New Maaneet OS: Ikraar By Chance TEASER pg 42 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats dear thanx 4 pm .
waiting 4 update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats for new OS.
Awesome CS.
Waiting for update.
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congratulation dear
awesome character sketch
do continue soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Waiting for it to start...
Great start dear...

Maan all shy shy types hmmm
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Waitiping for os to be update...
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Thanks for your love and support dear friends

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plz jaldi update karo na...
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yaar when will we get the update
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Thanks for your love and support dear friends. I am so sorry due to powercut I was unable to type the update hence there was a delay in posting this part. I have extended this OS upto 3 parts so this is the first part and I will be ending this OS in the 3rd part. Do let me know if u want an Epilogue.
love-Piya
PART 1

Kashap Villa

Payal: Ae lo abhi tak so rahe hai shadi k 2 saal ho gaye par har subah mujhe hi inhe jagana padtha hai [Its been 2 years since our marriage but every morning I have to wake him up from his sleep]

She moved the curtains on one side and allowed the sunbeams to enter their room

She goes and sits besides her handsome husband

Payal: Haye main marjaawa sothe waqt kitne sone lagte hai ye [He looks so cute while sleeping]

She starts caressing his hair

Payal: Prem uthiye subah ho gayi hai 'Prem aap sun rahe hona [Prem wake up its morning 'Prem r u listening?]

Prem: Meri subah toh abhi hui nahi Payal meri seher mujhe laadoh; main yuh chutkiyon mein utt jaayunga [My morning has not yet arrived Payal get me mu sunshine and I will wake up automatically]

Payal understood his indication with a smile on her face she took her hand near his ear and moved her bangles gently giving rise to a musical tune

Payal: Prem ab bataiye kya ab bhi raat hai? [Prem do u still think that morning has not yet arrived?]

Prem: Tumhari chudiyoon ki khankhanahat se mujhe koyal k kookne ki aawaz sunaye de rahi hai iska matlab hai suraj ki pehli kiran hume apne aagosh mein bharne k liye taiyaar hai par hume toh suraj ke gulabi kirne hi jagah sakthi hai warna main toh utne se raha [The musical beats of your banglescan be compared to the melodious voice of the Cuckoo it seems that the sun has indeed arrived and is ready to take me in its folds but I am interested in the beautiful pink rays of the sun and I won't get up until and unless I feel them]

Payal: Aap bade badmaash hai Prem jaayiye aaj aapko gulabi kirne nahi milnewali suraj k tez kirno se hi kaam chala lijiye [U r very naughty Prem go today u r not going to get those romantic pink rays today u need to be satifisfied with the normal sunbeams]

Prem: Thik hai main toh chala sone [Okay as u wish I will continue with my sleep]

Payal: Kabhi nahi sudrenge ye [He will never change]

She dipped her head slighty and placed a sweet kiss on his cheek. She was just about to get up when Prem held her waist strongly and with one quick movement he pinned her successfully beneath himself

Payal: Prem ab aapne mujhe kyun kaid kar rakha hai aapko aapki gulabi kirne mil gayi na ab toh jaane dijiye [Prem why have u trapped me now I gave u your romantic morning rays now let me go]

Prem: Payal tum ache se jaanti ho k mujhe meri Good morning kiss gaalo par nahi hotho par chahiye par phir bhi tum jaanbujhkar mujhe har subah gaalo par kiss karti ho taaki main tumhe yuhi apne baahon mein kaid kar liya karu ab batau badmaash main hoon k tum [Payal u r aware that I like to get my Good morning kiss on my lips and not on my cheeks but u intentionally kiss me on the wrong place so that I can trap u in my loving arms now tell me darling who is naughty me or u?]

He started decorating her neck with sensous and passionate kisses

Payal: Oh Prem'

Prem: Payal galti ki hai toh saza toh milegi na? Ab tumhe interest bhi dena padega hmm'ab ek k bajaye 5 kisses wo bhi sahi jagah par [Payal since u have committed a mistake u have to pay for it and your punishment would be with proper interest so instead of one kiss now u will have to gift me 5 kisses and that too at the right place]

He looks at her seductively and slowly starts reducing the distance between their lips. Payal encircles her arm around his neck they were just about to kiss when their romantic moment was broken as their door bell started ringing

Prem: Ye kaun aa gaya iss waqt? [Who is trying to break our romantic moment right now?]

