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samirah

@samirah_amjad

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Posted: 13 years ago

#521

U KNOW WHAT I HATE U MUSKI, U MADE MY EYE WATER WITH THE LAST PART, BUT STLL I LOVE U, THT WAS SUCH AN EMOTIONAL PART, THERE SILENCE TALKED WITH THAT ONE KISS...IT WAS JUST AMAZING. LOVE U.

PLEASE UPDATE THE NEXT PART AND NEXT AND NEXT AND NEXT SOOONNN.PLEASE

I JUST HATE THE WAITING FOR THE UPDATE.

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maaneet5

@maaneet5

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#522

hey di thanks for update so maan now realises hopw importance geet is
Every passing day without mistimia his heart bled. It was just impossible for him to stay a day longer without her. After that call on their anniversary he wanted to desperately tell her, she meant the world to him & the there was nothing more important than her. It was more like his life way used to being around her, plan his days around her.. here in US.. it felt so lifeless though he had the best of the facility , luxurious apartment, mast life style, but all he felt was this emptiness that just ate him with in.

waise di maan ko ek call karne me kya hota hi

when maaneet eyelock what thoughts round ine geet mind was superbly explained

sweet romantic dream

his arms squeezing into a bone crushing passionate hug with his lips taking her breath away, drinking in every single aspect of the kiss he possibly could. Whispering happy birthday into the kiss

so maan ka lie pakada gaya

geet happy shappy

sach me ek dang se happy b'day nahi keh saka

Maan cleared his throat taking the plate.. & reluctantly said happy birthday.. like he was doing a big favor. She blushed beyond her control.. sweetly thanked him

maan tu sudrega nahi ore geet tu uska care chodegi nahi

Geet noticed the plate of cake still untouched. She knew he won't until she feeds him. He came so far just to be with her on her bday but he won't wish her.. she sighed looking at him. She took the piece of cake & fed him. His was filled with warmth he longed for.. was used for, this unspoken acceptance.

most waited most longed kiss osum

to express maan feelings

comon maan ab to speak up

She could feel him sobbing silently into her arms hysterically, his entire body shaking as she held him tight. Every sec told the story of his longing, every stoke, the passion in the thrust of his tongue into her mouth like he was deprived of his life, his soul, his breath & now he knew it all & just didn't know how to tell her.. with all wat he has done to her. He just went away.. expecting her to be his.. be there for him without any commitment, without anything. A single tear escaped out, even after he fought so much against it.

precap me kuch hopes he

Precap
the silent understanding or a silent confession

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craziekudi

@craziekudi

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#523

that was just wow...

literrally had tears in my eyes

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gbhat

@gbhat

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#524

wow such intense update. beautiful update worth waiting. please update soon

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kalpna

@goyalkalpna123

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#525

very intense

per yaar the great msk khuch bolte kyun nh hain

isse acha toh gunga hota

na khuch expectation hoti na hi woh fulfill hoti

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286pearl

@286pearl

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#526

thx 4 d lovely update...

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maaneet0887

@maaneet0887

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#527

This Maan is making me getting on my nerves😡

why don't he tell her straight away...?😡

am fed up with this & why don't Geet keep her step forward so that he can explain his feelings to her...😡

But am happy that he hugged her & kissed her thank u for such a lovely update continue soon...waiting.😳😊😉☺️
😊

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crazyfriends007

@crazyfriends007

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#528

awesome update

hats of to ur writting skills muskan

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Sushmacholke

@Sushmacholke

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#529

Wow superb excellent update lovely lovely puchki came to meet mishti and still attitude uff ho kab sudhrega puchki ,their silent love is too lovely Thank you smiley but it dint satiate our thirst!!!! it was very small update:-((:-((:-((:-((:-((:-((:-((:-((:-((:-((:-((:-((:-((: Want Bandeshein mising bonus upates...