Love at First Sight #4 Epilogue pg49 - Page 23

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Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1


Hi all
How r u all
will post the epilogue coming Sunday
before that a small glimpse of the epilogue of this FF

teaser of Epilogue




Love
rakhi



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Pledge of Love

I've made a vow, to no one but you
I pledge my love to forever be true
I'll take care of you and treat you right
I'll lay beside you all through the night
I'll feed you and clothe you and keep you warm
I'll hug you and kiss you and give shelter in the storm
I'll help you and guide you and clear a path
I'll protect you and shield you from an angry man's wrath
I'll listen to your problems help you solve them too
I'll make you a rainbow and let the sun shine through
I'll take your side even if you're wrong
Just to prove our love is strong
I'll plant you flowers and make them grow
They'll be a symbol of love that only we'll know
I'll whisper your name when no one is near
So low that only you can hear
You'll feel my love even if we're apart
You'll know that we are one in heart

maaneet love

By Kate(simi91)

Epilogue:-

After 7yrs :-

Maan take his head out from the spread and raised his hand to search geet but the bed is empty and he again sighed and murmurs no ,again she had to go from here, gosh what will I do when he heard geet said nothing u should think before, not now.

Maan frowned when geet said how many times I told u to don't make me awake whole night but u never listen to me, chaddo u never to listen to me anything.

Maan smiles at her then pull her above of him and said so I never heard , geet nodded negatively and pouting so cutely maan groaned and said geet, y u r doing this to me jaan, when geet innocently looking at him,maan said see now also , and throw his head backward and said geet , oh jaan and within a sec just take her under him and said ur look killing me and right now I just want to devour u fully.

Geet gasped maan then said saram kijiye , badmash, itne bara bara bacche ke baap hoke bhi chaliye hatiye (Naughty, have shame , u r father of big kid and now uff, get up now )

Maan placed his face in her neck and said no.

Geet:-maan u r tickling me .

Maan smiles then kissed her neck to her colloer bone and drawn her in his magical spell .

Later maan came all ready and found his angel, his mishty is busy with their kids, soham now 8yrs old ,Garima 7yrs old and Maanvika 4yrs old daughter.

He came down and kissed their cheeks and said how r u my sweet hearts and takes his seat.

All r delighted to see their dada and said daddaaa , we r fine and then almost jump his laps.

Geet shook her head and said now they will be one team and I'll be left alone when maan said I have a solution for it also.

Geet shocked at first then innocently said solution means,

Maan placed Garima and Maanvika in his two thigh and soham in front of the table and said well will explain later btw I guess everything is ready.

Geet nodded positively and give instruction to take their luggage near to their car .

But soham said dada I want to stay here .

Maan :-hmm when geet placed a toast in front his mouth and he takes a bite then said but then we will miss bari dadi, dada jee, dev uncle , meera aunty, yash uncle, pari aunty, vicky uncle , brij uncle, nana jee, nani ma, rajjy mashi. They will be there and we will be here. And my dear boy, we will come again na next year like every year.but I will left the decision to u , now tell me what is my soham want?

Geet try to say something but maan said shhh jaan, he is big boy and he is like his dada na , then he will surely take decision .

Soham think for some time then look at geet then his two sisters who r eagerly waiting for his decision.

Soham :-hmmm dada u r right, we will come every year so we will not miss to come here and we will lived with everyone in DELHI then we will not miss them also.

Maan smiles and give soham big hug and said ha my dear son when maan proudly looking at his wife and Both garima and Maanvika claps their hand in joy.

Geet patted her loving son and said dada's son when soham smiles hugged her by her waist.when geet just kissed his head.

Here Delhi ,Km:-

Dadi ma where is every one they will reached any moment.

Pari asked vicky and yash , Pari u will check latest fashion trend later .

Pari :-but dadi ma this is for Geet bhabi

When meera came and said dadi ma everything arrange neatly don't worry .

Dadi ma :-hmmm,

Pari rolled her eyes and said don't meera bhabi until Bro and bhabi will come, she will think we all r hopeless and make a face when dev come and hit her head and said natuanki queen , go and change ur dress.

Pari is making face and said haw this is my fav out fit and u r saying to change it.

Maan's dad came and said what r u all doing here, stop fighting and pari go and change ur dress when dadi ma, meera and dev try to suppress their laugh and pari makes face and leave the place.

After couple hours Yash and vicky said here is bro, bhabi and kids.

All r smiling to see them where maan is carrying Garima and Maanvika in his arm where Soham protectively holding geet's hand.

Meera come forward and take their arti when maaneet r blessing but little garima asked y choti m u always took arti of mama and dada every time after we came back from holiday .

Dad came and take her in his arms and kissed her cheek when they noticed little maanvika is pouting just like her mama.Maan kissed her cheek when she smiles cutely.

Every one laughed and dadi ma said cause to take all evil eyes from ur parents, they r so precious to me.

They entered the house and Dadi ma said Geet beta just go and have some rest and don't worry about this badmash , we will see them when soham, Garima and Maanvika just giggled

Geet:- but dadi ma they become too naughty now .

Maan get up from his seat and said mishty don't worry, they will be fine , when dadi ma said after all dadi ma handled dev, yash, vicky, pari so they r angel infront of them when every one looking at him like he came from mars .

