Maaneet SS-Ankahi Batein..PART 19,20 ON PG 28&21 onPG 29-END- - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
thnx for the pm
awesome update
loved geet n how's cooling maan's anger
hope this didn't create any problem for maaneet
i just hate her

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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
nice update
ab geet hi sameera ki band bajayegi
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
Geet nt bth lukd..geet knoted hr brw..nt z frowning..
Sam:opss..galti hogayi...mujhe ye puchna chaiytha hw did u win maan..?
NT going to say smthng in anger...geet stoped hr..
Geet:saf saf bat karo samera..
Sameera evilly smirkd...
SAM:kyu tmhe samaj nehi ayi..kaise maan ko phasane me kamyab hogayi tm..
Geet:to tm sochte ho ki...maan ko main ne phasaya...
SAM:ab har ladki chate hai maan ko..hndsm honeki sath sath rich..1 sath me hi paisa..nam..
Geet:oo..aur kya kya samajti ho tm woh v sunlu..
SAM:dekho mujhe aur tm me koi fadaq nehi hai..tmhe pata nehi hoga shayed...maan k jindegi me main v ayithi..bht kch kia use pane k liye..par...khair tm kaise kamyab hogayi..aisi kaunsi jal bichalia...jara hm v to jane..
udhar maan z outside of kitchen..hearing sams talk..hz angr z raising..bt he didnt went in side..he wnts geet shuld gve hr a strict ans..
Geet:smiled..ab meri bate suno..sahi socha tmne..main ne maan ko phasaya hai..apne jal me..
Maan shckingli luking at geet..wht z she saying..
Geet:sachme mujhe aur tm me koi fadaq nehi hai.. tmne maan ko phasana chatithi..aur main usme kamyea hogai..
Maan z dmbstuck..it seems lyk sm1 jst tuk away earth undr hz feet..he cnt able to thnk abt it..he went frm thr silently,bcm shatterd..
in kitchen geet cntinud
Geet:par 1 bara fadaq hai...tm me aur mujhme..
Sam luking at hr..
Geet:tmne maan ko uska nam paisae ko pyar kia...aur main ne maan nam ki insan se pyar ki...
NT lukd at hr proudly..sam still chup..
Geet:kya kaha ki main ne maan ko phasaya...ha..apne pyar kiwoh har 1 ankahi sachi ehsasme..woh jal me bandhli..jiske har 1 dhaga pyar se buni hai..
sam agn smild...
Sam:Cm on geet..aise bato ki koi..value nehi...
Geet:tmhare liye hoga v nehi..
SAM:chalo dekhte hai...kab tak maanko bandh k rakh sakteo..
Geet didnt say anithng...sam went frm thr..
in drawng rum geet cm nd saw maans face filld wid angr..AFTR smtym..vick nd sam left...maan without saying anythng went frm thr to rum..geet trid to stopd hm..bt he went..


Maan cme in hz rum..recaling wh8 he listend..he still cant belive..hz hrt z wrenching in pain...
geet came in rum..she knw..maan z tensed..she went nd huggd hm frm behind..
Geet:maan,mujhe bata hai ap pereshan kyu ho..par ap aise pereshan na ho..ap aise rehte ho to mujhe achi nehi lagti..
Maan remuvd hr hnds frm hz chest..turnd at hr..
Maan:geet...bass karo...
Geet lukd at hm surprisingly..
Geet:ap kya bol raheho maan..
Maan:aur kitni natak karoge geet...ab bas karo..
Geet:maan ap aise kyu bat kr rahe ho..
Maan:aur bholi mat bano geet..he held hr both arm...harshly..main ne sab sunlia jo v tmne sam ko bola..ki tm v mujhe phasaya hai..
Geet:maan ap galat samaj rahe ho..puri bat to sunlijiye..
Maan:CHUP...aur kch baki nehi rakhi tmne..pehle office me inocent bhali ladki banke mujhe bash kia..apne jhothe pyar me phasaya..aur jab shadi k bat ayi to razi hogayi..sab kch natak hai...sab fareeb..galti mera hai jo main ne tmse pyar kia..
geet bcm shckd...tears rolld dwn..
Geet:maan ap ye bl raheho...
Maan trned hz gaze...
Geet hld hz chck nd make hm luk at hr..
Geet:mere taraf dekhiye...kya apki pas itne din jitne v waqt hamne sath guzare woh jhuth laga..ye laga ki main apko dhoka derahi hu..
maan still chup..wid angr..
Geet:mujhe to laga mere sare ankhi bat sare ehsas apne samaj gaye..indinome..par...aur jaha tak shadi me razi hogayi...kyuki main apse...
Maan trnd hz bck..
Geet:khair apse bolke kya faida...ap to mujhe yakeen hi nehi krte ho...saying thz geet left the rum cring...maan stud thr..furious...


