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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: doublecross

loved the update
amazing
continue sooonnn pleaseee





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WILL CONT ASAP😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

WHAT A STORY

WHAT A bas***d THAT DEV WAS
HE WANTED TO SELL GEET AS A PROSTITUTE
BUT WHY AS HE HAD BEEN HER FRIEND FOR SO LONG
THANK GOD MAAN WAS IN TIME TO SAVE HER FROM HIS CLUTCHES





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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Ash1991

amazing update...

lvd it alot...






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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maansee

read all the parts in one go .. come back fast with update dear




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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ruchs

Gosh Maan saved Geet like this!!😲


That Dev' Grr'😡

How can people get so cheap????😡

Loved Arjun and Maan's bond!!😳

Haaye hope Maan meets his Arabian girl soon!!😳

Lovely updates dear!!👏

Simply awesome!!!😳




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Posted: 13 years ago
hey guys i m back with part 11
thanks all for your support



PART 11

Both of them were feeling extremely light after sharing their life's that important truth which has indeed created a huge impact on there lives'' arjun and arohi truly played the role of best siblings on can get '..in helping them letting their insecurities and fear out'..

Geet being a girl has shown a something beyond any courage her one step proved and infact saved her in rotting in that hell that her so called friend has planned for her''

That day if her gaurdian angel had not helped her then she would have surely died disgraceful death''

But for one thing geet will be always in a guilt of not thanking her angel '' it was not that she did not wanted to show her gratitude to him'..but the situation and fear lead her to run away from his jeep'.and the worst part is that she doesn't remember his face'.as when she asked for help'.she was barely in her conscious '.. just wanted to reach home'..get away from dev'..that humiliation''that was forcefuly imposed on her'..

Not only geet but sometimes maan's Arabian girl do came in his thoughts'.. which mostly left him in anger and worry '..angry on himself for not knowing anything about her and worried for her'.. but both of them cannot do anything'''.'

The day went off with all the painful confrontations and haunting memories'.

And a new dawn was there for both of them''

NEXT DAY COLLEGE

Geet was going through the corridor she was tensed about the auditions about the play that was going to be organized by her college'.. she was going for the auditin of the lead role'well as per arohi's research about the college and after some slight and constant nagging from her dear sister she finally joined dramatics club after first semester and now the club on behalf of their college is going to organize a cultural event and for the musical play geet is going for auditions'..

Geet was going to the auditorium'.she was as usual praying to her babaji for her success when she bumped into someone'.the person was holding some books which fell and geet unknowingly shouted at him in tension of her audition''.

Geet: can't you see and walk'look what have you done'.( geet folding her hands) babaji maaf kar dena mene jaan ke books nahi girai'.




The other person was amused as well as there was some respect that he felt for the girl infront of him'..

First of all her cribbing and the value of books in her mind was something he appreciated'..

Geet calmed down and bent to gather the books'.when the person infront of her told her to leave he will pick up all the books'its not her fault'

Arjun: its ok'.i will pick up the books'.and it was not my fault you came in to my way'

Geet was about to argue when she realized that it was indeed her so apologized for her mistake and helped him in picking up the books'

Geet: I am sorry sir'. It was me actually sorry again..with that she was about to move when arjun stopped her'..

Arjun: hey'you stop'do I look that old that you are calling me sir'..i am not a professor'.

Geet: I know you are a student'.

Arjun: then why the hell you called me sir'..

Geet: actually geet was getting annoyed by his questions so just answer him in .an irritated manner'..

Geet: because you are a senior and I don't find interesting in calling seniors by their name'and being in college you can't address them as bhaiya'. As others will make fun of you'..

Now can I go'..please SIR!!!!!!(stressing on the word sir)

Arjun was quite impressed by the girl and her plain explanation'.none of the girls had first addressed him as sir and second she was not drooling at him like other and third her dressing was simple'.

Arjun: hey ..wait you can call me bhaiya '.i don't mind'..and by the way I am ARJUN..ARJUN SINGH KHURANA'..( he extended his hand towards geet for a handshake'.)

