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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sukklover

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Devil's Den

Part 8


As soon as the wedding got over, the rituals ended, he scooped her in his arms making his way outside the Den, something was there in those dark eyes she looked at him but only darkness and blank emptiness was shown in them when she found herself in the car being locked and in a single second the engine roared and they were racing with wind, on the deserted long road...

As the car got its speed the darkness started eating the light in front of her, the accelerated was ruthlessly pushed under his feet with the each once of darkness overpowering her, she dint knew what and how it will happen now but a sense of satisfaction was covering her face, she looked at him tilting her head a little to her right resting her chin over her shoulder and head over the back his face was blank handling the high speed of his car, his eyes trained over the road, his full concentrating was on the high speeding car with each twist his gear changed and his each turn the speed increased, she can feel the heat passing in his veins while the coldness flashing over his face was far more pleasant for her eyes, his body was showing the anguish flowing in him, the boiling lava but his face was plastered showing nothing, she looked at him intently he was drowned in his drive in speeding up his car to reach its destination with his one hand plugged over the gear the other over wheels, his feet ruling the accelerated and the clutch forgetting even the existence of breaks in the car and eyes trained not to distract from the road even for a blink of a second...

She smiled at little knowing his thumping heart was telling his restlessness, but a satisfaction he won't be able to get her let whatever he do she can't let him touch her, she won't let anyone touch her soul when her heart belongs to someone else, she smiled closing her eyes in contentment he won't be able to take her with her will nor even without her will now...not after a few more minutes...just a few...a tear trailed of her eyes and in a fit of second his gaze turned wiping of the trail harshly from her cheek , she opened her eyes and smiled bitterly to him...no need to wash them away...he looked at her angrily still his senses all over his speeding car...you don't have any right on them as well...she said looking in his eyes...your soul owns me your each right, your smile your tears everything is for me, JUST ME...he said which she failed to contemplate the fact lingering in his eyes or to be precise she dint wanted to learn anything about him...yaa these tears...she mocked...because you set them as my destiny but not anymore, you won't be able to get me...and looked away outside the window once again in a process to close her eyes...

That was it he grabbed her hairs in his fist tilting her neck a little making her face him harshly, she winced in pain trying to prey off his hold from her hairs but it got him more wild and her jerked her towards him, she opened her eyes a little in disgust and pain another tear flickered over her thick lashes only to get licked off before they leave her hazels...your destiny is mine, am not your so called God who'll listen to your plea and modify his decision over your pray, but am your devil and mind it this devil knows when how to get what he desire...She looked away not able to listen him, in no mood to belive his baseless words when she know it is just the beginning towards the final end, end of all this her misery, his dictatorship over her destiny, end of her, just the end but what she dint knew he wasn't just a devil but a devil with his darkest desire in his hands, he won't let anything, or everything come in his way

Not even God has the right to take you away from me, nor even you...she smiled at his works as if mocking him, challenging him you can do nothing now, I have chosen my way to get of your hell...forget about the death, even that is not enough to take you away from me, I won't let the heaven owner let live in peace if something...mark my words even some slightest thing happen to you, this devil will invade your dream heaven to turn it in his scorching hell...She looked at him with share astonishment, he knows, hell he knows about her deed, about his manipulation to her own fate, what will he do now, what if he makes his death even more curse then this living hell, what will happen after I die...wil he let me die in peace as well...she looked at him as a shock wave swiped over her face with a revelation of him knowing what she have done in his room while getting ready to become his bride soon to be dead...dead as Maan Singh Khurana's wife was better to live as this Devil's slave she thought before taking those pills, now he knows everything what if she won't die, what if he saves her, what if...don't think much because I won't let you go away from me, not again Mrs. Khurana, not this time...you no more Ms. Handa, you are Mrs. Geet MaanSingh Khurana, this Devil's Angel...not this time...you dealing with Maan Singh Khurana now, your only devil is here to get you in his den to make you pay his own hell's punishment for your mistake you did to spoil my wedding night...she looked at him in disbelieve was he a man, a human, even now when he clearly know what she have done, that she won't be able to see tomorrows sun, she thumped the last nail in her own coffin, he is taking about his wedding night, is he sane...no he isn't he is a devil, a monster, an evil blood sucker who will suck her pious blood thought even in hell now she thought looking into his eyes before her eyes gave up with the toxication cursed her blood due to over dose of pills she took, she looked last time into his eyes hoping the last wish of hers to come true before a devil overpower her angelic life before drifting off to sleep...