Geet z cring sittng on terace..nt cm thr nd shokd to see hr cring..she tapd hr shldr.. geet saw.. huggd nt..
Nt:geet kya hua..ro kyu rahi hai..
Geet bgn to cring mre...
NT:are bolegi...kya hua..veerji ke sath kch hua..are blna..
Geet told hr everythng between hr sobing..
Geet:nainu..ye kya hua..maan mujhe kaise galat samajlia..
NT:ye veerji ne sahi nehi ki..rukh..main bat krti hu veerji se..
Geet:nehi..tu unse kch nehi bolegi...bt nt went frm thr to talk wid maan..
Maan sitting in hz rum still bcm furious...nt cm..
NT:veerji...
Maan:nt..tm..?
NT:Veerji..mujhe apki aur geet k bij me bat nehi krni chaiye..phr v woh meri dst hai..main use aisa nehi dekh sakti..
Maan agn bcm angry...
Maan:nt..jo tmhe puri nehi malum use lekar bat na karo to thk hoga..
NT:Veerji..kitchen me geet aur sam ki andar jo bate hui..woh main ne suni hai..kyu ki waha main v majud thi..
Maan:to tmhe bata hona chaiye ki. .
NT:veerji mujhe pura bat to blne dijiye...
NT said hm everithng...wht geet actually said..maan bcm shckd..he undrstud what he hd dne z wrng..
NT:veerji adhi bat sunke apne geet ko galat samajlia..use dard dia..ye apna sahi nehi kia..
Maan:ye main ne kya krdia..
NT:ab ap jane ap kya karenge..she went..
geet z still sitting thr..nt cm..
NT:geet mujhe pata hai veerji ne jo kia..sahi nehi hai..par tu to janti hai..unke past k vareme..isiliye shayed unka 1 pal k liye vswas tal gayi..
Geet:mujhe pata hai nainu...par unone galat kia uska ehsas unhe dilana padega..unhe sabak sikhana padega..
NT:Kya mtlb..
JST thn maan came ther..
Maan:geet..woh..
Geet lukd at hm..rubd tears frm..hr chick..nd went frm thr ignring maan..

PRECAP:AB TO SACHME MAANBABU PHASA...😉😉😉


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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
awesome

loved it
now what will maan do to manofy geet
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
maan misunderstand geet do next soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
half truth dngr den a lie
uff maan puri baat toh sun leta
ab toh tu sch mai fsega..😆😆😆
geet ka badla..😆😆😆
cont sooo
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
awesm updt..
nice 2 c geet ans bk sam appropriately
bt a stupid mu.. glad tht nt cleared it!!
waiting 2 c geet teach maan a lesson!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
whoa whoa
ab roothna nd manana
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
loved it..now maan must manofy his lady love..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Geet went straight to thr rum..maan went behind hr..geet tuk hr pillow..nd turnd..she saw maan standing..
Maan:geet tm..pilow lekar kya kr rahi ho..geet didnt say anythng..agn ignrd hm..went out..maan agn went bhind hr..
Geet came to annie's rum..knockd..annie opend the door..
Annie:bhavi ap..
Geet:mujhe teri pass rehni hai..maan bcm startld..
Annie:bhavi achanak..kya hu..bhai se jagda kia..
Geet lukd at maan..
Geet:nehi..awahi..tzse bat krni hai..chal..geet went into annies rum..lckd the door..
Maan:are geet..he sighd nd went to hz rum..
Geet sit dwn on bed making face..
Annie:bhavi sachi me batao kya hua..
Geet:oyee kch nehi hua..kyu..main 1 din meri nanand ki sath gappe nehi kr sakti..
annie agn going to say smthng..bt hr door..knckd agn..annie opend..nt z on door.
NT:Oye geet..tu ehaya hi hai..mujhe pata tha..
Annie:bhavi ap v..aj kahani kch nehi..
NT:no kahani..awahi..
Annie:aj kya awahi day hai..
NT:woh hi samaj le...
annie smild..all three grls..chit chat fr late nyt..nt went to hr rum..geet lyd thr..annie already slept..bt thr z no sign of sleep widout maan..bt she z determind to teach maan a leson..
Geet:st..mujhe maan ko sabak sikhana padega..har jaga apne ego,angr leke beth jata hai..agar unhe maza na chakhaya to main v geet khurana nehi..apko main mujhe mananeki koi mauka neh4 dungi..
UDHAR..in maaneets..rum..maan also cant sleep..
Maan:ye geet v na..rum chodke hi chali gayi..mujhe manane ka mauka v nehi dia..vaise v tune jo kia na maan yehi hona tha..ekdum thk hua tere sath..par geet k bina main kaise rahungi..ab to sachme phas gaya...


