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Posted: 13 years ago




😆😳😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 6
thats so cute...
lovely...
cont soon dear...

PS - plz update the title too dear with the update and page numbers and date...


Yeah ok but d characters r not suffiecinet i guess since my title is too big i may not be able to write d updatre nd page nos... ?
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awsome update


choto maan jealous😆
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Originally posted by: maaniqra

awsome update



choto maan jealous😆




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Posted: 13 years ago
PART 7











It was one such Geet Feeding session😉!! Rano fed her with Maan wiping d semisolid found around her lips😳!!! Beena came over was guiding Dev through his homewrok😡... Beena took over Geet on her lap nd started her talking OH my BABY Grow up soon😆... I cant wait to take u to my home my sweet DIL😳(DAUGHTER IN LAW) gazing at Dev... Geet did a phur over her Face nd Maan Rose to wipe his Mother's cheeks😛 nd giving a staring look at Geet : Dnt u dare harm my Mommy😡... Geet once again Phurrr😉... Maan stared nd then took her cerelac nd applied all over face like face pack 😳nd Anni jumped from nowere nd pulled Geet nd started running towards d Garden😉... Realization struck again😭... Maan could'nt run behibd to sit beside Geet😡, & Teas rolled down his cheek half of guilt of making her dirty😡 nd half of d fact tat he was'nt able to be beside her all d time😭... as d Kids were engrossed in playing nd crying Beena once again looked at Rano waiting for her answer😭... Rano shook her head & smiled back a weak smile😆... Dev & Geet were d future pair in Beena's thoughts😡... but Rano was worried she could never decide on such things this smile of hers was not an eternal promise but years later she knew tat wat if her Baby resented to this settlement which her mother had done😡... Well Rano just scoffed off d thought tat as years rolled by things will take different shape!🤢 Hoping all will end well but little did she knew tat wat a storm stay at her Daughter's life 20 years from now!! 😉


It was Geet's 9 mnth running wen she was down with sever fever diagnosed with Measles nd she'd been home were Maan contracted infection from her😳!! Both were kept in isolation to prevent cross infection to other kids at house😆 nd it was during this royal period wen Maan started with his Sppech therapy for baby Geet!😳! It was after 3 mnths tat she'd been home nd only he knew how much tat seperation was painful nd d day she arrived he statrted to dread d departure😭.. Maan had been matured now to d extent dat he used to never show his presence wen ever Rano nd family left Rathore Mansion😭.. He used to cuddle up & sleep in Nano's BEd crying all over😳 ... Now tat fate had put them back together for 14 dys in Isolation it was more than wat he could have ever expected...😭


Geet used to always do her Phurrr during Eating wen she found d food tasteless😳... Maan used to taste it after her nd lick her spoon showing all kinds of superb expressions from his small little fingers & open his mouth wide open signalling Geet to do d same nd feed her then😉... Geet never did any phurr to him🤗... She used to obey him😳!! Wenever he fed her half d spoon he'll eat tasting nd then signalling her to eat next😉! Aprat from her Maaa word... she learnt to say Paaa😊... Aaa for dadima😛... Na fo Nanooo😆... Me for mumijiii 😆& E for Aniiee😆.. & Hardly responded to DEv as he hade little interest to spend time with her so she never bothered to reciprocate to him!!! for Maaan it was d ever famous Maaa with a big smile expecting him to come over with toy trains nd teddy bears🤣... Maan wanted to talk to her nd started training her with the very little vocabulary tat he possessed... 😉

He tought her to talk first showing gestures nd guiding her lips nd tongue😉.. He never knew how sounds were produced but had only observed tat Geet's tongue rolled we she spoke so he thought may be rolling tongue to differnt angulations will make sounds nd that is wen he used to put fingers in her mouth twisting her tongue ndteaching her how to yell😡!! because she never Yelled😭...she was always soft in her babyish talks!🤣!! once he tought her to yell tat was d only thing she used to do🤣... Yell at maan nd phurr at others🤣... later he thought her small words by showing her directions how his lips moved keeping a mirror in front of them😳... but as he always took out d mirror he would be lost looking at her reflection😉 & Geet was dumbfolded😡 wen she saw d mirror not because she saw some pictures but because she saw him there😡.. she used to stare at him & then his reflections😉.. pull out her hands to touch him nd then d mirror smile at him nd stare at mirror😳 she got sacred finally seeing 2 maan😆.. This reflection of maan was dng everything Her Maan was dng tat finally wen she didnt undersatnd it she pulled it from him nd threw it in disgust.😆.. Maan started crying as one of d glass pieces had struck him nd an instantaneous response Geet started Yelling😆... The Rathore Mothers came running over to d room to see d commotion nd burst out laughing looking at how foolishly their kids kept playing!! 😳


Beena had cleared up Maan's wounds nd Maan was so angry with Geet tfollowing this incident tat he stopped talking to her😆... 1 week passed still both at same room all d time but maan behaved as no one existed in tat room😡... Geet used to give long stare at him all day long😭... Trying to make him look at her crawl down from bed she once fell down from bed too but never cried since she knew tat Maan will bluntly ignore her😭 nd it was later tat Beena had found a big lump over her forehead did she realise tat Geet must have tipped over... Geet started to phurr all during her eating sessions nd learnt to sprinkle water while sipping from her sipper she used to sprinkle water like mountatin over Maan but he just never turned back... Poor baby geet didnt know wat to do to make him talk back to her... Used to try all day long all d mischief tat she knew but nothing worked on him 😉& tired would retire back to her sleep😭.. Once she slept Maan would roll over d other side😳 nd kiss her on her lump(forehead) 😉nd stroke her cheeks😳 pull over d tiny blanket over both of them nd sleep! 😉

PRECAP :

Walking Geet ended with collision with Maan...URf FRACTURE!!!!! 😲

BIRTHDAY coming up!!!!! CAKES nd BAKES!!!! 😡


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Edited by ainaGURTI - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
yyiiekkksss me frst

OMG read whole in one go...
aoww am soo loving these chotu chotu maaneet getting J and teasing 😉
Edited by dazzlingdivz - 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: dazzlingdivz

yyiiekkksss me frst


OMG read whole in one go...
aoww am soo loving these chotu chotu maaneet getting J and teasing 😉



😉 J is'nt d word!!!! look wat all they end up dng because if this J!!!!!!
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LOVELY YAR...GEET SPRINKLING WATER ON MAAN...WOW CUTE LOVE STORY STARTED...

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