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Pacing outside the closed doors of the ICU she was being treated, daring not to see her in that condition knowing he will lose himself off completely then he closed his eyes tight to control the rage filling up his heart and mind, cursing his veins with an unknown flow of anguish listening the sound of her puking and doctors screaming to other while flushing her stomach with those dreadful pipes and tubes fitted in her nose and throats chocking her to clean her stomach from the sleeping pills she took, he fisted his knuckles turning them white to control the demon awakening inside him when he heard the click of door knob and turned to look at petrified doctor to see the fire burning in this devil's eyes...who is she now??? He said in a calm voice but the danger and the terror was crystal clear in his single word...

We flushed of her stomach she is out of danger but...doctor stuttered not able to complete anything in front of this devil knowing his anger he won't take a second to take this anyone's life if a single unpleasant word slipped of his mouth which made this poor doctor wipe his sweaty forehead...

Spit it out...he roared making doctor gasp for his life

She is fine but will be sleeping for 2 or may be 3 days, she won't revive before 2 days...at least, we have kept her under observation she will be in deep slumber till them...doctor said all in one go but the tinge of calmness in his face dint go unnoticed by the doctor and he managed to say the other set of words...Mr. Khurana you wife have taken a comparatively high over dose of sleeping pills in one go...and moreover she was highly stressed before which took toll over her health...

How much...???again the same cold devour plastered over his face he asked now looking through the small glass window to the half dead body like pale structure lying over the white sheets of hospital bed while a nurse cleaning her up again and making her lie comfortably over the bed again

May be a full bottle...doctor said in a low tone and took his leave from there before the beast inside this devil have taken it's worse avatar, to swipe away his life

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She has been shifted from that suffocating hospital to her Devil's Den the same night, he couldn't stand the smell of that hospital air but he won't leave her alone there as well, so taking the discharge papers soon he made all the arrangements from the hospital to shift the required equipments with a permanent 24 hour doctor and 2 nurses for her while she was shifted to his Den in such a condition, in mid of night or to say the truth the early hours of dawn, she was still unconscious trying to gather her rapid broken heartbeats in place, sleeping peacefully in her slumber, it has been two days today, to be more precise it have been 50 hours, more than 3000 minutes and 18000 seconds, this devil was nowhere in peace, it wasn't just hell for his company and his employs but it was the worst of then hell for his rivals and enemies who were to face his most raw side, this restlessness building up in him was taken out over his enemies, he took a charge in his own hands and without any mistake, without any attempt to harm him or anyone they aren't suppose to he just swiped into their hideouts killing many of them in an open fire without any warning with his own sinful hands without any mercy or say, just to get rid of his own restlessness he was making others pay just for being his rivals, it has been 2 days there was no sleep no peace in his red eyes just a fire, a fire to se into her hazels yet again, he have been looking at her lying lifelessly over his king size silken bed and again a thunder jolted him...he looked away not able to hold the urge to look into her hazels again he just got more frustrated with his own restless heart...

He looked at her and a sudden gush of anger, anguish ran through his body, that frustration to look at her in such a vulnerable condition over took his heart and mind, his red eyes were spitting fire ready to burn everything with the intensity they hold in them, his raising heartbeat was evident of his irritation over something he couldn't even manage the guts to come up with, the heat vibrating through his body could just make the freezing mummies burn in the scorching fire of his animosity, his shivering body was telling the tale of his share hatred towards this place, this situation, this atmosphere, this anger, this fear, towards everything, towards himself, towards her for doing this...his hatred was cursing his blood to commit a sin he never thought he could do, at least not to her but she was provoking him to do the sin she will regret to, she was provoking the inner devil in him, the hungry beast of this devil was awakened looking at her...the thing he couldn't even fathom was right in front of his eyes, the thing he never wished to happen was happening right in front of his eyes, the thing he could never believe was here, looking at her in this condition was far more vulnerable test of his patience his, was a limit of him to see her like this...

