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Hey friends , me back with a new OS ,it's a pretty small one...You might find it a bit strange ..I have tried such thing for the very first time ,You can just have a look at it

(Pls go to this link and listen to this song , I have written this while listening to this song : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PaF-jl3JY-w )

--OS---

Today , he'll meet me in the evening ,he promised me that he'll come there and sit and giggle with me , he also told that he will take me with him ,he is so good ,he smiles at me and even talks to me , he is not like the others , he said his name is Maan ,yeah I heard this word before ,where? Ya ya , I remember I heard few people saying that I don't have that.But Now I have that na...His name means he himself and he talks to me , but are both the Maan's same??

Oh wow , today I'm so excited , I think it will rain ...I will make two plaits today and tie them with my favourite red-coloured bands ,they are so bright and beautiful .

Yesterday I also applied the red-coloured lip-stick When I applied it ,my lips turned red..hahaha ,they becam red as some insect bit my lips and they got swollen hahaha...Today I brought fresh string of Jasmine flowers ,I'll tie them in one of my plaits and I'll fix a rose in other plait..I'll look beautiful na..wow!! I will also tie that yellow saree but I don't know how to tie it but It's ok I'll take some-one's help. I'll also wear those colourful bangles ,I love their cham cham sound. Hahaha.

Yesterday too I wore bangles but Maan didn't notice them ,he kept talking about something , what was that ...yeah some life, society, innocence. I didn't understand anything ,I was scared that he might leave me and go because of my ignorance but he didn't leave ,he saw my face and smiled again and he stroke his hands through my hair , he said that my giggles are lovely and sweet.

He smiles...he looks good.

Hahaha..Why do I feel that the time is not running ?? I want to meet him as early as possible ,but I'm scared..what if he leaves me after seeing me wearing bangles , flowers,lip-stick ,bindi and saree??

Will he leave me alone here and go away ?? but I like sitting with him and giggling though I don't understand his words ,he is not like others ,he doesn't notice my bangles much , he just looks at my face. ( Hmmm...I like his eyes..hahaha ).

I really like to talk to him 'He is not like others' .

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She keeps sitting near the balcony and giggles to herself ,she says that some-one has come and he likes her words ,she tells and again giggles ,she asks me to help her tie a sari ,she borrowed my make-up kit yesterday .

She carefully applies her kajal while looking at herself into the mirror ,she applies powder on her face ,hair neatly parted ,tow plaits with flowers ,neatly -tied sari ,one big red bindi , now a days she loves to get ready.She came to yesterday and said " Saritha akka ,which color will suit me" as soon as she got the answer ,she hugged me tight and went back running while humming some tune which I have never heard of.

What is she actually ,when I was new to this place I heard a lot of things about her , some tell that she is a curse to their village ,she broke all the sacred rules of the society ,she married someone and he left her after 6 months of her marriage ,some say that she used to speak foul language and killed her husband and that's why now she lost everything ,some tell that by becoming a widow in a very young and innocent age ,where she was prohibited to do many things has affected her badly ,some tell that she is a very cunning woman ,some tell she is way too innocent but what is she?? What is the truth no-one knows ,IS she really very innocent or life has taught her so much that she is hiding everything behind her veil of innocence?

Whatever it may be ,now she is happy ,she tells that he told her that he'll take her with him and introduce her to a new life ,I guess she is talking about the new journalist Maan , he rarely talks to anyone he is here in this village for his cover story , but why is becoming so important for her?? I don't know I hope he really takes her away from everything and bring light into her darkness filled yet colourful life , she


Next Morning--

My husband just told me that few of the villagers are searching for Geet, she is not seen anywhere ,some guessed that she ran away and some that she might have jumped in the well but I know where she went ,I just hope she never returns back and keep smiling in the same way she smiled the last evening ,I hope her eyes keep blinking in the same way showing the same amount of happiness for her whole life. I just hope ...What more can I do? I didn't do anything for her till now other than just hoping for her happiness , look at me and now I'm laughing at my myself.

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Hope you liked it ,

I know , I know it might seem very strange but I tried my best to convey things that I wanted to , Geet's dairy entry is one part in which I tried to include few important things , I'm really not sure abt the response I'm gonna get for this OS , but I have read something and heard something which made me write this...I'm jst waiting for your response ,so please drop a comment if possible ,it means a lot to me 😃

Namratha

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Posted: 13 years ago
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yaar i am confused...
is she hallucinating or maan is there for real...
where is went??? 😕 😕
but her talk is nice... like a small kid...
but feeling sad for her... people talk different things about her...
they just dont care about their lives but interfere in others...
but i didnt understand... frankly... sorry...

Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyothikrish

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yaar i am confused...
is she hallucinating or maan is there for real...
where is went??? 😕 😕
but her talk is nice... like a small kid...
but feeling sad for her... people talk different things about her...
they just dont care about their lives but interfere in others...
but i didnt understand... frankly... sorry...

I edited a bit now give it a try !!
Aur iske aage main kya boloon bas likhna tha ,likh diya ,just interpret it as you wish jyo !! 😆
Maine pehle hi keh diya no jhootis haan!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nyc...But were did she go????

Loved her talks...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh she seems to b in her world
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Posted: 13 years ago
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am so confused yaar ..
maan is journalist ..
did he take geet with him ??? or he was her imagination ???
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Love it graphics
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start continue ...a little bit is confusing but hope that soon it wll clr by he cmng updts...wtng 4 nxt
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wel, its confusing! Was maan real or it was just her imagination, i love geet's talks to bits, i like it wel give us the next part plz.
Regards,
Hira
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice n superb os
loved it

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