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Posted: 12 years ago
will wait for the updates...all the best for exams...
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PART 9


AAGAYI !!!!!!

Kya aap 72 ki ho. Mujhe tho yakin hi nahi ho rahi hain. Aap tho bahut young lag rahe ho.

Bindaass dadi . accha hai na

Are you deaf and dumb ???

Tho iska mathlab aap deaf aur dumb nahi ho !! yay !

Are ! woh kya haina . aap kuch baath nahi kar rahe the aur aapki expressions bhi aisi thi jaise ki aapko kuch sunaayi nahi de raha hai

Oye dekh nahi saktha ki mein baath kar rahi hoo. Di, mere liye na tuity fuity with hot chocolate fudge order kar dena teekh hai.

Are bd martial arts mei black belt hoon main. Aisa thodi na mujhe chot lag sakthi hai. Waise bhi wo aadmiyaan mujhe choo bhi nahi paa rahe the.

Maan opened his eyes and gazed at the clock hanging on the wall.

He then realized what he was dreaming about and murmured not agaian !!

It was two weeks . two weeks since his meeting with geet at the mall . but don't know why after he heard that geet left for Mumbai from his dadi he felt some thing . some thing that he is not able to describe.

He has been dreaming about her more than a week. But why should he ??? why should get these weird dreams ???? shrugging of his thoughts he got out of the bed to get ready for the day.


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Ravi !!! jaldi kar !!! der ho rahi hai screamed geet as she was pacing in the living room of ravis house.

Hogaya !! hogaya !! hogaya !! polama ! ( chalein ) said ravi as he picked up his bag.

Ek teri behen vanadhi hai jo har waqth punctual hai aur thu hamesha late comer rehtha hai aur teri wajah se mein bhi late ho rahi hoon.

Are please apni lectures bandh karo aur chalo geet we are getting late

Wahi tho mein bhi keh rahi hoon !! chalo !!!

Geet started her bike . it was a TVS APACHE that her bro had gifted on her birthday two years back and it is really close to her heart.

Ravi sat behind her and soon they zoomed of to work .

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Vicky parked his car and looked at his watch.

Right on time !!! he smirked and rushed in side the CITY LIBRARY

As soon as he entered he went to the arts and literature section. He searched over there but was not able to find what he was looking for. He then went to the reading zone and all the other sections but he was not successful.

Dejected he turned to leave when he noticed the librarian standing in front of him and looking at him as if he was going to get both his kidneys.

Pichle aadhe gante se mein thumhe dekh raha hoon. lekin thumne koi book choose hi nahi kiya. Iradha kya hai huh ??

Vicky gave a nervous smile.

Kya thum sach mein book padne hi aaye ho yaa phir kuch aur karne.

Nahi !! ……….. wo mein ek……… haan ek book doond raha hoon.

Kaunsa ??

Wo … urm….. haan noddy

Vicky mentally smacked himself. Only a kid reads noddy' stories . when he was a kid he used read a lot of noddy books. As his mind started to drift to his child hood days he heard the librarian speak.

Noddy !!! thumhe noddy's stories chahiye ????

Woo… haan ! haan mujhe noddy hi chahiye !! noddy

The librarian gave him a suspicious book.

Vicky gulped seeing the six foot tall and fat man with a huge mustache.

Wo kya hain na !! my niece asked me to borrow noddy's stories from the library.

Book borrow karne se pehle library ki member banana zaroori hotha hai. Lekin thum tho member nahi ho !!!

Haan ….. wahi tho dijiye na library membership card.

The librarian adjusted his glasses and said follow me .

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Vicky came out of the library frustrated with the noddy book in his hand.. he was really dejected . taking a deep sigh Vicky went to the parking lot to get his car. But the sight in front of him made his insides jump.

BUBLY !!! he said and smiled.

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Six months back………'

Yaar mein wahi street par hoon . lekin thum kahin dikhayi nahi de raha hai.said vicky

Urgh !! teek hai . thum batha ki koi dukhann hai aas paas asked vicky's friend through phone.

Haan yaar meri saamne xyz caf hai.

Yaar thum tho 10th cros street mein ho. Meine tho thumhe 2nd cross street pe aane ko kaha tha !!

Are saare raasthe ek jaisa hai. Mein confuse ho chukka tha .

Teek hai thum wahi ruk mein abhi aathi hoon.

Vicky cut the call and took a deep sigh. He had come to meet one of his school friend but now he lost his way. His friend was living in an enclave and all the streets werwe absolutely similar which made him loose his way.

Just then he noticed a small boy carrying heavy vegetable bags . he felt sorry for the poor guy. Just then he noticed the boy placing the bags down and rubbing bhis hands. He noticed his hands turning pink. Not being able to see the boy carrying a huge load he went forward to help him.

oye chotu !!!

ji bhaiyya ??

wo… yeh bags mujhe do . mein utatha hoon.

are nahi bhaiya rehne dijiyeh. Mein karloonga,.

Thum mujhe do. Saying so Vicky plucked the bags from him. Ab bathao yeh bags kahaan deliver karna hai.

Ji wo us ghar mein. Saying so he pointed out at one of the houses at the ground floor.

Chalo.

As soon as he rang the calling bell a miracle hapopened.

Not only the door of the house opened but also the door of his heart.

There stood in front of him a girl who swept him of his feet at first sight.

Chiku ??? thum yahaan kya kar rahe ho . thumhare papa kahaan hai.

Bubbly didi wo papa bimaar hai. Isiliye aaj sabzi mein lekar aaya tha.

Are !! ek phone karke abatha dethe . hum aaj sabzi ka intazaam kar lete. Thujhe yeh kaam karne ki kya zaroorath hai.

Are koi baath nahi didi !! waise bhaiya ne meri madad kiya yeh bag utane mein.

She turned towards Vicky who was gazing at her without blinking an eye.

Than you ji. Babji ne aapko sahi waqth par bej diya.

Vicky came out of thoughts and said.

Are isme thank you kehne ki kya baath hai. Meine tho sirf madad kiya.

Phir bhi. Aapne chiku ki bahuth madad kiya hai.

Vicky just smiled.

Chuiku yeh le sabzi ki paise. Aur isko bhi rako. Saying so she gave more money.

Isko apni papa ki ilaaj ke liye use karna.

Vicky was touched seeing her generosity.

And it was the moment he decided YES SHE IS THE ONE.

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PREACP : PERFECT AND IMPERFECT FACE OFF ( HOPE SO )

well finally i have updated after a long time... thankyou for waiting guys.

well i know there was less manneets and more vicky and bubly moments in this update.

but well vicky and bubly's love track will also be as intresting as maaneet and i will put a lot of effort to make it interesting.

PLESE CONTINUE TO SUPPORT ME

PS : i change the style and colour of my updates coz wanted to try sum thing new.

if u guys are not comfortable with the present font and colour pls tell me . ui'll change it immediately.

and yes i need atleast 4 pages comments and 40 likeds to give the next update . it will encourage me to write more.

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Posted: 12 years ago
welcome back and cont soon with more updates..
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part

poor maan ..geet is on his mind
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Posted: 12 years ago
for some time I thought bubbly is geet...

I loved this part... its amazing!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
vicky in love with bubly...n maan cant stop thinking abt geet...

nice...
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Posted: 12 years ago



waise who is this bubbly...

did u mentioned her in any past updates...

Maan is thinking about Geet...but he is engaged to her sister and Geet don't have any feelings for him...so how will their story buildup...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
MAAN WAS DREAMING ABOUT HER AND NOT HIS FIANCEE
VICKY FELL IN LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update dear..👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 9
nice part...
cont soon dear...

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