You'll pay for it, you'll have to pay for it Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khurana...he said looking away twisting himself to face the wall calming his anger down which was running with the flow of his blood in his body, fisting his hand making his knuckles turn white with pressure...

Your countdown begins now, you'll have to bear your Devil's punishment for making him go through this...and banged the wall with his fisted hand making his knuckles break, making him flinch in pain but that smirk with his closed eyes was evident of the storm awaiting but for whom even he doesn't know...

3...2...1...your time is over Mrs. Khurana...he repeated and she gasped for air...

She got up with a force sitting upright with a strong pain in her chest feeling chocked of breath and let out a hard breath before thumping back to bed with wide open eyes and sweaty face, showing clearly the pain she was facing right now, but the hell he was in was much more than her pain

He smirked without moving his gaze from the wall, even to look at her painful face, while his eyes spited fire and he pressed the button calling for doctors and nurses in one go the team of nurses and doctor was there checking her out while he simply stood looking outside the wide window of his room calmly keeping his hands intact in his tight jeans with that sexiest smirk enchanting the chiseled facial tones of his face...

She is fine now...nothing else just she is a little week just take care of her diet and food nothing to worry about...Doctor said with a smile passing out the prescription and moving out the room closing it behind leaving the two alone...

She looked at him he was standing the calmly with no sign of emotion just a blank cold face plastered over his sinfully curved features of that addictive handsome face she looked into his back knowing she'll have to face him now and a shiver ran inside her when she saw him twisting and saw his smirking face with a tough straightening structure leaning carefree over the side mahogany table twisting his one feet over the other with hands perfectly fitting in his tight black jeans...looking intently towards her shocked sweaty face with fear and terror evident in her eyes...hmm terror, that's what he likes in every eye...he thought before taking his deadly paws ahead in a way to reach her making her heart skip several beats not out of anything else but in fear to face this devil in front of her...

she backed a little holding the bed sheet in her fist till she hit the bed rest looking at no escape from this devil she looked at him with pleading eyes which she knew have no effect on this devil, and with his next step she dint took time before pouncing down from bed and trying to get up when dizziness again took over and she held her head in her hands looking and the twisting ceiling when she lost her balance and closed her eyes in fear to touch the hard Italian marble two strong hands skimmed her petite structure engulfing her in his taut body plastering her head to heal with his perfect length...she jerked open her eyes when she felt his touch round her back and jolted back to reality when she looked in his fire red eyes, it clearly showed his anger, his dislike, his hatred towards all of this, towards this situation, showing his restlessness his tired eyes were clearly telling her he dint slept a blink from so many hours but how was she concerned she simply want to get out of this touch his hold and she jerked him back with all her power but he dint budged and the next moment she found herself trapped between the wall and his body with a jerk so outrageous that it hit her bonny back hard into the strong wall and she felt her head will came crumbling down any moment...

But she kept her protest on, trying hard to shove him away from her best to gather all her power and prey her off but his hold only tightened around his back making her flinch in pain, turning the tender white skin red and blue piercing his fingers in her soft skin, she kept her palms over his chest trying push him but what would have any effect over an highly enraged devil like him...nothing...leave me...leave me you monster...you devil...just get the hell out and leave me alone...she screamed agonized to all this feeling helplessly trapped as a prey of this devil

Ah-huhh, correct it...your devil, and you are mine, your life, your death all is mine...JUST MINE...he corrected still burning fire in his hold and eyes speaking volumes...how dare you...he spoke in a low voice filled with venom sending shivers down her spine and she looked at him forgetting her protest and spited it out...I said it clear it is only my husband's right...she looked his eyes stopping her protest mocking his plight...huhh how can you call an already MARIED GIRL as your WIFE and show your rights as an HUSBAND over her...she smirked looking at his blank eyes when he shielded it under his fire neglecting her words he planted a kiss on her throat and slightly snaked her hands round her curvaceous sleek thin waist entangling his hands in his sparkling silver waist charm and smiled delightedly with the twinkling of the her silver band accompanying the charming noise of it...don't worry I won't ripe it off...she looked at him baffled while he continued teasing her charm...I love it over you...he smirked and looked at her eyes which were teary when he harshly sucked them off before they even leave the thick lashes, and angrily smacked her more to him...I said your everything belongs to me, your tears as well...