Dad:-yes we know na who was mosre naughty , and yes of course ur dadi ma can handle them as she brought up the Great MSK whe every one is new born baby infront of him.

Maan :- dad , when dadi ma said u want to spend sometime with ur "MISTHY " then go ahead na.

Geet :-no dadi ma nothing like that and giving Maan a glare and said Soham, Garima, Maanvika come with me, u all have to take shower first , first fresh up then come and chat with every one.

All three stand up when maan said I'll help mishty again another round of giggling there .

Maan glared them and said m going to help my wife , and take Maanvika in his one arm and Garima another arm and left from there and before giving geet glare.

Geet hold soham's hand and awkwardly smiling at every one then follow maan and murmur now y he is angry on me, he is there blabbering something and now what happen to him? He and his mood swing , baba jee ,what I will do with him ?pls help me.

Maan :-geet , come fast .u can complain later to ur baba jee, give him some time for rest also.

Geet twist her lips and enter their room.

Maan called kid's nanny and said make their washroom ready within 10mins .

Geet take out some soft dress sply cotton made as too hot now .

Maan :- geet, I'll give them bath, just take out my dress there.

Geet nodded yes and went to take out the dress from cupboard and placed them on the bed neatly ,when maan shouts geet, come here quickly , mishty come na, soon,

Geet murmur now what happen and said come in jaan.now ,

Here maan is in full mess with their kids when geet come and burst out in a laugh and said maan but kids shouts Mamaaa and maan litterrally closed his ears and said geet, handle ur baccha.

When geet make a face and murmur and this all r my kid and u r just then said angrily and u

Chaddo and move from here maan.

Later geet make ready all kids when maan just hugged her from behind and said so girls and boys , ur school starting from tomorrow na.

All looked sadly at maan who is chuckling , geet whispered maan aap kya laga rehe ho iha

Maan:- are geet, jaan, papa is searching for u, he is missing ur coffee jaan.

Geet looked at him then said then take care of them and don't become kid with them, and murmur something more.

After geet left from the room and all shouts YEEE.

Maan :-shhh, don't shouts , ok so we will go for outing and suddenly stop as geet is standing there with stern look'.

Geet:- papa said after ur alll work u should go and meet him , have some imp work.

Later maan found geet in kitchen with frown on her face.

He hugged her from the behind and said what happen to my jaan?

Geet:-maan y u r spoiling them, y u but maan cut her and said do u think I'll make them or allow them to bunk their school, their ,study no na, then, accha chalo, let me reveal , u might be remember last time summer I promised them something.

Geet turned when maan said well I need to say this u r becoming old or losing ur memory or u have less concentration now days.jaan I promised them after their exam we will go to Disney Land, and u know they r so sad as their school will be start so one side we will keep our promise intact and another side we will go to disney land after their exam which is held after couple of months and make them ready for this exam with out any hassle.

Geet looked at him then said u r becoming too complicated now days, chaddo.let me make dinner.

Maan again hugged her and said jaan, let's nakul & others make it ,let have dinner together.

Geet still innocently said huh, m doing that for only but soon gapsed as her maan pinch her naval and said m talking about some other dinner,let's go na.

Geet some how pushed him & said besharam badmash ho gaye hain ho aap hatiye.

At night , geet make all kids sleeps and kissing their forehead when maan tucked them with their soft duvet and switched off the light.

Maaneet both leaned at the window of their room and thinking of their life.

Geet hugged maan and looked at him with full love and said

I love u maan, and kissed his face and said thanks will be less word still thanks for coming in my life, for fulfilling my all dream, thanks for making me complete , thanks for loving me ,thanks for making me mother of ur child.thanks for understands me.love me & gave and giving me the respect.

Maan smiles and kissed her back then said jaan, it's not u ,it's me who is lucky to have u in my my life as my life partner u make me fall for u with ur innocence, a boy who is unaware about the world best feeling love , now crazily in love with his wife ,it's not ur dream jaan,it's our dream.I'm bless to have u as my kids mothers.thanks for understand me, love me,

Both hugged and and seal their lips for their never ending love,respect,understanding.


i met u two years back...
Didn't knw lyf wl change track!
Was so unsure,bt u steadied me,
was at a loss for faith,bt u taught me...
I fell for u,evn b4 i knew...
Weaving dreams of a life anew...
But,the demons of my past raised their head,
i bared my heart to u instead!
Aftr initial flutter,u were there...
The demons of my past,u fought with flair.
Life with u was a bful dream,
in happiness n joy i wantd to scream...
When i was alone,u stood by,
against ur luvd ones,u were by my side!
Life was bliss bt lonliness was near,
you lft me stranded n in tears...
I knw it was hard fr u,as it was fr me,
for my own gud,here u left me!
Two yrs of separatn,2 yrs of pain
bt i knew u luv me,so they weren't in vain!
U had seen dreams fr me,askd me to make them true...
For u my luv,all that i went thru...
Now u r here,there is no fear,
free of pain,full of love,our life is clear!
Was unsure in the beginning,bt nw i cn say with pride...
YES,IT WAS LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT!

Poem by Swati( princess163 )



[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QbglM_cvqj4[/YOUTUBE]

Vm credit goes to roopali(
rsroopali)


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Love
rakhi

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 12 years ago

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