono...car ke andher jaake romance karna... she s**ttered blushing a little...with their audacity...

Payal giggled at Annie's comment, while Rahul got instantly jealous of his beautiful chachi hugging his chachu...

Geet broke the hug realising her stupidity...she got embarrassed and looked here and there...thankfully there was no one ... she immediately opened the car and got it...leaving poor Man,stranded on the road shocked...

Geet controlled her heart beats and regained her terror face , she lowered her window glass and shouted : Mr.Khurana...if u are finished couting stars in the morning sky...get it...i have a lot of work to do...

Maan battered his eyes lashes and looked Geet with his mouth wide open...he pinched himself...for making sure of the situation..., he got in the car and turned to Geet with still dazed face..

Maan(ST): did she really hug me??? He looked her now stern face confused kahin..isko Multiple personality disorder toh nahin...
The car zoomed back to the office...leaving Maaneet confused...but Annie and Payal confirmed about wats going on *wink*

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It was two days after the incident...Payal and Annie tried a lot to get more hints about Geet from Maan...but all he complained off his chudail only...they didnt know tat chudail was Geet herself...While Maan didnt seemed to care of anything...his life remained the same...except his
respect for Geet kept increasing minute by minute...

It was the launch party of a soap commercial taken by HAC...all were given time to go and get ready and to reach the venue early...

Ball Room...Taj Hotels:

The venue was beautifully decorated with carnations and other flowers...there was a big screen kept in the middle of the hall for the
Launch preview , and Maan was standing in the entrance inviting all, looking dashing in a black suit complementing his atheletic torso...

All the staffs of HAC were present inside the hall, taking care of the clients...while the same White Merci stopped near the entrance...

There came out Geet in a Navy blue off shoulder full gown...with a small diamond earing decorating her ears...no over make up...but just a lipstick ...her long slender hands had a blue purse complementing her dress, her left hand had a diamond bracelet...but her face had the same cold attitude, to make men fear with her sight...

Maan's eyes plopped out looking his monster boss , so beautiful... he has always wondered, why is she like tat...when she had all the contents of a good human being...she portrays herself rude and obnoxious ... Maan welcomed her politely and took her to Mr.Seth, who was the client...

Soon the launch started , Maan as Geet's assistant sat near her and all watched the commercial ...

It came out really wonderful and all started praising Geet...Maan went and stood with Adi, who was enjoying the party...when his eyes caught a person...

He was tall and well built, but had a dirty smirk on his face...he was having a drink in his hand and purposely roaming around the hall and dashing with ladies, making them get irritated...

Maan looked at his seriously... he gritted his teeth controlling his anger...but the person didnt seem to have stopped his misbehaving...he
asked Adi...

Maan: Adi...wo kaun hain??? Y is he behaving indecently with all the ladies??? He fumed..

Adi: Relax..Maan...he is Rohit Bhajpai...a close friend of Mr.Seth...hum kuch nahi keh sakthe...it will affect HAC...

Maan took a deep breath to control his anger...but his eyes didnt seem to leave the guy...his eye brows raised, when he saw Rohit approaching Pari...

Rohit : hi baby... he gave his ugly grin and moved near a gal, who was standing in the cornor of the hall sipping her drink... would u like to give me a company...

Pari: no...she trembled seeing his disgusting looks and on the verge of crying, when he was coming so close to her...suddenly a hand interrupted...

Maan: Bhai saab...y do u pay attention to these silly pieces... he literally pushed Rohit off Pari,, who rushed away immediately...

Rohit glared : how dare u??? Do u know who am i??? Rohit seethed in anger..

Maan: oopss...relax...wait...i will show u a better gal...whom u really deserve ...look there... he pointed out to Geet...who was standing with another business associate, in a deep blue full frock...
Rohit's eyes filled with lust and he moved straightly towards Geet...

Maan laughed: Saala...abh hoga tera band baja baaraat...
Adi looked at him questioningly...

Maan smiled : buddy...personal experience...he chuckled imagining Geet's night attack on him...

Geet who just finished her discussion with one of the client...turned to get,dashed into some one...

Geet: oh..am sorry... she muttered and was about to go, when a hand pulled her by her shoulders...

Rohit: hey...babe...wanna gimme a company...???

Geet looked at him and his hands on her shoulders... she rudely shrugged it off and decided to walk away, when he held her wrists...

Maan clunched his fists, but then he knew...nobody other than Geet can give tat cheapo a big punishment...Adi looked tensed, when most of attention turned towards Geet and Rohit...

Rohit: aww...na...baby..dont get shied...i will give u a nice company... he pulled her even more closer...in fact, very good in bed... he whispered in her ears shamelessly...

Geet's eyes were spitting fire...she gritted her teeth and muttered dangerously: Leave my hand...

Rohit nodded in denial and took her hands towards his lips to kiss her...Maan's heart did a somer sault...he didnt know...to which he was angry...for that chepo or he kissing her... he was about to go and thrash him, when he heard a thuddd!!!!

The next minute all turned to see Rohit lying on the floor with his hands on his stomach...

Geet: U bloody bas***d...what do u think , haan...u can ask any gal to bed with u??? How dare u??? She punched his chest with her high heels,,,the whole crowd looked at her horrified...Maan smiled proudly at his Sherni...

Rohit growled in pain and got up: u bitch...how dare u hit me...i will...he was about to pounce on her, when few men in the crowd pulled him...

Geet showed her hands to stop them: Wat do u want to do??? Touch me?? Haan... bed me??? Y are all of u bas***ds have ur eyes only on the skin of a women, than her emotions...??? she shrilled in agony...her eyes filling with tears of rage... y dont u all understand...there is a heart behind this skin haan??? She pointed her chest and shouted at him... Y do u all always hit on other woman..are they no human beings??? Will keep ur bloody mouth shut, if some one try to do the same thing with ur mother or ur sister??? Her tears were over flowing...

