Dial A Secret... MG FF (thriller) part 13 - Page 13

count me in sweet heart
Mimi, i totally loved it
will read again & comment a long wala, pakka

but one thing is for sure,
the character sketch, the title of the FF, the title of every single topic, the pics, the names, the intro, the writing style ... everything speaks class, bloody rich & attractive taste
me loving it like crazy

akhir, thrill stories & dark characters are Sara's weakness

do cont soon & do PM me

awesome, brilliant part
loved it
loved their masquerade party
loved geet & Naomi conversation
oh oh so secret keeper again is there and keep sending them msgs
they take small holiday break but after returning back again secret keeper welcoming them with shocking thing Damien's dead body
it's going more interesting way
continue soon

part 5
whoa who is this secret keeper?
awesome part...
Maan and Geet are so close and concerned...
cont soon dear...

Amazing...Intro and CS..!!

me here *bow down ppl* *that's great, ab uth sakte ho*
here me go...

simply MIND blowing
as said in my previous comment here, everything in this FF speaks out rather shouts "damn awesome thing to read" ... character sketch, prologue, story material, title of the FF, heading of each chapter, siggie, writing style, EVERYTHING
every character is having their own identity & mind it Sara is 'first time' loving each character, me hardly love anyone beside my Maneet ... i have lots of buddies who are expert in making me go insane *Aashu, Anshru, Bindu, Safi, Jazzu, Kathie, Sneha, Mandy, Marvee, Shreya, Simi, Zey, Reya, Naina, Osheen, Soma, Sarzu, Sadie, Sneh, Aqua* *Mel, Ruchs, Nishu, Anu, Saru, Mahi are there too but the "improving category"* *Sara, concentrate on Mimi's work or else she will kick you so hard*
okies *resuming*, where to start from ??? ... hmmm, i loved the concept ... the thrill mixed with love of Maneet *although in little ratio but according to other thrill work, i have read till date, it is really superb* ... every character is richly suspicious here ... you can't simply put finger on anyone specially when you are aware of their status & cunning nature ... just like many other, me too was having doubt on "Damien" but the latest part proved me & others wrong ... i mean right from starting, me too was having doubt on him ... those SMS, that dead body, the numbers of dead ladies for those "Secret Keeper" SMS, his fight with everyone specially Maan, his sudden "vanishing" act, the fact that he was the only one who was so close to these 6, the video on "Gwen", that mascot ball party, A to Z ... it all pointed to him but now what ??? ... my 6th sense is telling me that it is realted to "Gwen" coz now "Damien" part is of no use coz of his death *can have some twist in future but for now, simply useless* ... me not having the full idea coz we all are unaware of the exact past but guessing is no harm, no ?? ... either "Gwen's" some really close person is doing all this OR any person who hates each of these 6 & is having some secret of theirs OR both the things OR both with other thing includes OR none of this but simply any new angel ... "Damein" part is the proof that we have to read it & guessing by our own will not help ... beside, "Adrian" & "Brandon" part is also signaling something more ... and then those "Sen" sister, we don't know much about them too, "Adrian" & Maan's mysteriously change relation ... actually, to think properly, every character is still having mystery along with that night incident ... but loved the way you show Maneet comfort scene in all this ... the scene where Maan was adorning Geet when she was yelling at some girl at the club for the shoes, where Maan was "sweetly" shopping with Geet, where Maan shouted at "Adrain" for yelling at Geet, where Geet shouted for Maan at mascot ball part, where Geet held Maan close out of fear & all that
in total, me loved it
i hope this will make you happy coz Sara have not written such long comment in her 4 years of life on IF

do cont soon & do PM me
(4 page & 577 words excluding this line)