Payal: Aur kaun apni Geet hogi [Who else other than our Geet]

Prem: Iss Geet ko tum samjhathi kyun nahi k itne subah aaya na kare insaan ko kafi important kaam hothe hai aur unn kamo k beech interrupt karna achhi baat nahi [Why don't u tell ur Geet that she should not go to someone's house early in the morning as many individuals might be busy with some important personal work and this type of interruption might just act as a hurdle in their work]

Payal: Achha aap hi kyun nahi samjha dethe apni laadli behen ko [Oh really why don't u yourself make your sister understand this?]

Prem:Usse toh main baadmein samjhaunga pehle tumhe toh samjha du [I will make her understand sometime later first let me help u in understanding]

But before he could capture her lips into a kiss Geet started banging the door

Geet: Payal didi darwaza kholiye warna main duplicate keys se door khol dungi [Payal Di open the door or else I will use the duplicate keys]

Payal pushes Prem and gets up from the bed

Prem: Ek baar shadi ho jaane doh iss Geet ki main bhi har subah usse yuhi tang karunga [Let this girl get married I will also trouble her in the same fashion every morning]

Payal: Khabardaar agar aisa kuch socha bhi toh aakhirkaar Geet mere Maan ki hi dulhan banegi aur mere bhaiya bhabhi ko tang karne ki zara sibhi koshish kitoh zindagi bhar storeroom mein sona padega [Dare if u even think of doing any such thing as at the end Geet will be the bride of my darling Bro Maan and if u even dream of troubling my Brother and his wife then u will have to sleep in the store room permanently throughout ur life]

Prem: Iss sapne ko haqeekat mein badalne k liye apne sharmile bhai ko kaho k wo apni rajkumari se apne dil ki baat keh de warna aisa na ho k koi aur hi iss matwali titli ko le ude [If u want to convert this dream into a reality tell ur shy brother to confess his feelings in front of the princess of his heart otherwise someone else will take away this butterfly]

Payal: Dekhiyeji mere Maan k khilaf kuch mat kahiyega aur waise bhi ye Geet bhi jaanti hai k Maan usse pyar karta hai par problem bus ek hi hai k wo chahti hai k Maan usse ek baar apne dil ki baat keh de aur dekh lena aaj jab Maan aayega tab main usse kisi bhi tarah convince karlungi iss baar toh wo Geet se apni dil ki baat zarur kahega [Don't u say anything about by dear brother and as far as Geet is concerned she is aware that Maan loves her the only problem is that she wants him to confess his feelings once and this time I will make sure that Maan voices his feelings for Geet before going from here let him come today]

Geet: Payal didi main andar aa rahi hoon phir mat kehna maine warn nahi kiya tha [Payal Di I am coming inside then don't tell me that I did not warn u]

Payal: Haan Geet bus ek minute aa rahi hoon [Yes Geet just a minute I am coming]

Payal goes to the living room and opens the door for Geet

Geet: Romance ho gaya ya nahi? [So done with ur romance?]

Payal hits her lovingly on her shoulder

Payal: Badmaash kahiki [U r really naughty]

Geet: Badmaadshi main kar rahi thi ya aap aur Prem bhaiya kar rahe the kab se darwaza khatkhata rahi hoon par aap dono ko apne romance se fursat hi nahi hai [I think u and Bro were doing something naughty as its been a long time since I am standing in front of the door and knocking it but u guys were busy with ur morning romance]

Payal: Jab teri shadi hogina tab main tujhse ye baat kahungi [When u will get married na then I will tell u these things]

Geet: Chodiye didi lagta hai meri kismat mein toh kuwari bane rehna hi likha hai [Leave it Di it seems that I am destined to remain unmarried]

Payal: Aisa kyun karodo mein ek hai tu, tujhe toh kafi chahnewale mil jaayenge [Why is it so there is no match for u in crores of girls u can easily get many admirers]

Geet: Wo toh mil jaayenge Di par iss dil ka kya karu uspar toh ek hi boluraam ki tasveer chapi hui hai par wo hai k mujhse ek baar bhi pyar k doh meethe bol nahi bolta bus nighahonse fasane bayan karta rehtha hai par jab bhi main paas se guzru toh Sharma jaata hai agar aisa hi chalta raha na Di toh meri shadi toh sapne mein bhi nahi hogi [Yes I will get many but what should I do of this silly heart which beats only for one innocent sweetheart; he never confesses his feelings openly just keeps on giving me signals through his eyes I tell u Di if this continues then I will never get married in my dreams as well]

Payal: Jab tu jaanti hai k Maan sharmila hai toh tu khud hi usse apne dil ki baat kyun nahi bol dethi? [When u know Maan belongs to the shy category of boys then why don'y u yourself confess your feelings for him?]

