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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran

thank God now I got a written license to write long comments on ur FF...😆

yaar I can't write FF and if I will try to I am sure I will get confuse myself first...I don't have that guts to stand in the front firing line...😆

hey Babaji main tumhara scrap message kyon nahin accept karungi...warna u will block me from ur FF...this risk I can't take...😉

waiting for next part...😃

😆 yaar come on hame be dirty revenge lehne deh write a ff then we give you dirty comments hai hain to dirty revenge. 😆
I don't know about blocking you but your in box would defo be full with me pm's

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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi
I here by write my 3700th post *taaliya*

*tongue out to Mel and Anu for the comment on my pyaari neend*

*hugs to Aashu and Ruchs for the sweet remaining sleep*

Searching for my girlfriend in crime, Nishu kaha hai?
*Sona, mujhe tujh par shak hai, jabse wo idea diya hai meri saheli mil nahi rahi*

Mel, ab kya chahiye? 20th page par reach karne wale hai aur itne ideas bhi aa chuke hai. Ab kya delhi mey is waqt snowfall ho tab update karegi??

brilliant idea thx for the new condition ab toh me jab hi update karooghi jab deli me snowfall hogi uss se pehle mai update nahi karne wahli thank you sara for the idea I am sure people will love you for the idea😆
kya yaar even the idea of torturing us in your sleep didn't make you fell sleepy 😳hai that means you really took my and anu's advice to your heart😳 thank you me blushing

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: tiakashyap
omg
ye devil nishu b na
kya krne wali hai...

umm no ideqa yaar
schi agr itne idea hote toh ek os toh jaroor likti..😆
cont soonnn

😆 very funny you cracked me up

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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: ruchs
Hmm me is as usual late!!!
awww it's okay sweets I can never be angry on my angel
Different comment style for making up'.. yeah me feeling special be jealous everyone😆

Maan and Geet'. scary but true😆

Me and Dad'.😳 aww cute

Sara and Nisha'. hai Sara look at pic you look beautiful 😆 where is Nishu😆 sara I hope your not cooking Nishu she is you friend in crime remember you devil

Hmmm idea' acha betha

Sholly brain on vacation' what tell him to come back right now mel needs a idea yaar

Me love you a lot' 😆😳 me love you to Ruchs
Hope you liked the comment!!! Liked it no sorry I did not like your comment but instead I loved your comment yeah I've got a special comment lalalalalla

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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: sona-rai

😡no THANKS in friends😡haan love u se kaam chalay ga😆🤗love u 2 3 4 🤗

😆 well love then even more sona😳

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Sara Khanna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#126

Mel *Sara fuming like a bull* *imaginary smoke coming from nose and ears* *red eyes* *mentally stabbing Mel with swiss knife*

You and Anu were having your so called 'oh-so-dreamy' beauty sleep aur poor mein *sob sob* and what did you call me, ZOMBIE *come here girl* *Sara running behind Mel with ancient warrior sword*.
'Delhi mey snowfall' is ka ans pata hai na, remember that wacky man saying 2050. Ye idea mera bol kar, sabhi readers ko mere peeche laga de. You are right, real mein kuch nahi kar paungi or else you would have been dead meat by now, for sure.

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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi
Mel *Sara fuming like a bull* *imaginary smoke coming from nose and ears* *red eyes* *mentally stabbing Mel with swiss knife*

You and Anu were having your so called 'oh-so-dreamy' beauty sleep aur poor mein *sob sob* and what did you call me, ZOMBIE *come here girl* *Sara running behind Mel with ancient warrior sword*.
'Delhi mey snowfall' is ka ans pata hai na, remember that wacky man saying 2050. Ye idea mera bol kar, sabhi readers ko mere peeche laga de. You are right, real mein kuch nahi kar paungi or else you would have been dead meat by now, for sure.

tuh na bas apna dimaag me mutjhe stab karti reh promise after 5 min you will want to strangle me😆 and mel sitting in front of her laptop while sara is running. 😆
ah thx that means 2050 me next update hoga. Just wait and read sara 5 minuts 😆 promise you will curse, dhamki me more😉
😉

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Melvina Preece

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Posted: 13 years ago

#128

Sorry for the short update don't got much time. Sara ko kaha tah to wait 5 minutes so here is my update😆

Part 11
Maan walked to the girls room.

M:Hi Ruchi and Nishu.

Nishu ignored him and went to the bathroom. Ruchi stood up and gave her dad a hug.

R:Good morning dad
M:Ruchi come I will help you get ready for school
R:Really
M:Yes princess. Look what I've got.

Maan showed her a package.

R:dad what's this
M:I bought you a new dress that you can where to school
R:dad you so sweet both it are our holidays. But I will wear it I have to go to Sara she called mom to tell her see needs tuition from mom and my help on a project.

Geet just walked in.

