My Mistake (Maaneet OS)

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maansee

@maansee

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#71

baki sab to jo hum partey hai . vo ficition hai... this is the reality of life... a girl who doveted her whole life to a man ... vo he use dhoka deta hai... hard truth... jis par beetati hai vo hi janta hai...

and yes u r right a female is not even lucky like geet ki usko in sab se mukti mil jaye...

normally ladies ko sab pata chalne ke baad bhi ...usko family bacho ke liye jeena parta hai... even us aadami ke sath bhi rehna parta hai... or phir future mai ek din aisa aata hai jab vo aadmi buda ho jata hai ... or waqat ke sath sab bure karam karney layk nahi rehta or kuch kuch family mai bhi mix hota jata hai ...tab family key log yaha tak ki bachhey bhi us female ka dard nahi samghtey... or usi ko galat samghtey hai... i was having tears when i was reading it...i felt i m reading a true story ...

hatts off to u dear

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TanuDDian

@TanuDDian

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#72

awww sob.sob... awesome...

ur really a awesome writter jaan...

great...

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Mishu

@-Mishu-

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

i am numb...feeling chocked with my emotions...speechless...

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tich.1990mg

@tich.1990mg

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

thank u sooo much frnd
i m so over whelmed with the response

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anmirza

@anmirza

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

I am really sad now😭

But yea beautifully written

Edited by anmirza - 13 years ago

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Hinal.94

@Hinal.94

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

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Melvina Preece

@angel-ki-shona

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

I cried so much while reading this

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Anubhuti

@tellyme

Sparkler

+ 18

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

This is first time i m reading ur work but must say i loved it

You wrote this awesomely...

I felt the pain

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Ashwini Varman

@ashuvar

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

i read this long back itself but ly nw commenting...sooo painfulll

i was crying after 2 , 3 months also...

i know u r temp leave from MAANEET WORLD wen u come back i want a HAPPY HAPPY os plzzz

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#80

wow typing with tears down my cheek not surprised you too were crying while writing it
wow he really broke her didnt he
and now he deserves to be without her and all those other woman like he did when she was alive
so emotional knowing what geet went through