FF-Sarhad paar ki ek kahani {part-4,pg-28) plz read - Page 6

Originally posted by: karna91

superb start.

Originally posted by: KT.rocks

wow yaar superb starting thank u dear

i loved maan-aradhya- raj bonding.. rishab is also sweet

hmm wow gazal she is so cute... atlast she convienced his father

great great loved it to the core... 😊

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

awsome start...

Originally posted by: CiaMaaneet

Gr8 concept Dear! I thank u dear really wantd 2 c MSK in Millitary avtar, thnx u fulfilld it... Though 1st tym but u write awsm dear..😊 Lvd d way Maan cares 4 his family n devotd his lyf 4 patriotism... Me lukng 4wd 2 Maaneet.. Oops sorry correctn! Me lukng 4wd 2 Maanzal meetng! Bt hai toh Maaneet hi na... *wink wink* Plz do accpt my bddy reqst n PM me wen u update nxt! Thnx..😊

Originally posted by: GeetNewEra

the whole story is good,,, thanks dear
the concept is very beautiful and catchy among teh readers
best of luck dear 😊😊
i know u will do good... 😊😊

luv
Tich

Originally posted by: Shraddha.sinari

Nice start thanks dear but iss kahani ka ant sad mat karna not at all dear 😊.

Originally posted by: goyalkalpna123

nice concept thank u dear so much

but i think isme pakka hindu musalman wala khuch hoga in between maan and gazal

hain na just wait and watch dear 😊

but anyway nice part 😊

Originally posted by: neha5058

wow Kajal superb. thank u dear.. loved it so much.😊. jaisa decide hua tha u make it totally different but only one thing is there and that is diwali... haaye me too drooling over maan. new ideas come while writing.. raj was so funny..😊 now precap is nice...😊 will they meet? 😆somewhere i knew the answer but it depends on u...😊 waiting for next tuesday.😊.. keep it up..
love u dear... love u dear
and thanks for making it according to both of us wish(u & me) 😊

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

amazing n lovely. 😊. thanks dear

Originally posted by: spvd

part 1 thank u dear
nice start... 😊
cont soon dear...😊