G:Ruchi Nishu kaha hai
R:She is in the bathroom
G:Acha Nishu can you hear me

Nishu walked out of the bathroom.

N:Haan mom kya baat hai
G:Nishu I going to Sara with Ruchi do you wanna come along.
N:No mom I need to finish some stuff. You now na I have a lots of work being a first years uni student.
G:I know sweets
M:First year Uni student but she is just 16
R:Haan dad Nishu is like super intelligent she finished graduation on her 12th this is her second study.
M:Really what has she done before
R:dad first she did psychology now she is studying to become a architect
M:Woh I am impressed Nishu. did you now our dad is also a architect
N:hmm
G:Fine you can stay home but please Nishu behave yourself I want the house to be at the state that I am leaving it when I am back
M;Don't worry geet I will be here to take care of here. Will have fun, right Nishu
N:right dad

Nishu said grinning like a devil. Geet glared at her telling with her eyes to behave her self. Nishu gave geet a sugar sweet look. Ruchi and Geet left. Suddenly maan remembered something.

M:Nishu It totally forgot I bought you this
N:Oh thanks

Nishu grabbed the packet and threw it in the fireplace. Maan's eyes widened. He took a deep breath and went to the kitchen. He came to Nishu's room.

M:Nishu lunch

Nishu looked at him.She grabbed the tray. When Maan was not looking she put something in the drink.

N:First you drink this patha lahge you stopped something in it to poison me
M:Nishu how can you think that you own dad would ever do this to you
N:DRINK

Nishu said in true MSK style. Maan s heart was hurting to see Nishu act like this but he knew he deserved it. Maan gulped down the drink suddenly he felt the urge to go to the toilet he ran to the bathroom. Nishu grabbed the bottle instant diarrhea and smirked thx sara she thought. Well have fun daddy dear Nishu grinned. Maan was feeling horrible, He was panting he laid down on the bed. He closed his eyes. Come on Maan you have to win geet's heart back stand up and do what you planned. But maan had no power in him yesterday he had lost a lot of blood and today this. When geet came home she found maan on the bed sleeping. He was looking horribly pale. She touched his forehead he was really cold.

G:Nishu Nishu

Nishu and Ruchi ran to geet's room.

N&R:What happened mom
G:Nishu you where home with maan what happened to him

Nishu got a shock to see maan like this she didn't expect Maan to fall ill but poor Nishu didn't now that maan was neglecting his health for the last 16 years and this joke could be his end.

N:Mom woh dad kep goin to the bathroom

Geet grabbed her mobile and called the doctor,

G;Doc will he be okay
D:he will be fine I gave him a injection but yes you will have to take proper care of him.

When the doctor left geet called arranged two nurses to take care of maan. The next morning. Maan woke up he saw nurses around him he was sleeping on the bed while geet was sitting on the sofa and reading. Maan sighed that meant she slept the entire night on the sofa.

M:I am feeling better you can.
N:Are you sure sir
M:yes I am feeling absoluttly fine
G;No stay with maan the doctor said you need to be taking care off and maan come on there nurses won't you be happy that they are here to take care of you.

Geet gave maan a disgusting look when she said that. Maan closed his eyes in pain it was getting to much to handle for him.

M: I will be fine please leave right now.

The nurses got scared of Maan hard and cold voice that the left the room without a second thought. Maan stood up with a lot of diffucelty and left the room. When was walking towards the kitchen he heard Nishu talking.

N:Sara the plan went to far and think woh Maan could have died.
N:I know but the doctor said that I think I should apologize okay bye Sara.

Nishu turned around and saw Maan.

N;hi eh woh
M:it's ok

Maan turned around and left to the kitchen. Nishu was kind of shocked she thought Maan would yell scream or do some kind of drama. She went to her room and started wokring on her project trying to forget what she did. She was feeling guilty , she decided not to irritate or hurt maan anymore but yes she didn't want anything to do with him. Maan started cooking. geet entered the kitchen.

G:Maan what are you doing please leave my kitchen right now

Maan took a deep breath and turned around.

M:Breakfast specially for my geet your fav pasta

Geet gave him a sarcastic smile

G:I hate pasta
M:What but you always used to eat it you said you loved it
G: That's because you loved it. I was just a dumb girl who was in love who liked everything her so called prince charming liked when I was awaken from my dream I started to hate pasta. Mr. maan singh Khurana you now nothing about me. Not a single thing.
M:yes I do
G:favorite color
M:eh
G:Favorite food
M:
G:Favorite movie
M:
G:Favorite song
M:
G:I think I made my point clear
M:geet I may not now anything about you but I now that I love you.

Geet gave him another sarcatic smile and digusting look and left from the kitchen.

Precap: Maan has a lot of homework to do😆.

Next: When it will snow in Delhi I will give my next update pakka promise, even if I have a test that day😆

Next: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2943244/dirty-revenge-2-page-1-link-to-thread-3?pn=31

Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago