Maaneet SS-Ankahi Batein..PART 19,20 ON PG 28&21 onPG 29-END- - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 14
Maan z pacing around the rum..he hs nw bcm mre frustrated..
Maan:ab ye kaisa bat hui..geet to dhan k baith gayi..mujhse bat hi nehi karegi..ignr krte rahegi..are man to raha hu na..ki mere galti hai..par yeh to..ab main v dekhta hu..geet tm meri bat ya kam pe kaise react nehi krti..
UDHAR..geet cm in kitchen smiling...NT saw..
NT:kya bat hai jo itni has rahi..
Geet:maan ko satake badi maza hai..
NT:are geet ab jane de..bechara veerji..
Geet:oye..apne veerji ki suprt mat kr..teri veerji ne jo kia na..usbat ko main bhuli nehi..phr v unpe gussa nehi kr sakti..jo kr rahi huna..woh sahi hai..to tu...
NT:acha baba..nehi krti suprt..tu teri mission hubby ko satana chalu rakh..geet smild bade hr gn..nd went torum..
Maan luking into a file..geet entrd into rum..to take hr pilow..he nticed..maan got up frm couch..Went twards the door..geet tuk hr pilow..nd heed to go..bt befr she cn go..maan shut the door..nd lckd it..geet bcm startld..
Geet:st..babaji..ye kya horahe hai..ye kya soch rahe hai..agr rum se bahar nehi gaya..to meri cntrl nehi rahega..aur inhe sataneki sare mehnat pe pani pad jayega.
Maan stud in frnt of door..
Maan:jawo..jake dikhao..
geet ignrd..lukd at another direction..maan began to take step frward..geet taking bck step..suddenly hit .. Nd fall on bed..bfr she cn get up..maan cm over hr..pind hr bth hand on bed.
CONT BELOW...
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CONTINUED..
geet bcm shckd wid maans sudden action..she trid to muv nd free hrself..bt maans hld bcm mre tight..geet cntrling hrself nt to responding at hz action..
Maan:jawo geet ab mujhse dur jake,mujhe ignre krke dikhavo..
Geet still neither responding nor saying anythng..she kept fighting to free hrself..maan muvd to hr lips fr kiss..geet saw..tilted hr head othrside..maan saw hr resistence tochd hr cheek wid hz nse..slightly rubbing it..geet clsd hr eyes.. breathing raisd..she loosing cntrl..bt still didnt let it slip..
Maan:whisperd..geet kyu aisa kr rahe ho mere sath?
Geet nw opend hr eyes hearing th8..
Geet:mujhe chodiye..
Maan:nehi jab tak mere bato ka jawab nehi doge,jane nehi dunga..pati hu tmhare itna hq hai mujhe..
Geet:wid teary eyes..HAQ.. ap haq k bat kar rahe ho..jab ap mujhpe yakeen hi nehi kr paye to kaisa haq k bat kr rahe ho maan..boliye..
Maan lukd into hr eyes..which hve severe pain..which r wanting a ans frm hm.Maan kissd hr bth eys..fr which mre tears flowd down..maan drunk hr tears..
Maan:geet..mujhse bht badi galti hui hai..mujhe uska ehsas hai..phr kyu mujhe itni saza deraheo..tmse doori kate jaisa chubta hai mujhe..
Geet:usdin k apke har 1 bat mujhe v dard dia maan..woh dard jo main ne kabhi apse umeed nehi ki..kaise..ap adhuri bate sunke apne mujhe fareeb manlia..boliye ..she z sobbing.
Maan kissd hr frhead..thn lightly brussdhz lips frm hr chick to jaw..tring to soothe hr pain which he gave hr..
Maan:geet,usdin woh do batei sunke pata nehi kaise ..par main manta hu mujhe tmpar yakeen rakhna chaiyetha..plzz mujhe maf krdo..
Geet:maan..apne kabhi meri dil k ankahi bate padhne ki kaushish hi nehi ki..isiliye meri laboki woh do bat apk yakeen ko taladia..maan lukd at hr..hz hld bcm week on hr hands..geet woke up nd went frm thr cring.. maan bcm frstrated..hw he bcm faild to read those unsaid talk of hr..hw ll he soothe hr pain nw..
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART 15..
Geet went to terace..sat dwn cring..
Geet:kyu nehi samaje abtak maan..kyu..ki mere dil me kya hai..
udhar in maaneet rum..
Maan:kyu..main geet k dil k batoin ko nehi samajha..shadi k bad har din uski dilki ki bat uski mu se sunna chaha..par khd kabhi use samajne ki kaushish.nehi ki..ekdum thk hua tere sath maan..
udhar on tarace...
Geet:apne meri dil dukhaya..par phr v ap pe gussa nehi ho sakti..itna pyar krtihu apse..par ap to..kch nehi samajte..
Geet went to rum..saw maan lyeing clsing hz eyes..she knw he z nt sleeping..she cm besid hm..lyed dwnhugging hm..sheding tear..maan opend hz eyes..feeling hug..saw geet..hr vest soaking with hr tears..he sadly smild..he hugged hr bck..
Maan:geet...
Geet hit hr chest wid hnd..
Geet:ap bht bure ho..agr kch kaha to dekhna..main chali jaungiihase..mujhe sona hai..making baby face..
Maan smild at hr..hearing th8..
Maan:thk hai..so javo..kissd hr head..caressd hr hair..geet huggd hm mre tightly..geet sleepd dwn..
Maan:st..geet kitni achi ho tm..main tmse wada krti hu aur kabhi tmhe hrt nehi karunga...he also slept.
CONTINUED BELOW..
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CONTINUED..
In mrning...maan wak up..smild to c hz love in hz arms..caressed hr hair..geet wakd up..snapd hz hand..making a face..maan bcm surprised..
Maan:kya hua geet...
Geet:mujhe apse bat nehi krni..ap 1 num ki dusht danav ho..
Maan hlding hr chin made hr luk at hm..
Maan:to kal iss dusht danav phr se kyu ayi thi...
Geet:woh to meri adat bigad dia apne..sara kasur apka hai..
Maan:main ne kya kia..
Geet:mujhe us rat nind nehi ayi..
Maan:acha woh kyu...teasingly..
Geet frownd..
Geet:apna kch nehi samajte...ap ap..mujhe apse bat nehi krni..
Maan bcm chup...
Geet saw he z silent...
Geet:mujhe apki bat v nehi sunni...
Maan:main ne to kch nehi kaha...
Geet:ap kch bltehi nehi..
Maan:lo agr bolu to v galat na bolu to v...
Geet:chaddo...make a face nd went to bcm fresh...
Maan smild at geet inocence..
Maan:geet kitni bholi ho tm...aur main tmhe shaq kia..par mujhe pata chalgaya hai..tm mujhe utnahi pyar krte ho jitna main tmhe..par 1 bar to woh ankahi bat sunni he..tmhare jabanme..kyu aise ankahi bate sunne me jiada acha lagta hai..maan smild.
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Posted: 12 years ago
welcome back sweets
lvd the parts
thx god ye jhotha gussa ka end toh hua
oye maaneet ye apni ankhee baatein ko khud hi samjha do 😆😆
lvd it
waiting 4 more

Edited by tiakashyap - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely updates

maan repenting on his saying about geet
but geet innocence makes him forget as geet forgive but little bit

i think maan will make upto her



thanks for pm

bye

take care
Edited by angelic_cute - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
welcome back
loved all the parts
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Posted: 12 years ago
achha hai mu khatam ho gaye...abb maa ko geet ko manana padega...

beautiful updates...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely updates...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome story
read it in one go
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice story line. pls continue soon

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