In early mrning...geet opend hr eyes...she hardly slept fr 2 hr widout maan..
Geet:..geet cntrl rakh..agar tu pighle gi to kaise chalega..us dusht danav ko saza kaise degi..
She got dwn frm bed...nd went to thr rum..she saw maan sleeping lyk a baby..geet bgn to drooling on hm..bt agn bcm steady..
Geet:st..maan issbar to apki koi mafi nehi..dekhna geet khurana kya krti hai..apki kareeb to main rahungi..par apko mere kareeb ane nehi dungi.. Mujhe mananeki koi mauka nehi dungi..
Geet smild nd..went to bathrum..
Maan wake up aftr hearing shower's sound..he undrstud geet z thr..
Maan:geet agayi..lagta hai khd hi man gayi..gussa chod dia..par phr v 1 bar mafi mangni chaie...he get dwn..jst thn geet cm out..wearing sari..dring hr wet hair wid twl..wather drop z twinling on her face..maan bcm stuck wid geets beauty..geet saw by crner of eyes th8 maan z luking at hr..maan cm to hr..as sun as he going to touch hr..geet ignrd nd went towards dressing table..maan bcm shckd..geet smild in hz mind seeing maans cndition..she z enjoying thz..
Maan:st..ye lo ye to abhi tak gussa hai..ab ja aur mana use.. geet z brushing hr hair ..maan agn cm bhind hr..geet saw hm in mirror...she throw hr hair behind ..nd it hit maans face..maan agn shckd..nd geet trnd nd went out frm rum..
Maan:hogaya..ye to mujhe apne pass hi jane nehi derahi..upar se silent therapi derahi..ab kya karu...
Geet z hearing maans talk hiding behind rum door..nd went smiling...


On breakfast table..maan came aftr bcm fresh..every1 z sitting thr..geet nd nt serving..maan wishd gud mrning nd tuk hz sit..lukd at geet..bt geet didnt pay a glare at hm..maan sighd..
dadima:maan bete..office nehi jayenge..taiar nehi hue..?
Maan:woh dadima thode der me jaunga aj..
Dadima: o acha..aplogese 1 jaruri bat krni hai..yash k ghr se phn aya tha thodi der pehle..woh log engagement k liye parsu arahe hai..every1 get very happy...geet nd nt teased annie..annie shied..
Dadima:ab taiari jaldi krni padegi..woh achi se..
NT:Dadima..ap chinta na kijiye ham sab milke sab taiari kr lenge..every1 finishd thr brkfast wid light talk..bt geet ignrd maan whl tym..

in maaneets rum..maan geting ready..he wore shrt..saw geet z neating rum..he z thnking hw cn he get geet cls..nd pacify hr anger..nd a plan hit in hz head..he tore hz 1 button wid hz teeth..
Maan: woh geet..ye button tut gaya..
Geet listend nd opend the cupboard to give hm anthr shrt..
Maan:geet mujhe ye hi shrt pehnna hai..iska button lagado..
Geet:st..maan apne kya samjha mujhe..buddhu..mujhe pata apka demag me kya chalraha..ab main kya krti hu woh dekhiye..
geet went towards hm wid thred nd niddle..maan smirkd..she keep a distence..she hold hz shirt wid two..nd wid a jerk she tore all batton..maan bcm shck..geet went behind hm nd slide hz shrt frm hz shlder...nd made hm put off shrt..she tuk the shrt nd buttons..nd bgn to stich..
Maan made a frustetd face..tuk anthr shrt to wear ..went to change..geet smiled at hr victory..


Maan cme to office...he z so tensed..geet z nt responding in none of hz talk..he cant thnk wh8 ll he do to pacify hr anger suddenly the ringing of mob distract hz thought..he pickd up the phn..
Maan:hello..
SAM:HI maan..
hr sound agn added fuel to hz anger..
Maan:hw dare u to call me..
SAM:maan..sweethrt tmne mujhe chod dia par..par main tmhe kaise chod sakti hu..
Maan:tmhe sharam nehi ati aise bat krte hue..
SAM:maan..main tmhe pane k liye kch v kr sakti hu..anythng..vickram se shadi krna unmese hi 1 hai..
Maan:U..GO to Hell..maan cut the call nd throw the phn..jst thn dev entrd..if he cm two sec ago..it ll hit hm..
Dev:bhai kya hua..
Maan:ye samera ne jeena haram krdia mere..cn u thnk vikhy se shadi v uski trick hai..
Dev:mtlb?..maan told hm abt her call..
Dev:isne to had krdi
Maan:main kya kr sakti hu..vicky ko kch bl v nehi sakta..uska dil nehi thod sakta..upar se hai geet..mujhse naraj hoke beth gayi..
Dev:unki narazgi jayej hai bhai..
Maan:par main to manraha huna apne galti..par woh to mera koi bat me respond hi nehi krti..
Dev:are bhai to gusse se gusse thodiye..
Maan knoted hz brow..dev tell hm a plan..maan smild..nd giv hm a high five..
in Evening maan back hm..geet already made a coffe fr hm..nd placed it in rum..bcm bg wid hr wrk ignring hm..maan take a sip..nd acting lyk the plan..
Maan:ye koi cofee hui iche acha to garam pani pina hai..geet frownd to hear th8..bt cntrl..
Geet:st..maan apko kya lagraha hai..main apki ye chal nehi samjhi..apki har 1 ankahi bat mere pas ankahi nehi..apko laga main chillaungi..kabhi nehi..
Geet silently tuk away the coffe nd went..maan didnt expect it..smtime later she cme wid mug..nd place it bedside table..nd went..maan lukd into the mug..nd see warm water..he hited hr head..plan floped..geet watchd it bhnd the door...nd dne bhangra wid amusement.. 😳😳


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