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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: snehamaanvirman

firstly for late reply
i was busyyy...
i read whole ff in one go till now
it was superabbb
maaneet sarri scene
thier frindship
golla
dance, banni's entry, dev and banni <3
UV and sam treating her as princess <3
geet playing football in sleep ROLF
maan preparing dinner <3
geet's dream
both in love
and the last part was shock for me
awww geet died when, how
why
🥱
well its intersting story
wanna read more
for PM
and pm me when u update


SO MUCH For such a lovely commnts😊


i m Glad that u like my work
will surely PM u 😃



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Posted: 13 years ago

shart 15

Here geet was remembering docter's word "we don't think that we can save him ..now only miracle can save him"

leason the song to fell the part

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hhCafFsghso

Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka

Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka

Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka

Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka

Meri Duniya Mein Aake Mat Jaa Mat Jaa Kahin Mat Jaa

Meri Duniya Mein Aake Mat Jaa Mat Jaa Kahin Mat Jaa

Meri Duniya Mein Aake Mat Jaa Mat Jaa Kahin Mat Jaa

Geet left from there , Uday tried to stop her but in vain

She was walking mindlessly on middle of the road , her face was not showing anything it was too hard to read

Geet goes to the nearest temple and it was may be 1st time she goes to temple , after her mother's death she neither go there nor she belived in god

The temple was deserted , she looked at the idol of sai baba

She scremed on top of her lunges

AAARRRGGGHHH

Kya Maine Pa Liya Hai Kya Maine Kho Diya Hai

Shayad Yeh Soch Kar Hi Dil Aaj Ro Diya Hai

Tu Hi To Tha Mera Apna Kaise Phir Yeh Toota Sapna

To Jo Mil Ke Kho Jaayega Jeena Mushkil Ho Jaayega

Meri Duniya Mein Aake Mat Jaa Mat Jaa Kahin Mat Jaa

It was deserted place so noone was there to here her scream , she kneel down and sat infront of god

Geet : I don't know why bt today I fell like to belive on u , today I fell like to pray u , aaj pata nahi kyu esa lag raha he jese aap hi meri madad (help) kar sakte ho ! aap karoge na meri help ?? her voice chocked due to emosion ..dusri baar aapse kuch maang rahi hu me , pehli baar jo manga tha vo to aapne muje dia nahi ,,,.. chhin lia mujse ..meri maa ' plz I don't want anything except maan ..muje mera maan lauta do plz god .. come back to me maan '

Pata he wo docter keh raha tha k koi mirecal hi use bacha sakta he aap bhachaoge na mere maan ko!! I can't leave without him

Unknowingly she confess her love to god ,

Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka

Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka

Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka

Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka

Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka

Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka

She closed her eyes ..stopping tears to come out

she saw in the sky , like telling directly to god " kyu god esa kyu hota he jo bhi mere karib ka hota he wo mujse chhin jata he , kyu "

she clutches her fist in tight , and punch her own hand on the floor and

Yeh Ishq Ki Hai Raah Mein Jin Pe Chal Raha Hoon

Is Aag Mein Na Jaane Kab Se Main Jal Raha Hoon

Main To Hoon Tera Deewana Tune Mujhko Na Pehchaana

Dilbar Mere Aisa Na Kar Chahat Mein Tu Ruswa Na Kar

kyyyuuu kiiiaaa esa aapne meri mom ko chhin lia , mere bhai ko mujse alag kar dia ab muje maan ko mujse alag karne ka soch rahe ho AAPPP !!!

she scremed loudly and again started throwing the things of temple with her bare hand ..she cut her hand

Meri Duniya Mein Aake Mat Jaa Mat Jaa Kahin Mat Jaa

Meri Duniya Mein Aake Mat Jaa Mat Jaa Mat Jaa

Meri Duniya Mein Aake Mat Jaa Mat Jaa Kahin Mat Jaa

Meri Duniya Mein Aake Mat Jaa Mat Jaa Kahin Mat Jaa

Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka

Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka

Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka

Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka

Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka

Ishq Ka Dard Hai Dard Hai Ishq Ka

I can not anything let happen to maan , he will not Leave me , he can't leave me , HE CAN'TTT

Kahi nahi jayega vo yuje choodke

Suddenly he heard a voice and turn to see uday

Geet look at him with teary eyes , but a smile come on her lips to here that maan is not gonna leave her

Uday come near her

Uday : bcoz of u he is alive geet , bcoz of ur LOVE he is alive , ur love is stronger that maan come back to ,

Geet looked at him with shock , uday smiles understanding her

Uday : I know geet u loves him a lot , he is ur true love geet that u made him return to u ,

Geet : no uday , I can't love him bcoz of me he was suffering today , bcoz of me all were suffered once now I don't want that anyone again suffered bcoz of me

Uday : no princess just only bcoz of u he responced ,

Uday hugged her tight to console her pain

He continued : bcoz of u bcoz of ur pray bcoz of ur love he returned today , don't u wanna see him

She nodded cutely

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Uday took geet to the hospital , and she saw maan was sleeping ,

Geet )to docter ) : docter how is he now ??

Dr : we didn't think that we could save him bcoz he had 4 deep wound of knief in his stomack , and almost 30% blood wasted out and he has only 10% chance to be recover bt the mirecal is he is perfactly fine now ,

A smile saprate on geet's face hearing this

Geet : so docter when we can take him to home ?

