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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SallyAmanda

lol mel😆u r tooo goood😆😉

BTW..Updated TBTSK😉

finally mam aa gayi
and look kitna long and good comment kiya hai😡
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9




yaar tujhe pata nahi
sab writ kiya hua gayab ho jata hai
i like
yeh kya hua


lol!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
some one like having great fun
hain na anu

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Posted: 13 years ago
Okies dear do update tomorrow



Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ok kkk
is any body here in wait of update
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: geetsrir.maan

Okies dear do update tomorrow



thanxxx for pic
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9


arre bas cicuit nahi
puri wireing hi kharab ho gayi hai


fir she has permission to do such thing...
keep going rajmata...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

part writ kiya tha
update karte hue net crash ho gaya
as usual saved nahi tha aur ab main😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
all my dear one's
please pray for me
as this is my third try to write and past this part
please pray

part -9 The lady with high ego sitting now in her room thinking about the game now she is playing with this three puppet- bcose she think they r only deserve to be called like this as they don't know .it's not them who deciding all the facts but they r just like dummy who see what they r ask to see and do what they ask to do.

rajmata :- Imagination
what a word
which give me power to play with all. as i know how to use this ability of mind to make all dance on my tunes .
it make them all busy in their day dreaming and as i knew how to work with it so it make my heart desire to come true which is to remain the queen as long as sun shine in the sky bcose
abhi toh main jawan hu
abhi toh main jawan hu

on the other side
all the angels are still busy in their thoughts to make it clear to them selves that what happened today is really true.
as sara still not able to belive that a task given by rajmata can be that much simple and easy. bcose their success in it will change the fate of rajmata and as much she knew about that weird old lady one thing is as clear as dimond is that she can give her life one time but her crown is next to impossible

sara :- aakhir aisa kya kiya hoga rajmatake hum fail ho jaaye ,bcose she never let us win this task.

on the other side anu still can't belive that she able to found her dream man but what a lose for him that he still not able to see her dreamgirl.

anu ;-what to do when some one have very strong bad luck aur nahi toh kya. main waha special disc main gayi yaha dreamland se unhe search karte hue or woh un good for nothing girls ke saath dance kar rahe the.kya GOD JI , unka badluck bhi aaj hi karana tha . aur nahi toh kya,arre aaj toh aapko assi situation karni chahiye thi ke unhe meri sweet si kissi milne ka sobhagye milta but nahi ,look what you did.my poor ,cute innocent maan has to dance with those aaltu faltu girls. but ab kal aisa mat karna ,ok.jab hum kal earth par jaaye toh you must do somethingto make me kiss him .par kya woh ab bhi un nangi pungi ladkiyo ke saath dance kar rahe hoge

but far from all this , here is our ruchs. she is some time too gud to be true as if now she knew by heart that sara is gone case some time but in this topic about task that is going too easy is not gud news, which make her to think about sara doubts. so now she is praying that please GOD make sara complete wrong in this thoughts and her fear of being use in the hand of that jerk,budi khusat good for nothing
abhi toh main jawan hu rajmata turn out to be a BAD BAD DREAM or say nightmere.

ruchs :-waise aur baat saari par munda tha solid . kya body thi uski yaar. chalo ab jaldi se so jaati hu aur phir hot hot dreams with my munda and please god sara ki saari thoughts galat kar dena nahi toh mera heir banane ka sapna hi galat ho jaayega.
shut up ruchs, kya ulta bol rahi hai. stop it now ,nahi toh sapne main us hotty ki jagah woh budi kathak karage.nahiii

next morning
here sara is waiting for others two to arrive so they can start their work for today,but seems like they r still busy in her dreamland and to add the oil in fire here come our rajmata.

sara :- aa budi aa bas teri hi kami thi ,kamini
rajmata :- (with suger coated smile)hi, sara
how r u today

sara( scarstically):- gud morning rajmata
and i m gud abhi tak toh sab thik tha par ab aage ka kuch nahi ho sakta. jab morning main aapke darshan ho jaaye toh din bhar kuch aacha kaise hoga.(when some one see your face first in morning than how can his day turn out to be gud)

rajmata :-aare main toh bhul hi gayi where r your friends still busy in their dreams. m i right

sara :- its nothing like that ,RAJMATA
and what about you
aap yaha kya kar rahi hai that too in the early hours of morning ya phir umar badhne ke saath aapki neend khatam ho rahi hai(as your age is increasing your sleep is decreasing )

rajmata :- what did you just said.

sara : - nothing rajmata, i just wanted to know how come you r out of your bed and that to this much early. you know its not gud for your skin.as skin also need proper sleep nahi toh aapko wrinkles ho jaayege.

rajmata :- oh not to worry dear
i m here to say best of luck to you all and about my wrinkle so their is no need to worry bcose...

sara :- abhi to aap jawan hai.
waise aap kab se yeh gaana ga rahi hai.

rajmata :- look ,here come your late latif friends

anu/ruchs :- hi sara, hellorajmata

sara :- thank god, tum dono aa gayi chalo ab is budi se toh bach jaugi.

lets move girls
bye rajmata and thanx for your wish

precap ;-nahiii
yehhh kya hua,
ku huaaa
kab huaaa
dil ke tukde tukde kar ke behen ji bana kar chal diyeee
jaate jaateee yeh toh bata ja
main jeeu kiske liyeee
please comment guys

Edited by 9n9i9s9h9u9 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SallyAmanda

lol mel😆u r tooo goood😆😉

BTW..Updated TBTSK😉


updateb today to na

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