Rohit's head was down...he has never faced any kind of humiliation in his life...yet she is true...he felt ashamed...

Geet rubbed her face and ran off to the corridor...wiping her tears...

Maan who was the silent watcher, could feel an unbound pain in her voice...he for once felt guilty for sending that man to her...he ran behind

Geet , to console her...to beg her sorry for his stupidity yet again...

Geet stood in the corridor looking at the moon , her tears rolling continuosly... thats when she found a hand stretching towards her...she jerked a moment, but his voice soothed her...

Maan extended his hands with a tissue : u might need this...he said softly...

Geet pulled the tissue and wiped her tears...and threw it away...yet her tears didnt seem to stop...she was whimpering...

Maan again extended his hand : u need this again i guess... he said with a baby tone...

Geet plucked the tissue again wiping her tears and throwing it...he repeatedly passed the tissue...atlast there was nothing in the box...

But her tears has not ended...she slowly turned her head expecting him to pass the tissue, but he made a baby face, showing his empty hands...

Geet glared at him, when he asked : Shall I???

She fluttered her eye lashes, not understand what he was saying, when she jolted with the touch of his hands on her face...

Maan smoothly wiped her tears with his hands, cupping her face...his long fingers moved smoothly on her tear stricken face...she looked at his eyes...

Their eyes locked for a second...Maan felt like his whole world getting lost in it...her eyes had so many emotions...Pain, hatred, violence, insecurity, helplessness, uncertainity and a bit of something...he couldn't understand...

Their face, invariably moved towards eachother, forgetting the whole World...his breath fell on her face...she closed her eyes feeling something soothing sensation in her heart!!!

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Precap:

Geet along with Maan , from a meeting rushed to her house...

Geet: Aunty...what happened to Mom..why is she crying now??? How is her health??? She asked worriedly...seeing her mom..crying...

Aunty: Beta...u know what is her problem...she is crying day and night worried about ur life...ur future...she wants u to get settled and marry someone...

Geet sighed in irritation , while Maan murmured : Y is her mom crying??? The guy who is going to marry her only should cry... he smugged her laugh and made a pity face...

Geet looked at her Mom...: Mom..please y cant u understand i cant marry now!!! She replied impatiently...

Mom: then when u will marry...over my death bed??? Rano faked a huge cry...making Geet worried more...

Geet took a deep breath : Mama...i am dating someone... she confessed...

Maan(ST): OMG..who is that bechara... he made a sorry face for that unknown guy...

Rano's face widened but she regained: Tell me who is tat???

Geet nervously bit her lips...: Mom...i cant say his name now...

Rano: Then Geet , this means u are lieng...i know about u... she spat...

Maan(ST): wohi toh...who will date this chudail... he giggled inwardly...

Geet rolled her eyes irritated : Ok..Mom...i will say his name... she went near Maan and held his hand tightly...: Mom...me and Maan are dating for almost 5 months...

THUDDD!!!! Next u can find Maan Singh Khurana behosh!!! :)

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guysss...as im not comfortable updating this FFs on all saturdays cos i am on to go on for higher studies...weekends has been really hectic for me, so i ,after discussing with GEET BONE page admin has shifted the day of my update to THURSDAY...here after this FF will be updated all the Thursday's and am extremely sorry for making u all wait today...to say the truth..the update is ready...but am not at home..stuck with an important work for preparation for my entrance test...will post it tomrw morning Sunday...and from next week i will be hopefully regular, as i am updating in the mid of the week...Thank u all for the lovely response...i owe a lot to u all...LOVE U ALL 😊

Edited by alwayzzgurti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
me first yipppeee
loved the update
geet become the mother for neha
nd cute bonding
nd maan falling for geet
nd vice versa
bt dey wil not accept it
awsome
hayyeee
maan family hahahahha
lolzzz
nd rahul hahahah
chachi hot
nd he is J beacuse maan got beautifull girl
hahhahaha
loved it
kya hoga maan ka
jab family bategi geet ke baare mein
nd loved it how geet is supporting neha nd her family
plzzz
upload pic
nd party scene
feeling soo bad for geet
nd dat guy feeld ashamed of himself
sahi bola geet ne
nd precap hahahhaha
damn awsome
me laughing lyk hell
maan nd me dating from 5 months
maan ke xpressions
hahahahahhaahahah
waiitng for next update soon
Edited by uteem - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
geet neha bond geet humanity and maneet getting closer khuran family saw maneet geet teaching that bas... a lesson and geet have a past that is the reason for her hatred toward men maan understand it precap



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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful update...
Geet's words to Hetal aunty was so emotional..
Rahul's approach made her once again to remember her past..
but nw she hav a shoulder to cry out her feelings...
Maan's family is really superb...
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Posted: 13 years ago
AG it was really awesme...
geet teasing maan in bathroom...was ...😆
aur rahul aur anjali tho bahut thez niklae hai...😉
geet ne tho neha ki maa bangaye which was really touchy...
maan ki gharwallon ke live love stry dekhna pade...
and in the party geet emotion was too good...
and the precap maan ko tho heart attack hogaye...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb precap Maan behosh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved geet's bonding love towards Neha cutie pie!
4 naughty's watching from terrach ...aur anjali apni tutli language mein so cutely she said thathi...love this story very much!
ohh chachi's ji ashirwad dediya...
wow..kya shot mara rahul ko...hahahhaha
precap omg lovely scene.

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