Dr : whenever u want inface u can take him today also

All were so happy to here that

Dr : bt aapko kuch hospital ki formalities complete karni hogi

Sam : aayiye docter me vo clear kar deta hu

Docter nodded and went with samrat

Uday : dekha mene kaha tha na all is well

Geet smiles : but uday ham maan ko kaha le jayenge , I mean we can't take him to hostel as noone was there to take care of him and we can't take him to our hostel

Nupur : I have an idea ,

Maaynk : what ???

Nupur : kyu na ham ek ghar rant par le le aur kharid le , so we all will stay there and we can take care of maan as well

Arnav : ya she is right

Uday : me ghar ka intejam karta hu !!

Geet nodded and uday left from there

Geet went to see maan , who was sleeping soundlessly due to sleeping pills

She sat beside him , and caresses his face slowly but he was cuddeling like a baby ..she remember uday's words ": I know geet u loves him a lot"

She smiles a bit

Geet : ha maan uday was right I love u , I love u

She bend and kissed his forehead '

a small drop of tear fall on his cheek , instantly geet lick it and kissed him , she was half lying on him

Maan open his eyes slowly felling wet on his cheek , geet smiles and removed her tears and went to call the docter

Maan open his eyes fully and saw noone was there , he tried to get up at a mean while docter came and stop him

Dr : mr khurana u r not fully recovered so don't get up , how are u felling now ?

Maan : I m fine docter '.and he tried to see here and there at a ean while all joker party came

Bt his eyes were serching for only one person , who it can be other than geet

Gunjan (teasingly) : geet ko dhundh rahe ho ??

Maan (stemmeringly) : ha'I 'mean ,..nahi to

Arnav : ab ha ya na ..kuch samaj me nahi aaya kyu ??

He teased her more looking at khusi

Khusi : ha

Maan : wo mera matlab tha nahi

Just than geet entered with samrat and she heard it..she reached to docter with golgappu face , maan smiled at her but she twisted her lips

Mann (st) : lagta he tikhi mirchi badak gayi , maan beta tu to gaya hospital se niklne k turant baad pirse Hospital me jana hoga !!!

Geet (to dr ) : umm docter u said that we can take him to home , ab to sam ne sari formalities bhi complete kar di he , so can we take him to home ??

Docter : well u can but u have to call police bfor tat !!

Arnav : police ?? for What ??

Dr : as I said u bfor that he has 4 deep cut in her stomack and it was with knife so it's a police case ..we have strick intruction that we can't start treatment till they don't come ..and I started it as ms handa said .

.docter was frighten by saying this ..when other giggled to see docter and geet shot a angry glare to them to shut up them ..dr continued lines by great courage

So plz atleast now call them otherwise I ll punish by them

Maan murmered under his breath : sab ko dhamkati rehti he bechare docter ko bhi nahi chhoda

But geet heart it

Geet : maan I can hear it

Maan started looking here & there but not looking at geet directly

Geet :theek he docter ham police ko bula lete he

Geet told to sam to call the police

Precap


Nahi nahi sahab ye to uski judwa bahen lagti

Uff !!! bechara inspecter ko koi bachaoo

He bhagwan kaha phas gaya me !!

Menu me kya he !!!rofll🤣

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So this is it as this is the surprise Update , and one more thing I didn't give that note to ask u tat u trust me or not I put that note to clear everyone's doubt bt noone answer me tat their doubt clear or not roflll ,🤣

2nd thing is why like & commnt are decresing *sob* *sob*😭

Plz leave lots of likes and big big commnts

i ll update on sunday as well😃


1758 19 june thur 10:30 pm


Edited by Rang_ - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hayee luvly ud dear luvd geet's love aur maan's calling her as teeki mirchi..haaye..aur geet ne doc ko bhi dhamka diya aur mr.sher singh khurana toh murmuring dat hospital se nikalte hi phir se hospital jaana padega...haaye luvd it dear cont soon...awesome ud dear rachana...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: geetsrir.maan

hayee luvly ud dear luvd geet's love aur maan's calling her as teeki mirchi..haaye..aur geet ne doc ko bhi dhamka diya aur mr.sher singh khurana toh murmuring dat hospital se nikalte hi phir se hospital jaana padega...haaye luvd it dear cont soon...awesome ud dear rachana...👏



😃 AWEE 🤗thank u so much
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely part...
finally geet confrssed n also maan is alright...yipeee
wooo all r going to stay 2gether...maja aayega...
poor doc... dar gaya humari sherni se...
lagta he tikhi mirchi badak gayi , maan beta tu to gaya hospital se niklne k turant baad pirse Hospital me jana hoga !!!
sab ko dhamkati rehti he bechare docter ko bhi nahi chhoda...
both this line r 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago


wow lovely update dear...te way my geet screamed was lovely scenes...no one even te fate cant separate them ...sherni geet and bechare dr...teeki mirchi geet...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: divya22

lovely part...

finally geet confrssed n also maan is alright...yipeee
wooo all r going to stay 2gether...maja aayega...
poor doc... dar gaya humari sherni se...
lagta he tikhi mirchi badak gayi , maan beta tu to gaya hospital se niklne k turant baad pirse Hospital me jana hoga !!!
sab ko dhamkati rehti he bechare docter ko bhi nahi chhoda...
both this line r 🤣 🤣


🤣 bechara maan bhi dar gaya is tikhi mirchi se to dr ki kya vishat he😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Desigirls12



wow lovely update dear...te way my geet screamed was lovely scenes...no one even te fate cant separate them ...sherni geet and bechare dr...teeki mirchi geet...


yup noone can saprate them😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb
glad tht maan is fine
n geet realises her feelings!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
geet accepted her love
all caring 4 maan n going 2 stay in 1 house..
mazaa aane waala hai

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