Maaneet OS: Love never knocks...It enters... - Page 3

awesome Zahra...it was a very sweet write up

Originally posted by: ritzy09

awesome Zahra...it was a very sweet write up

You should definately write more regularly and offcourse on Maaneet forever...

finally read ur OS dear
cant tell u how much i loved it
i swear a unique story the way i started off
omg cant tell u i never expected aisa hoga
geet is pregnant and doesnot knows the father of child...[unexpected]
i loved the way their journey started and finally when maan called the child as "OURS"

lovely OS
sweet and beautiful
kudos

Originally posted by: minnie_tweetie

finally read ur OS dear
cant tell u how much i loved it
i swear a unique story the way i started off
omg cant tell u i never expected aisa hoga
geet is pregnant and doesnot knows the father of child...[unexpected]
i loved the way their journey started and finally when maan called the child as "OURS"

lovely OS
sweet and beautiful
kudos

Originally posted by: -knirwal-

haye me maar jawa gud khake😳...o my sweety tum kitna acha likhti ho yaaar...u make me speachless...its so baurtifulll😳 and dreamy😍

i sachi say plz writte more...agar kissi aur ke lia nahi to plz mere lia hi likna...sachi tumne to muje apni writting ka dewana hi bana diya😊...

geet meera dono kitni pyaara rista share kar rahi hai...they r like best buddies forever...ek dusre ki baat binna kahe hi jaan lena...meera ne jat se pehchan lia ke geet me kuch to badlav hai...u know meera badlab bahot jyada bada hai ussne to apne rules bi tod die...us special one ke lia😳...opps Maan ke lia...

geet frend ke yaha ja rahi hai🤔... paka kuch hoga haina...low ho gaya humare MAANEET fir se mil gaye...destiny play his own game😉 make to meet both of them...so beautiful...i laugh jab geet akele jane ki kosish karti hai aur maan piche hi pad jata hai usse chodne ke lia...friend ke yaha jana hai...seda seda bollo na apne jaan se baate karni hai😳...

hai maan confession is soo simple but sabse beautiful...vo kehte haina ke kisi ka pehla pyaar bana asaan hai agar banana hi hai to kisi ka akhri pyaar bano ...😳...maan ka dimaag kafi tezz hai..hm lagta hai humari zahra pe gaya hai...

sweety i know u end this os with it but agar ho sake to isse tum aur age likh sakti ho...i want to read it more more and more...sachi bahot acha os tha koi nahi keh sakta tumhara pehla os hoga...

love u sweety

muahh

That was a beautiful OS

Thanx😊

Originally posted by: farheen01

That was a beautiful OS

Thanx😊