Geet: No Di main chahe kitni bhi modern bun jaayu par ek baar toh main ye zarur chahungi k jis ladke se main pyar karti hoon wo mujhse apne hale dil ki dastan ek baar bol de main koi badi cheez expect nahi karti par agar Maan ne mujhse itna bhi keh diya k Geet main tumse pyar karta hoon mere liye itna hi kafi hai par jab tak wo ye baat nahi kahega main bhi usse apne pyar ka izhaar nahi karungi afterall main ek ladki hoon aur filmo k mutabik ladke ye baat pehle karte hai [No Di I may become modern but still I have a heart of a girl and I want my man to confess his love first and make me feel special I don't expect any great setup or preparations from him but if Maan simply tells me that Geet I love u that itself would be enough for me as it is in films also they show that guys confess first so until and unless Maan confesses I also won't tell him the feelings of my heart]

Payal: Waise aaj aapke saiyaan ji aa rahe hai [By the way he is going to come today]

Geet's face started glowing but the very next moment her face was pale again

Geet: Par kya fayda ek toh wo aate hai kuch hi dino k liye aur phir mujhe theek se baat bhi nahi karte aur chale jaate hai [But what's the use he comes for such a short duration of time and goes away without talking to me properly]

Payal: Dekhna iss baar wo tujhe apne dil ki baat zarur kahega aur waise bhi wo Rakhi k liye aa raha hai to hiss baar kuch din yahi rukhega dekh lena iss baar tum dono ki setting ho hi jaayegi [This time he will surely confess and he is coming here on the occasion of Rakhi so he will be staying here for some days I am sure this time your love story will come on track]

Geet: Sachhi Di muaah ab toh main bhi dekhti hoon mere sharmile saiyaan mujhse kab tak bhagthe hai iss baar toh unhe kehna hi padega k wo mujhe pyar karte hai aur waise bhi main unse seedhe seedhe keh dungi job hi sharmana warmana hai wo aap humari suhaagraat k liye chod dijiye wo proper time hoga kyun di? [Really Di I love u muahh' now let me see for how long will my shy darling escape from confessing his love I will tell him clearly that u can keep this shyness of yours for our wedding night as that would be an appropriate time for it right Di?]

Payal: Hath badmaash [Naughty girl]

Both of them share a hearty laugh and start walking towards the garden to start their yoga exercises

PRECAP: Shy Maan and bold Geet😉😳

So guys how was the first part? I am aware that there were no Maaneet moments in this part but the next 2 updates will have loads of Maaneet romance in it. As I mentioned before the update I have extended this OS for 3 parts will give an epilogue only if you'll want it

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PART 2: Page 29

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2954862/new-maaneet-os-ikraar-by-chance-teaser-pg-42

Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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PIYAAA!!!!!!! WHERE R U???

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I accidentally became first today...😆😛I am not even sure if I was to read the OS...But when I posted to know if you are here then only I grasped that I had actually posted just below yours and decided to read it... :P😳


Payal and Prem...Shahid and Amrita...One of my favorite bollywood onscreen couple...I really liked the fact that you used them as a couple here...I haven't really read the CS just saw the pics but I guess payal and Maan are siblings and Geet is she prem's sister??? I don't really think so because they do not live together...guess I will have to read the CS well...😆


Basically Maan and Geet already love each other and all know about it except they haven't yet confessed kyunki Maan is the sharmila type here...hihi...I like this...lol...Geet being bold and Maan the shy guy...a lethal combo...hahaha...😆😉😛


And I presume the confession gonna take place now that Maan will be coming over his sister's place for rakhi...so we are in for it now... :))) Am waiting to read about this confession of this unusual couple...lol..I mean it's kinda surprising (in a good way) to think that Maan is the shy guy...hehe...😆


And yes...ek epilogue to banta hain...hehe...😉😛😊

Continue soon... :)))

Edited by zahra15 - 13 years ago

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