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Posted: 11 years ago
ok guys i am starting again this FF
so i will update today...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part-4


Maan sees Gazal. She was so scared. Her lips were trembling with fear. She was

sweating heavily. The accused soldier comes to Gazal. Her eyes were stick on the

floor. She was looking here & there.


Soldier: Mujhee...mujhee maaf kar dijiye dubara aisa kabhi nahi hoga...


Gazal was not looking up . She was looking down with teary eyes. Soldier goes from there.


M: tumhey darney ki zarurat nahi hai. Sab theek hai ab, woh wapas nahi aayega.


Gazal nodes her head, she goes from there. Maan looks at her while she was just walking and turns. In a mid way she turns back and look at Maan.


G: Suniye...


Maan turns and again looks at her.


G: shukriya... {She turns and start walking again }


In a room:


Vidhi was getting ready, she was setting her dupatta when she looks herself in

mirror and her eyes popped out in surprise. She was about turn when he comes

and hugs her tightly. She was so startled that she was not able to react..


Boy: Baby I missed you so much...


Vidhi was shocked and when she heard her voice then she came to know that he is

actually there. She hugged him tightly and closes her eyes. Yes it was none other

than Raj. He smiles lightly.


Raj: Oh mera bacha itna miss kiya mujhe..


Vidhi was in tears. She just nodded her head while hugging him. Raj caresses her

hair and looks at her. She was in tears. Raj smiles and wipes her tears.


Raj: no more crying hmm.. I don't like tears baby...😊


Vidhi smiles: Raj lakin aap yaha...😊


Raj: yes sweetheart I am here for you...aur ek aur news hai...


Vidhi: Kya bataiye ..


Raj: I have joined Air force... And I am posted in Leh... aaj hi formalities puri karke yaha

aaya hu.

Vidhi: Wow Vaayu sena {air force} hum kitney khush hai aapke liye... humari taraf se

dher sari shubhkaamnaye...


Raj smiles: thank you..but no more this typical hindi shona...


Vidhi: okay so happy for you...


Vidhi hugs her...Raj also hugs her...

Lawn Scene:

Gazal comes in sees many people. She was scared but yet her eyes were searching

for her best friend Rashmi. Avanti sees her and she comes to her. Gazal sees her

and smiles little.


Gazal: Ji who humhey rashmi sey milna tha...

Avanti: ha zarur beta..mujhe acha laga ki tum yaha aayi..


Everyone was waiting for ceremony to start. Even prem also came with his

friends and family. He was curious to see his sweetheart...Vidhi comes down and

brings rashmi with her. Prem looks at her. she was looking so pretty. Rashmi

comes to prem. She takes blessings of prem family. Maan was also there, when

someone put hand on his shoulder. Maan turns and sees it. It was raj...Maan was

also surprised like vidhi...He hugs his brother...


M: tum yaha...


raj: yes bro...woh kya hai na bro n aapke bina mera waha dil nahi laga..


M: tu nahi sudhrega...ab jaldi bata how you came here


raj: bro maine air force join kar liya hai.


M: what??? air force... r u joking dekh agar joke maar raha hai na toh i will not spare you...


Raj: bro its not a joke...yeh dikhiye { he showed him documents}...


Maan checks it two times he gets a big shock but he was happy for his small bro..


M: so leh mey posted ho,,,,congrts raj...


Raj hugs maan and maan ruffles his hair...he sees vidhi...


M:vidhi ko bataya...


Raj: hmm


M: so happy for you lakin yaar bahut bada jhatka bi hai chal lets meet sir and mam and rashmi and prem...


Gazal comes Rashmi ...She hugs her and wishes her for engagement. Rashmi was

so happy to see her best friend there. Rashmi holds her for sometime as like they

are meeting after ages... Vidhi smiles at them... Maan and Raj comes but stop

after looking Rashmi and Gazal...

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Imp note: i friends this is your friend kajal . I am updating this ff after so many

months...sorry guys...please read this ff...press like and long comments...thanks

and love u all,,,,,😛


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Posted: 11 years ago
kajal after long time u updates...
nice update
gazal is so scared...
the accused solder says sorry too gazal...
raj too join air force...n came to leh...
maan is happy for his brother...
loved it...
hope u'll update next part soon...
how r u???
hope u r fine :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 4
nice part...
cont soon...

PS - can u plz post the link when u update in this thread dear?
FF Daily Updates 8
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey...after so long time...
anyways...so fabulous...ultimate
u know i am liking Raj more than Maan...
OMG air force...eee really every character is realistic...
I mean i can imagine Karan wahi as raj in air force...wow too gud
this raj character really suits him...
Gazal and maan were gud...
aww vidhi...love her yar...
looking forward to see more...
update soon dear...

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