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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Awesome OS...👏

But are you sure na it is your first try???

It's very well written..

Keep up the good work...👍🏼

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Zahra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: sadffi
Awesome OS...👏
But are you sure na it is your first try???
It's very well written..
Keep up the good work...👍🏼

thanks and yeah...It IS my first piece of work ever...

btw i really love ur profile pic...Eijaz is one of my fav as well...I had warched kavyanjali mainly because of him... :)))

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MissPurpleFreak

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Zahra... I don't know what to say I'm speechless 😆

That was amazing... loved the whole concept and it was beautifully written 😃

Really really good for your first OS!! 😳👍🏼

Well Done Sis!!! 👏👏

Love you loads... mwah xxx 😳

Edited by MissPurpleFreak - 13 years ago

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Zahra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: luv_GurTi
Beautiful os
Truly amazing..
Well done Zee :)))

Thank you so much Angel...

Love you loadsss... :)))

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-knirwal-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

haye me maar jawa gud khake😳...o my sweety tum kitna acha likhti ho yaaar...u make me speachless...its so baurtifulll😳 and dreamy😍

i sachi say plz writte more...agar kissi aur ke lia nahi to plz mere lia hi likna...sachi tumne to muje apni writting ka dewana hi bana diya😊...

geet meera dono kitni pyaara rista share kar rahi hai...they r like best buddies forever...ek dusre ki baat binna kahe hi jaan lena...meera ne jat se pehchan lia ke geet me kuch to badlav hai...u know meera badlab bahot jyada bada hai ussne to apne rules bi tod die...us special one ke lia😳...opps Maan ke lia...

geet frend ke yaha ja rahi hai🤔... paka kuch hoga haina...low ho gaya humare MAANEET fir se mil gaye...destiny play his own game😉 make to meet both of them...so beautiful...i laugh jab geet akele jane ki kosish karti hai aur maan piche hi pad jata hai usse chodne ke lia...friend ke yaha jana hai...seda seda bollo na apne jaan se baate karni hai😳...

hai maan confession is soo simple but sabse beautiful...vo kehte haina ke kisi ka pehla pyaar bana asaan hai agar banana hi hai to kisi ka akhri pyaar bano ...😳...maan ka dimaag kafi tezz hai..hm lagta hai humari zahra pe gaya hai...

sweety i know u end this os with it but agar ho sake to isse tum aur age likh sakti ho...i want to read it more more and more...sachi bahot acha os tha koi nahi keh sakta tumhara pehla os hoga...

love u sweety

muahh

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take_a_hint

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

really amazing

lovely

u shd write more

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ArnavBarunLover

@ArnavBarunLover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

I loved it sooo much AT !!

You write so well, it was soo cute yaar

And sorry for the late comment yaar i couldnt get time to comment

But seriously i loved it !! good going AT x

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Hi Zahra..congrats on ur first OS! Well written! Beautiful n fab OS! Can we please have an epilogue! Thanks!!! Do pm wen u do!

Edited by khwaishfan - 13 years ago

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Hey Zahra...perhaps u can uodate few more parts n den epilogue! Want to see Maaneet's marriage n den some more updates! please...

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Zahra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
Hey Zahra...perhaps u can uodate few more parts n den epilogue! Want to see Maaneet's marriage n den some more updates! please...

actually to be frank I was never to write this until am over with my exams...but then seeing my friends I couldn't help but write...and then I decided to keep it one part only...so didnt think of making longer...am really sorry but am not really sure if I will get time... :(((