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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: ajenn
Beautiful part.

Geet is innocent and naive girl, whom the villager's believes she is a curse.
She's been abandon to do any rights.
Maan the journalist is fond of Geet, plan to bring her along with him away from that village.
I guess Maan is not his her illusion or an imagination form of Geet as Saritha Akka had mention about Maan's presence.
But am curious of why he didn't notice geet's bangles for few times which Geet mention?
Now Geet is missing from the village, I HOPE she is with Maan.
Happy forever.

Thanks a lot for your comment dear..I loved it.

Well you are right , Maan is not an imagination but really meets her as Sarita mentioned and also Geet told that he is different from others . She somewhat likes his presence in her life , umm..coming tho the bangles part ,It's like he doesn't much notice her bangles ,make-up and all ...that's why she says that he is different, he doesn't lust for her , she feels this way b'coz she might have met such ppl in her life earlier .

I loved your comments ,somewhere I was just waiting for such comment 😳

Edited by World-of-Dreams - 13 years ago

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Vijaylakshmi Singh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

NICE & AJEEB!!!!!!!!

Samjh mein aaya bhi aur nahi bhi...

but where did geet go...

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai
So who s geet..its unknown to even villagers..
But from her monologue she seems to b really innocent and mentally unstable..
Maan may b the one who understood her innocence..
Maan s not an illusion..b/c saritha akka too noes him...
This os s very deep.. Its difficult to understand but one can mold it into their own imagination..
Gud one Namratha..

Yep di...Maan is not just an imagination!

I have tried something of this kind for the very first time ,I was reading a collection of few short stories , every line of those stories usually convey something very significant.

I'm defo bad at writing but koshish karne mein kya jaata hai ,so jst tried it ,I'm glad you liked it 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: mollycoddle
😕..i am not sure as to whether i understood it as u wanted us to...i guess i need ur help to comprehend this OS😆

Hahahaha..well one thing that is very clear to me is that Maan is not an imagination of Geet and basically I tried to focus on Geet's life , the way she talks ,the way she thinks Maan is different from others , tried to link few lines to her past like the things she had to hear from other villagers that she doesn't have "Maan" and her questioning to herself that is this Maan ...the same Maan which ppl told that she didn't have.

She is a bit scared that Maan might leave her thinking that she is a kind of woman who is trying to trap him by dressing well ,again her past is the reason behind all these thoughts ,she heard people talking such things about her.

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