She looked at him disgusted and pushed him away with an unknown power taking over her and roared in all her anger in her high voice...NO, NO, NO, NO, nooo...she screamed in agony over him, over his obsession, over her fate...I told you, I told you several times I won't let you touch me, I can't let...when I belong to someone else, when I belong to someone's love no one else have any right on me, not you not anyone else nor even me...am HIS only HIS...get that, only HIS...she broke down in sobs thumping back to bed holding the sheet tight in his fist repeating the same line over and over again...only HIS...

He looked at him enraged and hovered over her holding her arms tight in his hold making her wince in acute pain in her hands looking in his eyes...I said it clear as well, you belong to me, ONLY ME...she looked at him not knowing why his dark eyes had that intensity when she heard his words leaving her smiled bitterly at her fate, at her love, at him...I'll kill HIM...he is no more...She said when he looked at her with some emotions even he dint knew but soon shrugging off her words and continued...I will kill that bloody Dev

And who told you I'll give myself to you then, kill him anyways I never intended to be his wife as well coz I was always HIS, my LOVE was always HIS...not yours, nor that Dev's, nether mine...she stated looking in his eyes when his eyes were blank hiding some fear in them, fear to lose his most desired obsession his darkness in those hazels...I would never had married Dev, I would have killed myself even then, I wanted to kill myself the day HE leave me, the day HE died I wanted to kill my soul...but I would never allow anyone...she looked straight into his eyes...MEANS ANYONE ELSE THEN HIM to touch me the way he always possessed me, I was, I am and I will always be his...she said determined to her words but he was numb, he couldn't contemplate what and where this all was heading but surely one thing he was JEALOUS of this HIS of her, of his Devil's Angel, but adamant knowing he won't leave her let whatever be the it, he will conquer her,

And determined of his thoughts he came over her while her breath was caught in her lungs, his hands go round her waist clutching her close to himself when she closed her eyes feeling vulnerable with the pressure his cold hands were applying over her slender sleek waist in passion and possession when he dug his nails in that smooth white skin of hers...

Please...she begged while he continued his assault making her week with his hands where his eyes were glued over her face and lips itching to taste that sweet nectar yet he forced his heart and brain to stop his track and demand an answer he was dying to hear now...

Why...he demanded...why shall I leave you know...this was your husband's right isn't it, here I am, your husband, your Devil...now why shall I let my wife go...he asked with a blank look while his face was lost in hers and fingers busy in their own accord...

Yes, this right is only for my husband...I am only HIS, only for HIM...she opened her eyes to look at him while he was lost in those hazels...what was that in those eyes, what was in those dark eyes, so deep, a fear, a need, a desire, a...what is it ??? she thought drowning in his eyes searching for something even she dint knew when he smacked his lips over hers marking her as HIS...ONLY HIS...DEVIL'S ANGEL she IS, and WILL BE from now...


Precap: What will her Devil Do NOW !! 😕


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Edited by dazzlingdivz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wats happening yaar?
is geet not talking abt dev??
i m really confused!!!!
His devil power s amazing..i m loving him a lot..
i loved the countdown part..
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
if geet not talking abt dev then who???
loved this devil...
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Posted: 13 years ago


wow lovely my devil's update...yes tis is my devil, he wont leave te heaven if it took his geet away from him, he will burn te heaven to ashs...who is he, abt whom geet is talking...is that him is my maan, ?...im waiting dear...yes she belong to her hubby, her maan, my devil...i love tis update so much...
Edited by Desigirls12 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
now who is this new guy😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved this devil
he brought her back from death as he is hers only
whom did geet love?
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Posted: 13 years ago
who is this "his"...nice update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
aah devil and angel ... Tough han

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