Geet: are you making fun of me'.??????...( raising her eyebrows towards him')

Arjun: and why do you think so'.

Geet : because'..she was getting embarrassed saying but arjun completed her sentence'..

Arjun: because you told me the truth'.. you know I never came across a like like you'and moreover it would be my pleasure to have a sweet sister like you'.( he smiled at geet)

Geet: geet also smiled in response'..and introduced herself'.i am geet handa'. Architecture student second year'..

Arjun: wow'architecture'. I am interior desigining fourth year'.hmm by the way why are you looking so tensed'any problem'..

Geet: ummm'' no actually I have an audition for the cultural play and I am quite nervous'.mene suna hai ki the president is kind of khadoos'.so I am nervous'.

Arjun wanted to laugh coz the president was none other than maan'but controlled himself'.

Arjun: ohh no'..you will be selected come lets go'..

With that arjun and geet went to the auditorium'..arjun's eyes were searching for maan but he was out of sight actually maan was having a class so he was not present at the auditions'.instead the co president tanvi was supposed to do take auditions'and the teacher incharge was also present'.

Tanvi when saw arjun was in a fix coz he never comes there even if for maan and she assumed that he came for her and her charm finally worked'..and went towards arjun'.

Tanvi: wow'arjun what a surprise'I knew you will come here'..i know you were missing me'.

Arjun: (arjun thinking ''..ohhhno'.ye kahan se aa gayi'.now what I am going to do and save myself from this makeup kit)'. Ummm tanvi actually Icame here to meet someone ' but the person is not here so I am just leaving'.tanvi was about to say something when arjun ran'.

Geet watched him in amusement and went to give her auditions'.as usual miss drama queen tanvi maddan showed her tantrums but geet's performance was highly adored by the teacher incharge'..

Tanvi: but mam'she doesn't even danced properly and we are having an important part of dance in this play'.

Teacher: dance can be made perfect tanvi but her expressions pain and dialogue delivery is the best so far'.

Actually the play is based on a love couple Clarisse and her love Edward'.. and Edward will take away his love in front of her family in her wedding ball'

So tanvi wanted to became Clarisse and wanted maan to be her Edward but maan never played any role in plays after there play in first year where tanvi was the reason of his almost spolit image '.. she made him responsible for her deed'.since then maan only manages and does every responsibility of a president and the functions organized under his assistance are a great success''

Teacher:( announcing the roles to the deserving students)'.so the main leads of Clarisse and Edward are assigned to miss geet handa (second year architecture) and kunal Sharma '(third year mechical engineering)

Geet was very happy listening to the teacher'.and wanted to share this with arohi and her friends '.

When the teacher informed the selected students to meet at the dramatics club'.for practice schedule

after getting the work schedule geet was about to leave the room when arohi pulled her and asked about the schedule and geet announced in a joyful tone about the role of the clarrise'..

when the girls hugged each other arohi congratulated geet and left for her lectures'..

then she was sitting in cafeteria '.. it was outside the college'.. when arjun joined her and surprised her'.

Arjun: hey geet ''how was the audition'..

Geet was making a serious face and scared arjun as if she is going to cry'..thts when she laughed and share the news'..

Geet: bhai I got the role of Clarisse'. You know that president 'umm'kya naam hai uska'haan tanvi she was against me but mam gave me the role'..i am very happy bhai'.

Arjun: well then congrats sis '' but beware of that tanvi'. She is not that evil jitna tum samjhti ho'use bhi kahi jyada hai''

Geet: I know bhai'but how do you know her'.i saw you running from her'.

Arjun: long story geet phir kabhi bataunga'..i need to go now bye'take care'

Geet: bye'.

Geet never thought that she will get a sweet fellow as a brother that too In college however she was still scared of trusting any guy as a friend but when arjun asked her to call him as brother she couldn't deny'..

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Edited by suhaaana - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow luvd d college part..awesome ud dr👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update.
geet made arjun bro thats so lovely.
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow!loved arjun-geet cute meeting...
tanvi showing tantrums..yuck!
oh no!geet s not pairing with maan!?

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