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Luv is not weakness but power
Geet was born in rich family .it will right to say that she was born with a golden spoon in her mouth.her father was recognised bussiness man on that time..she
was the only child of her parents..her parents loved her soo muchh that they wanted to provide her every pleasure of the world.

In geet's house there was a maid whose son also came along with her.geet used to play with that boy.but her parents did not like all this.they threatened their maid to control her boy .she was poor widow and had three childrens.she was so poor that she did not want to loose her job.so she dicided to leave her son at home.geet was habitual of her maids son so next day when she came without her songeet was much shocked.she was only years then but she was attached to "MAAN".that was the name of her maids son.she asked her why she did not bring maan with hersakeena(maids name) made an execuse that he was ill so she did not bring him with her.geet was very anxoius to see him.she wanted to go to her maids house but her parents did not allow her to go.one week passed but maan did not come.geet was very sad.one day geet did not getup at her regular time.her mother went to her room and saw that geet was suffeerring with high fever.her mother sent for doctor.but no treatment was affecting.her mother was very worried.when geet had no recovery then doctor advised her friends to play with her.then her mother realized that her daughther had no friends execpt maan.

now geet's mother was compelled to call maan at home.when maan came geet was very happy and she began to recover.soon she was completely recovered.time passed and their friendship grew thicker.it was a suprising thing for both geet and maan parents that they had no friends execpt eachother.10 years passed and now geet was doing her graduation ad maan was completinghis engineering and also a part time job.


one day geet was sitting in her TV lounge when her father came and called her mother.her mother came and he told her that one of his friend wanted to have geet as his daughter in law.this news was a shock for geet.when she heared the news she became restless.she did not know that why she was restless but she was really much upset.she wanted to tell this news to maan.

she met maan and told him everything.maan was also very much distributed to hear the news.both them did not know wat they were feeling so.they did not bear any other person between their friendship.both them were very possessivve about eachother,geet was sitting in her room when her mother came.her motherwas noticing for soo many days.she asked her about her problem.then geet asked her mother.if u like a person and u can not think anything without that person then wat is the reason that u give so much importnce to the person.

her mother told her briefly that it means you love that person and the person whom u love matters a lot for you.that why you dnt think anything else.then geet realised that she loved maan.she decided to tell him everything.she wanted to spend her whole lofe with him .then she invited him for dinner..and she told him that she loved him soo much and she cant live without him..maan was soo happy to hear this..he also wanted to tel this to her..they were feeling like heaven to have eachother..

geet told her mom about their relation with maan.her mother got forious and slapped geet.geet was suprised because her mother never touched her like that.she was shocked..her mother scolded her badly.but she did not care for anything.she was determined about her decision.


Geet's mother told her father and her father became furious too..he diceded to kill maan.he sent some thugs to kill maan but they could not succeed to kill him but he was seriously injuried.when geet came to know that her father attempted to kill maan then she committed suiced.but fortunately she was also saved.

her parents were very much distributed at her decision.after all they knelt down and agreed to marry her with maan .but her father put a condition b4e maan that he must have a good job and a beautiful house for their daughter within 5 years.and maan promised to do all this..maan struggled very hard.geet was so much pleased at her parents decision..

But she was worried that maan struggling very hard ad she knew that he was doing all this for her sake.so she diceded to share his burden.after completing her studies she found a job and left her parents home because she wanted to live like maan..
she thought that it was not good that her beloved was struggling so hard and she enjoyed luxuries of life.so she left her parents house and began to live in hostel.she was doing job.they struggled very hard to meet their love.after all,their efforts provided fritful and maan got a very high post in an international company.soon he became manager of the company.

After 5 years geet and maan returned to their house .maan was now the manager of biggest company and geet was journalist.now geets parents have no objection on their relation.so they allowed them to get married.they got married and lived happily everafter..



NOTE:hey guyz this my first attempt to write something on maaneet...i read soo many FF/SS/OS on maaneet..after reading alll wonderful stories..i cdnt stop myself on writing this.even though am not gud writer at all..but i tried my hand on writing this...so please bear with.. this..i vl try to write somethng nice next time..today i donot know why i missed maaneet/gurtii soo muchh..when i was dreaming about them..my mind stuck with this story...whch i read few months before..so i thoght to gve a try on this hope u enjoyed reading this...ya plzz dnt forget to press "LIKE" button..guyz this sis my first attempt soo please please bear with me..!!..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice one...

sweet os...

thnx for pm

love rose😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanku so much dear.😊
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Thnks😃
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Originally posted by: drrose31

nice one...


sweet os...

thnx for pm

love rose😉

Thnks a lot dear.😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aww very beautiful os dear...it's awesome eventhough its ur first os so i'm sure ur future os will be even more lovely!...Most Beloved Precious Inspirational Divine Magical Beautiful Romantic Passionate Musical Fairytale Royal Evergreen Eternal Special Unique Geet hui sabse parayi MAANEET' maahi Drashti Gurmeet GHSPIANS MAANEETIANS r the bestest of the best ever n forever so deserve the bestest of the best...Long live Our GHSP MAANEET' maahi our life heart soul...V r Proud to be GHSP MAANEET' lovers admirers worshippers ever n forever...V r Proud to be GHSPIANS MAANEETIANS ever n forever...
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Originally posted by: sptrno

Aww very beautiful os dear...it's awesome eventhough its ur first os so i'm sure ur future os will be even more lovely!...Most Beloved Precious Inspirational Divine Magical Beautiful Romantic Passionate Musical Fairytale Royal Evergreen Eternal Special Unique Geet hui sabse parayi MAANEET' maahi Drashti Gurmeet GHSPIANS MAANEETIANS r the bestest of the best ever n forever so deserve the bestest of the best...Long live Our GHSP MAANEET' maahi our life heart soul...V r Proud to be GHSP MAANEET' lovers admirers worshippers ever n forever...V r Proud to be GHSPIANS MAANEETIANS ever n forever...

Aww..thanku soo much dear..i'm glad that you like my 1st OS..am very happy.😛and i will try to write next Os much better than this one..😳
Edited by drashmeet12 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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LOVE IT...
GOOD WORK DEAR...👍🏼

LOVE ISHA
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanku soo muchhh guyss..🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Simple yet Crispy. Nice try! Liked the concept! one suggestion try to brief the contents so that the pieces are linked together. You have done a good job! dear :))

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